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2025屆新高考英語沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫

為了節(jié)目效果，挑戰(zhàn)馬上特技表演-不服輸?shù)奈以姆治鲎x后續(xù)寫原文審讀多篇范文呈現(xiàn)解題思路分析讀后續(xù)寫可積累文本1.原文賞析第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。NeverinmywildestimaginationdidIpicturemyselfstandingonthebackofarunninghorse.I’mnotacowgirlanddon’tevenridehorsesforpleasure.ButIwasdoingatelevisionfitnessshow,andsomeoneinthegrouphadthebrightideathatweshouldgototherodeo(牛仔競(jìng)技表演)groundsandaskthetrickrideriftheycouldteachmeastunt(特技表演)todooncamera.Wecouldusethisshortvideoasthenewopeningtotheshow.Iagreedthestuntwouldbeeye-catchingandprovehowflexibleafitpersoncanbe.ThatwashowIendedupattherodeogroundswithacameragroup,watchingtheremarkableperformancesofthreetalentedyoungcowgirls.Oncetheirshowwasover,weapproachedthem,detailingourideasforthetelevisionshow.ThecowgirlsaskedmewhichparticularstuntIwasinterestedinlearning.Iespeciallylikedonestunt—oneofthegirlsledahorsetocontinuouslyandslowlyrunaroundthegroundswhileoneoftheothergirlsranacrossthegroundstowardasmalltrampoline(蹦床).Itwastimedperfectlysothatshejumpedontothetrampoline,upintotheair,andthenontothehorse’sback.Asshelandedonitsback,shestoodupandstretchedherarmsoutwardasthehorsecontinuedslowlyrunning.Itlookedimpressive.Theytalkedmethroughthenecessarymoves,stressingthetimingsinceIwouldneedtobeintheairatthecorrecttimewhenthehorseranpast.Ialonewouldjudgethespeedofthehorseandmyownspeedtojumpontothehorseontime.Itwasclearlydifficult.Iwasalittlehesitant,afraidofbeingunabletodothatwellandslowingdownthefilming.ButIknewthemostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.Paragraph2:

At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.2、

原文審讀

紅色定從/定語；藍(lán)色賓從；黃色狀從，從句斜體；下劃線+標(biāo)黃單詞+斜體

為需掌握積累單詞、短語；黑體標(biāo)黃，非謂語；可積累部分為

embody；

注釋(定語從句)

NeverinmywildestimaginationdidIpicturemyselfstandingonthebackofarunninghorse.

I’mnotacowgirlanddon’tevenridehorsesforpleasure.ButIwasdoingatelevisionfitnessshow,andsomeoneinthegrouphadthebrightideathatweshouldgototherodeo(牛仔競(jìng)技表演)groundsandaskthetrickrider(同位從)

iftheycouldteachmeastunt(特技表演)todooncamera(狀從).Wecoulduse

thisshortvideoas

thenewopeningtotheshow.Iagreedthestuntwouldbeeye-catching

andprovehowflexibleafitpersoncanbe(賓從+賓從).ThatwashowIendedupattherodeogroundswithacameragroup(表從),watching

theremarkableperformancesofthreetalentedyoungcowgirls(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Oncetheirshowwasover(狀從),weapproachedthem,detailing

ourideasforthetelevisionshow(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).ThecowgirlsaskedmewhichparticularstuntIwasinterestedinlearning(定從).Iespeciallylikedonestunt—oneofthegirlsledahorsetocontinuouslyandslowlyrunaroundthegroundswhileoneoftheothergirlsranacrossthegroundstowardasmalltrampoline(蹦床)(狀從).Itwastimedperfectlysothatshejumpedontothetrampoline,upintotheair,andthenontothehorse’sback(狀從).

Asshelandedonitsback(狀從),shestoodup

andstretched

herarmsoutwardasthehorsecontinuedslowlyrunning(狀從).Itlookedimpressive.Theytalkedmethroughthenecessarymoves,stressing

thetiming(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作)

sinceIwouldneedtobeintheairatthecorrecttime

whenthehorseranpast(狀從).Ialonewouldjudgethespeedofthehorseandmyownspeedtojumpontothehorseontime.Itwasclearlydifficult.Iwasalittlehesitant,afraidofbeingunabletodothatwellandslowingdownthefilming(adj短語做補(bǔ)語).ButIknew

themostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand(賓從).注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.Paragraph2:

At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.兩種構(gòu)思方法“四到一行”“線索呼應(yīng)”看聽想說做找出線索，前后呼應(yīng)“兩法六句”1.讀后續(xù)寫分類與構(gòu)思分析分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應(yīng)句類型分類屬于挑戰(zhàn)與成長型讀后續(xù)寫。通過主人公接受挑戰(zhàn)并克服困難，展現(xiàn)勇氣與毅力，同時(shí)揭示成功背后的努力和代價(jià)。"Iwasalittlehesitant,afraidofbeingunabletodothatwellandslowingdownthefilming."構(gòu)思思路通過描述練習(xí)失敗、心理掙扎到成功完成表演的全過程，展現(xiàn)成長和突破，突出意志力與團(tuán)隊(duì)支持。"Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground."布局與框架1.失敗起步：描述初次嘗試的失敗、身體摔傷及心理波動(dòng)。

