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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí):老婦人與女孩的花園情誼1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Inasmalltown,therelivedanoldwomannamedMrs.Thompsonwhowasknownforherkindheart.However,shehadbeenlivingalonesinceherhusbandpassedawayandherreclusivenaturekeptherabitapartfromothers.Shelivedalonelylife,withherwell-tendedgardenasheronlycomfort.Thegardenwasanabundanceofcolors,filledwithroses,daisies,andvariousherbs.Eachplantwascaredforwithherfullloveandattention.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,ayounggirlnamedLilymovedintotheneighborhood.Lilywasacuriousandfriendlychild,butshehadbeenthroughadifficulttimeasshewasrecoveringfromaseriousillnessandwasoftensadandlonely.Oneafternoon,LilywaswalkingpastMrs.Thompson’shouseandwasattractedbythebeautifulgarden.ShepeckedoverthefenceandsawMrs.Thompsontendingtotheflowers.Mrs.ThompsonnoticedLilyandinvitedherin.Lilywashesitantatfirstbutthenwalkedinwithashysmile.Mrs.Thompsonshowedheraroundthegardenandtoldheraboutthedifferentplantsandtheiruses.ShepickedafewherbsandmadeacupofteaforLily,sayingitwasgoodforherhealth.Lilydranktheteaandfeltawarmthandcomfortshehadn’tfeltinalongtime.5續(xù)寫原文Asthedayspassed,Lilybecameafrequentvisitortothegarden.Mrs.Thompsontaughtherhowtoplantseeds,watertheplants,andtakecareofthem.Lily’shealthgraduallyimproved,andshestartedtosmileandlaughmore.However,oneday,Mrs.Thompsonfellillandwashospitalized.Learningofthis,Lilyrushedtothehospitaltoensureherwell-being.Duringtheirconversation,sheknewMrs.Thompsonwasworriedabouthergarden,fearingthatwithouthercare,theflowersandherbsshecherishedwouldwither.6段首句Paragraph1:Lilydecidedtotakeuptheresponsibilityinherplace.Paragraph2:AccompaniedbyLily,Mrs.Thompsonreturnedhome.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章圍繞老婦人湯普森夫人和小女孩莉莉展開。湯普森夫人善良但因丈夫去世后性格孤僻,獨自生活,花園是她的心靈慰藉。莉莉剛搬來,因病常感孤獨。兩人因花園結(jié)緣,湯普森夫人帶莉莉認識植物、教她照顧花園,莉莉身體和心情都有所改善。后來湯普森夫人病倒住院,擔(dān)心花園,為后續(xù)莉莉照顧花園的情節(jié)埋下伏筆。點1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Lilydecidedtotakeuptheresponsibilityinherplace.分析:此段應(yīng)承接前文,描述莉莉如何承擔(dān)起照顧花園的責(zé)任。可詳細寫她運用從湯普森夫人那里學(xué)到的技能,認真照顧花園里的植物,如澆水、除草等,還可提及她為讓湯普森夫人安心,可能會做些特別的事,像制作花草茶帶去醫(yī)院,展現(xiàn)她的細心和善良,推動故事發(fā)展,體現(xiàn)兩人之間深厚的情誼。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:AccompaniedbyLily,Mrs.Thompsonreturnedhome.分析:該段要著重描繪湯普森夫人回家后看到花園的反應(yīng)。她看到花園被照顧得很好,內(nèi)心應(yīng)充滿驚喜與感動,通過描寫她的表情、動作和言語,展現(xiàn)她對莉莉的感激。接著可講述兩人之后的相處,突出她們之間如家人般的親密關(guān)系,升華主題,體現(xiàn)人與人之間相互關(guān)愛帶來的溫暖和力量。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:Lilydecidedtotakeuptheresponsibilityinherplace.Shegotupearlyeverymorningtowatertheplantsinthegarden.SherememberedclearlyhowMrs.Thompsonwateredthem,soshemadesureeachplantgotenoughwaterbutnottoomuch.Shealsocarefullypulledouttheweedsaroundtheflowers.Lilyspentalotoftimeinthegardeneveryday.What'smore,shemadesomeherbalteaaccordingtothemethodMrs.ThompsontaughtherandtookittothehospitalforMrs.Thompson.ShehopedthiscouldhelpMrs.Thompsongetbettersoon.Paragraph2:AccompaniedbyLily,Mrs.Thompsonreturnedhome.Whenshesawthegarden,shewasverysurprised.Theflowerswerebloomingbrightlyandtheherbsweregrowingwell.ShewasdeeplymovedandsaidtoLily,"Thankyousomuch,dear.You'vedoneagreatjob."Lilysmiledandsaiditwasherpleasure.Fromthenon,LilystilloftenvisitedMrs.Thompsonandtheytookcareofthegardentogether.Theybecameveryclose,justlikefamily.14范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:Lilydecidedtotakeuptheresponsibilityinherplace.EquippedwiththeknowledgeMrs.Thompsonhadshared,Lilydedicatedherselftothegarden.Everyday,shewouldcheckthesoilmoistureandwatertheplantsaccordingly.Sheremovedanyweedsshefound,beingextremelycarefulnottodamagetheflowers.Inaddition,Lilylearnedtoprunetheplantstomakethemgrowbetter.Shealsomadeherbalteaandtookittothehospitalregularly.EachtimeshesawMrs.Thompsondrinkthetea,shefeltasenseofaccomplishment.Paragraph2:AccompaniedbyLily,Mrs.Thompsonreturnedhome.Assoonassheenteredthegarden,hereyeslitup.Thegardenwasevenmorebeautifulthanshehadexpected.ShehuggedLilytightlyandsaid,"You'resuchakindgirl.Thisgardenisstillsolovelybecauseofyou."Afterthat,theycontinuedtoenjoythetimeinthegardentogether.Theywouldsitinthegarden,chattingandsharingtheirstories,andtheirfriendshipbecamedeeper.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:LilyresolvedtoshouldertheresponsibilityinMrs.Thompson'sstead.ArmedwiththeskillsimpartedbyMrs.Thompson,sheimmersedherselfingardencarewithunwaveringdedication.Risingearlyeachdawn,shemeticulouslyexaminedthesoil'smoisturecontentandwateredtheplantswithprecision,ensuringtheyreceivedtheoptimalamountofhydration.Withagentlehand,shecarefullypluckedouttheweedsthatdaredtoencroachuponthepreciousflowers,sparingnoefforttoprotectthegarden'sdelicateecosystem.Moreover,Lilydelveddeeperintogardeningtechniques,learninghowtoprunetheplantstoencouragehealthygrowth.ShealsopainstakinglypreparedherbalteafollowingMrs.Thompson'sinstructionsanddeliveredittothehospitalwithlove.EachtimeshewitnessedMrs.Thompsonsippingthetea,awarmglowofsatisfactionfilledherheart.Paragraph2:AccompaniedbyLily,Mrs.Thompsonmadeherwaybackhome.Themomentshesetfootinthegarden,agaspofamazementescapedherlips.Thegardenwasariotofcolors,morevibrantandenchantingthanshecouldhaveeverimagined.Overwhelmedwithemotion,sheembracedLilytightly,hereyesglisteningwithtearsofgratitude."You'reanangel,mydear,"shemurmured."Thisgardenisatestamenttoyourkindnessandcare."Fromthatdayforward,theirbondgrewstrongerthanever.Theyspentcountlesshoursinthegarden,sharinglaughter,stories,andthesimplejoysoflife.Thegarden,onceasourceofsolaceforMrs.Thompson,nowbecameasymboloftheirbeautifulfriendship.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:LilydeterminedlytookontheresponsibilityinplaceofMrs.Thompson.InfusedwiththegardeningwisdompassedonbyMrs.Thompson,sheapproachedthetaskwithmeticulouscare.Everymorning,asthesunpeekedoverthehorizon,Lilywouldrushtothegarden.Shewouldfirstchecktheconditionofeachplant,usingherfingertipstofeelthesoil'sdampness.Then,withawateringcaninhand,shewoulddistributewaterevenly,ensuringnoplantwasleftthirsty.Shepainstakinglyremovedeveryweed,beingcautiousnottodisrupttherootsoftheflowers.Additionally,Lilyexperimentedwithdifferentwaystoenhancethegrowthoftheherbs,inspiredbyMrs.Thompson'steachings.Shemadeexquisiteherbaltea,carefullyselectingthefreshestherbs,andbroughtittothehospital,hopingitwouldbringcomfortandhealingtoMrs.Thompson.Paragraph2:Acco

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