題型21 書面表達之建議信（講義）

?第21講書面表達之建議信【復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)】1.精選寫作話題，緊扣核心目標(biāo)。2.提升語言質(zhì)量。3.強化高效訓(xùn)練。【考情分析】建議信命題規(guī)律書信類一直是中考英語考試中一種?？嫉男问剑ㄗh信也是考查得較多的。建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法和主張，解決有關(guān)問題。建議信可以是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出看法和建議，也可以是寫給某個組織或機構(gòu)，就改進服務(wù)等方面提出建議或忠告。建議信的觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌。同時，建議信要盡量簡潔明確，理由充足，具有合理性和說服性?！久麕熃怆y】建議信要給出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，語氣一定要得當(dāng)，既要委婉禮貌，又要有說服力。一般來說，建議信可分為三個部分：（1)開頭；開門見山，簡要陳述事由，簡單介紹自己并陳述自己的觀點，注意語氣。（2)主體；說明建議的內(nèi)容，對所提出的建議進行分析、說明原因。這一部分注意要簡明扼要，目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。（3)結(jié)尾；對自己提出的建議簡單地做一小結(jié)并表達愿望。建議信夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識梳理高分策略之詞匯：一單詞建議advicev.建議suggestionn.幫助helpv.有幫助的helpfuladj.收到receive推薦recommendv.提供offer/provide/supply發(fā)展developv.實用的practicaladj.考慮considerv.二短語考慮oaccount/consideration也，和aswellas除...之外inadditionto征求某人的建議askforsb.’sadvice在…方面給某人建議givesb.advice/suggestionson…提出一些建議make/offersomesuggestions/advice接受我的建議adopt/accept/follow/takeupmyadvice/suggestions在我看來，就我而言inmyopinion/asfarasI’mconcerned/personally表達某人的觀點expressone’sviews/opinions對某人有益bebeneficial/beofbenefittosb.覺得我的建議有益/實用findmysuggestions/advicehelpful/practical一個有效的方式aneffectiveway記住keep…inmind振奮某人的精神liftone’sspirits對…有壞影響對…有壞影響培養(yǎng)好的習(xí)慣developgoodhabits涵括各種各樣的…coverawidevarietyof一.篇首句1.I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto…我很高興收到你的來信?，F(xiàn)在我寫信給你一些如何…的建議。2.I’msorrytoknowthat….I’d

