高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：失而復(fù)得：老人善舉得以延續(xù)

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)失而復(fù)得：老人善舉得以延續(xù)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Formonths,Grace’soldmotherJuliahadbeensittinginherhome,makingtowelsdayandnighttosellattheannuallocalfair.Withthe$200shehadearned,shewantedtobuysomegiftsforthepoorfamiliesonthefifthfloorforthecomingNewYear.Then,onahappysnowyevening,Juliawenttothegrocerystoretobuysomefood.Later,shesafelydrovebackhome.At9:30thatnight,shecalledGraceandcried,“Ilostmywalletandall$200Ihadearned.MyNewYear’sDayisruined.”“Don’tworry,Mom,”Gracesaid,completelyunawarethatJuliahadgoneoutinthesnow.“Iwilldrivetoyourplaceinthemorningandwewillfindit,”Gracetoldhermother.“No.It’sgone.ItwasinmypocketwhenIwenttothestore.ButwhenIcheckeditjustnow,itwasn’tthere,”Juliasaid.“Isearchedmycarandhome.Then,IdrovebacktothestoretoseeifIleftitthere.Butitwasn’tthereeither.Then,Iwalkedthroughtheparkinglot,lookingforit,butitwasn’tanywhere.”4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Thinkingofheroldmother’sgoingoutonthesnowy,windynight,Gracewasheartbroken.“It’llbeokay,Mom,”shecomfortedhermother.“We’llcancelthecreditcard,andwecanreplacealltherestofthethingsinyourwallet.”However,gettinghermotheranewlicenseaswellasbank,medical,andidentitycardswasdiscouragingevenforGrace.IttookGraceseveralhourstodrivetoJulia’shousethefollowingmorning.Butbeforeshegotthere,Juliahadalreadygonebacktothestoreagain.Withtearsinhereyes,shesharedherstoryaboutthemoneyshehadearnedwiththestoremanagerandaskedifhecouldcheckhisstoreforherwallet.Themanagerfeltagreatpityforherandthoughttohimselfthatifthewalletcouldn’tbefound,he’dgivehersomeofhisownmoney.5段首句Paragraph1：Withthatthought,themanagerbegansearchingforthewallet.Paragraph2：AfterGracefoundthewallet,JuliawenttoreturnthemoneyandbuyNewYeargifts.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8格蕾絲年邁的母親朱莉婭日夜制作毛巾售賣(mài)，攢下200美元想為五樓貧困家庭買(mǎi)新年禮物。在一個(gè)雪夜購(gòu)物后，朱莉婭發(fā)現(xiàn)錢(qián)包連同錢(qián)丟失，她焦急萬(wàn)分。格蕾絲安慰母親，次日一早打算趕來(lái)幫忙。朱莉婭再次前往商店，向經(jīng)理講述遭遇，經(jīng)理決定幫忙尋找，若找不到愿拿出自己的錢(qián)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Withthatthought,themanagerbegansearchingforthewallet.帶著這樣的想法，經(jīng)理立刻行動(dòng)起來(lái)。他先在朱莉婭購(gòu)物經(jīng)過(guò)的貨架附近仔細(xì)尋找，不放過(guò)任何一個(gè)可能掉落錢(qián)包的地方。接著，他又去詢(xún)問(wèn)在入口處工作的員工，有沒(méi)有注意到地上有個(gè)錢(qián)包。同時(shí)，他還讓其他員工幫忙查看收銀臺(tái)周?chē)约邦櫩托菹^(qū)。大家齊心協(xié)力，地毯式搜索。突然，一位收銀員想起好像在入口附近的角落看到過(guò)類(lèi)似錢(qián)包的東西。眾人趕緊過(guò)去，果然發(fā)現(xiàn)了朱莉婭丟失的錢(qián)包。經(jīng)理激動(dòng)地拿起錢(qián)包，里面的200美元和各種卡片都完好無(wú)損。他馬上聯(lián)系朱莉婭，告訴她這個(gè)好消息。朱莉婭得知后，喜極而泣，立刻趕往商店。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：AfterGracefoundthewallet,JuliawenttoreturnthemoneyandbuyNewYeargifts.格蕾絲得知錢(qián)包找到后也松了一口氣。朱莉婭趕到商店，從經(jīng)理手中接過(guò)錢(qián)包，再三向經(jīng)理和幫忙尋找的員工表達(dá)感謝。