高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)+舞臺(tái)上的意外與團(tuán)隊(duì)的精彩應(yīng)對(duì)+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)舞臺(tái)上的意外與團(tuán)隊(duì)的精彩應(yīng)對(duì)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Onceourschoolheldamusical,andmybuddyJohnandIwereaskedtobestagehands.Weshouldcrouchonthesteps,racingonstagewhenthelightsdimmedbetweenscenestopositionandtookbackprops(道具).IwasimpressedbyLisa.Lisaplayedtheleadingactressinthemusical.Iadmiredhertothisday,whichhadlittletodowiththeplayitself.Ithadtodowithherperformance—improve(即興表演).Thestory,HalfaSixpence(六個(gè)半便士),centersonArthurKipps,adraper’sassistantwhounexpectedlyinheritsafortune.AnnisArthur’schildhoodsweetheart.Theyhaven’tseeneachotherformanyyears.TheclimacticscenetakesplacewhenArthurencountersAnn,playedbyLisa.LisashoulddisplayAnn’sstrongemotionswhenArthurstepsintothetailor’sstore.Inthatscene,whenlightsdim,JohnandIshouldrushontothestagewiththeprops—anironboardandaniron.Whenlightscomeup,weshouldgetoffthestage.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Lineswerelearned,songsperfected,stage-crafthoned.JohnandIhitallourmarks.Dressrehearsalhadgonewellandnowitwasopeningnight.Theauditoriumwasfilledwithfamilies,andfaculty.Assoonasthelightsdimmed,wetookactionquickly.Butsomethingunexpectedhappened.“Guys!Look!”Lisawhisperedasshewassupportingtheironingboardwithonehand,“Itwon’tstayup.”Itwasshakingasiftofalldownwithoutsupport.5段首句Paragraph1：SheaskedwhyIthoughtwewerepoor,andIlistedreasons.Paragraph2：Afterthesuccessfulshow,IapproachedLisainshame.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8文章講述了學(xué)校舉辦音樂(lè)劇，“我”和好友John擔(dān)任舞臺(tái)工作人員，負(fù)責(zé)在場(chǎng)景切換時(shí)搬道具。劇中，Lisa飾演女主角Ann。在關(guān)鍵的高潮場(chǎng)景中，當(dāng)燈光暗下，“我們”按計(jì)劃上臺(tái)擺放熨衣板和熨斗這兩個(gè)道具。然而，在彩排順利的情況下，首演當(dāng)晚卻出現(xiàn)意外，熨衣板無(wú)法立穩(wěn)，搖搖欲墜。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：SheaskedwhyIthoughtwewerepoor,andIlistedreasons.我們手忙腳亂地試圖修理熨衣板，可前方的燈光卻越來(lái)越亮。就在這千鈞一發(fā)之際，Lisa展現(xiàn)出了驚人的應(yīng)變能力。她用盡全力單手穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地?fù)巫§僖掳?，同時(shí)用另一只手整理了一下自己的服裝，臉上迅速恢復(fù)了角色應(yīng)有的表情。她輕聲對(duì)我們說(shuō)：“別慌，按計(jì)劃來(lái)，我撐得住?！蔽覀兩钪丝滩荒軄y了陣腳，于是我和John迅速站到熨衣板兩側(cè)，假裝正在忙碌地整理店內(nèi)的物品。燈光亮起的瞬間，Lisa開(kāi)始了她的表演，她的聲音清脆而有力，完全沒(méi)有受到道具故障的影響。觀(guān)眾們沉浸在她精彩的表演中，絲毫沒(méi)有察覺(jué)到舞臺(tái)上的小插曲。在整個(gè)表演過(guò)程中，我們?nèi)四跖浜希晒Φ匮谏w了熨衣板的問(wèn)題。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Afterthesuccessfulshow,IapproachedLisainshame.演出成功結(jié)束后，我滿(mǎn)心愧疚地走向Lisa。我低著頭，聲音顫抖地對(duì)她說(shuō)：“Lisa，真的非常抱歉，都是因?yàn)槲覀儨?zhǔn)備不充分，讓你在臺(tái)上那么為難?！盠isa微笑著拍了拍我的肩膀，溫柔地說(shuō)：“別這么說(shuō)，大家都是一個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)的，遇到問(wèn)題一起解決就好啦。這次意外反而讓我們的表演更加特別，不是嗎？”她的話(huà)讓我心中的愧疚感頓時(shí)減輕了許多。我看著她真誠(chéng)的眼睛，暗暗下定決心，以后在任何工作中都要更加細(xì)心，絕不再因?yàn)樽约旱氖д`給他人帶來(lái)麻煩。這次經(jīng)歷不僅讓我看到了Lisa的專(zhuān)業(yè)和善良，也讓我深刻體會(huì)到了團(tuán)隊(duì)精神的重要性。