高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：患難見真情：落基山脈的生死救援+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)患難見真情：落基山脈的生死救援1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Howfarwouldyougotohelpafriend?JeremySavage,aged17,andIanMarshall,aged16,bothfromCanada,hadtheirfriendshiptestedtothelimitonarecenttriptotheRockyMountainswiththeirparents.OnSaturdaymorning,thetwoboysdecidedtoclimbCathedralMountainbythemselveswhiletheirparentsrelaxedatthecampsite.Afterthreehours,theyreachedthetopandenjoyedthebeautifulviewfromthemountaintop.4續(xù)寫原文However,troublebeganwhentheystartedtheclimbdown.Ononeverydangerouspartofthemountain,Ianfellthreemetersoffthesideofthepath.JeremyclimbeddowntowhereIanwasandfoundhimbadlyinjuredandnotabletomovethen.Jeremyhadtodecidewhattodo.Heneededhelpbuthedidnotwanttoleavehisfriend.HecleanedthedirtandbloodfromIan’sfaceandhands,andthentriedtohelpIanstandup,butIan’srightlegwashurtingtoomuch.Withincrediblecalmnessandhisformerexperienceinthemountain,JeremythengaveIanhisfoodandwaterandlethimlieonhisjacket.Theyhadtowaitandhopethathelpwouldcome.Whiletheywaitedforhelp,JeremyusedhisjacketandanextrashirttokeepIanwarmandtheyrestedtogether.Sensinghisfriend’spainandanxiety,Jeremygentlycomfortedhimandgavehimconstantencouragementinadeterminedtone.5續(xù)寫原文Meanwhile,asdarknessstartedtofall,theirparentsbackatthecampsitebecameveryworriedthattheboyshadnotreturned.Desperatetearswellingupintheeyes,themothersfranticallyprayedtoGodfortheirsons’safety.Theygotintouchwithparkworkersandbegansearchingfortheboys.Soonmorethan20peoplewerelookingforthemonCathedralMountain.6段首句Paragraph1:Astheeveninggrewdarkerandthetemperaturedropped,IantoldJeremytoleavehimandgobacktotheirparents.Paragraph2:Finally,afterfourlongandtiringhours’climbingdown,theycameacrosstheirparents.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9來自加拿大的17歲的杰里米?薩維奇和16歲的伊恩?馬歇爾在最近一次與父母前往落基山脈的旅行中，他們的友誼經(jīng)受了嚴(yán)峻的考驗(yàn)。周六早上，兩個(gè)男孩決定在父母在營(yíng)地休息時(shí)獨(dú)自攀登大教堂山。三小時(shí)后，他們到達(dá)山頂，欣賞了山頂?shù)拿谰?。然而，在下山時(shí)麻煩來了，在山上一處非常危險(xiǎn)的地方，伊恩從小路旁三米高的地方摔了下去。杰里米爬到伊恩所在的位置，發(fā)現(xiàn)他受了重傷無法動(dòng)彈。杰里米必須決定該怎么做，他需要幫助但又不想離開朋友。他清理了伊恩臉上和手上的污垢和血跡，試圖扶伊恩站起來，但伊恩的右腿疼得厲害。憑借著超乎常人的冷靜和以往在山上的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，杰里米把自己的食物和水給了伊恩，讓他躺在自己的夾克上，兩人只能等待并希望有人來幫忙。在等待的過程中，杰里米用夾克和一件備用襯衫給伊恩保暖，兩人一起休息。杰里米感受到朋友的痛苦和焦慮，用堅(jiān)定的語氣輕聲安慰并不斷鼓勵(lì)他。與此同時(shí)，夜幕降臨，營(yíng)地里的父母因?yàn)槟泻儧]有回來而非常擔(dān)心，母親們絕望地流淚，瘋狂地向上帝祈禱兒子們平安。他們聯(lián)系了公園工作人員，開始尋找男孩們，很快就有20多人在大教堂山上尋找他們。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Astheeveninggrewdarkerandthetemperaturedropped,IantoldJeremytoleavehimandgobacktotheirparents.隨著夜晚越來越黑，氣溫也不斷下降，伊恩告訴杰里米讓他離開自己，回到父母身邊。伊恩的聲音微弱而沙啞，他深知自己的傷勢(shì)嚴(yán)重，不想因?yàn)樽约憾尳芾锩紫萑敫蟮奈ｋU(xiǎn)。他看著杰里米，眼中滿是懇求：“杰里米，你快走吧，別管我了，再這樣下去你也會(huì)有危險(xiǎn)的?！苯芾锩讏?jiān)定地?fù)u了搖頭，語氣不容置疑地說：“不，伊恩，我不會(huì)丟下你的，我們是朋友，要走一起走。我一定會(huì)帶你安全離開這里的?！北M管寒冷和疲憊不斷侵襲著他們，但杰里米始終守在伊恩身邊，用自己的身體為他遮擋寒風(fēng)。他不斷地跟伊恩說話，讓他保持清醒，避免他因?yàn)楹浜蛡炊萑牖杳?。杰里米一邊安慰著伊恩，一邊努力地觀察著周圍的環(huán)境，尋找可能的救援跡象。他知道，在這荒山野嶺中，他們只能依靠自己的力量和彼此的信任來度過這個(gè)難關(guān)。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Finally,afterfourlongandtiringhours’climbingdown,theycameacrosstheirparents.終于，在艱難地下山四個(gè)漫長(zhǎng)而疲憊的小時(shí)后，他們遇到了自己的父母。當(dāng)杰里米看到父母那熟悉而又焦急的身影時(shí)，他的眼眶瞬間濕潤(rùn)了。他緊緊地握著伊恩的手，激動(dòng)地說：“伊恩，我們有救了，我們的父母來了！”父母?jìng)兛吹絻蓚€(gè)孩子安然無恙，喜極而泣。母親們沖上前去，緊緊地抱住了自己的兒子，淚水止不住地流下來。父親們則迅速查看了伊恩的傷勢(shì)，并聯(lián)系了醫(yī)護(hù)人員。在等待醫(yī)護(hù)人員的過程中，杰里米向父母講述了他們?cè)谏缴系脑庥?。父母?jìng)兟牶?，既為他們的勇敢和?jiān)持感到驕傲，又為他們的危險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷感到后怕。伊恩感激地看著杰里米，說：“謝謝你，杰里米，如果不是你一直陪著我，我真的不知道該怎么辦。你是我最好的朋友?！苯芾锩孜⑿χ卮穑骸拔覀兪怯肋h(yuǎn)的朋友，無論遇到什么困難，我們都會(huì)一起面對(duì)的。”這次經(jīng)歷讓他們的友誼更加深厚，也讓他們懂得了在困難面前相互扶持的重要性。5.