讀后續(xù)寫練習+從失望到溫暖：養(yǎng)老院鋼琴演奏 高三上學期英語一輪復習專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習從失望到溫暖：養(yǎng)老院鋼琴演奏1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文IlovetoplaythepianoandIgreatlyenjoyperformingmysongs,sowhentheannualwinterrecital(音樂演奏會)wascanceled,Iwasdisappointed.Ihadlookedforwardtoitforalongtimeandhadalreadypreparedtwoofmybestsongs.Mymomhadawonderfulidea,however,toturnthisdisappointingthingintosomethingworthwhile.“YoucanperformyoursongsatCarriageHouseSeniorLiving,”mymomsuggestedbrightly.“I’msuretheseniorstherewhodonothavefamiliestovisitthemthatoften,wouldreallyappreciatethemusicandyoucouldplaymorethanjusttwosongs.”4續(xù)寫原文Iimmediatelythoughtthiswasagreatidea.OneofthethingsIdidnotlikeabouttherecitalswasthatIwaslimitedtoplayingjustacoupleofsongs.PlayingthepianoatCarriageHouseseemedlikeawin-winsituationbecausenotonlycouldIplaymoresongs,butIwouldalsohavethechancetocheeruptheresidentstherewithsomelivelytunes.MymomcalledCarriageHouseandmadearrangementsformetoperform.Inthecomingincludingmanyoldclassics.5續(xù)寫原文Whentheexcitingdayfinallyarrived,myfamilyandIdrovetoCarriageHouse.Walkingthroughtheenormousdoubledoors,westeppedintoanentrywaythatoverlookedthespaciousgranddiningroom.Rightattheentrancetothediningroomstoodthepianoasifitwerejustwaitingtomakesomemusictoliventheplaceupabit.Atnearlyeverytableseveralgray-hairedwomenormenwereseatedenjoyingtheirdinnerandthecompanythatthecrowdedroomprovided.Despitetheconversationsgoingonatvarioustables,isolationhunglikeadarkcloudintheroom.Almostimmediately,weweregreetedbyanoldwomanwithawalkerwhointroducedherselfasPhyllisinchargeofCarriageHouse.Shewelcomedmeandledmetothestage.6段首句Paragraph1：AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.Paragraph2：NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9因冬季音樂演奏會取消，“我”很失望。媽媽提議“我”去養(yǎng)老院為老人演奏，“我”覺得這是個雙贏的好主意。于是媽媽聯(lián)系養(yǎng)老院安排演奏，“我”準備了多首歌曲。演奏當天，“我”來到養(yǎng)老院，這里的老人看似熱鬧，但仍有孤獨感?！拔摇奔磳㈤_始演奏，為后續(xù)的演奏過程和與老人的互動埋下伏筆。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.當我在琴凳上坐下，按下鋼琴的一個琴鍵，卻驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)沒有聲音。我的心瞬間揪了起來，大腦一片空白。我慌亂地檢查著鋼琴的各個部位，試圖找出問題所在。周圍的老人和家人也都投來關切的目光，這讓我更加緊張。就在這時，養(yǎng)老院的工作人員迅速找來技術人員。經(jīng)過一番緊張的排查，終于發(fā)現(xiàn)是線路出了問題，很快就修好了。我長舒一口氣，調(diào)整好情緒，準備迎接即將開始的演奏。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.緊張感漸漸消散，我開始盡情享受與老人們一起的這場演奏。隨著第一個歡快的音符響起，整個餐廳都安靜了下來。老人們放下手中的餐具，目光都聚焦在我身上。我全身心地投入演奏，手指在琴鍵上輕快地跳躍。當演奏到抒情的部分，老人們微微閉上眼睛，沉浸在音樂之中；而到了激昂的段落，他們則不由自主地跟著節(jié)奏點頭。一曲結(jié)束，老人們報以熱烈的掌聲，那掌聲中充滿了對我的肯定和喜愛。這場演奏不僅給老人們帶來了歡樂，也讓我收獲了滿滿的溫暖和感動。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.Panicimmediatelyseizedme,andmymindwentblank.Ianxiouslyexaminedeverypartofthepiano,tryingtofigureoutwhatwaswrong.Theconcernedeyesoftheelderlyandmyfamilymembersaroundmemademeevenmorenervous.Justthen,thestaffatCarriageHousequicklyfetchedatechnician.Afteratenseinspection,theyfinallyfoundthattherewasaproblemwiththewiring,anditwasfixedsoon.Takingadeepbreath,Icomposedmyselfandpreparedfortheupcomingperformance.14范文呈現(xiàn)NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.Withthefirstcheerfulnote,theentirediningroomfellsilent.Theseniorsputdowntheirutensilsandfocusedtheireyesonme.Iwasfullyengagedintheperformance,myfingersdancingnimblyonthepianokeys.Whenitcametothelyricalpart,theoldpeopleclosedtheireyesslightly,immersedinthemusic.Andwhenitreachedthepassionatesection,theycouldn'thelpnoddingtheirheadsinrhythm.Afterthesongended,theseniorsgavemeawarmroundofapplause,whichwasfullofaffirmationandaffection.Thisperformancenotonlybroughtjoytotheelderlybutalsofilledmewithwarmthandtouch.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)AsIsettledontothepianobench,anticipationcoursingthroughmyveins,Ipressedakey,onlytobemetwithaneeriesilence.Panic,likeawildfire,instantlyengulfedme,leavingmymindinastateofchaos.MyhandstrembledasIfeverishlyinspectedeverynookandcrannyofthepiano,desperatelysearchingforthesourceofthemalfunction.Theweightoftheconcernedgazesfromtheelderlyresidentsandmyfamilymembersboredownonme,intensifyingmyanxiety.However,inastrokeofluck,theCarriageHousestaffpromptlysummonedatechnician.Afteratenseandmeticulousinspection,theculpritwasidentifiedasawiringissue,andwithafewdeftmaneuvers,itwasswiftlyrectified.Takingadeep,steadyingbreath,Igatheredmycomposure,readytoembarkontheperformancethatawaited.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withtheinitialjitterssubsiding,Ifullyimmersedmyselfintheperformance,sharingthismusicaljourneywiththeelderlyaudience.Themomentthefirstlivelynoteresonatedthroughthediningroom,ahushfelloverthecrowd.Everyutensilwasgentlysetaside,andalleyeswerefixedintentlyonme.Myfingers,asifpossessedbyanotherworldlyforce,dancedgracefullyacrossthepianokeys.Duringthetender,lyricalpassages,theseniorsclosedtheir