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...很抱歉的知道…我想給你分享一下…的方法。3.Ihavelearntthat….Herearesomesuggestionsthathelpyou.我知道…這里是我給你的能幫到你的建議。運用了定語從句4.How'sitgoing?Youaskedmeabout…inyourlastletter.Herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou.最近好嗎？在你上一封信中，你問我…這些是給你的建議。二.篇中句1.You’dbetter…你最好…2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…我認(rèn)為，如果你…將會大有裨益。高級句型3.You’resupposedto…你應(yīng)該…4.Mostimportantofall，youshould…最重要的是，你應(yīng)該…三.篇尾句1.Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.我希望我的建議對你做決定有一定幫助。2.Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount.我相信你會認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。3.Whateveryoudecidetodo，goodluckwithyourstudies/work.不管你做怎么決定，祝你學(xué)業(yè)/工作好運！4.Ihopethesewaysareofsomeusetoyou,andIbelieveeverythingwillbegoingwellagainsoon!我希望這些方法對你有用，并且我相信一些都會很快好起來的。典型模板Dear…I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Youaskedmeabout______________(引出主題)Herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou.First，it’simportantto_________.(建議一)Besides，itshouldbeagoodideato__________.(建議二)Youcanalso__________.(建議三)Asto__________,Isuggest______________.(可具體到某一方面給出建議).Inaddition，___________(其他建議).I’msure______________(預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方行動的信心和決心).Ihopethesewaysareofsomeusetoyou,andIbelieveeverythingwillbegoingwellagainsoon!Yours【模板范文】DearBob,LearningthatyouwanttoknowthewaystopreventCovid-19,I'mgladtosharesomegoodideaswithyou.Firstly,youshouldwearamaskifyouhavetogoout.Don'tgotocrowdedplaces,likesupermarkets.Secondly,youshouldwashyourhandswithrunningwaterorsoapwheneveryoutouchsomething.Remembertowashthemslowlyandcarefully.Andneverfailtoopenthewindowsregularlytoletinsomefreshairanddokeepyourroomclean.Besides,coveryournoseandmouthwhensneezing.Ifyoudon'tfeelwell,gotoseeadoctor.Mostimportantofall,youshouldformagoodhabit.Gotobedearlyandgetupontime.Besuretohaveenoughsleep,andtakemoreexercise!Ihopethesewaysareofsomeusetoyou,andIbelieveeverythingwillbegoingwellagainsoon!Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua提升·必考題型歸納1．（2023·黑龍江哈爾濱·三模）假如你是九年級一班的李力，這周六下午你要參加學(xué)校英語俱樂部舉辦的活動——演講。請你根據(jù)以下信息給你的外教David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他活動的相關(guān)信息并請他對你的演講內(nèi)容提出建議。寫作要點：（1）英語俱樂部活動主題：攜手創(chuàng)建優(yōu)美校園環(huán)境（TogetherforaBetterSchoolEnvironment）（2）本次俱樂部活動形式：①海報（poster）展示②講述發(fā)生在你身邊的故事③演講（3）談?wù)勀阍谘葜v中對創(chuàng)建優(yōu)美校園環(huán)境如何“從我做起”的具體建議。寫作要求：（1）不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名。（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。（3）字跡工整、語言精煉、表達準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。（4）至少80詞。DearDavid,

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LiLi2．（2023·福建福州·三模）假如你是李華，你收到英國筆友Harry的郵件，他針對學(xué)校將要開設(shè)的特色選修課(electivecourses)的選課問題征求你的看法和幫助，請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)，詞數(shù)80左右。信件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。To:LiHua2023@163.comFrom:Harry@.DearLiHua,I’mgladtotellyouthatourschoolisplanningtoofferussomeelectivecourses,includingChinese,designing,photographyandsomeothersubjects.ManyofmyfriendsdecidetochooseChinese.IsitnecessaryforaforeignertolearnChinese?DoyouthinkIshouldalsotakethecourse?AndIhearChineseisdifficultforforeigners.SoifItakeit,couldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou!Yours,HarryDearHarry,I’mgladtohearthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

LiHua3．（2023·吉林·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Frank是一個中國迷，他計劃在中秋節(jié)期間到中國旅游。這是Frank第一次來中國，他希望你能寫一封e-mail為他提供一些建議。內(nèi)容包括：（1）中秋節(jié)的習(xí)俗。（2）最適宜出游的城市及原因。（3）推薦適合帶回英國的禮物。寫作要求：（1）語言流暢，層次清晰，內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）詞數(shù)80—100（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。（3）書寫規(guī)范,卷面整潔。（4）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實學(xué)校名稱和個人姓名。DearFrank,I’mgladtohearyou’recomingtoChina.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopemyreplywillhelpyouandyouwillhaveagoodtimeinChina.Allthebest，LiHua4．（2023·內(nèi)蒙古呼倫貝爾·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Chris對中國文化很感興趣，他給你發(fā)來郵件，詢問中國人日常生活中的基本社交禮儀，如待人接物、餐桌禮儀等。請你用英語回復(fù)一封郵件，介紹你所知道的相關(guān)禮儀。提示詞語：社交的social；禮儀manners；握手shakehands；禮貌polite；禮物gift；筷子chopsticks。提示問題：1.Whatdowedowhenwemeetpeopleforthefirsttime?

