考點(diǎn)24寫作方法技巧(二)書信講稿-備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)考點(diǎn)幫(上海專用)(原卷版+解析)

考點(diǎn)24寫作方法技巧（二）書信講稿應(yīng)用文中考書面表達(dá)題貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，緊密聯(lián)系熱點(diǎn)話題，寫作話題真實(shí)從而讓考生有話可寫。書面表達(dá)情景實(shí)用性程度高，上海試題都符合同學(xué)們的認(rèn)知水平和日常生活經(jīng)歷，題目設(shè)計(jì)關(guān)注學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)，注意培養(yǎng)其良好的道德品質(zhì)和健全的人格?？枷蛞唬簳艑懛c(diǎn)撥在英語信件(信函)寫作中尤其要注意書寫格式:英文書信由信頭、稱呼、正文、結(jié)束語、結(jié)尾謙稱幾部分組成。1.信頭。指寫信人的地址和寫信日期，寫于信紙右上角。地址由小到大寫，日期寫在地址下。稱呼頂格寫在左上角，后面的標(biāo)點(diǎn)用逗號(hào)。2.稱呼。常以Dear開頭，如果不清楚收信人性別，則寫DearSirorMadam。3.正文。在稱呼下一行開始，可頂格，也可段首縮進(jìn)。正文的開頭通常有兩類:(1)主動(dòng)給對(duì)方寫信，開頭應(yīng)當(dāng)寫明寫信的目的或背景，再詳細(xì)敘述。常用開頭有:Iamwritingtoyouto...我寫信給你是為了.....Iamsorrytohearthat...得知....我很難過。Iamverygladtowritealettertoyou.Thesedayswearetalkingabout...很高興寫信給你，最近我們正在談?wù)?....It'sbeenalongtimesincewemetlasttime.我們已經(jīng)好久不見了。(2)寫回信給對(duì)方，開頭應(yīng)當(dāng)先表明感謝收到來信。常用開頭有:ThankyouforyourletterFromyourletterIlearntthat..感謝你的來信，從你的信中，我得----.Iamsorryfornotwritingtoyousooner.抱歉沒有早些回信。Iamgladyouaskmeforhelp.感謝你向我求助。4.結(jié)束語。在正文下自成段，表達(dá)祝愿或希望。常用的結(jié)束語有:Bestwishes!請(qǐng)接受我的美好祝福!Lookingforwardtoyourreply!期待你的回信!Ihopetohearfromyousoon.期待不久能收到你的回復(fù)。Hopemysuggestionswillbehelpful.希望我的建議能幫到你。IhopewhatIsaidcanhelpyou.希望我說的對(duì)你有所助益。Haveagoodtime!過得愉快!5.結(jié)尾謙稱。寫于結(jié)束語下一行。如正文左頂格寫，結(jié)尾謙稱也左頂格。如正又段結(jié)尾謙稱則從信偏右的地方開始寫。注意首字母大寫，后面使用逗號(hào)。常用的謙稱有:Yours,Yoursever,Yourssincerely,Trulyyours,Yoursrespectfully,假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Tony對(duì)“中國(guó)紅”一詞很感興趣，想了解“中國(guó)紅”在中國(guó)人日常生活中的體現(xiàn)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格信息寫一封回信幫助他了解。地位最受歡迎的顏色之一代表幸福，可以帶來好運(yùn)使用場(chǎng)所婚禮，春節(jié)等表達(dá)方式剪紙，中國(guó)結(jié)，紅包，燈籠提示詞：婚禮wedding，中國(guó)結(jié)ChineseKnot，紅包redpacket，代表standforDearTony,It’sgreattoreceiveyourletter.I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutChinesered.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItrulyhopemyletterwillhelpyouunderstandbetteraboutChinesered.Yours,LiHua考向二：演講稿寫法點(diǎn)撥Hello,ladiesandgentlemen!(開場(chǎng)稱呼)表明演講目的/亮明觀點(diǎn):It'smygreathonortodeliveraspeechhere.Today'dliketosaysomethingabout..在此演講我深感榮幸。今天我想談一.談.....Today,I’dlovetosharewithyousomethingabout...今天我非常樂意與你們分享關(guān)于...的內(nèi)容。It'snicetospeakabout...here.在這里談-.談....很有益。Weshouldkeep...inmind.我們要牢記.....具體介紹/證明觀點(diǎn)/詳述建議結(jié)束語:Iamsure..我確信....Let'smakejointeffortsto...讓我們共同努力去......Let'stryourbestto...讓我們盡力去....Don'tforgetto..inyourlife.別忘了在日常生活中....Doyouagreewithme?你們同意我的觀點(diǎn)嗎?假如你是李華，將報(bào)名參加某英語報(bào)社為迎接“五四”青年節(jié)而舉辦的名為“青春”（youth）的主題演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備結(jié)合自己的生活寫一篇演講稿投稿。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息）Dearfellowstudents,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!1．假如你是李華，是你們班的英語課代表，你們班許多同學(xué)在學(xué)習(xí)英語方面遇到了困難，向你求助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文演講稿，給他們提供一些好的建議。1.多閱讀，培養(yǎng)良好語感；2.