讀后續(xù)寫+困境中的雙向奔赴：善良從不缺席+講義 高一上學(xué)期1月期末英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TomYoungwasonhiswayhomefromahardday’sworkataconstructionsite,carryinghisworn-outhammerwhichhadaccompaniedhimthroughthickandthin.Witheachstep,hismindwasfilledwithworryasherackedhisbraintofindmoneyforhisseriouslyillson,Andrew,whowasingreatneedofheartsurgery.Tomhadrunoutofchoicesandtime.Desperationwasbeginningtosetin,butherefusedtolethissonsufferhelplessly.Ashewalked,theweightofhistroublespressedheavilyonhisshoulders.Sodesperatewashethatheevenheardahuminhisears.Thenextmomentthehumwasentirelycoveredbyaloudsound.Heturnedinshock,andwhathesawtookhisbreathaway.Anexpensiveluxurycarwaswrappedaroundabigtreeontheothersideofthestreet,withitsfronttwistedandflamesstartingtospringupfromthecar.Withoutasecondthought,herantotheflamingcar.Henoticedthatalthoughtheyoungladyinthedriver’sseatdidnotseemtohavebeenseverelyinjured-apparentlybecauseoftheopenairbag-shewasunconscious.Tomsawthattheflamesbegantogrowincreasinglyintense.Herealizedthathehadtogetthegirloutofthecarimmediatelybecausetherewasahighriskofthevehicleexplodingatanytime.Hegrabbedthehandleandpulledit,butthedoorwasbentanddidnotopen.Heusedallhisstrengthandtriedagain,butinvain.Itwasasportscar,soithadonlytwodoors,andtheotheronewasblockedbythetree.Hedecidedthathehadtobreaktheglasstotakeheroutasquicklyaspossible.Hestruckitforcefullywithhisfistbutrealizedthattherewasnowayhecouldbreakthethickglasswithbarehands,andtheflamesweregettingbigger.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Timewasrunningout,andhismindracedmadly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThegirlwassadtoknowTom’stroublefromthelocalnews._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Tom在建筑工地上辛苦工作一天后回家，滿腦子都是為重病兒子湊錢做心臟手術(shù)的事。途中，他看到一輛豪車撞到樹上起火，車?yán)锏哪贻p女士雖未受重傷，但昏迷不醒。車門因變形打不開，車窗玻璃又太厚，他徒手無法打破，火勢(shì)卻越來越大，情況十分危急。故事山分析開端：Tom結(jié)束一天工作回家，滿心憂慮為兒子湊手術(shù)費(fèi)，這是他面臨的困境，也是故事的背景。發(fā)展：Tom看到車禍，決定救人，嘗試打開車門和打破車窗玻璃，卻都遭遇阻礙，火勢(shì)加劇，救援陷入僵局。高潮：時(shí)間緊迫，Tom急需找到解決辦法救出女孩，這是故事的緊張點(diǎn)，也是續(xù)寫的關(guān)鍵起始點(diǎn)。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：通過Tom成功救出女孩以及女孩得知Tom困境后的回應(yīng)，展現(xiàn)善良與感恩的主題，構(gòu)成故事結(jié)局。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)Tom為兒子湊手術(shù)費(fèi)的困境：為后文女孩得知他的困難并提供幫助埋下伏筆，在續(xù)寫中，女孩會(huì)因感恩Tom的救命之恩，利用自己的資源幫助他解決經(jīng)濟(jì)難題。豪車撞到樹上起火：引出Tom的救援行動(dòng)，在續(xù)寫中，救援成功后，這起事故會(huì)成為女孩了解Tom的契機(jī)，通過新聞報(bào)道等方式得知他的困境。車門變形打不開，車窗玻璃厚：設(shè)置救援困難，在續(xù)寫中，Tom會(huì)想出辦法克服這些困難，成功救出女孩，凸顯他的勇敢和智慧。女孩昏迷：讓Tom的救援行動(dòng)更加緊迫，在續(xù)寫中，女孩蘇醒后會(huì)對(duì)Tom充滿感激，進(jìn)而關(guān)注他的生活狀況?；饎?shì)越來越大：增加救援的緊張感，在續(xù)寫中，Tom會(huì)在火勢(shì)威脅下成功完成救援，體現(xiàn)他的果斷和勇敢，也為女孩的感恩埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：著重描寫Tom在危急時(shí)刻的心理活動(dòng)，他焦急萬分，拼命思考解決辦法。最終，他想到用自己的錘子打破車窗玻璃，詳細(xì)描述他用錘子砸玻璃的過程，如他緊握錘子，用盡全身力氣，一下又一下地砸向玻璃，玻璃終于出現(xiàn)裂痕，直至破碎，他成功將女孩救出。第二段：描述女孩從當(dāng)?shù)匦侣劦弥猅om的困境后的反應(yīng)，她深受感動(dòng)，決定幫助Tom?？梢詫懰?lián)系自己的家人或朋友，籌集資金，或者利用自己的社會(huì)關(guān)系為Tom提供幫助。最后，Tom得到了幫助，兒子順利進(jìn)行手術(shù)，他對(duì)女孩充滿感激，兩人的故事成為一段佳話。情感線起初，Tom因兒子的病情陷入極度焦慮和絕望，為湊錢而苦惱?？吹杰嚨湑r(shí)，他的擔(dān)憂轉(zhuǎn)化為救人的急切。救援過程中，他緊張又堅(jiān)定，一心只想救出女孩。成功救出女孩后，他的心情稍緩。當(dāng)女孩得知他的困境并提供幫助時(shí)，Tom從絕望中看到希望，心中滿是感激。女孩則從被救的感恩，轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)橹鲃?dòng)幫助恩人的熱心，兩人的情感在善良與感恩中交織升華。故事線Tom工作一天后回家，為兒子的心臟手術(shù)費(fèi)發(fā)愁。