讀后續(xù)寫：從失敗到找到自信并迎接挑戰(zhàn)與情感的轉(zhuǎn)變+講義 高三下學(xué)期開學(xué)考試英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫：從失敗到找到自信并迎接挑戰(zhàn)與情感的轉(zhuǎn)變講義讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WinnersNeverQuitTherewasayoungboynamedJacksonwhohadaburningdesiretobecomeagreatchessplayer.Helivedinasmalltownwherechesswasunpopular.Thelackofpropercoachesortrainingfacilitiesnearbydidn'tdampenhisspiritsatall,forhisfascinationwiththegameknewnobounds.Everydayafterschool,hewoulddashhomeeagerlyandsetuphisoldchessboard.Forhoursonend,hewouldstudybooksborrowedfromthelibrary,hiseyesscanningthepagesattentivelyinanattempttoabsorbnewstrategies.Hepracticedagainsthimselfreligiously,movingthepiecesbackandforth,hisminddeeplyengagedinanalyzingeachmovewithcare.Whenhetookpartinlocalchessmatches,hewasfrequentlyunderestimated.Thetournamenthallwasfilledwithnoisypeople.Theotherplayers,armedwithbetterresourcesandprofessionaltraining,laughedathissimpletechniques.Inoneparticulartournament,ashesatatthetableforhisfirstgame,hecouldfeeltheeyesonhim.Hisopponentmadequickanddecisiveopeningmoves.Jackson,thoughnervous,focusedhard.Butsoon,hefoundhimselfinadifficultpositionashisopponent'spiecesadvancedaggressively.Helostthegameandwasverydisappointed.Inthenextgame,thesituationwasnobetter.Hisopponent'sfingersmovedswiftlyoverthepieces,whileJackson'shandswereabitsweatyashetriedtokeepup,withhisstrategieseasilycountered(對抗).Thetaunts(嘲弄)ofhisopponentsranginhisears,butherefusedtobedisheartened.Duringthebreak,hesataloneinthecorner,replayingthegamesinhismindtoidentifyhismistakes.Realizingtheneedtobemorecreativeandboldinhismove,heimmersedhimselfdeeperintoanalyzingofthegamesofthechessmastersforinspiration.Witheverypagehereadandeverymoveheanalyzed,hisdeterminationgrewlikeaburningfire.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Withanew-founddetermination,Jacksontoldhimselfthatwinnersneverquit.Paragraph2:Inthefinalmomentsofthegame,thepressurewasintense.讀后續(xù)寫講述了一名年輕的棋手如何在經(jīng)歷失敗后，通過不斷反思與努力，最終找到了突破自己局限的力量。分析題目要求這篇續(xù)寫的核心是通過Jackson的成長過程展示他如何從失敗中吸取教訓(xùn)，克服內(nèi)心的壓力，最終找到自信并迎接挑戰(zhàn)。情感的轉(zhuǎn)變非常關(guān)鍵，從失落到?jīng)Q心，再到最終的自信。情感遞進(jìn)與轉(zhuǎn)折第一段：從Jackson的失敗到重新找回信心。關(guān)鍵在于通過細(xì)節(jié)展示他從內(nèi)心的困惑和壓力中汲取力量。第二段：展示Jackson在最后時(shí)刻的從容與自信，通過具體動(dòng)作展示他的自我突破。固定句：幫助設(shè)定情感基調(diào)，展示情感遞進(jìn)和轉(zhuǎn)折。不固定句：豐富細(xì)節(jié)，推動(dòng)情節(jié)，增添沖突和情感升華。分段設(shè)計(jì)第一段：突出Jackson的內(nèi)心沖突與決心，推動(dòng)他重新站起來并迎接挑戰(zhàn)。第二段：通過自信的棋步展現(xiàn)情感的升華，最終揭示勝利不僅是棋局的勝利，也是自我突破的成功。第一段續(xù)寫開頭句：Withanew-founddetermination,Jacksontoldhimselfthatwinnersneverquit.1.固定句（情感描寫）：AwaveofresolvesurgedthroughJacksonashereflectedonhispastdefeatsandvowedtopushforwardnomattertheobstacles.解釋：通過情感描寫，展現(xiàn)Jackson從失敗中汲取力量，堅(jiān)定決心。2.