2.堅(jiān)持與突破：展現(xiàn)主人公在團(tuán)隊(duì)支持下克服恐懼并成功完成表演。"Iknewthemostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand."承接原文的事項(xiàng)1.繼續(xù)描寫動(dòng)作與心理描寫，如恐懼、疼痛、專注。

2.保持語言風(fēng)格與敘事節(jié)奏，注意銜接主人公練習(xí)情節(jié)。"Theytalkedmethroughthenecessarymoves,stressingthetiming."整體注意事項(xiàng)1.突出主人公的心理轉(zhuǎn)變，從猶豫到堅(jiān)定。

2.使用細(xì)膩的描寫展現(xiàn)動(dòng)作和環(huán)境。

3.避免語言生硬，保持?jǐn)⑹铝鲿场?Ialonewouldjudgethespeedofthehorseandmyownspeedtojumpontothehorseontime."巧妙設(shè)計(jì)續(xù)寫內(nèi)容1.添加心理獨(dú)白，展現(xiàn)主人公的內(nèi)心掙扎和動(dòng)力來源。

2.描述團(tuán)隊(duì)支持的重要性，體現(xiàn)人際關(guān)系的溫暖。

3.增加成功后的反思與成長。"Itwastimedperfectlysothatshejumpedontothetrampoline,upintotheair,andthenontothehorse’sback."2:故事山模式分析

StoryMountain思維導(dǎo)圖引入背景1.

主人公初次嘗試特技表演，充滿期待和忐忑。2.

關(guān)鍵句:"Iagreedthestuntwouldbeeye-catchingandprovehowflexibleafitpersoncanbe."逐漸上升1.

初次嘗試失敗，摔傷引發(fā)痛苦和恐懼。2.

關(guān)鍵句:"Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground."高潮沖突1.

再次嘗試，面對(duì)自我懷疑，付出努力。2.

關(guān)鍵句:"Iknewthemostimportantthingformewastoconcentrateonthetaskathand."緩解過程1.

最終完成特技，克服恐懼。2.

關(guān)鍵句:"At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured."結(jié)局與反思1.

從失敗到成功，領(lǐng)悟毅力的意義。2.

關(guān)鍵句:"Irealizedthevalueofperseveranceandtheimportanceofteamwork."3:推薦例句與詞匯替換類別推薦英文例句高級(jí)替換詞動(dòng)作描寫"Sheadjustedherpositioncarefully,herbodytremblingslightly."

"Heleapedforwardwithallhismight."

"Herhandsclutchedthereinstightlyasthehorsegalloped."leap→spring,bound心理描寫"Fearsurgedthroughherveinsasshetookadeepbreath."

"Determinationovershadowedherhesitation."

"Amixofanxietyandexcitementcoursedthroughher."fear→dread,unease環(huán)境描寫"Thecoldbreezesweptacrosstheopenfield,rustlingthedrygrass."

"Thearenaechoedwiththerhythmicthudofhooves."

"Thegoldensunlightpaintedlongshadowsontheground."cold→chilly,biting4:語法與搭配分析語法現(xiàn)象例句解析非限定性定語從句"Thecowgirls,whohadperformedflawlessly,guidedmestepbystep."增加句子信息，提升句式復(fù)雜度。動(dòng)名詞作主語"Concentratingonthetaskwastheonlywaytosucceed."增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的正式性和多樣性。虛擬語氣"HaditnotbeenforLisa’sguidance,Iwouldn’thavemadeit."表達(dá)假設(shè)，提高語言高級(jí)感。5:PossibleAnswersVersion1:Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.

“Icandothis”,repeating

tomyselftoincreasemyconfidence(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),Ipickedmyselfup

andwalkedbackto

thestartingpoint.AftertryingagainandagainIfiguredoutthetimingandcouldsuccessfullylandonthehorseback(賓從).Thenanotherchallengecame(狀從),Ineededtostandonthebackofthehorsewithmyarmsstretched

asthehorsecontinueditsrun(狀從).ManyattemptsweremadeandfinallyIdidit.At6.00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured.Iwassoexciteddespitethepain.Thoughthedoctorlaterreported

Imuststayinbedforawhilebecauseofmykneeinjury,Ihadnoregrets(狀從+賓從).

