2024秋高中英語Unit1FriendshipSectionⅣ寫作Writing-建議信學(xué)案含解析新人教版必修1

PAGE1-Unit1FriendshipSectionⅣ寫作(Writing——建議信)本單元的寫作項目屬于應(yīng)用文類別中的“建議信”。這種題目要求我們就有關(guān)問題進行分析并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議。一、基本框架1．開頭(beginning)——開宗明義，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(stateyouridea)。2．主體(body)——對所提出的問題進行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)。3．結(jié)尾(ending)——呼應(yīng)開頭，重申觀點(restateyouropinion)。二、增分佳句1．建議信開頭常用句式：①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人溝通方面有些麻煩，你也可能常常感到孤獨。②I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很興奮收到你就……征求建議的來信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。④Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.假如你聽從以下建議，我認為你會做到的。2．表達建議常用句式：①First(ly),whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis,youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參與一個俱樂部？假如你這樣做的話，就會交到摯友。②Second(ly),youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway,youwillfeelbetter.其次，你應(yīng)當(dāng)盡力與人交談。這樣，你會感覺好點。③Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，假如你看書或聽音樂將會是個不錯的辦法。通過這樣做，你會使自己安靜下來。④Lastbutnotleast,youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最終但同等重要的是，你應(yīng)當(dāng)先和她談一談。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看來，你們應(yīng)當(dāng)相互幫助。3．建議信結(jié)尾常用句式：①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你會發(fā)覺這些方法有用。②Astimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheabove.假如你遵從以上建議，隨著時間的推移，人們會更加理解你，會情愿和你交摯友的。③Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you'llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我信任，假如你聽從我的建議，你會和同學(xué)們相處好的。④Ibelieve,withyourtrying,youcanmanagetoovercomethesedifficulties.我信任，有了你的努力，你會勝利克服這些困難的。[題目要求]假如你是李華，你的好摯友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請依據(jù)下面提示給她寫一封信。詞數(shù)：100左右。1．要交摯友首先要做一個摯友；2．要和摯友同甘共苦，患難之中的摯友才是真正的摯友；3．友情須要時間和投入(effort)。第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵一、審題1．確定體裁：本文為建議信；2．確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)用其次人稱；3．確定時態(tài)：主要運用一般現(xiàn)在時。二、構(gòu)思第一段點出寫信的目的；其次段正文列出所提的建議；最終一段寫出寫信人的希望。其次步：核心詞匯想周全1．tip/advice/suggestion建議2．make_friends交摯友3．havetrouble/difficultyindoing...做……有困難4．sharehappinessandsorrowwith...和……同甘共苦5．call_for/need須要6．put_one's_heart_into一心一意第三步：由詞擴句雛形現(xiàn)1．知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很愧疚。(賓語從句)Iamsorrytoknowthat_you_are_having_trouble_in_making_friends.2．假如你接受我的建議，變更這種境況是很簡單的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationis_easy_to_changeifyoutakemyadvice.3．要交摯友首先要做一個摯友。(主謂結(jié)構(gòu))Ifyouwanttomakefriends,you_should_be_a_friend_first.4．你要和摯友同甘共苦。Youshouldshare_happiness_and_sorrow_with_your_friend.5．患難之中的摯友才是真正的摯友。Afriendin_needisa_friend_indeed.6．友情須要時間和投入。(主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu))Friendshipcalls_for/needs_time_and_effort.第四步：句式升級造亮點1．用whynot改寫句3Whynotbeafriendfirstifyouwanttomakefriends?2．用wouldn'titbeagoodideaif...改寫句4Wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?3．用justasasayinggoes來豐富句5Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”第五步：過渡連接聯(lián)成篇(留意運用however,tobeginwith,inaddition,lastbutnotleast等關(guān)聯(lián)詞)DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith,whynotbeafriendfirstifyouwanttomakefriends?Inaddition,wouldn'titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Lastbutnotleast,itwouldbeagoo