2022中考熱點話題作文 專題28 創(chuàng)新科技引領未來美好生活（解析版）

PAGEPAGE142022中考熱點話題作文專題28創(chuàng)新科技引領未來美好生活一、看圖作文1．隨著技術的發(fā)展，人們的閱讀方式正在發(fā)生著變化。請根據(jù)下面的“閱讀時間報告”寫一篇短文.注意：1.短文必須包含圖片中所有信息。2.比較傳統(tǒng)閱讀和新媒體閱讀的現(xiàn)狀并得出結論。3.在短文中分析閱讀方式變化的原因，影響并提出建議。4.短文應結構完整，語句連貫，句式多樣。詞數(shù):100左右。參考詞匯：紙質(zhì)媒介paperymedia新興媒介newmediaTheChangeofPeople’sReadingHabits_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考例文：Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,thewaypeoplereadischanging.Atpresent,therearetwotypesofreading.Oneistoreadthroughtraditionalpaperymedia,andtheotheristoreadthroughnewmedia.Hereisadatagraphof“ReadingTimeReport”.Fromthereport,wecanseethatpeoplespendabout45minutesadayreadingthroughtraditionalpaper.However,newmediareadingisdifferent.Itisdividedintothreetypes:onlinereading,readingthroughmobilephones,andreadingthroughe-readers.Peoplespend55minutesadayreadingonline,62minutesonmobilephonesand23minutesone-readers.Ithinkthereasonforthischangehassomethingtodowiththeiradvantagesanddisadvantages.Newmediareadingcanbedonewithamobilephone,anytime,anywhere,andischeaperthantraditionalpaperyreading.However,thetypesofe-booksarenotcomprehensive,andmanyofthemarenetworknovels.Therearefewprofessionalbooks.Paperbooksarebetterformentosolvethisproblem.Therefore,Isuggestthatweshouldchooseappropriatereadingmethodsaccordingtoourdifferentneeds.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇圖示作文。題干要求根據(jù)所給圖，比較傳統(tǒng)閱讀和新媒體閱讀的現(xiàn)狀并得出結論，在此基礎上分析閱讀方式變化的原因，影響并提出建議?？蛇m當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：本文主要采用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時來行文。第一段點題；第二段描述圖中所給的信息；第三段分析這種變化的原因，并給出自己的建議。寫作時注意保持主謂一致性，在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。做到無語法和標點錯誤。二、材料作文2．深圳是一座科技之城、創(chuàng)新之城，為培養(yǎng)學生對科技的興趣，你的學校上周舉辦了科技節(jié)。假定你是你校英語報的小記者，請你編寫一篇新聞報道，介紹這次活動。要點：1.活動目的2.活動項目：模型制作比賽3.活動亮點：學生發(fā)明的服務于校園的機器人：外表、功能4.學生感受提示詞：1.科技節(jié)sciencefestival2.實驗experimentShenzheniswell-knownasacityoftechnologyandinnovation.Lastweek,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：Shenzheniswell-knownasacityoftechnologyandinnovation.Lastweek,ourschoolheldasciencefestival,whichaimstodevelopstudents’interestinscienceandtechnologyandbroadentheirhorizons.Atthefestival,somestudentstookanactivepartinthemodel-makingcompetition.Manyoftheirrobots,whichwerethehighlightofthefestival,drewpeople’sattention.Theserobotswereintheshapeoflovelyanimals,suchasrabbits,monkeysanddogs.Theyweredoingsomesimpletaskslikesweepingthefloorandthrowingawayrubbish.Besides,someotherstudentscarriedoutscienceexperiments.Thestudentswhowerepresentatthefestivalwereallsurprisedattheexhibitsandgavethemabigaroundofapplause.Ourschoolhopesthatmoreandmorestudentscanlearnscienceandtechnologybettertoserveourcountry.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于新聞報道的寫作，在寫作時要根據(jù)漢語提示的內(nèi)容，介紹科技節(jié)的目的，活動項目以及活動亮點和學生們的感受。2.寫作指導：本文應該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順，內(nèi)容完整，保證條理清晰，行文連貫。3．科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力，創(chuàng)新是引領發(fā)展的第一動力。中國人民勤勞睿智，創(chuàng)新產(chǎn)品層出不窮，日新月異。假如你是李華，你們學校英語社團正在開展“創(chuàng)新生活”主題征文活動，請結合自身經(jīng)歷介紹你日常學習或生活中經(jīng)常使用的新發(fā)明，說說你對它的評價及它帶給你的改變。提示詞語：technology,High-speedTrain,sharedbikes,convenient,develop提示問題：·Whatnewinventiondoyouuseinyourdailylife?·Whatdoyouthinkofit?·Howdoesitaffectyourlife?