高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：破例搭載搭車客：一場(chǎng)溫暖且特別的邂逅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)破例搭載搭車客：一場(chǎng)溫暖且特別的邂逅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ineverpickuphitch-hikers(搭便車者)asarule.Idon’tknowwhatmovedmetodosotoday.IwasheadingfromNorthPlattetoBradyandhewasjustoutsideofNorthPlatte.Hejumpedinandsaid,“Thanksforstopping.”Isaid,“Noproblem,I’mgoingtoBradyabout23milesuptheroad,andI’lltakeyouthatfar.”Aswewereconversing,Inoticedhesmeltofalcohol.Ialsonoticedhiswrinkled,sundarkenedandunshavenface,hismessyhairandclothes.ButwhatInoticedmostwashisclear,large,blueeyes.Theysaytheeyesarethewindowtothesoul,andIbelieveit,ifyoulookclosely,youcanprettymuchtellthekindofsoulapersonhasthroughtheireyes.Hiseyeswerealmostindescribable.Theyweresospellbinding,notabitofhateinthem.Lookingathisveryroughappearance,Icouldtellhe’dbeendownaveryhardroad.Somehow,despitetheroadhehadbeendown,therewasnohateinhiseyes,onlylove.4續(xù)寫原文Iaskedhimifhewantedasmoke,andhesaidyes,soIgavehimone,thenIlethimkeepthewholepack,forwhichheseemedgenuinelygrateful.Istartedaskinghimwherehewasfrom,wherehewasheading,whetherhehadafamily,etc.Hetoldmehehadbeenontheroadforsixdays,comingfromArizonawherehehadrecentlyhadaheartattackandheartsurgery.Hewasprettymuchhealedupbutcouldn’tfindwork.HewasheadingbacktohisbirthplaceofKansasCity,whichiswhereIwasbornaswell.Hesaidhelosthiswifetoabraintumortenyearsago,andthatheneverhadkidsbecausehiswifecouldn’thaveany.Wetalkedtherestoftheway,andIhadafeelingthattherewassomethingaboutthisguythatIcouldn’tputmyfingeron,butitwassomethingspecial.5段首句Paragraph1:SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”Paragraph2：AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8“我”平時(shí)從不搭載搭便車的人，但這次卻在從北普拉特前往布雷迪的途中，鬼使神差地搭載了一位搭便車者。他上車后，“我”在交談中注意到他身上有酒味，外貌滄桑，頭發(fā)和衣服都很凌亂。然而，他那雙清澈、湛藍(lán)的眼睛卻深深吸引了“我”，盡管歷經(jīng)磨難，眼中卻沒有一絲仇恨，只有愛意?！拔摇苯o了他一支煙，還把整包煙都送給了他，他非常感激。在交流中，“我”得知他剛在亞利桑那州經(jīng)歷了心臟病發(fā)作和手術(shù)，找不到工作后準(zhǔn)備返回出生地堪薩斯城，而那里也是“我”的出生地。他的妻子十年前因腦瘤離世，他們沒有孩子。一路上，我們相談甚歡，“我”總覺得他身上有一種特別的東西，卻說不清楚。很快，就到了布雷迪，“我”要和他分別了，后續(xù)的故事將圍繞分別時(shí)的場(chǎng)景和可能發(fā)生的事情展開。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”很快我們就到了布雷迪，我說：“嗯，我就只能載你到這兒了。”他緩緩打開車門，雙腳剛落地，又回頭看向我，眼中滿是不舍?！罢娴奶兄x你了，這一路要不是你，我都不知道該怎么辦?！彼穆曇粲行┥硢?，帶著幾分感激。我看著他那瘦弱的身軀，心中一陣不忍，于是問道：“你接下來有什么打算呢？”他嘆了口氣，無奈地說：“我也不知道，先去堪薩斯城看看，碰碰運(yùn)氣，希望能找到一份工作?！蔽蚁肓讼?，決定幫幫他?！拔疫@兒還有些錢，你拿著吧，路上興許能用得上?！蔽乙贿呎f著，一邊從錢包里拿出一些錢。他聽了，連忙擺手拒絕，“不行不行，你已經(jīng)幫了我太多了，我不能再要你的錢?！蔽覉?jiān)持把錢塞到他手里，“拿著吧，這是我的一點(diǎn)心意，希望能讓你接下來的路好走一點(diǎn)?！彼q豫了許久，最終還是收下了，眼眶微微泛紅，不停地向我道謝。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.正如我之前提到的，我告訴過他我要給他一些錢。他緊緊地握著那疊錢，手微微顫抖著，激動(dòng)得半晌說不出話來。過了好一會(huì)兒，他才緩緩開口：“你是我見過最善良的人，這份恩情我永遠(yuǎn)都不會(huì)忘記。”我微笑著安慰他：“別這么說，誰還沒有遇到難處的時(shí)候呢，能幫一點(diǎn)是一點(diǎn)。”他沉默了片刻，然后從口袋里掏出一個(gè)破舊的小本子，在上面寫下了自己的聯(lián)系方式?！斑@是我的聯(lián)系方式，等我到了堪薩斯城安定下來，一定會(huì)聯(lián)系你，把錢還給你?！彼J(rèn)真地說道。我接過本子，看著上面歪歪扭扭的字跡，心中涌起一股暖流。我們又聊了一會(huì)兒，分享了彼此的一些生活經(jīng)歷和對(duì)未來的期望。最后，他戀戀不舍地和我告別，轉(zhuǎn)身踏上了前往堪薩斯城的路。我看著他漸行漸遠(yuǎn)的背影，默默地祝福他一切順利，希望他能在堪薩斯城找到屬于自己的一片天地。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”Heslowlyopenedthecardoor,andassoonashisfeettouchedtheground,heturnedbacktolookatme,hiseyesfilledwithreluctance.