2.Howdowebehave(行為)properlyattable?注意事項：1.詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名和校名。DearChris,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinChinesesocialmanners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopetheaboveishelpful.Pleasefeelfreetoaskformoreinformation.Yours,LiHua5．（2023·浙江溫州·?？既＃┘偃缒闶抢钊A，近日你收到英國筆友Joe的來信，他和你一樣，也是一名九年級的學(xué)生，面對升學(xué)感到壓力很大。請你給他寫封回信，安慰他，參考所給信息，為他提出至少2條減壓的建議。Howdoyourelievepressure?①talktoothers②dosomeexercise③askthepsychologyteacherforhelp……要求：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、學(xué)校等信息；（2）詞數(shù)：110詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJoe,Happytoreceiveyourletter,butI’msorrytohearthatyouhavetofacealotofpressure.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．（2023·安徽·校聯(lián)考三模）假如你是校英語報編輯李華，收到了九年級學(xué)生××的電子郵件，郵件中她訴說了她最近遇到的兩個問題。請你根據(jù)以下提示，針對她的問題給她回一封電子郵件，給出合理的建議。提示：1.上課容易犯困。建議：每天早睡，保證至少八個小時的睡眠；2.英語口語不好。建議：參加英語社團，多用英語與他人交流等。要求：1.習(xí)作包括提示要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順、條理清晰；3.詞數(shù)100左右（郵件格式及開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Dear××,I’msorrytohearthatyou’reintrouble.I’mtogiveyousomeadviceonyourproblems.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua7．（2023·江西吉安·統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike因為父母工作地點的改變而轉(zhuǎn)到新的學(xué)校就讀，但一直苦于沒有適應(yīng)新的校園生活，于是發(fā)來郵件向你請教。請你根據(jù)表格要點提示和要求，給Mike回一封郵件：提出你的建議并表達期待(各補充一點)。寫作要點具體內(nèi)容Youradvice1.Makemorefriends;2.Attendschoolactivities.3....Yourwishes...要求：1.郵件應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)80-120。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearMike,Iamsorrytoknowthatyoustillcan’tgetusedtothelifeinyournewschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Bestwishesforyou!Yours,LiHua8．（2023·安徽阜陽·統(tǒng)考二模）假定你是李華。你的加拿大朋友Mike發(fā)來郵件說他即將轉(zhuǎn)入新班級，他擔(dān)心和新同學(xué)相處時會遇到困難。請你用英文給他回復(fù)一封郵件，提幾點建議，幫助他與新同學(xué)愉快相處。要點：1.尊重他人；2.樂于助人；3.樂于分享。注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)80~100，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：respect(v.尊重)DearMike,Howiseverythinggoing?Youaskedmehowtogetalongwellwithotherclassmatesinyournewclass.Herearesomewaysthatmighthelp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua9．（2023·江西撫州·統(tǒng)考一模）假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生朋友Jack要在暑假期間回國，打算為他媽媽準(zhǔn)備幾件富有特色的禮物，特來向你咨詢。請你給他回復(fù)一封郵件。寫作要點：1.建議禮物：旗袍和中國結(jié)。

