2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：十二歲生日夢(mèng)想自行車終成真+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)十二歲生日，夢(mèng)想自行車終成真1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Thesunwasalreadybeginningtosink.Theairwassomewhatbitter.ItwasRobert’s12thbirthday.ButRobertwaswalkinghomealonewithhiseyesfocusingonhisworn-outshoes.Kidsafterschoolwereridingbyintwosandthrees,ringingtheirbicyclebellsmerrily.Robertdidn’traiseuphishead,butheknewclearlythatthoseguyswerewearingbigsmilesontheirfaces,andthatthestringsoftheirbikewheelswereshininginthegoldensunlight.“Howluckytheyare!”Robertthoughttohimself.Headmiredeveryonewhohadhisownbike.Hehaddreamedmanytimesthathewasoneofthosewhowereontheirbikestoandfromschool.Hereallywantedabike,especiallyasagiftforhis12thbirthday.However,Robertwasclearthathisfamilycouldn’taffordit.Hisparentsworkedhardonlytomeettheirdailylifeneed.Fortunately,thefamilylivedhappilytogetherregardlessofthepoorcondition.Robertshouldbesatisfiedwithit.Buthejustcouldn’thelpfeelingsadaboutnotbeingabletoownabike.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Soonthesundisappearedfromnowhereandthestreetlampswereon,castingRobert’sfigureontheground.Lookingdownathismovingshadow,Robertstoppedhisstepssuddenly.Hestretchedout(伸出)bothofhisarmswithhishandsholdingsomethingtightly,andthenraisedhisrightlegandleftleginturntopushhimselfforward.Definitely,thefigureonthegrounddidasRobertdid.Itseemedthathewasridingabike.Abrandnewblackhandsomebike!AbikethatRoberthadbeendreamingof.TheimaginationexcitedanddelightedRobertalot.Hespeduphisimaginarybiketowardshishomehappily.Theairbecamesweetandgentle.5段首句Paragraph1：WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.Paragraph2：Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8在羅伯特12歲生日這天，他獨(dú)自走在回家路上，看到其他孩子騎著自行車，心生羨慕。他渴望有一輛自行車作為生日禮物，可家庭貧困，父母無(wú)力購(gòu)買(mǎi)。太陽(yáng)下山，路燈亮起，他想象自己騎著嶄新的黑色自行車，沉浸在喜悅中?；氐郊視r(shí)，房子里漆黑一片，似乎沒(méi)人在家。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.當(dāng)羅伯特到家時(shí)，屋里黑漆漆的，好像沒(méi)人在。他心里一陣失落，原本還期待著回家能看到溫馨的生日布置，哪怕只是簡(jiǎn)單的燭光和父母的笑臉。他緩緩走進(jìn)屋子，輕聲呼喚著爸爸媽媽，回應(yīng)他的只有自己的回聲。就在這時(shí)，他注意到桌上有一張紙條，心猛地一緊，趕忙拿起紙條，上面寫(xiě)著：“兒子，去后院看看?！笨吹竭@幾個(gè)字，他的心瞬間被好奇填滿，顧不上換鞋，轉(zhuǎn)身就朝著后院飛奔而去，腦海里不斷浮現(xiàn)出各種可能的驚喜。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.羅伯特興奮地沖進(jìn)后院，卻只看到一輛舊灰色的自行車。他的腳步猛地頓住，臉上的笑容瞬間消失，取而代之的是深深的失望。他呆呆地站在那里，心里五味雜陳。然而，當(dāng)他走近自行車時(shí)，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)了不一樣的地方。車把上掛著一個(gè)嶄新發(fā)亮的鈴鐺，車筐里裝滿了他最愛(ài)吃的零食，車座上還放著一張精心制作的卡片，上面寫(xiě)著：“親愛(ài)的羅伯特，生日快樂(lè)！我們愛(ài)你?！本驮谶@時(shí)，他的父母從樹(shù)后走了出來(lái)，臉上帶著溫柔的笑容。羅伯特的眼眶瞬間濕潤(rùn)，淚水奪眶而出。他明白了，這輛承載著父母愛(ài)意的自行車，比任何嶄新昂貴的車子都要珍貴。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.Disappointmentfilledhisheart.Hehadsecretlyhopedforawarmbirthdaysurprisefromhisparents.Hewalkedintothehouseslowly,callingoutforhismomanddad,butonlyhisownvoiceechoedback.Then,henoticedanoteonthetable.Witharacingheart,hepickeditupandread,"Gotothebackyard,son."Curiosityoverwhelmedhim.Withoutbotheringtochangehisshoes,herushedtowardsthebackyard,hismindfilledwithallkindsofexcitingpossibilities.13范文呈現(xiàn)Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.Hisstepshaltedsuddenly,andthesmileonhisfacedisappeared,replacedbydeepdisappointment.Hestoodthere,feelingamixofemotions.However,ashegotclosertothebike,henoticedsomethingdifferent.Therewasashinynewbellonthehandlebars,abasketfilledwithhisfavoritesnacks,andahand-madecardontheseat,whichread,"Happy12thBirthday,Robert!Weloveyou."Justthen,hisparentssteppedoutfrombehindatree,wearingwarmsmiles.Robert'seyeswelledupwithtears.Herealizedthatthisbike,fullofhisparents'love,wasmorepreciousthananybrand-newexpensiveone.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasplungedintodarkness,givingtheimpressionthatnobodywaspresent.Asenseofdisappointmentcreptintohisheart.Secretly,hehadbeenharbouringhopesofaheart-warmingbirthdaysurprisearrangedbyhisparents.Slowly,hemadehiswayintothehouse,callingoutforhismomanddad,yetonlytheechoofhisownvoicereverberatedthroughtheemptyrooms.Itwasthenthatanoteonthetablecaughthiseye.Hisheartpounding,hepickeditupandread,"Gotothebackyard,son."Overwhelmedbycuriosity,hedashedtowardsthebackyardwithoutevenpausingtochangehisshoes,hismindabuzzwithallsortsofthrillingpossibilities.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyard,onlytobegreetedbyanoldgraybike.Hisstepscametoanabrupthalt,andthesmilethathadadornedhisfacevanishedinaninstant,replacedbyprofounddisappointment.Standingthere,hewasengulfedbyacomplexmixofemotions.However,asheapproachedthebike,henoticedseveraldistinctivefeatures.Ashinynewbelladornedthehandlebars,abasketbrimmingwithhisfavoritesnackssatonthefront,andahand-craftedcardontheseatread,"Happy12thBirthday,Robert!Weloveyou."Justatthatmoment,hisparentsemergedfrombehindatree,theirfaceswreathedinwarmsmiles.Robert'sey