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Technologyplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Webenefitfromthemalotandtheyarechangingourlivesgreatly.Ofhundredsoftechnologicalinventions,Ilikethehigh-speedtrainbest.Inthepast,ittookmeabout20hoursfromShenzhentoShanghai.Butnowitonlytakesmeabout4hourstogettoShanghai.Thissavesmealotoftime.Moreover,it’scomfortabletotakethehigh-speedtrainbecauseitmovessmoothly,andIcandosomereadingandwatchmovieswithoutanyproblem.Icannotonlyenjoytheviewoutofthewindowsbutalsohavearelaxingtimeonthetrain.Manypeoplechoosetotakethehigh-speedtrainbecauseofthelowerpricethantheplane.Anditisveryconvenient.Whatagreatcreativeinvention!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“新發(fā)明”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。結合自身經(jīng)歷介紹經(jīng)常使用的新發(fā)明，并說說對它的評價及它帶來的改變。寫作時保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標點錯誤。4．科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力。處于一個飛速發(fā)展的時代，我們的生活無時無刻不受到科技的影響。哪個科技的產(chǎn)物對你的生活影響最大？請結合以下要點，用英語寫一篇文章。要點：1.是什么影響了你的生活?2.它是如何影響你的生活的?3.從中你有何感悟?要求：1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2.100詞左右；3.不得使用真實姓名和班級。________has/haveinfluencedmylife_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheInternethasinfluencedmylifeManyinventionshavechangedourlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,theInternetisausefulinventionanditinfluencesmylifemost.EverydayIsurftheInternetandgetinformationfromit.Icankeepintouchwithmyfriendsandfamily.Besides,Icanbuygoodsfromallovertheworld.Moreimportantly,IcanknowmorethroughtheInternet,anditopensupmyeyes.Itcannotonlyhelpmewithmystudy,butalsohelpmerelax.Allinall,thankstotheInternet,mylifebecomesmoreconvenientthanever.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。首先就“科技影響生活”這個話題，把題目補充完整。第一段點出對自己影響最大的那個科技是什么；第二段敘述如何影響自己的生活；最后一段描述自己的感受。2.寫作指導：寫作時采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，使用第一人稱，按照題目要點和要求，保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。5.隨著科技的進步，獲得知識的途徑日益增多。有的人推崇師從電腦，有的人則支持師從教師的傳統(tǒng)學習模式。請你結合自己的學習經(jīng)歷，選擇其中一個觀點進行闡述。learnfromcomputerslearnfromteachers?don’tneedtogotoschool?takefreecourses?moreeducationalresources?…?askforhelpintime?teachershelpdevelopinterest?necessarysupervision?…注意：（1）短文必須包括所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：Withthedevelopmentofscience,therearemoreandmorewaystogetknowledge.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Withthedevelopmentofscience,therearemoreandmorewaystogetknowledge.Somepeoplebelievethatlearningfromcomputersisgoodwhileotherssupportthetraditionallearningmode.Forme,Iprefertolearnfromcomputers.First,ifwelearnfromcomputers,thereisnoneedforustogotoschool.Wecansavemuchtimetravelingtoandfromschools.Second,itisveryconvenienttolistentoonlinecoursesandstopatanytimewewant.Third,it’seconomicaltotakefreecoursesontheInternet.Lastly,therearemoreeducationalresourcesontheInternet.Wecandownloadusefulinformationandtalkwithforeignersallovertheworld.Generallyspeaking,Ithinkthatlearningfromcomputersisawisechoice.【詳解】題干解讀：題目要求結合自身經(jīng)歷，選擇一個觀點進行闡述；要求包含表格中所有要點，并進行適當發(fā)揮。寫作指導：此作文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，采用第一人稱。此作文可采用三段落格式，第一段：整體描述眾人的觀點以及闡明自己的看法；第二段：說明自己為什么選擇師從電腦；第三段：總結全文，說明師從電腦是一個明智選擇。寫作時注意保持主謂一致性，在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。做到無語法和標點錯誤。6．十九大以來，一系列的“新”成為大家關注的熱詞，新時代、新起點、新方略……，不斷走上新臺階的中國，學校教育也將翻開新的篇章，未來的學校會是什么樣呢？請你暢想一下你理想的未來學校的樣子，以“MyDreamSchool”為題，根據(jù)思維導圖提示寫一篇英語短文。要求如下：1.包含思維導圖的所有信息；2.重點談談你喜歡這樣學校的原因；3.