高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：警察為小男孩拯救生日派對(duì)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)警察為小男孩拯救生日派對(duì)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Whenwearelittlekids,birthdaypartiesaremomentousoccasions.Theyareourtimetoshine,andweloveeverythingaboutthem:theballoons,thegames,thecake,thegifts,andsoon.Afterreadingcoolstoriesaboutpoliceofficerssolvingmysteries,AllenMillerthoughtthepolicewereawesome,hopingtobecomeoneofthem!So,whenhehadtochooseathemeforhisseventhbirthdayparty—hewentwithhisfavorite:thepolice!Andallhewantedforhisbirthdaypartywasamodelpolicecar.Heexcitedlyinvitedsomeofhisfriendsandanxiouslyawaitedtheday.Unfortunately,noneofthemcouldmakeittothepartyduetovariousreasons,Allen’smomRachelwrestledwiththechallengingdecision:shouldshecancelthepartyandsaveAllentheembarrassmentofanemptypartyroom?Hehadbeenlookingforwardtothepartyandtalkingaboutitdaily,soitwouldbreakhishearttocancelit.4續(xù)寫原文OfficerFrankSmith,whohadalreadyplannedwithRachelandagreedtoshowupattheparty,heardfromRachelthatitmightbecanceledduetolowattendance.That’swhenhedecidedtosavetheday—heisapoliceofficerafterall!Hisdutyistoserveandprotect,andhedecidedtoprotectAllenfromhavingabadday,andservehimthemostamazingseventhbirthdayparty!OfficerSmithgotthewholelocalpolicetojoinin.“Weliketobeinvolvedinourcommunity.It’snotjustaboutenforcing(執(zhí)行)thelaw.Weliketobethereinthegoodtimesaswell,”heexplainedtoRachel.OnthedayofAllen’sparty,OfficerSmithpickedupRachelandAlleninhispolicecar.Theboydidn’tknowwheretheyweregoing,butwasexcited.TheystoppedatTownHall,andofficerSmithledthemintothemeetingroomwhereagroupofpolicemenwerewaitingtowishAllenahappybirthday.5段首句Paragraph1：There,apartywaswaitingforhim.Paragraph2：Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8小時(shí)候，生日派對(duì)對(duì)孩子意義重大。艾倫?米勒因喜愛警察故事，七歲生日派對(duì)選警察主題，滿心期待朋友來參加，還渴望得到一輛模型警車。然而，朋友們因各種原因無法赴約，母親瑞秋糾結(jié)是否取消派對(duì)。得知消息的警察弗蘭克?史密斯決定召集當(dāng)?shù)鼐煺扰蓪?duì)。派對(duì)當(dāng)天，史密斯警官開警車接艾倫母子，帶他們到市政廳會(huì)議室，那里一場為艾倫準(zhǔn)備的驚喜派對(duì)正等待著他。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：There,apartywaswaitingforhim.當(dāng)艾倫走進(jìn)房間，他瞬間被眼前的景象震撼。五彩斑斕的氣球從天花板垂落，墻上貼滿了警察主題的海報(bào)，正中央擺放著一個(gè)巨大的、精心制作的警察造型蛋糕，蛋糕上的警燈閃爍著微光。警察們穿著整齊的制服，微笑著鼓掌歡迎他。接著，警察們帶著艾倫玩起了有趣的游戲，比如模擬追捕小偷的游戲，艾倫扮演英勇的警察，在房間里穿梭，玩得不亦樂乎。大家還一起唱歌跳舞，艾倫完全沉浸在歡樂的氛圍中，之前因朋友缺席的失落早已煙消云散。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.在盡情享受蛋糕后，史密斯警官神秘地拿出一個(gè)禮物袋。艾倫好奇地看著他，眼中滿是期待。史密斯警官笑著說：“艾倫，這個(gè)禮物是大家對(duì)你的祝福。”艾倫迫不及待地打開袋子，當(dāng)看到夢(mèng)寐以求的模型警車時(shí)，他激動(dòng)得跳了起來。他緊緊抱住模型警車，連聲道謝。隨后，警察們和艾倫一起合影留念，記錄下這美好的時(shí)刻。這個(gè)特別的生日派對(duì)，不僅讓艾倫度過了難忘的一天，更在他心中種下了一顆更加堅(jiān)定的夢(mèng)想種子，讓他對(duì)未來成為警察充滿了向往。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)WhenAllenenteredtheroom,hewasimmediatelystunnedbywhathesaw.Therewerecolorfulballoonshangingfromtheceiling,andpolice-themedposterswerepastedalloverthewalls.Inthecenteroftheroomstoodahuge,exquisitely-madepolice-shapedcakewiththelightsonittwinklingslightly.Thepolicemen,dressedinneatuniforms,weresmilingandclappingtowelcomehim.Then,thepolicemenledAllentoplaysomeinterestinggames.Forexample,theyplayedagameofsimulatingcatchingathief.Allen,actingasabravepoliceofficer,ranaroundtheroom,havingagreattime.Everyonealsosanganddancedtogether.Allenwascompletelyimmersedinthejoyousatmosphere,andthedisappointmentcausedbyhisfriends'absencehadlongsincedisappeared.13范文呈現(xiàn)Aftertheyhadenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbagmysteriously.Allenlookedathimcuriouslywithfullofanticipationinhiseyes.OfficerSmithsmiledandsaid,"Allen,thisgiftistheblessingfromallofus."Allencouldn'twaittoopenthebag.Whenhesawthemodelpolicecarhehadbeendreamingof,hejumpedupexcitedly.Hehuggedthemodelpolicecartightlyandthankedeveryonerepeatedly.Subsequently,thepolicementookpictureswithAllentorecordthiswonderfulmoment.ThisspecialbirthdaypartynotonlymadeAllenhaveanunforgettableday,butalsoplantedamoredetermineddreamseedinhisheart,makinghimlookforwardtobecomingapoliceofficerinthefuturewithgreateagerness.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)There,apartywaswaitingforhim.AsAllensteppedintotheroom,whatgreetedhiseyeswasascenestraightoutofhisdreams.Colorfulballoons,likefloatingrainbows,hungfromtheceiling,whilepolice-themedpostersadornedthewalls,creatinganexcitingatmosphere.Intheverycenterstoodamagnificentpolice-shapedcake,itslightstwinklinginvitingly.Thepolicemen,intheirimmaculateuniforms,worewarmsmilesandwelcomedAllenwiththunderousapplause.TheythenengagedAlleninaseriesofthrillinggames.Takethe"catch-the-thief"gameforinstance,whereAllen,asavaliantpoliceofficer,dashedaroundtheroom,hislaughterringingout.Allweresinginganddancing,withAllenbeingcompletelylostinthisseaofjoy,thepreviousdisappointmentoverhisfriends'absencelongforgotten.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.Withamysterioussmile,OfficerSmithpresentedthebagtoAllen,whowaslookingathimwitheyesbrimmingwithcuriosity."Thisisatokenofourloveforyou,Allen,"saidOfficerSmith.Eagerly,Allentoreop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