英語構(gòu)思故事情節(jié)12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Astheeveninggrewdarkerandthetemperaturedropped,IantoldJeremytoleavehimandgobacktotheirparents.Ian'svoicewasweakandhoarse.Hewaswellawareofhisseriousinjuryanddidn'twantJeremytobeingreaterdangerbecauseofhim.LookingatJeremywithpleadingeyes,hesaid,"Jeremy,goquickly.Don'tworryaboutme.You'llbeindangerifyoustayhereanylonger."Jeremyshookhisheadfirmlyandsaidinanuncompromisingtone,"No,Ian.Iwon'tleaveyou.Wearefriends.We'llleavetogether.Iwilldefinitelytakeyououtofheresafely."Despitethecoldandexhaustionconstantlyattackingthem,JeremystayedbyIan'ssideallthetime,usinghisbodytoshieldIanfromthecoldwind.HekepttalkingtoIantokeephimawakeandpreventhimfromfallingintoacomaduetothecoldandpain.JeremyobservedthesurroundingenvironmentwhilecomfortingIan,lookingforpossiblesignsofrescue.Heknewthatinthiswildmountain,theycouldonlyrelyontheirownstrengthandmutualtrusttogetthroughthisdifficulttime.14范文呈現(xiàn)Finally,afterfourlongandtiringhoursofclimbingdown,theycameacrosstheirparents.WhenJeremysawthefamiliarandanxiousfiguresofhisparents,hiseyesfilledwithtearsinstantly.HeheldIan'shandtightlyandsaidexcitedly,"Ian,we'resaved.Ourparentsarehere!"Theparentswereoverjoyedtoseethatthetwoboysweresafeandsound,andtheyburstintotears.Themothersrushedforwardandhuggedtheirsonstightly,withtearsstreamingdowntheirfaces.ThefathersquicklycheckedIan'sinjuryandcontactedthemedicalstaff.Whilewaitingforthemedicalstaff,Jeremytoldhisparentsabouttheirexperienceonthemountain.Afterhearingthis,theparentswerebothproudoftheircourageandperseveranceandterrifiedbytheirdangerousexperience.IanlookedatJeremygratefullyandsaid,"Thankyou,Jeremy.Ireallydon'tknowwhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyoustayingwithmeallthetime.You'remybestfriend."Jeremysmiledandreplied,"Wearefriendsforever.Nomatterwhatdifficultiesweencounter,wewillfacethemtogether."Thisexperiencemadetheirfriendshipdeeperandalsomadethemunderstandtheimportanceofsupportingeachotherinthefaceofdifficulties.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Astheeveningdeepenedintoapitch-blacknightandthetemperatureplummeted,Ian,hisvoicebarelyaudibleduetopainandfatigue,urgedJeremytoabandonhimandreturntotheirparents.Hiseyes,filledwithamixofdespairandconcern,lockedontoJeremy'sashesaid,"Jeremy,pleasego.Don'tletmebethereasonyou'reindanger.Leavemehereandsaveyourself."Jeremy,however,wasresoluteinhisrefusal.Shakinghisheadvehemently,herepliedwithunwaveringdetermination,"Noway,Ian.We'reinthistogether.I'mnotgoinganywherewithoutyou.IpromiseI'llgetusbothoutofthismesssafely."Despitethebitingcoldthatseepedthroughtheirclothesandtheoverwhelmingfatiguethatthreatenedtoconsumethem,JeremyremainedsteadfastbyIan'sside.Hehuddledclosetohisfriend,usinghisownbodyasashieldagainstthehowlingwind.TokeepIanalertandpreventhimfromslippingintounconsciousness,Jeremyengagedhiminconstantconversation,reminiscingabouttheirpastadventuresandsharingwordsofhopeandencouragement.Allthewhile,hiseyesscannedthesurroundingdarkness,searchingforanyglimmerofhope,anysignofapproachinghelp.Heknewthatinthisdesolateandtreacherousmountainterrain,theironlychanceofsurvivallayintheirunwaveringfriendshipandtheirabilitytorelyoneachother.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Finally,afteragruelingfour-hourdescentfilledwithpainstakingstepsandmomentsofneardespair,theystumbledupontheirparents.TheinstantJeremycaughtsightofhisparents'familiarandanxiousfaces,awaveofreliefwashedoverhim,andhiseyeswelledupwithtearsofjoy.GrippingIan'shandtightly,heexclaimed,"Ian,wemadeit!Ourparentsarehere!"Theparents,uponseeingtheirsonsaliveandrelativelyunharmed,wereovercomewithemotion.Themothersrushedforward,theirfacesstreakedwithtears,andembracedtheirboysinatightandlovinghug.Thefathers,meanwhile,immediatelyassessedIan'sconditionandswiftlycontactedthemedicalpersonnel.Astheyw