文章不少于80詞；4.不得出現(xiàn)真實的個人信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyDreamSchoolEveryonehasadreamschoolinhisheart.SodoI.Todayletmesharesomethingaboutmydreamschoolwithyou.Mydreamschoolwillbebigandbeautiful.Everyonewillhaveacomputerintheclassroom,sowecangetinformationfromtheInternet.Theteacherswon’tusechalktowrite.Therewillbespecialpensforthem.Andtheteacherswillbeverykindandfriendly.Guesswhat!Theywillevenplaywithus.Inclass,wewillbeabletochooseourfavouritesubjects.Afterclass,wewillhavelesshomeworksowe’llhavemorefreetime.Everyoneisfriendlyandwecaneasilygetonwellwitheachother.Theschoolisbeautiful.Thereareallkindsofflowersandtreesaroundtheteachingbuildings.MydreamschoolissogoodandI’msuremydreamwillcometrue.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要以“MyDreamSchool”為題寫一篇文章。根據(jù)所給思維導圖從學生們?nèi)绾螌W習、為什么你喜歡這個學校、老師將會如何教你、學校環(huán)境是什么樣子等方面敘述。2.寫作指導：文章以一般將來時為主，人稱用第一人稱；寫作時注意分段敘述，第一段總起全文、引入主旨；第二段從思維導圖的四個方面敘述；第三段總結。注意敘述的完整性，保證條理清晰。7．隨著科技的發(fā)展，越來越多的語音助手進入我們的生活，阿里巴巴發(fā)布的天貓精靈TmallGenie就是其中一款。假如你媽媽最近剛買了一個送給你作為生日禮物。下圖是有關天貓精靈的介紹，請你根據(jù)所提供的信息寫一份對它的介紹。注意：1．根據(jù)所給信息進行介紹，舉例說明并適當發(fā)揮。2．字數(shù)100字左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。天貓精靈它的外形外觀小且易子攜帶色彩圖案都美提供多種服務解答身邊疑難播放音樂故事語音友情提醒……你對它的評價……Hello,everyone!Here,I’dliketointroduceTmallGeniethatmymotherboughtformeasmybirthdaypresent.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Hello,everyone!Here,I’dliketointroduceTmallGeniethatmymotherboughtformeasapresent.Itissosmallthatitisconvenienttocarrywhereverwego.Also,bothitscoloursandpicturesarebeautiful.Itcanprovidedifferentkindsofserviceforus.Wheneverwehaveproblemswithourlifeorstudy,justspeaktoitanditwillofferusthehelpthatweneed.Inaddition,themusicitplayscanmakeusrelaxedafterahardday’sworkorstudy.Meanwhile,thechildrenareeasytofallasleepbylisteningtothestorythatittells.Also,itcanremindyouofimportantdatessothatwecan’tforgettheimportantthingswehavetodo.Everytimewewanttoknowwhatishappening,itwilltellussomeup-to-dateinformationathomeandabroadimmediately.Ingeneral,Ihavefoundmylifemoreenjoyableandcolourfulsinceitcameintomylife.Itisalwayswithmelikemyclosestfriend.Itcanalmostdowhateveritisaskedto.ThatiswhyIlikeitsomuch.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一篇英語短文，開頭已給出。要求根據(jù)表格信息提示來介紹一下你媽媽給你買的天貓精靈，可適當發(fā)揮。

2.寫作指導：本文應該用第三人稱來介紹天貓精靈；因為主要是描述客觀事實，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；介紹天貓精靈時，應描寫細致；并且短文需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。8．隨著科技的發(fā)達，眾多的點餐APP如美團外賣、餓了么、百度外賣等的應用改變了人們的就餐方式，人們足不出戶就享用美食。由于送餐速度快、食物選擇多，點餐APP越來越受年輕人的青睞。但是，外賣食物也存在不少問題，如餐品的外觀較差，食品衛(wèi)生沒有保障等問題也困擾著喜愛外賣的人們。假如你是李華，你們學校?？谡骷瘜W生對網(wǎng)絡訂餐的看法，請你用英語寫一篇短文，發(fā)表你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：1.網(wǎng)絡訂餐發(fā)展迅速的原因（至少列舉兩項）；2.網(wǎng)絡訂餐的優(yōu)點與缺點（各寫兩點）；3.你的希望及看法。寫作要求：1.意思連貫、符合邏輯、語句通順；2.不少于80詞，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.不要寫出你的真實姓名和校名。Asweallknow,withthedevelopmentoftechnology,therearemoreandmoreAppsoforderingfoodonlineinourdailylife._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Asweallknow,withthedevelopmentoftechnology,therearemoreandmoreAppsoforderingfoodonlineinourdailylife.MoreandmorepeopleareusingtheseAppstoorderfoodonlinebecauseitsavestimeandisquiteconvenientforpeople.Also,ourwayofeatingischangingrapidly.Orderingfoodonlinedoesgoodtous.Firstofall,wecanenjoydeliciousfoodwithoutleavinghome.Secondly,therearesomanykindsoffoodforustochooseonline.However,everycoinhastwosides.Orderingfoodonlinealsobringsusalotofproblems.Forexample,thelookofthefoodisnotsogoodasthatintherestaurants.What’smore,wemayeatuncleanorunhealthyfoodwithoutknowing.IhopeourgovernmentcanmakesomelawsandpaymoreattentiontothefoodsafetyproblemandtheuseofsuchApps.