讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)思維方向?qū)＞?01)-2024屆高三英語(yǔ)一輪起航

Itwasabeautifulsunnydaywhenthemovingvanpulledontothetree-linedstreet.MarkandMindysteppedoutofthevanandlookedattheirnewhomewithpride.Theyhadbothbeensavingforalongtimetopurchasetheirfirsthousetogetherandwereveryexcitedtogoonanewventure.Withinanhourtheyhadunloadedanumberofboxesandwerepleasedwiththeirprogress.Theskyhadbeguntodarkenslightly,buttheweatherwasstillpleasant.ThenMindyheardit–evenfeltit.Therewasalargeclapofthunderandthenaboltoflightning.MindyandMarkimmediatelyfrozeandlookedateachother,thenlookedattheboxesscattered(分散)ontheirlawn.Theyhastilyracedtogettheirbelongingsindoors,butnotbeforegettingcaughtinheavyrain.Thecouplestoodintheirlivingroom,wetfromheadtotoe,surroundedbywhatwerenowverywetboxes.Then,Marknoticedapoolofwaterinthehallway.

Hewenttoinspectandfoundthattherewaswaterdrippingfromtheceiling.“Wecanhavesomeonefixit,”Mindysaid.“I’llgrababuckettocatchthewaterfornow.”AmomentlaterMarkheardascreamandracedintothekitchenjustintimetoseeamouserunningacrossthefloor.Mindywasfrozenwithfright.

