讀后續(xù)寫+妮莎救援+講義 高三上學(xué)期期中Ⅱ考試英語試卷

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Neesha,an8-year-oldgoldenretriever,isaluckydog.Afterspendingafortnightonherownwithoutfoodorrealshelter,thetoughdogwasaccidentallyspottedbyacouple,whoinspiteofthecoldweather,werehikingtherangeandhappenedonher.Twoweeksearlier,Neesha’sownershadtakenherandtheirotherdog,aGermanshepherdnamedHarley,forsomeoutdoorexercise.Terrifiedbyadeer,bothdogstookoff.Harleyfoundhiswaybacktotheparkinglotthenextday,butNeeshadidnot.Thefamilymadeathoroughsearch.Theyleftalaundrybasketofunwashedclothingnearthespotwherethey’dlastseenNeeshaontheoffchancethatshe’dhomeinonthefamiliarsmellmarker.TheyeventurnedtotheInternetforhelpinfindingNeesha-buttherewasstillnosignofher.“Wepostedourexperienceonsocialmedia.Thenaweekendlater,wewerestilllookingforher.Wewerestartingtogiveuphope,”thepet’sownersMaryandherhusbandDavidtoldTheIrishTimes.Eventually,thefamilybegantoacceptthatNeeshamightnotbecominghome.“Wejustthoughtsheis8,andit’sbeentwoweeks.Therewasnowayshecouldsurvive.”DoctorsCiaraNolanandJeanFrancoisBonnetmustbetrulydedicatedhikers.TheybravedtheelementsonthefreezingdaywhenthecoupledecidedtoreachoneofWicklow’speaks.Astheynearedthetop,Nolanwasshockedtoseeadogtremblinginthesnow.“Shewasfrightened,freezingcold.Shedidn’thaveenoughenergytobarkorstand,”Bonnetsaidinaninterview.“Wetriedtogethertowalk,butshecouldn’tstand.Sowecoveredherwithourspareclothesandgavehersomefood.”注意1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________妮莎救援故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：著重描寫下山途中的艱難，如惡劣天氣加劇行走困難，Bonnet體力不支但仍堅(jiān)持。到達(dá)山下后，豐富救助細(xì)節(jié)，如描述Neesha在獸醫(yī)處的治療過程，醫(yī)生的囑咐等。第二段：深入刻畫主人與狗狗團(tuán)聚時(shí)的互動(dòng)，如主人回憶尋找時(shí)的艱辛，表達(dá)對(duì)狗狗的思念。以及狗狗回家后的生活，像與家中另一只狗狗Harley的重逢，展現(xiàn)家庭的溫暖。情感線起初，狗狗Neesha獨(dú)自在山中時(shí)恐懼、絕望。Bonnet和Nolan發(fā)現(xiàn)它時(shí)，它害怕又虛弱。救助過程中，隨著人們的關(guān)愛，它逐漸安心。主人Mary和David在尋找無果時(shí)，從滿懷希望到近乎絕望。得知Neesha被找到，他們驚喜、激動(dòng)，團(tuán)聚時(shí)滿是喜悅與感恩，最后一家人因這次經(jīng)歷更加珍惜彼此。故事線Bonnet背著Neesha下山時(shí)，狂風(fēng)大作，山路愈發(fā)難行，但他咬牙堅(jiān)持。到達(dá)山下，獸醫(yī)為Neesha輸液、檢查凍傷情況，囑咐保暖和營(yíng)養(yǎng)補(bǔ)充。Bonnet和Nolan聯(lián)系主人，告知Neesha的情況，主人激動(dòng)得語無倫次。主人趕到獸醫(yī)處，與Neesha相擁，回憶起尋找時(shí)的日夜煎熬。Neesha回家后，與Harley歡快玩耍，逐漸恢復(fù)往日活力。一家人將Neesha的照片和救援故事制作成相冊(cè)，紀(jì)念這段難忘經(jīng)歷。主旨升華句ThisheartwarmingrescueofNeesharemindsusthatinthefaceofharshnature,thepowerofhumankindnesscanbringhopeandwarmth,bridgingthegapbetweenhumansandanimals.（妮莎這次溫暖人心的救援提醒我們，在惡劣的自然面前，人類善良的力量能帶來希望和溫暖，拉近人與動(dòng)物之間的距離。）ThestoryofNeeshanotonlyshowcasestheunwaveringbondbetweenpetsandtheirownersbutalsohighlightstheselflessdedicationofstrangerswhoarewillingtogotogreatlengthstosavealife.（妮莎的故事不僅展示了寵物與主人之間堅(jiān)定不移的紐帶，還凸顯了陌生人無私奉獻(xiàn)，愿意竭盡全力拯救生命的精神。）ThroughNeesha'sjourneyfrombeinglosttobeingfound,welearnthathopeneverfades,andeveninthedarkestmoments,thereisalwaysachanceforahappyending.