Tom看到豪車撞樹起火，決定救人。Tom嘗試打開車門和打破車窗玻璃，都未成功，火勢(shì)加劇。Tom用錘子打破車窗玻璃，成功救出女孩。女孩從當(dāng)?shù)匦侣劦弥猅om的困境。女孩幫助Tom，Tom的兒子順利進(jìn)行手術(shù)。主旨升華句Thisstoryshowsthatinthefaceofdifficulties,ourkindnessandcouragecannotonlysaveothersbutalsobringunexpectedrewards,andthatthebondofgratitudecanbridgethegapsbetweenpeople.（這個(gè)故事表明，在困難面前，我們的善良和勇氣不僅能拯救他人，還能帶來意想不到的回報(bào)，感恩的紐帶可以彌合人與人之間的差距。）ThroughTom'sactofselflessrescueandthegirl'sreturnofkindness,welearnthatthepowerofcompassionhasnolimits,andthatasimpleactofkindnesscanstartabeautifulcycleofgivingandreceiving.（通過Tom的無私救援和女孩的感恩回報(bào)，我們了解到，同情的力量是無限的，一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善舉可以開啟一個(gè)美好的給予與接受的循環(huán)。）TheencounterbetweenTomandthegirlprovesthateveninthemostdesperatesituations,hopecanemergefromthemostunexpectedplaces,andthatthekindnessinourheartscanbeaguidinglightforothers.（Tom和女孩的相遇證明，即使在最絕望的情況下，希望也能從最意想不到的地方出現(xiàn)，我們心中的善良可以成為他人的指路明燈。）Thisheartwarmingstoryremindsusthathelpingothersisnotonlyaboutofferingahandintimesofneedbutalsoaboutcreatingacommunitywhereloveandkindnessarepassedonfromonepersontoanother.（這個(gè)溫馨的故事提醒我們，幫助他人不僅是在需要時(shí)伸出援手，更是營造一個(gè)愛與善良在人與人之間傳遞的社區(qū)。）ThejourneyofTomandthegirlfromalife-threateningaccidenttoaheart-warmingactofmutualhelpdemonstratesthatthetruevalueoflifeliesinourabilitytocareforothersandmakeapositiveimpactontheirlives.（Tom和女孩從一場(chǎng)危及生命的事故到一次暖心的互助行為的歷程表明，生命的真正價(jià)值在于我們關(guān)心他人并對(duì)他們的生活產(chǎn)生積極影響的能力。）寫作示范一Timewasrunningout,andhismindracedmadly.Suddenly,herememberedthehammerinhishand.Withouthesitation,heraisedithighandstrucktheglasswithallhismight.Thefirstblowmadeasmallcrack,andwithafewmorepowerfulstrikes,theglassfinallyshattered.Hequicklyreachedinside,unbuckledthegirl'sseatbelt,andcarriedhertoasafedistance.Justastheygotaway,thecarexplodedintoaballoffire.ThegirlwassadtoknowTom’stroublefromthelocalnews.Sheimmediatelycalledherwealthyfatherandtoldhimthewholestory.HerfatherwasdeeplymovedbyTom'sheroicact.TheydecidedtocoverallthemedicalexpensesforTom'sson.WhenTomreceivedthenews,hewasfilledwithgratitudeandrelief.Hisson'slifewassaved,allthankstohisownkindnessandthegirl'sgenerosity.寫作示范二Timewasrunningout,andhismindracedmadly.Helookedaroundfranticallyforsomethingtobreaktheglass.Thenhespottedalargerocknearby.Herushedtopickitupandranbacktothecar.Withaloudshout,hesmashedtherockagainsttheglass.Afterseveralattempts,theglassfinallygaveway.Hepulledtheunconsciousgirloutofthecarjustastheflamesengulfedtheentirevehicle.ThegirlwassadtoknowTom’stroublefromthelocalnews.SheusedhersocialmediainfluencetostartafundraisingcampaignforTom.ThousandsofpeopleweretouchedbyTom'sstoryanddonatedmoney.Inashorttime,enoughmoneywasraisedforAndrew'ssurgery.Tomwasoverwhelmedwithjoyandgratitude.Hecouldn'tbelievethathisactofkindnesshadbroughtsuchawonderfuloutcome.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Timewasrunningout,andhismindracedmadly.Inamomentofclarity,Tomrememberedtheworn-outhammerinhishand.Ithadbeenareliablecompanionthroughcountlessdaysoflabor,andnowitwashisonlyhope.Withadeterminedswing,hesmashedthehammeragainstthewindow,shatteringtheglasswithaloudcrash.Carefully,hereachedintothevehicle,avoidingthejaggededges,andunbuckledtheunconsciousyounglady.Withallhisstrength,hepulledherout,draggingherasafedistancefromthecarjustastheflamesroaredfiercely,engulfingthevehicleinafierybl