不固定句（細(xì)節(jié)描寫）：Hishandsstoppedtrembling,andhismindclearedasheremindedhimselfofthecountlesshoursofpracticethathadledhimtothismoment.解釋：細(xì)節(jié)描寫展現(xiàn)Jackson內(nèi)心的轉(zhuǎn)變，通過反思他的準(zhǔn)備過程，突顯出他從失望到?jīng)Q心的情感變化。3.固定句（動(dòng)作鏈推進(jìn)）：Uponfacingthechessboardagain,Jacksonadjustedhisposture,focusedintently,andbegantoanalyzehisopponent'sstrategywithrenewedclarity.解釋：通過動(dòng)作鏈推進(jìn)，展現(xiàn)Jackson如何從內(nèi)心的動(dòng)搖到行動(dòng)上的堅(jiān)定，準(zhǔn)備迎接挑戰(zhàn)。4.不固定句（沖突鋪墊）：Hisopponent’seyeswerefixedonhim,butJacksonrefusedtobeintimidated,hisgazesteadyashemovedhispiececonfidently.解釋：沖突鋪墊，展現(xiàn)Jackson如何克服對手的壓力，建立自己的心理優(yōu)勢。5.固定句（情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折）：Nosoonerhadhemadehisfirstmovethanhefeltasurgeofconfidence,andanewsenseofpurposefilledhiseverymove.解釋：情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折，通過Jackson的第一個(gè)棋步，展現(xiàn)他在面對困境后找到了突破口。第二段續(xù)寫開頭句：Inthefinalmomentsofthegame,thepressurewasintense.6.固定句（情感轉(zhuǎn)變）：Havingregainedcontrolofhisnerves,Jacksonfeltaquietconfidencegrowinginsidehim,realizingthatthiswashismomenttoshine.解釋：情感轉(zhuǎn)變，Jackson從緊張到自信的心境變化，展現(xiàn)他逐漸走出失敗的陰影。7.不固定句（背景渲染）：Theroomaroundhimseemedtofadeintothebackground,andallthatmatteredwasthegameinfrontofhim.解釋：背景渲染，突出游戲中的專注和Jackson的內(nèi)心世界，讓他與外界的干擾隔離開。8.不固定句（具體行動(dòng)描寫）：Withasteadyhand,hemovedhisknightintoapowerfulposition,blockinghisopponent'smoveandsettingupforafinalcheckmate.解釋：具體行動(dòng)描寫，展現(xiàn)Jackson如何通過自信與技巧進(jìn)行策略調(diào)整，最終接近勝利。9.固定句（結(jié)局升華）：Bythetimethegameconcluded,Jacksonhadnotonlywonthematch,butalsoproventohimselfthatperseveranceandfocuscouldovercomeanychallenge.解釋：通過總結(jié)性句子，升華Jackson的勝利意義，不僅是贏得比賽，更是個(gè)人成長的體現(xiàn)。10.固定句（主題點(diǎn)睛）：ThisexperiencetaughtJacksonthatsuccessisn’taboutavoidingfailure,butlearningtostandupeachtimeyoufall.解釋：點(diǎn)睛主題，總結(jié)Jackson的經(jīng)歷，突顯故事的深層次寓意——從失敗到成功的轉(zhuǎn)變。范文Withanew-founddetermination,Jacksontoldhimselfthatwinnersneverquit.AwaveofresolvesurgedthroughJacksonashereflectedonhispastdefeatsandvowedtopushforwardnomattertheobstacles.Hishandsstoppedtrembling,andhismindclearedasheremindedhimselfofthecountlesshoursofpracticethathadledhimtothismoment.Uponfacingthechessboardagain,Jacksonadjustedhisposture,focusedintently,andbegantoanalyzehisopponent'sstrategywithrenewedclarity.Hisopponent’seyeswerefixedonhim,butJacksonrefusedtobeintimidated,hisgazesteadyashemovedhispiececonfidently.Nosoonerhadhemadehisfirstmovethanhefeltasurgeofconfidence,andanewsenseofpurposefilledhiseverymove.Inthefinalmomentsofthegame,thepressurewasintense.Havingregainedcontrolofhisnerves,Jacksonfeltaquietconfidencegrowinginsidehim,realizingthatthiswashismomenttoshine.Theroomaroundhimseemedtofadeintothebackground,andallthatmatteredwasthegameinfront