I’mnotatrickrider,butbeliefinmyselfmademeone.Forme,itwaslikedoingtheimpossible.Andwhentheviewerswatchedit(狀從),Iwantedthemtounderstandthatgettingintogoodphysicalshapemeanttheycouldalsodotheimpossible(賓從+賓從).Paragraph1:

Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.Painshotthrough

mykneeasIlandedawkwardly(狀從),

thesoundofgaspsfillingtheair(獨(dú)立主格).Embarrassmentwashedoverme

asIlayonthedustyground(狀從),theweightoffailurepressingdown(獨(dú)立主格).Butthecowgirlsrushedtomyside,theirreassuringsmilespushingbackmydoubts(獨(dú)立主格).“You’recloserthanyouthink,”oneofthemsaidgently.Theirunwaveringbeliefinmerekindledmydetermination.Withthegroupwatching(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)),Istoodup,dustedmyselfoff,andtookadeepbreath(動(dòng)作串).Visualizingthemovements(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),I

replayedtheiradviceinmymind:focuson

timing,

trust

therhythmofthehorse,andstayconfident(動(dòng)作串).Thistime,

Ivowed(插入語),wouldbedifferent.Isignaled

totheridertobegin.Asthehorseapproached(狀從),Ibrokeintoaruntowardthetrampoline.Myheartracedinsyncwiththepoundinghooves.Timing

myleapperfectly(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),Isprangontothetrampoline(n.蹦床，彈簧墊)

andfeltthesurgeofmomentumcarrymeupward.Asplitsecondlater,myfeetlandedonthehorse’sback.Wobblingslightly(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),Istretchedoutmyarms,andcheerseruptedaroundme.Reliefmixedwithtriumphsurgedthroughme.Ihaddoneit!Paragraph2:

At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured

butmyspiritsoaring(獨(dú)立主格).Thecrewgatheredaround,applaudingmyperseverance(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Despitetheachinginmybody,Ifeltanimmensesenseofaccomplishment.Thecowgirlsgavemeaproudthumbs-up,theirsupporthavingmadeallthedifference(獨(dú)立主格).AsIstoodbesidethehorse(獨(dú)立主格),stroking

itsmane(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作),IreflectedonwhatIhadachieved(賓從).Thiswasn’tjustabout

performingastunt—itwasalessoninresilienceandthecouragetofacechallengeshead-on.Later,whilereviewingthefootage(狀從壓縮),Imarveledat

howfluidthestuntlookedoncamera(賓從).

ThepainandfearIhadfelt(定從)

seemedtovanish,replaced

byprideandgratitude(非謂語動(dòng)詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Theexperienceleftanindeliblemarkonme.Inthosefleetingmomentsatopthegalloping(vi.飛馳，奔馳)

horse,Irealizedthatpushingboundarieswasn’taboutperfectionbutaboutdaringtoriseaftereveryfall.解析與亮點(diǎn)語法高分句式分析：1.

非限定性定語從句:1.

"PainshotthroughmykneeasIlandedawkwardly,thesoundofgaspsfillingtheair."2.

功能:增加細(xì)節(jié)，豐富畫面感。2.

獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu):1.

"Visualizingthemovements,Ireplayedtheiradviceinmymind."2.

功能:表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔且富有高級(jí)感。高級(jí)詞匯與替換:1.

Pain→agony,discomfort2.

Determination→resolve,grit3.

Fall→tumble,collapse4.

Triumph→victory,achievement亮點(diǎn)描寫與例句:1.

情緒描寫:1.

"EmbarrassmentwashedovermeasIlayonthedustyground,theweightoffailurepressingdown."2.

替換:embarrassment→humiliation,weight→burden2.

動(dòng)作描寫:1.

"Timingmyleapperfectly,Isprangontothetrampolineandfeltthesurgeofmomentumcarrymeupward."2.

替換:sprang→vaulted,propelled3.

環(huán)境描寫:1.

"Thegoldensunlightbathedthearena,castinglongshadowsthatdancedwiththemovementsofthegallopinghorse."核心詞匯表:1.perseverancen.毅力determination/

resilience

"Herperseverancehelpedherovercometheobstacle."1.

accomplishv.完成

achieve

fulfill"Heworkedhardtoaccomplishhisgoal."2.

visualize

v.想象imagine,foresee,

envision,"Shetriedtovisualizeherselfsucceeding."PossibleAnswer3:Paragraph1:

Thefirsttimeout,Ihitthehorse’sbackpartandfelltotheground.Thesharppain

inmyknee(定語)

andtheembarrassmentoffailinginfrontofeveryone(定語)

threatenedtooverwhelm

me.Iwantedtogiveup,buttheencouragingwordsofthecowgirls(定語)

spurredmeon."You’realmostthere.Timingiskey,"oneofthemsaid,hersmilefullofconfidence(獨(dú)立主格).Igrittedmyteeth(咬緊牙關(guān)),focusedon

herinstructions,andgave

itanothertry(動(dòng)作串).Paragraph2:

At6:00pm,wecompletedthestuntfilming,withmykneeinjured

butmyspiritsoaring.ThecrewcheeredloudlyasIstoodatopthehorse(定從),armsoutstretched(獨(dú)立主格).Thoughmybodyached(狀從),myheartwasfilledwith

pride.Thatday,Ilearnedaninvaluablelesson:failureisnottheend,butasteppingstonetosuccess.PossibleAnswer3:Paragraph