高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：勇敢之舉：從怯懦到救助小貓

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)勇敢之舉：從怯懦到救助小貓1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文IwasshywhenIwasthirteen.Iwasalsowhatmostteacherswouldcalla“goodkid.”Ifollowedtherulesandrarelyquestionedauthority.Butthenoneday,onesinglerideonaschoolbuschangedallthat.Theschoolbusthatdaywascrowded,hotandsmelly.Thewindowswereallrolledup—thedriver’sorder—itwassimplyrainingtoohardtohavethemdown.Myclassmateswereengagedinheatedconversationsandgames.Thedriverhadshoutedatseveralkidswhohadbeenstandingupintheirseatsandyelling.4續(xù)寫原文Isataloneasusual,speakingtonoone.Overandover,IcarefullywipedasmallcirclethroughthecloudonmywindowsothatIcouldlookoutside.Peopleracedhereandthere,graspingumbrellasorcoveringtheirheadswithjackets.Thebusstopped,waitingforanaccidenttoclear.AsIsatquietly,waitingandwatching,Isawakittyacrossthestreetontheothersideoftheroad.Hewasallwetanddidn’tseemtoknowhowtogetoutoftherain.Iwantedtogogetthekitty,butIknewthebusdriver,Mrs.Foster,wouldneverallowmeoffthebus.Itwasagainsttherulestoevenstandup.IalsothoughtifIpointedoutthepitifulcat,theotherkidswouldprobablythinkthatIwasweird(奇怪的),evenweirderthantheyalreadythoughtIwas.Ididn’twantthingstogetanyworsethantheywere.5續(xù)寫原文Mywindowwascloudyagain,andwhenIwipeditclear,Icouldseethekittywasstrugglinginwhatseemedtobeafloodedriver.Hewasnowuptohisneckincoldwater,buthislittlefrontpawswereholdingontothebarscoveringthestormdrain(排水溝).Isawabsoluteterrorinhisdark,roundeyes.6段首句Paragraph1：Manythoughtsracedthroughmymind.Paragraph2：Everyonestoppedtalkingandlookedatme,waiting.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析913歲的“我”性格靦腆，是老師眼中的“乖孩子”，嚴(yán)格遵守規(guī)則。一天，乘坐擁擠悶熱的校車時，因大雨車窗緊閉。“我”透過擦凈的車窗，看到街對面一只小貓在雨中掙扎，被困在積水里，眼中滿是恐懼?！拔摇毕刖刃∝垼瑓s因害怕違反規(guī)則和被同學(xué)嘲笑而猶豫。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Manythoughtsracedthroughmymind.許多想法在我腦海中飛速閃過。我深知如果不立刻采取行動，小貓很可能會被淹死，這個念頭讓我心急如焚。可我又擔(dān)心一旦違反規(guī)定，嚴(yán)厲的福斯特夫人會大發(fā)雷霆，說不定還會向?qū)W校報告，讓我遭受處分。同時，我也害怕同學(xué)們異樣的眼光，擔(dān)心他們會更加疏遠(yuǎn)我。但當(dāng)我再次看到小貓在冰冷的水中拼命掙扎，幾乎快被淹沒的模樣，心中的憐憫瞬間戰(zhàn)勝了所有恐懼。我深吸一口氣，鼓足勇氣，猛地從座位上站了起來。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Everyonestoppedtalkingandlookedatme,waiting.所有人都停止了交談，轉(zhuǎn)過頭看著我，等待著。車廂里一片寂靜，只有雨點(diǎn)打在車窗上的聲音。我緊張得聲音都有些顫抖，大聲說道：“福斯特夫人，有只小貓快被淹死了，我們得救救它！”起初，大家都驚呆了，隨后車廂里炸開了鍋。有的同學(xué)立刻響應(yīng)，紛紛表示要一起幫忙；有的則面露猶豫，害怕違反規(guī)定惹來麻煩。福斯特夫人皺著眉頭，透過擋風(fēng)玻璃看向小貓，短暫的沉默后，她果斷地說：“大家系好安全帶，我把車開到路邊?！避囃７€(wěn)后，大家齊心協(xié)力救出了小貓，這一刻，我感受到了勇氣帶來的力量和溫暖。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Manythoughtsracedthroughmymind.IwasacutelyawarethatifIdidn'tactimmediately,thepoorkittenwouldlikelydrown,whichmademeextremelyanxious.However,IwasalsoworriedthatonceIbroketherules,Mrs.Foster,whowasstrict,wouldbefuriousandmightevenreportmetotheschool,resultinginpunishment.Atthesametime,Iwasafraidofthestrangelooksfrommyclassmatesandworriedthattheywouldalienatemeevenmore.ButwhenIsawthekittenstrugglingdesperatelyinthecoldwater,almostsubmerged,mycompassionoverwhelmedallmyfears.Takingadeepbreathandmusteringupmycourage,Isuddenlystoodupfrommyseat.14范文呈現(xiàn)Everyonestoppedtalkingandlookedatme,waiting.Thebusfellintoadeadsilence,withonlythesoundofraindropshittingthewindows.MyvoicetrembledwithnervousnessasIshouted,"Mrs.Foster,there'sakittendrowning.Weneedtosaveit!"Atfirst,everyonewasstunned.Then,thebuseruptedintochaos.Someclassmatesimmediatelyresponded,sayingtheywantedtohelptogether.Othersshowedhesitation,fearingtroubleforbreakingtherules.Mrs.Fosterfrownedandlookedatthekittenthroughthewindshield.Afterashortsilence,shesaiddecisively,"Everyonefastenyourseatbelts.I'llpullthebusover."Whenthebusstopped,weworkedtogetherandrescuedthekitten.Atthatmoment,Ifeltthepowerandwarmththatcouragebrought.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Manythoughtsflashedthroughmymindatlightningspeed.Iwasvividlyconsciousthatfailuretoactpromptlywouldcondemnthepoorkittentoawaterygrave,athoughtthatsentshiversofanxietydownmyspine.ThespecterofMrs.Foster'swrath,knownforherstrictness,loomedlarge,andtheprospectofherreportingmetotheschool,leadingtopotentialpunishment,wasdaunting.Moreover,thefearofbeingmetwithdisdainfulglancesfrommyclassmates,whomightfurtherostracizeme,addedtomytrepidation.However,thesightofthekittenflounderinghelplesslyinthefrigid,risingwater,onthevergeofbeingcompletelysubmerged,stirredmycompassiontosuchanextentthatitvanquishedallmyapprehensions.Takingadeep,steadyingbreath,Isummonedeveryounceofcouragewithinmeandabruptlyshotupfrommyseat.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Everyoneceasedtalkingandswiveledtheirheadstowardsme,expectantlywaiting.Adeathlyhushdescendeduponthebus,brokenonlybytherhythmicpatterofraindropsagainstthewindows.MyvoicequiveredwithnervousnessasIbellowed,"Mrs.Foster,akittenisonthevergeofdrowning!Wemustsaveit!"Initially,everyonewasstruckdumbwithshock.Then,thebustransformedintoasceneofchaos.Someclassmates,theireyesablazewithdetermination,immediatelyralliedtothecause,eagertolendah