看英文影片，了解西方文化；3.堅(jiān)持寫英文日記，提高寫作技巧；4.補(bǔ)充1—2點(diǎn)。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。Goodmorning,everyone,TodayIwanttotalkabouthowtolearnEnglishwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．這學(xué)期，同學(xué)們體驗(yàn)了不一樣的學(xué)習(xí)方式。英語課上，老師請(qǐng)你作為班級(jí)代表發(fā)言交流。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖示，寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿分享你的心得體會(huì)。注意：1.請(qǐng)先在答題卡上填寫圖示中空格。（一空一詞）；2.須全面反映圖文信息；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.詞數(shù)80-100字。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是戴維，你的朋友湯姆寫信向你求助如何控制自己的情緒：他經(jīng)常感到心煩，一點(diǎn)小事就能讓他生氣，他感覺很糟糕。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給他寫一封回信，告訴他如何克服這些情緒。80詞左右，信的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：1.聽音樂；2.和你信任的人聊聊；3.運(yùn)動(dòng)。DearTom,Iknowyourfeelings.Don’tworryaboutthem.EverythingwillbeOKifyoutrytodosomething._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Writealetterofatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根據(jù)以下情境寫一封不少于60個(gè)詞的信，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。信的開頭和署名已給，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。)“漢語橋“中文能力大賽的成功舉辦說明越來越多的外國(guó)學(xué)生對(duì)中華優(yōu)秀文化很感興趣。假設(shè)你是李華，你的外國(guó)網(wǎng)友Peter對(duì)中華文化很感興趣，想了解并學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)從以下中華文化的六種表現(xiàn)中，選擇你最喜歡的一種推薦給他，并說明理由。中華武術(shù)(Chinesemartialarts）京劇(PekingOpera）中華書法(Chinesecalligraphy)中文歌曲(Chinesesongs）中華美食(Chinesefood）中華剪紙(Chinesepaper-cutting)(注意：1.信中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假如你是李華，上周收到來自意大利筆友Linda的一封信，在信中她告訴你她對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)非常感興趣，希望能了解中國(guó)瓷器（Porcelain）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格所給關(guān)鍵詞和圖片信息，給她寫一封回信。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。ChinesePorcelainMaterialkaolin,aspecialkindofclayFunctionmakeplates;giveasagiftProcess(shape)

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(polishandpaint)MeaningwealthandhigherclassDearLinda,Igotyourletterlastweek.Inyourletter,youtoldmethat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua6．《西游記》是中國(guó)初中生必讀書目之一。假如你是小明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示，向你遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的筆友Eric寫封英文信，簡(jiǎn)要介紹該書和你的讀后感，并向他推薦這本書，并請(qǐng)他推薦一本美國(guó)作家的書。注意：1.須全面反映圖文提示信息；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)100左右。參考詞匯:monstern.妖怪DearEric,How’severythinggoing?IhavereadagoodbooknamedJourneytotheWest._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________XiaoMing7．偉大音樂家貝多芬說：涓滴之水終可以磨損大石，不是由于它力量強(qiáng)大，而是由于晝夜不舍的滴墜。堅(jiān)持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。請(qǐng)以“OnethingIkeepdoing”為題，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加學(xué)校的英語主題演講活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述你在堅(jiān)持做的事；2.你堅(jiān)持這么做的原因；3.你堅(jiān)持以后的感受；4.堅(jiān)持做這件事帶來的影響和變化；5.號(hào)召同學(xué)們堅(jiān)持做對(duì)自己有益處的事情。要求：1.不少于80詞。