2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：沖破質(zhì)疑：追逐歌唱夢想的旅程+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)沖破質(zhì)疑：追逐歌唱夢想的旅程1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Iwassittingatthekitchentablepracticinganewsongwhenmygrandmacutmeoffasking,“Why’dyousuddenlydecidetostartsinging?Unlessyoustartwhenyou’refourorfive,it’sprettymuchahopelesscase,youknow.”Iwasfifteen.Foryears,IknewthatIwantedtostarttakingsinginglessons.Ibroughtituptomymommanytimes,butmywishwasputoffendlessly.Ihadbeenwaitingforsolongandwasstartingtogiveuphope.Afterall,mygrandmabelievedmetobecompletelytalentless.4續(xù)寫原文AsIstartedhighschool,Ifinallytookprivatesinginglessons.Thenthevoiceofdoubtkeptgraduallyweakeninginmymind.SoImadeseveralrequeststothechoirleader,butIwasneveraccepted.Hisrefusaltomycourserequestsdoubledthevoiceofdoubtinme,convincingmethatmostadultsaroundmeagreedwithmygrandma.Mysenioryearburntout,Iwastiredoflettingothersmakedecisionsforme.SoIemailedmyadviser.Hegavesomeadviceandscheduledameetingforme.Thismeetingwasmyfirstface-to-facerequesttobeputintochoir.5續(xù)寫原文“Areyousureyouwanttoquitfromacademicgrouptofitchoirintoyourschedule?I’mnotsurethatit’sthebestdecisionnow.”“I’vewantedtojoinchoirforyearsnow.”Thatday,Igottheopportunitytobeinterviewedfortheschoolchoir.Theinterviewerwasaserious,oldman.Iworriedhewouldholdthesameopinionasmygrandma.6段首句Paragraph1：Istoodinthevastbandroom,blindedbythebrightlighting.Paragraph2：AfterIfinishedsinging,theinterviewersaid,“Youarein.I’llseeyouMondaythen!”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析915歲的“我”熱愛唱歌，向母親多次提出上聲樂課的請求卻被擱置，奶奶也認為“我”沒天賦。高中時“我”終于上了聲樂課，可合唱團團長多次拒絕“我”的入團請求。高三時，“我”不再聽任他人決定，主動聯(lián)系導(dǎo)師，爭取到面試機會。面對嚴肅的面試官，“我”的歌唱之路將迎來怎樣的轉(zhuǎn)折？點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Istoodinthevastbandroom,blindedbythebrightlighting.我站在寬敞的音樂教室里，明亮的燈光晃得我有些睜不開眼。強烈的聚光燈直直地打在身上，讓我感覺像是站在舞臺中央，成為眾人矚目的焦點。此時，我的心在胸腔里劇烈地跳動著，仿佛要沖破胸膛。我深吸一口氣，努力讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來，隨后，我開啟了我的演唱。每一個音符，都飽含著我多年來對唱歌的熱愛與執(zhí)著，那是我靈魂深處最真摯的情感表達。歌聲在教室里回蕩，我沉浸其中，仿佛忘卻了所有曾經(jīng)的質(zhì)疑與拒絕。我盡情地展現(xiàn)自己，將所有的期待都傾注在這一首歌里。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：AfterIfinishedsinging,theinterviewersaid,“Youarein.I’llseeyouMondaythen!”一曲唱罷，面試官說道：“你被錄取了，周一見！”聽到這句話，我簡直不敢相信自己的耳朵。一時間，驚喜和激動涌上心頭，嘴角不自覺地上揚，露出了燦爛的笑容。多年來，那些等待、那些堅持、那些被質(zhì)疑的痛苦，此刻都化作了幸福的淚水。我如釋重負，多年的夢想終于成真。我迫不及待地跑出教室，想要第一時間把這個好消息告訴身邊的人。從這一刻起，我深知，只要勇敢地追隨自己的內(nèi)心，堅持不懈地努力，就一定能迎來美好的未來。而我，也將在歌唱這條道路上，勇敢地走下去，用歌聲書寫屬于自己的精彩篇章。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Istoodinthespaciousbandroom,wherethebrightlightingmademeblinkuncomfortably.Thestrongspotlightshonedirectlyonme,makingmefeellikeIwasonagrandstage,thecenterofeveryone'sattention.Atthatmoment,myheartwaspoundingviolentlyinmychest,asifitwasabouttoburstout.Itookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmmyselfdown.Then,Istartedtosing.Everynotewasfilledwithmydeep-rootedpassionforsingingovertheyears.Itwasthemostsincereexpressionofmyinnermostfeelings.Thesoundofmysingingechoedintheroom,andIwassoimmersedinitthatIseemedtoforgetallthepreviousdoubtsandrejections.Igavemyalltoshowmyself,pouringallmyexpectationsintothisonesong.14范文呈現(xiàn)AfterIfinishedsinging,theinterviewersaid,"Youarein.I'llseeyouMondaythen!"Icouldhardlybelievemyears.Atthatmoment,surpriseandexcitementwelledupinmyheart.Abroadsmilespreadacrossmyfaceunconsciously.Overtheyears,allthewaiting,perseverance,andthepainofbeingquestionedhadnowturnedintohappytears.Ifeltagreatsenseofrelief,andmylong-cherisheddreamhadfinallycometrue.Icouldn'twaittorunoutoftheroomtosharethisgoodnewswitheveryonearoundme.Fromthismomenton,IdeeplyunderstoodthataslongasIbravelyfollowedmyheartandperseveredinmyefforts,Iwouldsurelyembraceawonderfulfuture.AndIwouldbravelycontinueonthissingingjourney,usingmyvoicetowriteamagnificentchapterofmyown.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Standingintheexpansivebandroom,Iwasmomentarilyblindedbytheintenseglareofthebrightlighting.Thepowerfulspotlightboredownonme,asifthrustingmeontothecenterstageofacolossalauditorium,thecynosureofalleyes.Atthatinstant,myheartthunderedwithinmychest,threateningtobreakfree.Takingadeep,steadyingbreath,Isummonedthecouragetobegin.EachnoteIsangwasavesselbrimmingwithmylong-standingardorforsinging,adistilledessenceofmyinnermostemotions.Themelodyreverberatedthroughouttheroom,cocooningmeinaworldwhereallpastdoubtsandrejectionsevaporatedintooblivion.Ipouredmyentirebeingintothatperformance,infusingeveryounceofmyhopeandanticipationintothelyrics.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Upontheconclusionofmysong,theinterviewer'svoicecutthroughthesilence:"Youarein.I'llseeyouMondaythen!"Thosewordsseemedalmosttoogoodtobetrue.Awaveofincredulousjoysurgedthroughme,andaninvoluntarygrinspreadacrossmyface.Yearsofwaiting,strugglingagainsttheodds,andenduringthestingofdoubthadfinallyculminatedinthismomentofelation.Aprofoundsenseofreliefwashedoverme,asifaheavyburdenhadbeenliftedfrommyshoulders.Withouthesitation,Iboltedoutoftheroom,eagertosharethislife-changingnewswithmylovedones.Fromthatmomentforward,Iwasresoluteinmybeliefthatfollowingmyheart'sdesiresandperseveringthroughadversityco