2.說明禮物原因，表達祝福。提示語：旗袍：cheonsam中國結(jié)：Chineseknot作文要求：1.短文應(yīng)該包括以上全部信息，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞。DearJack,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2023·廣西·統(tǒng)考三模）假如你是李華，你的好朋友Lucy是月光中學(xué)的初三學(xué)生，中考將至，她寫郵件詢問你，如何緩解學(xué)習(xí)壓力。請你根據(jù)下面的導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容，用英文給她回復(fù)一封郵件。內(nèi)容要點：Howtorelieve(緩解)studypressure?listentosomesoftmusicwatchsomeinterestingmoviesaskyourparentsorteachersforhelp……寫作要求：1.文中須包含以上要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能提及本人的真實姓名、地名和校名；3.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右，開頭不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,Howareyouthesedays?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua真題感悟（2023·遼寧鞍山·統(tǒng)考中考真題）眼睛是心靈的窗戶。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近為近視感到困擾。請你根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息給他寫一封電子郵件，說明他近視的原因并提出建議。要求：（1）不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。（2）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊。（4）詞數(shù)：80~100詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。近視原因長時間使用電子產(chǎn)品；讀書時間過長。建議控制使用電子產(chǎn)品時間；養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣（如飲食、做眼保健操）……希望……參考詞匯：視力eyesight；近視myopia；電子產(chǎn)品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing（2023·江蘇無錫·統(tǒng)考中考真題）青少年在成長過程中會遇到各種問題，為此《21世紀(jì)英文報》開設(shè)了TeensTalk專欄，傾聽讀者的心聲，并由“少年之友”SigmundFriend予以回復(fù)。假設(shè)你是李華，最近也遇上了些煩心事，請給該專欄發(fā)一封英文郵件，講述你的煩惱并尋求建議。注意事項：（1）郵件內(nèi)容須自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；（2）詞數(shù)在100左右，郵件開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（3）郵件中不得使用真實的個人姓名或?qū)W校名稱。DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua3．（2023·山東濱州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，近日你的英國筆友Amy發(fā)來郵件，向你訴說她最近的困擾；自己體型微胖，想通過節(jié)食減肥，以更美的面貌進入新的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容用英語給她回封郵件，談一談你對這問題的見解。參考詞匯:diet(v.節(jié)食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(內(nèi)在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要點齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當(dāng)加2—3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearAmy,Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4.（2022·山東威海·中考真題）某英語雜志社JustAsk欄目收到一位青少年Claire的電子郵件，郵件中講述了自己的困惑，并向大家尋求幫助。認(rèn)真閱讀這封電子郵件，假定你是Sarah或Kevin，請從不同角度給出合理化建議。From:Claire

To:JustAskSubject:AskingforadviceDearfriends,IfeelterribleandIreallyneedyouradvice.TheproblemisthatI’mnotinterestedinclothes.Idon’tknowwhat’sinfashionandIdon’tlikegoingshoppingforclothes.SomeofmyfriendslaughatmeandsaythatIhaven’tgotstyle.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Claire,13要求：(1)詞數(shù)100左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)任何與考生相關(guān)的真實信息。DearClaire,Iunderstandyou.OnceIwasalsointhesimilarsituation.It’snoteasyforustogetthroughteenageyearssmoothly.Herearemyopinions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodluck!Sarah/Kevin5．（2022·山東濱州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假定你是李華，最近你的筆友劉明發(fā)來郵件，向你訴說他的困擾；他的父母不讓他用手機APP給英文電影配音，認(rèn)為會影響學(xué)習(xí)和休息。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容用英語給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解，并予以安慰；2.提出合理的建議；3.希望情況有所好轉(zhuǎn)。參考詞匯：dub（v.配音）DearLiHua,I’mintroublenow.YesterdayIarguedwithmyparentsbecausetheydidn’tallowmetodubforeignfilmsbyusingmobileapps.Theythoughtthatitwouldhaveabadinfluenceonmystudyandsleep.Ibroketheirheartsandmadethemangry.I’msorryforthatbutIreallythinkithelpfultolearnEnglishbydubbingtheforeignfilms.NowIdon’tknowwhattodo.Couldyouhelpme?Yours.LiuMing要求：1.要點齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名與校名：3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當(dāng)加2-3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLiuMing.I’msorrytohearthatyouhadanargumentwithyourparentswhendubbingforeignfilmsbyusingmobileapps.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours.LiHua