開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.認(rèn)真書寫，保持卷面清晰整潔；4.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。OnethingIkeepdoingGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicisonethingIkeepdoing._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyouforlistening!8．“人生寄一世，奄忽若飆塵?！痹谌松猛局?，總會(huì)有迷茫、有彷徨。青春雖懵懂，但相信每個(gè)人都會(huì)有支撐自己為美好未來奮勇向前的人生格言?！癋ailureisthemotherofsuccess.”“Nopains,nogains.”臨近畢業(yè)之際，本校將舉辦《青春寄語》英文演講大賽。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文演講稿，介紹你的人生格言，說明在初中三年你是怎么恪守自己人生格言的，并寫出你對(duì)學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們的希冀和祝福。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80-120詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Deareveryone,It’ssuchagreathonortotalkaboutmypersonalmottowithallofyoutoday._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening!考點(diǎn)24寫作方法技巧（二）書信講稿應(yīng)用文中考書面表達(dá)題貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，緊密聯(lián)系熱點(diǎn)話題，寫作話題真實(shí)從而讓考生有話可寫。書面表達(dá)情景實(shí)用性程度高，上海試題都符合同學(xué)們的認(rèn)知水平和日常生活經(jīng)歷，題目設(shè)計(jì)關(guān)注學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)，注意培養(yǎng)其良好的道德品質(zhì)和健全的人格?？枷蛞唬簳艑懛c(diǎn)撥在英語信件(信函)寫作中尤其要注意書寫格式:英文書信由信頭、稱呼、正文、結(jié)束語、結(jié)尾謙稱幾部分組成。1.信頭。指寫信人的地址和寫信日期，寫于信紙右上角。地址由小到大寫，日期寫在地址下。稱呼頂格寫在左上角，后面的標(biāo)點(diǎn)用逗號(hào)。2.稱呼。常以Dear開頭，如果不清楚收信人性別，則寫DearSirorMadam。3.正文。在稱呼下一行開始，可頂格，也可段首縮進(jìn)。正文的開頭通常有兩類:(1)主動(dòng)給對(duì)方寫信，開頭應(yīng)當(dāng)寫明寫信的目的或背景，再詳細(xì)敘述。常用開頭有:Iamwritingtoyouto...我寫信給你是為了.....Iamsorrytohearthat...得知....我很難過。Iamverygladtowritealettertoyou.Thesedayswearetalkingabout...很高興寫信給你，最近我們正在談?wù)?....It'sbeenalongtimesincewemetlasttime.我們已經(jīng)好久不見了。(2)寫回信給對(duì)方，開頭應(yīng)當(dāng)先表明感謝收到來信。常用開頭有:ThankyouforyourletterFromyourletterIlearntthat..感謝你的來信，從你的信中，我得----.Iamsorryfornotwritingtoyousooner.抱歉沒有早些回信。Iamgladyouaskmeforhelp.感謝你向我求助。4.結(jié)束語。在正文下自成段，表達(dá)祝愿或希望。常用的結(jié)束語有:Bestwishes!請(qǐng)接受我的美好祝福!Lookingforwardtoyourreply!期待你的回信!Ihopetohearfromyousoon.期待不久能收到你的回復(fù)。Hopemysuggestionswillbehelpful.希望我的建議能幫到你。IhopewhatIsaidcanhelpyou.希望我說的對(duì)你有所助益。Haveagoodtime!過得愉快!5.結(jié)尾謙稱。寫于結(jié)束語下一行。如正文左頂格寫，結(jié)尾謙稱也左頂格。如正又段結(jié)尾謙稱則從信偏右的地方開始寫。注意首字母大寫，后面使用逗號(hào)。常用的謙稱有:Yours,Yoursever,Yourssincerely,Trulyyours,Yoursrespectfully,假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Tony對(duì)“中國(guó)紅”一詞很感興趣，想了解“中國(guó)紅”在中國(guó)人日常生活中的體現(xiàn)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格信息寫一封回信幫助他了解。地位最受歡迎的顏色之一代表幸福，可以帶來好運(yùn)使用場(chǎng)所婚禮，春節(jié)等表達(dá)方式剪紙，中國(guó)結(jié)，紅包，燈籠提示詞：婚禮wedding，中國(guó)結(jié)ChineseKnot，紅包redpacket，代表standforDearTony,It’sgreattoreceiveyourletter.I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutChinesered.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItrulyhopemyletterwillhelpyouunderstandbetteraboutChinesered.