（通過妮莎從迷路到被找到的經(jīng)歷，我們明白希望永不磨滅，即使在最黑暗的時(shí)刻，也總有迎來美好結(jié)局的可能。）Thisincrediblerescueisatestamenttothefactthateverylife,nomatterhowsmallorseeminglyinsignificant,isprecious,andourcompassioncanmakeaprofounddifference.（這次令人難以置信的救援證明，每一個(gè)生命，無論多么渺小或看似微不足道，都是珍貴的，我們的同情心能產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響。）Neesha'sstoryservesasabeautifulreminderthattheloveandcareweextendtoanimalscancreatelastingmemoriesandstrengthenthespecialconnectionwesharewiththem.（妮莎的故事美好地提醒我們，我們給予動(dòng)物的愛與關(guān)懷能創(chuàng)造永恒的回憶，加強(qiáng)我們與它們之間特殊的聯(lián)系。）寫作示范一第一段BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Thewindhowled,andthesnow-coveredtrailwastreacherous.Bonnet'slegsached,buthisdeterminationtosaveNeeshaneverwavered.Nolanheldaflashlight,lightingthewayandconstantlyencouragingBonnet.Whentheyfinallyreachedthefootofthemountain,theyrushedNeeshatothevet.Thevet,withaworriedlook,immediatelystartedanIVdriptowarmherupandexaminedherfrost-bittenpaws.Hecarefullybandagedthewoundsandprescribedspecialfoodtohelpherregainstrength.第二段MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.Theyspedtothevet's,theirheartspoundingwithexcitement.AssoonastheysawNeeshalyingonthetable,Maryrushedforwardandhuggedhergently,tearsstreamingdownherface.DavidthankedBonnetandNolanoverandoveragain.Neesha,thoughweak,lickedMary'shandaffectionately.Backhome,NeeshawasgreetedbyHarleywithenthusiasticbarksandtail-wagging.Inthefollowingdays,Neesharecoveredquickly,andthefamilyoftenlookedbackonthisexperience,gratefulforthekindnessofstrangersandthehappyreunion.寫作示范二第一段BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Thesnowwasgettingheavier,andBonnet'sstepsbecameunsteady.Nolansupportedhimfromtheside,makingsuretheydidn'tslip.TheytalkedtoNeeshaalltheway,tryingtokeepherspiritsup.Onceatthevet's,thevetcleanedNeesha'smattedfur,removedthethornsfromherpaws,andgaveherathoroughcheck-up.HetoldBonnetandNolanthatNeeshawasluckytohavebeenfoundintime.BonnetthencalledMaryandDavid,hisvoicefilledwithexcitementashesharedthegoodnews.第二段MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.Theyarrivedatthevet'sinahurry.MarykneltdownbesideNeesha,strokingherheadandsayinghowmuchtheyhadmissedher.DavidshookBonnetandNolan'shandsfirmly,expressinghisgratitude.Neesha'seyessparkledwithhappiness.Athome,Neeshasoonregainedherenergy.SheplayedwithHarleyinthebackyardeveryday,andthefamilydecidedtoorganizeasmallpartytothankBonnetandNolan.Thisrescuestorybecameasourceofwarmthandinspirationforeveryoneinvolved.【參考答案】BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Intheslipperyandicyconditions,theystumbledandfellseveraltimes,yetBonnetneverthoughtofgivingup.Instead,hecameupwithacleverideaandwrappedNeeshatightlyinascarftomakesureshewouldn’tslipoff.Oncetheyfinallyreachedthelevelground,NolanandBonnetwastednotimeintakingthepoordogstraighttothenearestanimalrescuestation.Despitebeingextremelyweak,asidefromafewminorcutsandscrapes,Neeshawasinrelativelygoodcon