高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：面對(duì)朋友犯錯(cuò)：在友情與真相間抉擇

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)面對(duì)朋友犯錯(cuò)：在友情與真相間抉擇1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MynameisAndy.Iwasthenewboyintheclass.IwastwelvewhenImovedtoLondon.Havinglostallmyoldfriends,Ifeltshyandlonelyatmynewschool.Mostpeopleweren'tveryinterestedinashynewboy.Colinwasoneofthefewpeoplewhowerekindtome.Heofteninvitedmetojoinhisparticulargroup,andasaresult,Istartedgettingtoknowpeople.ColinandIbecamegoodfriends.Wetrustedeachotherandwecouldtalkaboutpersonalmatters,thingsthatwereimportanttous.4續(xù)寫原文Fiveyearslater,Colin'sfatherwasknockedoverbyacaranddiedafewdayslater.Thefamilyhadtomovetoamuchsmallerhouseinordertomanagefinancially.Colinchangedcompletely,becomingsilentandmoody.Hehadalwaysbeenaclever,hard-workingstudentbutnowheseemedtoloseallinterestinhiswork.Hestartedlosingfriends.Aboutthreemonthsago,agroupofuswereplayingfootballtogetherafterschool.Havingleftsomethinginthecloakroom,Iwentinsidetogetit,findingColingoingthroughthepocketsofpeople'scoats.Inhishandhehadawallet,butitwasn'this!Ijustlookedathim.Colinwentbrightred."I'llputitbackrightnow,"hesaid,andhedidso.Iturnedroundandwalkedoutwithoutsayingaword.5續(xù)寫原文Lastweekourschoolhadabigfairinordertoraisemoneyforacharity.Itwasverysuccessfulandbytheendoftheday,wehadmadeabout￡500.Holdingthebox,ourheadteachersaidwithasmile"Wehaveraised￡500here."Buttooursurprise,thenextmorning,weweretoldthatthemoneyhadbeenstolen.IdecidedtoaskColinaboutthetheft,andthismorningIwenttoseehim.IapproachedColinwithaheavyheart,knowingthatthisconversationcouldbehard."Colin,Ineedtoaskyousomething,"Ibegancautiously.Helookedupatme,hiseyesfilledwithamixtureofcuriosityandworry."Didyoutakethemoneyfromthecharityfair?"Iaskeddirectly,hopingtogetastraightanswer.6段首句Paragraph1：Colin'sfaceturnedpale,unabletomeetmyeyes.Paragraph2：Icouldseethepaininhiseyes,anddespitemydisappointment,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelempathy（同情）formyfriend.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9安迪搬到倫敦后，在新學(xué)校結(jié)識(shí)了對(duì)他友善的科林，兩人成為好友。然而，科林父親因車禍離世，家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)困難，科林性情大變。一次安迪發(fā)現(xiàn)科林偷拿他人錢包，科林承諾歸還。學(xué)校為慈善舉辦集市籌得500英鎊，錢卻被盜。安迪決定向科林詢問此事，面對(duì)詢問，科林反應(yīng)復(fù)雜。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Colin'sfaceturnedpale,unabletomeetmyeyes.科林的臉色變得蒼白，不敢直視我的眼睛。他雙手不安地絞在一起，身子微微顫抖，試圖找個(gè)借口搪塞過去。但在我堅(jiān)定的目光下，他最終還是選擇了坦白。他聲音沙啞地說，自從父親去世后，家里的經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況每況愈下，母親為了支撐家庭日夜操勞，他實(shí)在不忍心看著母親如此辛苦?？吹郊谢I集的這筆錢，他一時(shí)鬼迷心竅，想著或許能幫家里緩解一下困境。說完，他低下頭，淚水順著臉頰滑落。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Icouldseethepaininhiseyes,anddespitemydisappointment,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelempathy（同情）formyfriend.我能從他的眼中看到痛苦，盡管我很失望，但還是忍不住對(duì)朋友心生同情。我知道他并非本性惡劣，只是被生活的壓力逼到了絕境。我深吸一口氣，對(duì)他說，犯錯(cuò)不可怕，重要的是勇于面對(duì)并改正。我鼓勵(lì)他和我一起向老師坦白，爭(zhēng)取寬大處理?？屏知q豫了一會(huì)兒，最終點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭。我們找到老師，誠(chéng)懇地說明了情況。老師聽后，雖嚴(yán)厲批評(píng)了科林，但也對(duì)他的家庭表示理解。在老師的幫助下，科林通過在學(xué)校做義工等方式彌補(bǔ)了自己的過錯(cuò)，也慢慢走出了這段黑暗的日子。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Colin'sfaceturnedpale,unabletomeetmyeyes.Hefidgetednervously,hishandstwitchingrestlessly.Afteralongmomentofsilence,hefinallydecidedtocomeclean.Hisvoicehoarsewithemotion,heexplainedthatsincehisfather'sdeath,hisfamily'sfinancialsituationhaddeterioratedrapidly.Hismotherwasstrugglingtomakeendsmeet,workingdayandnight.Whenhesawthemoneyfromthecharityfair,hewasovercomebydesperationandthoughtitcouldeasehisfamily'sburden.Ashefinishedspeaking,hehunghisheadinshame,tearsstreamingdownhisface.14范文呈現(xiàn)Icouldseethepaininhiseyes,anddespitemydisappointment,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelempathyformyfriend.Iknewhewasn'tabadpersonatheart;hewasjustpushedtotheedgebylife'shardships.Takingadeepbreath,Itoldhimthatmakingmistakeswasnottheend,buttheimportantthingwastofacethembravelyandcorrectthem.Iencouragedhimtoconfesstotheteacherwithmeandseekleniency.Afteramomentofhesitation,Colinnodded.Wewenttotheteacherandexplainedthesituationsincerely.Theteacher,afterasternreprimand,alsoshowedunderstandingforColin'sfamily.Withtheteacher'shelp,Colinmadeamendsforhismistakebydoingvolunteerworkatschoolandgraduallymanagedtomoveonfromthisdarkperiod.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Colin'svisageblanched,hiseyesdartingnervously,unabletolockontomine.Hishands,betrayinghisinnerturmoil,twistedandturnedrestlessly.Afteranagonizinglylongpause,hefinallysummonedthecouragetobarehissoul.Hisvoice,amerecroak,lacedwithrawemotion,herecountedhow,sincehisfather'suntimelydemise,hisfamilyhadbeenplungedintoafinancialabyss.Hismother,bearingthebruntofthehardship,toileddayinanddayouttokeepthefamilyafloat.Thesightofthemoneyamassedatthecharityfairhad,inamomentofweakness,temptedhim,cloudinghisjudgment.Hebelieveditcouldofferaglimmerofhope,atemporaryrespitefromthesuffocatingfinancialstrain.Asheconcludedhisconfession,hisheaddroopedinabjectshame,hottearscascadingdownhischeeks.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Gazingintohiseyes,Isawthedepthofhispain.Despitemyinitialdisappointment,empathywelledupwithinmeformyfriend.Iwasacutelyawarethathisactionswerenotareflectionofhistruecharacter,butratheradesperateactbornoutofthecrushingweightoflife'schallenges.Drawingadeepbreath,Iarticulatedthaterrorsarebutstepping-stonesonthepathtogrowth.Thecrucialstep,Iemphasized,wastoconfrontthemhead-onandrectify