“Thankyousomuch.Ireallydon'tknowwhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyouthisjourney.”Hisvoicewashoarse,fullofgratitude.Ilookedathisthinfigureandfeltapangofpity.ThenIasked,“Whatareyourplansforthenextstep?”Hesighedandsaidhelplessly,“I'mnotsure.I'llgotoKansasCityfirstandseeifIcanfindajob.”Afterthinkingforawhile,Idecidedtohelphim.“Ihavesomemoneyhere.Youcantakeit.Itmightbeusefulonyourway.”AsIspoke,Itookoutsomemoneyfrommywallet.Hearingthis,hequicklywavedhishandstorefuse.“No,no.You'vealreadyhelpedmealot.Ican'ttakeyourmoney.”Iinsistedonstuffingthemoneyintohishand.“Takeit.Thisisjustalittleofmykindness.Ihopeitcanmakeyournextjourneyeasier.”Hehesitatedforalongtimeandfinallytookit.Hiseyeswereslightlyred,andhekeptthankingme.13范文呈現(xiàn)AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.Heheldthestackofmoneytightly,hishandstremblingslightly,andwastooexcitedtospeakforalongtime.Afterawhile,hefinallysaid,“YouarethekindestpersonI'veevermet.Iwillneverforgetyourkindness.”Ismiledandcomfortedhim,“Don'tsaythat.Everyonehasdifficulttimes.I'mjustdoingwhatIcan.”Hewassilentforamomentandthentookoutaworn-outsmallnotebookfromhispocketandwrotedownhiscontactinformation.“Thisismycontactinformation.IwilldefinitelycontactyouandpayyoubackwhenIsettledowninKansasCity.”hesaidseriously.Itookthenotebookandlookedatthecrookedhandwritingonit.Awarmcurrentsurgedinmyheart.Wetalkedforawhilelonger,sharingsomeofourlifeexperiencesandexpectationsforthefuture.Finally,hesaidgoodbyetomereluctantlyandturnedtostepontheroadtoKansasCity.Iwatchedhisrecedingfigureandsilentlywishedhimallthebest,hopingthathecouldfindhisownplaceinKansasCity.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)SowegottoBradyandIsaid,“Well,thisistheendofmyline.”Slowly,heopenedthecardoor,andthemomenthisfeethittheground,heswiveledaroundtofaceme,hiseyesbrimmingwithreluctance.“Thankyousomuch.ItrulyhavenoideawhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyouonthisjourney,”hesaid,hisvoicehoarsewithgratitude.Gazingathisemaciatedfigure,awaveofcompassionwashedoverme.“Whatareyourplansfromhere?”Iinquired.Heheavedadeepsighandreplied,histonelacedwithhelplessness,“I'mnotsure.I'llheadtoKansasCityfirstandseeifIcanlandajob.”Afteramomentofthought,Iresolvedtolendhimahand.“I'vegotsomemoneyhere.Youshouldtakeit.Itmightcomeinhandyonyourway,”Isaid,asIfishedsomemoneyoutofmywallet.Uponhearingthis,heswiftlywavedhishandsinrefusal.“No,no.You'vealreadydonemeagreatdealofgood.Ican'tacceptyourmoney.”However,Iwaspersistent,firmlystuffingthemoneyintohishand.“Takeit.Thisisjustasmalltokenofmygoodwill.Ihopeitcaneaseyourwayahead.”Afteralongperiodofhesitation,hefinallyacceptedit,hiseyestingedwithredashecontinuouslyexpressedhisthanks.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)AsImentioned,ItoldhimIwasgoingtogivehimsomemoney.Clutchingthestackofmoneytightly,hishandsquiveringslightly,hewassoovercomewithemotionthatheremainedspeechlessforquiteawhile.Eventually,hemanagedtosay,“YouarethekindestsoulI'veevercomeacross.Iwillneverbeabletoforgetyourkindness.”Iofferedhimawarmsmileandreassuredhim,“Don'tsaythat.Everyonegoesthroughtoughtimes.I'mmerelydoingwhatIcan.”Hefellin