“Don’tworry.Wecantakecareofthat!”Marksaid,tryingtosoundasreassuring(安心的)aspossible.“Let’sgounpacksomeoftheboxes.Thatwillmakeusfeelbetter.”MarkandMindymadetheirwaytothelivingroom,butwhentheyopenedaboxholdingtheirkitchenutensils(器皿)anddishes,theyfoundthatalloftheirplates,bowlsandcupswerebroken.Theylookedateachotherindismay(沮喪).“Whatdowedonow?”Mindyasked.Theirfirstdayintheirnewhomewasnotturningouttobethejoyousoccasiontheyhadexpected.Paragraph1:Justthen,therewasaknockatthedoor.Paragraph2:Suddenlytheyheardanoisefromtheattic(閣樓).【參考范文】Paragraph1:Justthen,therewasaknockatthedoor.Openingthedoorwearily,Markfoundanelderlymanstandingontheporchwithsomesavory(可口的)cookies.Grinning,themanintroducedhimselfasTom.Uponseeingthevanparkedoutside,hebroughtcookiestowelcomehisnewneighbors.Tom’swordsandthesmellofthecookiescalmedMarkalot,butwiththeboxesintheroominamess,Markfeltembarrassed.Unexpectedly,Tomcameinandhelpedthehostscleanuptheroomandfinallytheysatdowntogether,enjoyingthecookieshappily.Paragraph2:Suddenlytheyheardanoisefromtheattic.Puzzled,Mindyranupstairs.“It’salovelykitten,”Mindycriedcheerfully.“ItmustbebecauseJames,theformerownerofthehouse,usedtofeedastraycattodriveoutthemice,”smiledTom.“ItwasJameswhohelpedmewhenIwashelpless,justasyouarenow.”Feelingthewarmthfromtheneighbor,MarkandMindywereverygrateful.Therainisstillfalling,butitcouldneverdampentheirhopesforthefuture.【文章概要】通過(guò)閱讀所給文章可知，馬克和明迪搬入新家，突然變天下雨，二人跑進(jìn)房子，發(fā)現(xiàn)天花板上滴水，廚房有老鼠，而且他們的餐具都碎了，二人很沮喪，認(rèn)為在新家的第一天并不是他們所期望的那種歡樂(lè)的日子?！驹斀狻康谝欢伍_(kāi)頭是：就在這時(shí)，有人敲門(mén)。本段應(yīng)該寫(xiě)馬克開(kāi)門(mén)后，發(fā)現(xiàn)是一位拿著餅干的老人——鄰居湯姆，湯姆是來(lái)歡迎二人的，并幫他們打掃衛(wèi)生，最后大家一起吃餅干，二人很開(kāi)心。第二段開(kāi)頭是：突然，他們聽(tīng)到閣樓上傳來(lái)響聲。本段應(yīng)該寫(xiě)明迪上樓去發(fā)現(xiàn)是一只貓，湯姆告訴二人貓是前主人詹姆斯養(yǎng)的，詹姆斯也幫過(guò)湯姆，所以湯姆幫助二人，馬克和明迪很感激，雨并沒(méi)有打消他們對(duì)未來(lái)的希望。注意人稱(chēng)變化，老人、兩人、貓高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)：driveout、helpless、dampen、introduceoneselfassb.等從句使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)Unexpectedly,Tomcameinandhelpedthehostscleanuptheroomandfinallytheysatdowntogether,enjoyingthecookieshappily.表語(yǔ)從句ItmustbebecauseJames,theformerownerofthehouse,usedtofeedastraycattodriveoutthemice，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型結(jié)構(gòu)ItwasJameswhohelpedmewhenIwashelpless注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好。Growingup,Iunderstoodonethingaboutmydad:Hekneweverything.Thiswasourrelationship:Iaskedhimquestionsandhetoldmetheanswers.Inmyteenyears,hetaughtmethingsI’dneedtoknowtosurviveintherealworld.WhenImovedoutonmyown,IcalledhimusuallywhensomethingbrokeintomyapartmentandIneededtoknowhowtofixthetoilet,theair-conditionerorthewall.Butthen,eventually,Ineededhimless.Foreverything,IhadGoogle.Idon’tknowwhenithappened,butwhenIcalledourconversationsdevelopedintosixwords.Me:“Hi,Dad”.Him:“Hi,sweets.Here’sMom.”Ilovedmydad,ofcourse,butIwonderedattimesifmaybehehadalreadysharedeverythingIneededtoknow.Then,thispastsummer,Imovedinwithmyparentsforthreeweekswhilemyhousewasbeingrepaired.Theyownalakehouse,andDadaskedmetohelphimrebuildthebulkhead(隔板)attheirdock(船塢).“Howdoyouknowhowtobuildabulkhead?”“IspentasummerincollegebuildingthemontheJerseyshore.”“Youdid?”IthoughtIkneweverythingaboutmydad.Iknewaboutthesummeratthemanufacturingplantthatburnedhishandsraw,andeventhetinylittlekitchen,wherehelearnedhowtomakethebestpancake.ButIneverknewthis.“Yes.Nowcomeuphereandletmeteachyouhowtousethiscircularssaw(圓鋸).”Allofasudden,Irealizedthatmaybeit’snotthatthere’snothinglefttosay.Maybeit’sjustthatI’vespentmylifeaskinghimthewrongquestions.Paragraph1:WeendedupourtalkingbutIwaslostinthoughtParagraph2:“Wait,Dad,”Isaid,“Howareyou?【參考范文】Paragraph1:WeendedupourtalkingbutIwaslostinthought.Foryears,IhadtakenitforgrantedthatdadcouldgivemeanswerstoanyofmyquestionsonlyifIasked,butseldomdidItrytounderstandhislifejustlikethesummerwhenhewasbuildingbulkheadandwhathewantedfromme.Maybehewasalsoeagertosharehisstorywithme,orhewouldn’thaveaskedmetohelphimrebuildthebulkhead.Afterall,itwashard,manuallabor.Afewweekslater,afterImovedbackintomyhouse,Icalledmyparents.Dadanswered.“Hi,sweets,”hesaid.“Here’sMom.”P(pán)aragraph2:“Wait,Dad,”Isaid.“Howareyou?”Wetalkedalotthatday,fromthelittlequarrelbetweenhimandmymomtothejobhewasworkingon.Nothingimportant.Toanyoneelse,itwouldsoundlikeanormalconversationbetweenadadandhisdaughter.Buttome,itwasnovel,aswella