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearTony,It’sgreattoreceiveyourletter.I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutChinesered.Chinesered,consideredasthesymboliccolorofChina,isextremelypopularwithChinesepeople.Itusuallyrepresentshappiness,andwebelievethatitcanbringusgoodluck.PeopleinourcountryattachsuchgreatimportancetoChineseredthattheyusemanyredobjectsinsomeimportantevents.Forinstance,inawedding,youcanseethatthebrideisinaredweddingdressandtheweddingroomisdecoratedwithred.What’smore,thehousesarealsofilledwithredpapercuts,lanternsandChineseKnotsduringtheSpringFestival.Childrenwillgetredpocketsforbestwishesaswell.Obviously,ChineseredplaysasignificantroleandenjoysthehighestpopularityinChina.ItrulyhopemyletterwillhelpyouunderstandbetteraboutChinesered.Yours,LiHua考向二：演講稿寫法點(diǎn)撥Hello,ladiesandgentlemen!(開場(chǎng)稱呼)表明演講目的/亮明觀點(diǎn):It'smygreathonortodeliveraspeechhere.Today'dliketosaysomethingabout..在此演講我深感榮幸。今天我想談一.談.....Today,I’dlovetosharewithyousomethingabout...今天我非常樂意與你們分享關(guān)于...的內(nèi)容。It'snicetospeakabout...here.在這里談-.談....很有益。Weshouldkeep...inmind.我們要牢記.....具體介紹/證明觀點(diǎn)/詳述建議結(jié)束語:Iamsure..我確信....Let'smakejointeffortsto...讓我們共同努力去......Let'stryourbestto...讓我們盡力去....Don'tforgetto..inyourlife.別忘了在日常生活中....Doyouagreewithme?你們同意我的觀點(diǎn)嗎?假如你是李華，將報(bào)名參加某英語報(bào)社為迎接“五四”青年節(jié)而舉辦的名為“青春”（youth）的主題演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備結(jié)合自己的生活寫一篇演講稿投稿。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息）Dearfellowstudents,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!【答案】例文Dearfellowstudents,I’mveryhonoredtostandhereandgiveyouashortspeech!Ihopeyouwilllikeit.Everyonehashisownunderstandingofyouth.Somepeoplesaythatyouthisascrapofpaper,ofnouse.Buttheyarewrong.Theydonotunderstandthemeaningoflife.IthinkYouthisasong,singthelifethemostmemorablefragment;youthisapainting,drawtheoutlineofthemostwonderfulscene;youthisapoem,topraisethemostbeautifulmomentinlife;youthistheonlywaywhichmustbepassedtoeachofusinourlife,itplaysasignificantrole.Ihopemyshortspeechwillmakeyouseethethingsclearly.Thanksforlistening!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。內(nèi)容是以“青春”（youth）為主題，并結(jié)合自己的生活寫一篇演講稿，參加某英語報(bào)社的演講比賽。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述作文內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。首先提出演講的內(nèi)容；第二介紹別人對(duì)青春理解的誤區(qū)；第三介紹自己對(duì)青春的理解；最后是希望。1．假如你是李華，是你們班的英語課代表，你們班許多同學(xué)在學(xué)習(xí)英語方面遇到了困難，向你求助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文演講稿，給他們提供一些好的建議。1.多閱讀，培養(yǎng)良好語感；2.看英文影片，了解西方文化；3.堅(jiān)持寫英文日記，提高寫作技巧；4.補(bǔ)充1—2點(diǎn)。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。Goodmorning,everyone,TodayIwanttotalkabouthowtolearnEnglishwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Goodmorning,everyone,

TodayIwanttotalkabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.

Firstofall,weshouldreadmoreEnglisheveryday,inordertodevelopagoodsenseoflanguage.Second,wecanwatchmoreEnglishmovies,sothatwecanunderstandthewesternculture.Third,weshouldkeepanEnglishdiaryeverydaytoimproveourwritingskills.Fourthly,weshouldlistentotapesoftentoimproveourlistening.Finally,trytospeakmoreEnglishwhenyouarefree.