?第21講書面表達之建議信（解析版）【復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)】1.精選寫作話題，緊扣核心目標(biāo)。2.提升語言質(zhì)量。3.強化高效訓(xùn)練?！究记榉治觥拷ㄗh信命題規(guī)律書信類一直是中考英語考試中一種常考的形式，而建議信也是考查得較多的。建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法和主張，解決有關(guān)問題。建議信可以是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出看法和建議，也可以是寫給某個組織或機構(gòu)，就改進服務(wù)等方面提出建議或忠告。建議信的觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌。同時，建議信要盡量簡潔明確，理由充足，具有合理性和說服性?！久麕熃怆y】建議信要給出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，語氣一定要得當(dāng)，既要委婉禮貌，又要有說服力。一般來說，建議信可分為三個部分：（1)開頭；開門見山，簡要陳述事由，簡單介紹自己并陳述自己的觀點，注意語氣。（2)主體；說明建議的內(nèi)容，對所提出的建議進行分析、說明原因。這一部分注意要簡明扼要，目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。（3)結(jié)尾；對自己提出的建議簡單地做一小結(jié)并表達愿望。建議信夯基·必備基礎(chǔ)知識梳理高分策略之詞匯：一單詞建議advicev.建議suggestionn.幫助helpv.有幫助的helpfuladj.收到receive推薦recommendv.提供offer/provide/supply發(fā)展developv.實用的practicaladj.考慮considerv.二短語考慮oaccount/consideration也，和aswellas除...之外inadditionto征求某人的建議askforsb.’sadvice在…方面給某人建議givesb.advice/suggestionson…提出一些建議make/offersomesuggestions/advice接受我的建議adopt/accept/follow/takeupmyadvice/suggestions在我看來，就我而言inmyopinion/asfarasI’mconcerned/personally表達某人的觀點expressone’sviews/opinions對某人有益bebeneficial/beofbenefittosb.覺得我的建議有益/實用findmysuggestions/advicehelpful/practical一個有效的方式aneffectiveway記住keep…inmind振奮某人的精神liftone’sspirits對…有壞影響對…有壞影響培養(yǎng)好的習(xí)慣developgoodhabits涵括各種各樣的…coverawidevarietyof一.篇首句1.I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto…我很高興收到你的來信?，F(xiàn)在我寫信給你一些如何…的建議。2.I’msorrytoknowthat….I’d

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...很抱歉的知道…我想給你分享一下…的方法。3.Ihavelearntthat….Herearesomesuggestionsthathelpyou.我知道…這里是我給你的能幫到你的建議。運用了定語從句4.How'sitgoing?Youaskedmeabout…inyourlastletter.Herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou.最近好嗎？在你上一封信中，你問我…這些是給你的建議。二.篇中句1.You’dbetter…你最好…2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…我認(rèn)為，如果你…將會大有裨益。高級句型3.You’resupposedto…你應(yīng)該…4.Mostimportantofall，youshould…最重要的是，你應(yīng)該…三.篇尾句1.Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.我希望我的建議對你做決定有一定幫助。2.Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount.我相信你會認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。3.Whateveryoudecidetodo，goodluckwithyourstudies/work.不管你做怎么決定，祝你學(xué)業(yè)/工作好運！4.Ihopethesewaysareofsomeusetoyou,andIbelieveeverythingwillbegoingwellagainsoon!我希望這些方法對你有用，并且我相信一些都會很快好起來的。典型模板Dear…I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Youaskedmeabout______________(引出主題)Herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou.First，it’simportantto_________.(建議一)Besides，itshouldbeagoodideato__________.(建議二)Youcanalso__________.(建議三)Asto__________,Isuggest______________.(可具體到某一方面給出建議).Inaddition，___________(其他建議).I’msure______________(預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方行動的信心和決心).Ihopethesewaysareofsomeusetoyou,andIbelieveeverythingwillbegoingwellagainsoon!Yours【模板范文】DearBob,LearningthatyouwanttoknowthewaystopreventCovid-19,I'mgladtosharesomegoodideaswithyou.Firstly,youshouldwearamaskifyouhavetogoout.Don'tgotocrowdedplaces,likesupermarkets.Secondly,youshouldwashyourhandswithrunningwaterorsoapwheneveryoutouchsomething.Remembertowashthemslowlyandcarefully.Andneverfailtoopenthewindowsregularlytoletinsomefreshairanddokeepyourroomclean.Besides,coveryournoseandmouthwhensneezing.Ifyoudon'tfeelwell,gotoseeadoctor.Mostimportantofall,youshouldformagoodhabit.Gotobedearlyandgetupontime.Besuretohaveenoughsleep,andtakemoreexercise!Ihopethesewaysareofsomeusetoyou,andIbelieveeverythingwillbegoingwellagainsoon!Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua提升·必考題型歸納1．（2023·黑龍江哈爾濱·三模）假如你是九年級一班的李力，這周六下午你要參加學(xué)校英語俱樂部舉辦的活動——演講。請你根據(jù)以下信息給你的外教David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他活動的相關(guān)信息并請他對你的演講內(nèi)容提出建議。寫作要點：（1）英語俱樂部活動主題：攜手創(chuàng)建優(yōu)美校園環(huán)境（TogetherforaBetterSchoolEnvironment）（2）本次俱樂部活動形式：①海報（poster）展示②講述發(fā)生在你身邊的故事③演講（3）談?wù)勀阍谘葜v中對創(chuàng)建優(yōu)美校園環(huán)境如何“從我做起”的具體建議。寫作要求：（1）不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名。（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。（3）字跡工整、語言精煉、表達準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。（4）至少80詞。DearDavid,