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakegooduseofthistechnology.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，題目要求以李華的身份根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容寫一篇關于對網(wǎng)絡訂餐的看法，主要描述網(wǎng)絡訂餐發(fā)展迅速的原因、網(wǎng)絡訂餐的優(yōu)缺點以及對網(wǎng)絡訂餐的希望與看法。2.寫作指導：本文可以按照所給內(nèi)容分為三部分：第一部分說明網(wǎng)絡訂餐迅速發(fā)展的原因；第二部分主要描述網(wǎng)絡訂餐的優(yōu)缺點；第三部分主要寫明自己對網(wǎng)絡訂餐的看法與希望。人稱主要采用第一人稱和第三人稱，時態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。準確運用時態(tài)，內(nèi)容要充實，句子要通順。9．假設你是張明。你的好朋友李磊上周給你寫了一封信，信中和你分享了他上周科學課后對于人工智能AI(artificialintelligence)的一些觀點，并表述了他對于人工智能即將代替人類的擔憂。請以此為背景，根據(jù)寫作提示寫一封回信。寫作提示：1.建議李磊不要過分憂慮；2.在信中闡述人工智能的優(yōu)點(參考下表)：人工智能的優(yōu)點可以代替人類從事危險工作，從而保證人類安全可以代替人類進行單調(diào)重復的工作，從而從繁重工作中解放(freev.)自己，有時間去做一些感興趣的事情在我國科技領域扮演著重要角色，這就是政府更加關注的原因……3.在信尾總結你對人工智能的看法。寫作要求：1.要點齊全，不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；語句通順，書寫規(guī)范；2.100詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名和校名。DearLiLeiI’mgladtoreceiveyourletterandgetachancetodiscussartificialintelligencewithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,ZhangMing【答案】例文：DearLiLeiI’mgladtoreceiveyourletterandgetachancetodiscussartificialintelligencewithyou.Idon’tthinkyouneedtobetooworriedaboutit.AIwillnevercompletelytaketheplaceofhumanbeings.Instead,ithasmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.ThefollowingismypointofviewregardingAI.Firstofall,AIcanbeusedtododangerousjobsandkeepworkerssafe.Ifpeopledon’twanttorepeatthesameboringandtiringworkdayafterday,theycanuseAItohelpthemaswell.Asaresult,peoplecanfreethemselvesfromover-workandspendmoretimeonwhattheyareinterestedin.AIcanalsohelpalotinscientificdevelopment.AIplaysanimportantroleinthefieldsofscienceandtechnologyinChina.That’swhythegovernmentispayingmoreattentiontoit.Inmyopinion,AIisadouble-edgedsword.Insteadofworryingaboutitsnegativeeffects,youshouldlearnmoreabouthowtouseitproperly.Doyouagree?I’mlookingforwardtoyoureply.Yourssincerely,ZhangMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題要求我們就人工智能AI向李磊回一封信，寫作時應注意信件寫作的格式。本題寫作提示給出三點，我們可以圍繞這三點用三段展開寫作，一個寫作要點為一段。2.寫作指導：本文主要以陳述觀點為主，時態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作提示的第一點和第三點概括性強，我們應該圍繞其中心進行充分的自我發(fā)揮，這樣既豐富文章內(nèi)容又能達到字數(shù)要求。寫作提示的第二點內(nèi)容較多，可以使用連接詞（Firstofall，also等）來進行寫作，這樣既使文章層次清楚又行文連貫。另外，文章需表達的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時應適當注意句式的豐富度，例如可以使用主從復合句等。最后檢查作文時應注意是否有遺漏內(nèi)容要點，英文句子的表達是否符合英文表達的習慣與規(guī)則。四、話題作文10．科技改變生活方式，給人們帶來了極大的便利，如支付寶（Ali-pay）、高鐵（HighSpeedRail）、微信（WeChat）等。請以“ChineseWayofLifewithHigh-Tech”為題，舉例描述科技如何改變我們的生活方式，讓外國友人了解生活在中國的便利和舒適。要求：（1）文中不可出現(xiàn)真實的個人身份信息。（2）詞數(shù)約110詞，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。ChineseWayofLifewithHigh-TechWiththerapiddevelopmentofoureconomy,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ChineseWayofLifewithHigh-TechWiththerapiddevelopmentofoureconomy,hightechnologybringsconveniencetoourlife.Firstly,therearesomeshared-bikesaroundus.They’reveryhelpfulandconvenientforustotraveltoplacesnottoofarawayfromourhome.Secondly,youcanseeHighSpeedRaileverywhereinChina.Takinghigh-speedtrainisnotonlycomfortable,butalsosavestime.Asfo