Aslongasyousticktothesepoints,youwillcertainlyimproveyourEnglish.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，給班級(jí)里在學(xué)習(xí)英語方面遇到了困難的同學(xué)一些好的建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱采用第一人稱為主。文章可分為三段，第一段文章已給出，點(diǎn)明目的；第二段介紹具體的建議；第三段表示只要大家堅(jiān)持英語就會(huì)提高。行文確保無單詞語法錯(cuò)誤，語句通順。2．這學(xué)期，同學(xué)們體驗(yàn)了不一樣的學(xué)習(xí)方式。英語課上，老師請(qǐng)你作為班級(jí)代表發(fā)言交流。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖示，寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿分享你的心得體會(huì)。注意：1.請(qǐng)先在答題卡上填寫圖示中空格。（一空一詞）；2.須全面反映圖文信息；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.詞數(shù)80-100字。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Apossibleversion:Hello,everyone!TodayIwilltalkaboutonlinelearning.Ithasmanyadvantages.Whenweareill,wecanstudyathome.Besides,wecanwatchthevideoagainwhenmeetingproblems.However,therearesomeproblems.Studentsaresometimeslateforclassesandsomeevenplaycomputergamesinclass.Somehaveargumentswiththeirparents.Tobegoodlearners,weshouldfollowrulesofonlinelearning.We’dbetterkeepabalancebetweenlearningandplaying.Ifnecessary,havepropercommunicationwithparents.Hopeeveryonecanbeagoodlearner.Thankyouforyourlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，介紹在線學(xué)習(xí)的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明談?wù)摰闹黝}是在線學(xué)習(xí)；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，介紹在線學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和問題并給出建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①talkabout談?wù)撽P(guān)于②belatefor遲到③haveargumentswithsb與某人爭(zhēng)論④keepabalance保持平衡[高分句型]①Whenweareill,wecanstudyathome.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②Studentsaresometimeslateforclassesandsomeevenplaycomputergamesinclass.（and連接并列句）3．假如你是戴維，你的朋友湯姆寫信向你求助如何控制自己的情緒：他經(jīng)常感到心煩，一點(diǎn)小事就能讓他生氣，他感覺很糟糕。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給他寫一封回信，告訴他如何克服這些情緒。80詞左右，信的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：1.聽音樂；2.和你信任的人聊聊；3.運(yùn)動(dòng)。DearTom,Iknowyourfeelings.Don’tworryaboutthem.EverythingwillbeOKifyoutrytodosomething._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearTom,Iknowyourfeelings.Don’tworryaboutthem.EverythingwillbeOKifyoutrytodosomething.Firstly,whenyoufeelbad,youcanlistentomusic.Nicemusiccanhelpmakeyourelaxedandforgetalltheunhappythingsandproblems.Secondly,talktosomeoneyoutrust.Forexample,youcantalktoyourparents.Parentscansharetheirexperienceofdealingwithbadmoods.Keepingfeelingsinsidecanmakethingsworse.Thirdly,goforarun,playtennisordootheroutdoorsports.Exercisecanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.Hopeallthewayscanbehelpfultoyou!Yours,David【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)提示給Tom寫一封回信，告訴他如何控制情緒，可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，引出主題；第二步，從“聽音樂，和信任的人聊天及做運(yùn)動(dòng)”三個(gè)方面具體講述如何控制情緒；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，通過表達(dá)“希望方法有用”來結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①dealwith處理②outdoorsports戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)③behelpfultosb對(duì)某人有幫助[高分句型]①Firstly,whenyoufeelbad,youcanlistentomusic.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）②Keepingfeelingsinsidecanmakethingsworse.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）4．Writealetterofatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根據(jù)以下情境寫一封不少于60個(gè)詞的信，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。信的開頭和署名已給，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。)“漢語橋“中文能力大賽的成功舉辦說明越來越多的外國(guó)學(xué)生對(duì)中華優(yōu)秀文化很感興趣。假設(shè)你是李華，你的外國(guó)網(wǎng)友Peter對(duì)中華文化很感興趣，想了解并學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)從以下中華文化的六種表現(xiàn)中，選擇你最喜歡的一種推薦給他，并說明理由。中華武術(shù)(Chinesemartialarts）京劇(PekingOpera）中華書法(Chinesecalligraphy)中文歌曲(Chinesesongs）中華美食(Chinesefood）中華剪紙(Chinesepaper-cutting)(注意：1.信中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearPeter,

IknowyouareinterestedinChineseculture.Nowletmeintroduceoneofthemostimportantculture—Chinesepaper-cutting.