I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourclubactivitywhichwillbeheldthisSaturdayafternoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

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I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourclubactivitywhichwillbeheldthisSaturdayafternoon.ThethemeofthisEnglishClubactivityis:TogetherforaBetterSchoolEnvironment.Theactivitiesincludeposterdisplays,tellingstorieshappeningaroundyouandspeeches.Iwillgiveaspeech,andthefollowingisthecontent.Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshouldtakegoodcareofourcampusenvironment.Weshouldnottreadonthegrass,orclimbtrees.Weshouldthrowtherubbishintothedustbin.Finally,weshouldn’tspitanywhere.Sputumisfullofbacteria,don’tbringyourowngermstoothers.Let’sworktogethertocreateacivilizedcampus.Doyouhaveanysuggestionsformyspeech?Ilookforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiLi【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：材料已給出，寫作時注意表述清晰，做到無語法和單詞拼寫錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫郵件的目的，介紹本次活動的主題與形式；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹演講內(nèi)容，望對方給出建議，并期待回復(fù)。[亮點詞匯]①giveaspeech演講②treadonthegrass踩踏草坪③spit吐痰④Sputum痰⑤isfullof充滿⑥civilized文明的⑦throwinto扔進[高分句型]①Theactivitiesincludeposterdisplays,tellingstorieshappeningaroundyouandspeeches.（非謂語動詞：動名詞作定語修飾stories）②Let’sworktogethertocreateacivilizedcampus.（祈使句）2．（2023·福建福州·三模）假如你是李華，你收到英國筆友Harry的郵件，他針對學(xué)校將要開設(shè)的特色選修課(electivecourses)的選課問題征求你的看法和幫助，請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)，詞數(shù)80左右。信件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。To:LiHua2023@163.comFrom:Harry@.DearLiHua,I’mgladtotellyouthatourschoolisplanningtoofferussomeelectivecourses,includingChinese,designing,photographyandsomeothersubjects.ManyofmyfriendsdecidetochooseChinese.IsitnecessaryforaforeignertolearnChinese?DoyouthinkIshouldalsotakethecourse?AndIhearChineseisdifficultforforeigners.SoifItakeit,couldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou!Yours,HarryDearHarry,I’mgladtohearthat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

LiHua【答案】例文：DearHarry,

I’mgladtohearthatyourschoolisplanningtoofferyousomeelectivecourses.Ithinkit’sgoodforyou.Hereismyadvice.IthinkitisnecessaryforaforeignertolearnChinesebecauseChineseisbeingusedmoreandmorewidelyintheworld.Soyouhadbettertakethecourse.ButhowtolearnChinesewell?First,youhadbetterbelieveinyourselfandtrytoreadChineseloudly.What’smore,it’sagoodwaytotakepartinaChineseclubtopractisespeakingChinese.Lastbutnotleast,IthinkyoushouldlearnChinesebylisteningtoChinesepoemsandwatchingmoviesaboutChineseculture.Ihopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中“關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)中文的建議”一項，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并