2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：水燈節(jié)的意外與希望：萊克的心愿之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)水燈節(jié)的意外與希望：萊克的心愿之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Themomentthebellrang,Lekgrabbedhisschoolbagandracedtowardshisdestination.Whenatlasthepushedopenthedoorofhisparents’restaurant,hecouldhardlycatchhisbreath.Heranintothekitchenandreachedforapileofbananaleavesonthecounter.Ifhehurried,hemighthavetimetomakehiskrathong(水燈)beforethecelebrationstarted.TonightwasLoyKrathong(水燈節(jié)),theFestivaloftheFloatingLanterns.Inhistown,peoplewouldsendoutlightedcandlesintinyboatsalongriversandcanalssothatthepastyear’sproblemscouldsailawaywiththemandbereplacedwithwishesforthenewyear.4續(xù)寫原文Ashewrappedthebananaleavesaroundabamboobasetoformhisboat,Lekthoughtabouthissister,Katia.Shewastoosicktofloatakrathongontherivertonight.PerhapsawishonLoyKrathongwouldtakeawayherillness.Maybethenshewouldbeabletolaughthewaysheusedto.Hetucked(塞)fourredflowersinsidethebananaleavesandpokedthreesticksofincensebetweentheirblossoms.Inthemiddle,heplacedatall,whitecandle.Thisweek,Lekhadpracticedlaunchingakrathongthewayhisbrother,Freddid.Fredwasexperiencedinlaunchingkrathongsandoftenlaunchedkrathongsintotheriverforeachoftheircustomers.Lekhadbalancedstonesontheflatpieceofmetalatthebottomofalongpoleandloweredthemintotheriveruntiltheirparentshadscoldedhimforstandingtooclosetothewater’sedge.5續(xù)寫原文Whennightfell,LekandFredmadetheirwayoutsidethroughthecrowdstandingunderthefullmoon.Fredstoodonthejetty(突堤),loweringakrathongintothewaterwithhispole.Thecandlelightdancedontheblackriverastheboatslowlyfollowedthecurrent.AlonglineofpeoplewaitedbehindFred.ItwouldtakeforeverbeforehecouldhelpLek!Lektookmatchesandlitthecandleonhistinyboat.Heloweredhiskrathongtowardthewater,stretchingtoreachitssurface.6段首句Paragraph1：Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.Paragraph2：FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9放學(xué)鈴聲一響，萊克就急忙奔向父母的餐廳，準(zhǔn)備在水燈節(jié)制作水燈。水燈節(jié)時(shí)人們會在小船上點(diǎn)上蠟燭，讓其順流而下，帶走過去一年的煩惱，許下新年愿望。萊克制作水燈是希望能為生病的妹妹祈福。夜幕降臨，他和哥哥弗雷德來到河邊，弗雷德熟練地用桿子將水燈放入河中。萊克也準(zhǔn)備放自己的水燈，就在這時(shí)意外發(fā)生了。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.突然，他感覺自己在岸邊搖晃起來，水燈從手中掉進(jìn)了黑暗的水里。萊克的心猛地一沉，整個(gè)人都僵在了原地。他的眼睛死死地盯著那迅速消失在黑暗中的水燈，雙手下意識地向前伸著，仿佛這樣就能把水燈抓回來。周圍的喧鬧聲似乎瞬間消失了，他的耳邊只有自己急促的呼吸聲和砰砰砰的心跳聲。想到妹妹充滿期待的眼神，萊克的眼眶瞬間紅了，淚水不受控制地滾落下來。他滿心自責(zé)，為什么自己這么不小心，這么重要的水燈，承載著對妹妹康復(fù)的全部希望，就這么沒了。他呆呆地站在那里，不知道該怎么辦，周圍人的目光讓他覺得更加難受。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.弗雷德手里拿著一個(gè)水燈，朝哭泣的萊克走來。他輕輕地拍了拍萊克的肩膀，溫柔地說：“別傷心，萊克，這個(gè)水燈你拿去放，它會帶著你的心愿一起漂走的?！比R克抬起頭，淚眼朦朧地看著弗雷德，眼中滿是感激。弗雷德微笑著鼓勵(lì)他，然后和他一起走到河邊。弗雷德小心地協(xié)助萊克，將新的水燈緩緩放入水中。水燈穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地漂浮在水面上，燭光隨著水流搖曳閃爍。萊克雙手合十，默默地許下心愿，希望妹妹能快點(diǎn)好起來，像以前一樣快樂地玩耍。看著遠(yuǎn)去的水燈，萊克的心里重新燃起了希望，他相信妹妹一定會康復(fù)的。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.Lek'sheartsankinstantlyandhefrozeinplace.Hiseyeswerefixedonthekrathongthatquicklydisappearedintothedarkness.Hishandsstretchedforwardsubconsciously,asifhecouldcatchitbackinthisway.Thenoisearoundhimseemedtodisappearinaninstant.Theonlysoundsinhisearswerehisrapidbreathingandthumpingheartbeat.Thinkingofhissister'sexpectanteyes,Lek'seyesinstantlyturnedredandtearsrolleddownuncontrollably.Hewasfilledwithself-blame.Whywashesocareless?Thisimportantkrathong,whichcarriedallhishopesforhissister'srecovery,wasgone.Hestoodthereblankly,notknowingwhattodo.Theeyesofthepeoplearoundmadehimfeelevenmoreuncomfortable.14范文呈現(xiàn)FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.HegentlypattedLekontheshoulderandsaidsoftly,"Don'tbesad,Lek.Youcanusethiskrathongtomakeawish.Itwillcarryyourwishaway."LeklookedupatFredwithtear-filledeyes,fullofgratitude.Fredsmiledandencouragedhim.Thentheywalkedtotherivertogether.FredcarefullyhelpedLekputthenewkrathongintothewater.Thekrathongfloatedsteadilyonthewater,andthecandlelightflickeredwiththecurrent.Lekputhishandstogetherandsilentlymadeawish,hopingthathissisterwouldgetbettersoonandplayhappilyasbefore.Lookingattherecedingkrathong,hoperekindledinLek'sheart.Hebelievedthathissisterwouldsurelyrecover.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.Lek'sheartplummeted,andhewasrootedtothespot.Hiseyesweregluedtothekrathongthatvanishedintothegloomintheblinkofaneye.Hishandsshotforwardinstinctively,asifthatcouldretrievethepreciousvessel.Allthesurroundinghubbubseemedtofadeintooblivion;theonlyaudiblesoundswerehisraggedbreathsandthethunderouspoundingofhisheart.Theimageofhissister'sexpectanteyesflashedacrosshismind,andLek'seyeswelledupwithtearsthatstreameddownhischeeksunchecked.Overwhelmedwithself-reproach,hecursedhisownclumsiness.Howcouldhehavebeensocareless?Thiskrathong,thebearerofallhishopesforhissister'srecovery,wasnowlost.Hestoodthere,apictureofdesolation,notknowinghowtoreact,andthecuriousstaresofonlookersonlycompoundedhismisery.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.HelaidagentlehandonLek'sshoulderandmurmured,"Don'tbedisheartened,Lek.Here'sanotherkrathongforyou.It'llcarryyourwishestothefar-offplaces."Leklookedup,hiseyesswimmingwithtears,but