讀后續(xù)寫+克服恐懼的小提琴演奏 講義 高三年級(jí)第二次質(zhì)量檢測(cè)英語(yǔ)試題

故事續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TherewasatimeinmylifewhenIenjoyedviolinverymuch.Butwhenitcametoperforminginfrontofotherpeople,IalwaysbecamenervousandgotdiscouragedfrequentlywithmyinabilitytoplayaswellasIcouldwhenpracticingalone.Thefearofmakingmistakesmademyhandtremble,overshadowingthejoyIfoundinmusic.IworriedthatasinglewrongnotewouldbreaktheconnectionIhopedtocreatewithmylisteners.Determinedtoovercomethisfear,Ijoinedmyhighschoolorchestra(管弦樂隊(duì))asafreshmen.Atourfirstclass,theconductorannouncedthatwewouldhavetheopportunitytoperforminSanAntonio,andeveryonewasexcitedaboutthetrip.Afewweeksbeforetheactualtrip,oneofmyfriendssentmeavideoofJoshuaBell,awell-knownviolinist,performingatasubwaystation.Iwasparticularlyfascinatedbyonepiecethatheplayedforthepassersby.Andheearned$32.17forthatpiece.

Iwasdeeplymovedbytheemotionalrichnessandcomplexityofthepiece,andIfeltastrongdesiretoexpressitsbeauty.Iimaginedmyselfperformingitconfidently,justlikeBell.Istartedpracticingitlikecrazy.However,thedifficultyofthepieceandtheconstantrepetitionsandadjustmentsworemeouttothepointwhereIalmostconsideredjustgivingup.ButitwasaworthychallengeandIthoughtIcouldmasterit,withmyuniquestyle.Severalweekslater,ourorchestragroupwerestayingatahotelinSanAntonio.Aswewerehangingout,wefoundabeautifulcourtyardjustinfrontofthehotel.ThefriendwhosentmethevideoandIweretalkingabouthowJoshuaBell’sperformanceatthesubwaystationwentviralonthesocialmedia.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore.克服恐懼的小提琴演奏續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：著重描寫“我”在朋友提議后內(nèi)心的掙扎，從極度的恐懼、猶豫，到最后下定決心開始演奏的心理轉(zhuǎn)變過程，同時(shí)描繪周圍環(huán)境，如酒店庭院里的陽(yáng)光、綠樹等，烘托氛圍。第二段：詳細(xì)刻畫“我”在演奏時(shí)的專注神情、投入狀態(tài)，以及對(duì)觀眾反應(yīng)的感受，最后描述表演結(jié)束后自己內(nèi)心的成就感和對(duì)未來(lái)的展望。情感線起初，面對(duì)朋友的提議，“我”心中充滿了恐懼與不安，害怕在眾人面前犯錯(cuò)，過去失敗的陰影籠罩著自己。但在朋友鼓勵(lì)的目光下，“我”鼓起勇氣，決定挑戰(zhàn)自己。演奏過程中，“我”努力克服內(nèi)心的緊張，逐漸沉浸在音樂中，忘卻了恐懼。表演結(jié)束后，收獲了觀眾的掌聲，“我”內(nèi)心充滿了成就感與喜悅，對(duì)未來(lái)充滿了信心，完成了從害怕表演到享受表演的情感轉(zhuǎn)變。故事線朋友提議“我”在酒店庭院為顧客演奏，“我”陷入激烈的思想斗爭(zhēng)?！拔摇痹谂笥训墓膭?lì)下，決定克服恐懼，開始準(zhǔn)備演奏?！拔摇蹦闷鹦√崆?，站在庭院中，深吸一口氣，開始演奏。演奏過程中，“我”雖出現(xiàn)了一些小失誤，但沒有像以前一樣慌亂，而是專注于音樂。酒店顧客被音樂吸引，紛紛駐足聆聽，表演結(jié)束后給予熱烈掌聲?！拔摇笔斋@了自信，對(duì)未來(lái)的音樂之路充滿期待，決定不再逃避挑戰(zhàn)。主旨升華句Itisthecouragetofacechallengesthatenablesustogrowandbreakthroughourlimits.（正是面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)的勇氣讓我們得以成長(zhǎng)并突破極限。）Thisperformancetaughtmethattruegrowthliesinsteppingoutofthecomfortzoneandembracingfear.（這次表演讓我明白，真正的成長(zhǎng)在于走出舒適區(qū)，直面恐懼。）Byconqueringmyfearofperforming,Inotonlyexpressedthebeautyofmusicbutalsodiscoveredmyinnerstrength.（通過戰(zhàn)勝表演的恐懼，我不僅展現(xiàn)了音樂之美，還發(fā)現(xiàn)了自己內(nèi)心的力量。）Sometimes,thegreatestvictoryisnotoverothers,butoverourselves,andthisperformanceismyvictoryoverfear.（有時(shí)候，最大的勝利不是戰(zhàn)勝他人，而是戰(zhàn)勝自己，這次表演就是我對(duì)恐懼的勝利。）Thisexperiencehasmademerealizethateverychallengeisanopportunityforself-improvement,andIshouldalwaysseizeitwithcourage.（這次經(jīng)歷讓我意識(shí)到，每一個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)都是自我提升的機(jī)會(huì)，我應(yīng)該始終勇敢地抓住它。）示范一Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.Myheartraced.Theoldpanicofmakingmistakesinfrontofotherssurgedback.ButIthoughtofJoshuaBell'sperformance,hisconfidenceandpassion.Takingadeepbreath,Idecidedtogiveitatry.Iadjustedmyposture,placedtheviolinundermychin,andpreparedtoplay.Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore.Instead,IfocusedontheemotionsIwantedtoconvey.Thewarmsunlightbathedme,andthegentlebreezecarriedthemelody.Gradually,Ilostmyselfinthemusic.Whenthelastnotefaded,therewasamomentofsilence,andthenwarmapplauseerupted.Ismiled,feelingagreatsenseofachievement.Thisperformancewasnotjustasimpleshow;itwasavictoryovermyfear,andIknewIhadtakenabigstepforwardonmymusicaljourney.示范二Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.Atfirst,Iwasfilledwithhesitation.Thefearofbeingjudgedandmakingembarrassingmistakesalmostmademedecline.However,thedesiretoovercomemyfearwasevenstronger.Withtremblinghands,Igotmyviolinready.Itriednottomindthemistakeshalfwaythroughtheperformanceasbefore.Iclosedmyeyes,imaginingIwasinaquietforest,playingonlyformyself.Themusicflowedfreelyfrommyfingertips.AsIplayed,Inoticedsomecustomersstopping,theirfacesshowinginterest.WhenIfinished,theirapplausefilledthecourtyard.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatfearisjustabarrierthatcanbebrokenthroughwithdetermination,andIwasexcitedtofacemorechallengesinthefuture.【答案】Suddenly,hesuggestedthatIplayforthehotelcustomersinthecourtyard.Atfirst,Iwashesitant.Thefearofmakingmistakesandembarrassingmyselfinfrontofotherswelledupinsideme.ButthenIthoughtofJoshuaBell’sperformanceinthesubwaystation.Heplayedwithsuchpassionanddedicationregardlessofthesetting.Itookadeepbreath,nodded,andgotmyviolinready.Iwalkedtothecenterofthecourtyard,andasIstartedtoplay,alleyesturnedtowardsme.Itr