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Weweretryingtofixtheboardbutthelightsaheadwerecomingup.Intheblinkofaneye,Lisa,withremarkablepresenceofmind,tookimmediateaction.Sheexertedallherstrengthtoholdtheironingboardsteadywithonehandwhileusingtheothertoadjusthercostume,quicklyregainingthecomposureofhercharacter.“Don'tpanic.Sticktotheplan.Icanmanage,”shemurmuredtoussoftly.Realizingtheurgencyofthesituation,JohnandIswiftlypositionedourselvesoneithersideoftheboard,feigningbusynessinarrangingitemsinthetailor'sshop.Asthelightsfullyilluminatedthestage,Lisalaunchedintoherperformance.Hervoiceresoundedclearlyandpowerfully,showingnosignofbeingaffectedbythepropmalfunction.Theaudience,completelyengrossedinhercaptivatingacting,remainedoblivioustothesmallmishaponstage.Throughouttheperformance,thethreeofuscoordinatedseamlessly,successfullyconcealingtheproblemwiththeironingboard.13范文呈現(xiàn)Afterthesuccessfulshow,IapproachedLisainshame.Headbowed,myvoicequivering,Isaidtoher,“Lisa,I'mtrulysorry.Itwasallbecauseofourinsufficientpreparationthatputyouinsuchadifficultsituationonstage.”Lisasmiledwarmlyandpattedmeontheshoulder,sayinggently,“Don'tsaythat.We'reallpartofateam.Whenproblemsarise,wesolvethemtogether.Thisunexpectedincidentactuallymadeourperformanceevenmorespecial,didn'tit?”HerwordsinstantlyalleviatedagreatdealoftheguiltIfelt.Lookingintohersincereeyes,Imadeasilentvowtobemoremeticulousinanyfutureworkandnevertocausetroubleforothersduetomyownmistakes.ThisexperiencenotonlymademewitnessLisa'sprofessionalismandkindnessbutalsodeeplyimpresseduponmethesignificanceofteamwork.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Wewerefranticallyattemptingtorectifythewobblyironingboardwhen,toourdismay,thelightsonthestagewereonthevergeofbrightening.Inaninstantofsheerpanic,Lisa,displayingextraordinarypoise,sprangintoaction.Summoningallherstrength,shesteadiedtherecalcitrantboardwithonehand,whilewiththeother,shesmoothlyadjustedhercostume,hercountenanceseamlesslytransitioningbacktothatofhercharacter.“Staycalm.Followtheplan.I'vegotthis,”shehissedthroughgrittedteeth.JohnandI,acutelyawareofthegravityofthesituation,swiftlyflankedtheboard,feigningindustriousnessintidyingthetailor'sshop.Asthelightsblazedtolife,Lisalaunchedintoherperformance,hervoiceresonatingwithclarityandconviction,betrayingnohintoftheturmoilbehindthescenes.Theaudience,entrancedbyherspell-bindingacting,remainedblissfullyunawareofthenear-disasteronstage.Throughoutthescene,thethreeofusworkedinperfectharmony,deftlyconcealingthemalfunctioningpropfrompryingeyes.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Followingthetriumphantconclusionoftheshow,IapproachedLisa,myheartheavywithremorse.Headhunglow,myvoicebarelyaboveawhisper,Iofferedmyapology,“Lisa,Iamtrulymortified.Ourlackofthoroughpreparationsubjectedyoutosuchaharrowingexperienceonstage.”Lisa,withawarmsmile,reachedoutandgentlypattedmyshoulder.“Please,don'tblameyourself.We'reallpartofthisteam.Whenfacedwithchallenges,weriset