隨后，她帶著錢(qián)包徑直前往五樓。她來(lái)到貧困家庭的住所，挨家挨戶(hù)地送上精心準(zhǔn)備的新年禮物。孩子們看到禮物，眼中閃爍著驚喜的光芒，家長(zhǎng)們也紛紛對(duì)朱莉婭表示感激。朱莉婭看著大家開(kāi)心的樣子，心里充滿(mǎn)了溫暖。她撥通格蕾絲的電話(huà)，興奮地分享這美好的時(shí)刻，格蕾絲在電話(huà)那頭也為母親感到高興，這個(gè)新年變得格外溫馨。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Withthatthought,themanagerbegansearchingforthewallet.HefirstcarefullyexaminedtheshelveswhereJuliahadshopped,lookingforanypossibleplacewherethewalletmighthavedropped.Then,herushedtoasktheemployeesworkingattheentranceiftheyhadnoticedawalletonthefloor.Atthesametime,heaskedotheremployeestocheckaroundthecheckoutcountersandthecustomerrestarea.Everyoneworkedtogether,conductingathoroughsearch.Suddenly,acashierrememberedseeingsomethinglikeawalletinthecornerneartheentrance.Allofthemhurriedthere,andsureenough,theyfoundJulia'slostwallet.Themanagerpickedupthewalletexcitedly.The$200andallkindsofcardsinsidewereintact.HeimmediatelycontactedJuliaandtoldherthegoodnews.Juliawasoverjoyedtohearitandrushedtothestorerightaway.13范文呈現(xiàn)AfterGracelearnedthatthewalletwasfound,shefeltrelieved.Juliaarrivedatthestore,tookthewalletfromthemanager'shand,andthankedthemanagerandtheemployeeswhohadhelpedfinditagainandagain.Subsequently,shewentstraighttothefifthfloorwiththewallet.Shevisitedeachpoorfamily'sresidenceandgaveoutthecarefullypreparedNewYeargifts.Thechildren'seyessparkledwithsurprisewhentheysawthegifts,andtheparentsalsoexpressedtheirgratitudetoJulia.Lookingatthehappyfacesofeveryone,Juliafeltextremelywarminherheart.ShedialedGrace'sphonenumberandexcitedlysharedthiswonderfulmoment.Gracewasalsohappyforhermotherontheotherendofthephone,makingthisNewYearextremelywarm.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Withthatthought,themanagerembarkedonadiligentsearchforthewallet.HemeticulouslyinspectedtheveryshelveswhereJuliahadperuseditems,leavingnonookorcrannyunexaminedinthehopeoflocatingthemisplacedwallet.Then,hehastenedtointerrogatetheemployeesstationedattheentrance,inquiringifanyofthemhadchanceduponawalletonthefloor.Simultaneously,heralliedotherstaffmemberstoscourtheareasaroundthecheckoutcountersandthecustomerrestzone.Workinginunison,theyconductedanexhaustivesearch.Suddenly,acashierrecollectedglimpsinganobjectresemblingawalletinthecorneradjacenttotheentrance.Allrushedthere,andindeed,theyunearthedJulia'slostwallet.Themanagereagerlysnatcheditup,relievedtofindthe$200andallthecardswithinuntouched.Withoutdelay,hecontactedJulia,conveyingthedelightfulnews.Overjoyed,Juliapromptlymadeherwaytothestore.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Uponlearningthatthewallethadbeenretrieved,Gracefeltawaveofreliefwashoverher.Julia,uponreachingthestore,receivedthewalletfromthemanager'soutstretchedhand,expressingherheartfeltgratitudetothemanagerandtheassistingemployeesprofusely.Subsequently,walletinhand,shemadeherwaydirectlytot