Ithasahistoryofmorethan5,000years.Itiseasilymade.Youonlyneedsomepaperandapairofscissors.Youcanchangethepaperintosomedifferentshapes,suchasanimals,flowersandsoon.WhenSpringFestivalcomes,youcanseepeoplestickthemonthewindowsandwalls.Itisasymbolofgoodluck.YoucanlearnhowtomakeChinesepaper-cuttingbywatchingvideos.

Wealsohaveothertraditionalculture.Ifyouwanttolearnmore,pleasetellme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Peter【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹剪紙是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化之一；第二步，介紹剪紙的相關(guān)情況，包括它的歷史，制作以及代表的意義。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①morethan多于②changeinto把……變成……③asymbolof……的象征[高分句型]①Nowletmeintroduceoneofthemostimportantculture—Chinesepaper-cutting（“oneofthe+形容詞最高級(jí)”的結(jié)構(gòu)）②WhenSpringFestivalcomes,youcanseepeoplestickthemonthewindowsandwalls.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）5．假如你是李華，上周收到來自意大利筆友Linda的一封信，在信中她告訴你她對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)非常感興趣，希望能了解中國(guó)瓷器（Porcelain）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格所給關(guān)鍵詞和圖片信息，給她寫一封回信。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。ChinesePorcelainMaterialkaolin,aspecialkindofclayFunctionmakeplates;giveasagiftProcess(shape)

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(polishandpaint)MeaningwealthandhigherclassDearLinda,Igotyourletterlastweek.Inyourletter,youtoldmethat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文DearLinda,Igotyourletterlastweek.Inyourletter,youtoldmethatyouareveryinterestedinChinesetraditionalartandwanttoknowaboutChineseporcelain.OK,letmetellyou.ChinesePorcelainismadefromkaolin,aspecialkindofclay.It’susedtomakeplatesinourdailylifeandisalsogivenasagift.TomakeChineseporcelain,itusuallyhastoexperiencesomeprocesses.First,kaolinisshapedbyhandandthenallowedtoair-dry.Afterdrying,they’refiredataveryhighheat.Finallyitispolishedandpaintedwithnaturedesigns.Ittakesseveralweekstocompleteeverything.NowChineseporcelainhassomespecialmeanings.It’sseenasasymbolofwealthandhigherclass.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為信件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，表明寫信目的；第二步，從材料、作用、過程和意義等方面介紹中國(guó)瓷器。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣②bemadefrom由……制成（看不出原材料）③asymbolof……的象征[高分句型]①It’susedtomakeplatesinourdailylifeandisalsogivenasagift.（含and的并列復(fù)合句）②Ittakesseveralweekstocompleteeverything.（It固定句型）6．《西游記》是中國(guó)初中生必讀書目之一。假如你是小明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示，向你遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)的筆友Eric寫封英文信，簡(jiǎn)要介紹該書和你的讀后感，并向他推薦這本書，并請(qǐng)他推薦一本美國(guó)作家的書。注意：1.須全面反映圖文提示信息；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)100左右。參考詞匯:monstern.妖怪DearEric,How’severythinggoing?IhavereadagoodbooknamedJourneytotheWest._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________XiaoMing【答案】例文：DearEric,How’severythinggoing?IhavereadagoodbooknamedJourneytotheWest.ItisoneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovelsinChina.IhavewatchedthecartoonMonkeyKingmanytimessinceIwasyoung.ItwaswrittenbyWuCheng’en,agreatwriterinancientChina.Thestorytellsusaboutfourmaincharacters.TheyareTangMonk,theMonkeyKing,PiggieandMonkSha.TheygetovermanydifficultiesonthewaytotheWest.Finally,theymakeit.TheMonkeyKingismyfavoritecharacter.Heissosmartandbravethathecanprotecthismasterandbrotherswell.Henevergivesupwhenhefacesdifficultiesandchallenges.ThebookissointerestingthatIlosemyselfinit.Butit’sdifficulttounderstandtheancientChinesewell.IbelieveI’llhaveabetterunderstandingofitifIreaditmoretimes.Ithinkit’sworthreading.CouldyoupleaseshareonenovelwrittenbyanAmericanwriterwithme?Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.XiaoMing【詳解】[總體分析]①