讀后續(xù)寫艾瑪編織幫助無家可歸者講義-遼寧省沈陽市沈陽市郊聯(lián)體高二上學(xué)期11月期中英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IntheheartofthebusycityofAvonlea,wherethesoundsofrushingcarsneverceased,livedsixteenyearoldEmma.Unlikeherclassmates,whowereoftenkeenonthelatesttechnology,Emmahadapreferenceforknitting(編織).Emma’sloveforknittingwasdeeplyinfluencedbyhermother,whopossessedaskilledandcreativetouchwithneedles.Hermother’spassionforknittingandgenerousspiritofhelpingothersalwaysinspiredEmmatofollowinherfootstepsandtakeupknittingasameaningfulhobby.Emmawasreallygoodatknitting.Shelikedtomakescarves,gloves,hatsandminibagsforherfriendsaswellasherrelatives.Herhatswerecreatedinavarietyofstylesandcolors,eachoneuniqueandfullofpersonality.Whetheritwasaminibagoraclassicscarf,eachknittingworkwasacarefullycraftedmasterpieceandauniquegiftfullofloveandwarmth.Withbeautyandpracticality,Emma’screationsneverfailedtoimpress.Onefreezingmorninginthepeakofwinter,thecityhadjustbeenblanketedbyasnowstormthathadleftmany,particularlythehomeless,indesperatesituation.AsEmmamadeherwaytoschool,shenoticedashakingfigureunderthebridgenearherschool.Itwasahomelessmansheoftensawonherroute,buttodayhelookedparticularlymiserable(可憐的).Hisfacewashalfhiddenunderapieceofworncloththathardlyservedasprotectionagainstthecold.Touchedbythesight,Emmadecidedtopresentherscarftothehomelessman.Sheapproached,handingthescarftohim.“Forme?”themanasked,hiseyeswidenedwithsurprise.“Yes!Ithoughtitmighthelpwiththecold,”Emmasaid,herbreathvisibleinthecoldair.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Themanwrappedthescarfaroundhisneck,instantlyfeelingabitwarmer.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LedbyEmma,KnitsforHopeClubwasstartedinherschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________艾瑪編織幫助無家可歸者續(xù)寫要點第一段：著重描寫流浪漢收到圍巾后的反應(yīng)，如臉上露出驚喜、感激的神情，用顫抖的聲音表達感謝，可能還會回憶自己艱難的日子，感慨這份溫暖的珍貴。艾瑪看到流浪漢的反應(yīng)，內(nèi)心充滿溫暖和滿足，開始思考如何幫助更多人，進而萌生成立編織俱樂部的想法。第二段：主要講述艾瑪在學(xué)校成立“希望編織俱樂部”的過程。起初向同學(xué)們提出想法時，可能會遭遇質(zhì)疑和不理解，有人覺得編織過時，有人認為這是浪費時間。但艾瑪耐心地分享自己的經(jīng)歷和感受，展示編織作品的溫暖與意義，最終打動了一些同學(xué)，大家一起為幫助無家可歸者努力，俱樂部逐漸發(fā)展壯大。情感線艾瑪一開始看到流浪漢的悲慘境遇，心中滿是同情與不忍，將圍巾送出時，帶著純粹的善意?？吹搅骼藵h收到圍巾后的驚喜與感激，艾瑪內(nèi)心被溫暖和成就感填滿，由此激發(fā)了想要幫助更多人的強烈愿望。在學(xué)校成立俱樂部時，面對同學(xué)的質(zhì)疑，她有過焦慮和自我懷疑，但憑借堅定的信念和對幫助他人的執(zhí)著，最終收獲同學(xué)們的支持，內(nèi)心充滿喜悅與自豪，情感在這個過程中不斷升華。故事線贈送圍巾：艾瑪在上學(xué)路上看到被凍得瑟瑟發(fā)抖的流浪漢，心生憐憫，將自己親手編織的圍巾送給了他。流浪漢的反應(yīng)：流浪漢又驚又喜，對艾瑪表達了誠摯的感謝，他的反應(yīng)讓艾瑪意識到自己的善舉能帶來巨大影響。萌生想法：艾瑪受到觸動，決定做更多幫助他人的事，腦海中冒出成立編織俱樂部的想法。成立俱樂部：艾瑪回到學(xué)校，向同學(xué)們提出成立編織俱樂部的想法，雖遭遇質(zhì)疑，但她努力說服大家。俱樂部發(fā)展：越來越多的同學(xué)加入俱樂部，大家一起學(xué)習(xí)編織，制作各種保暖物品。幫助他人：俱樂部將編織好的圍巾、手套等物品分發(fā)給城市里的無家可歸者，為他們送去溫暖。主旨升華句Emma'sactofkindnessnotonlybroughtwarmthtothehomelessmanbutalsoinspiredawaveofpassion,showingthatasinglesmallactcanhaveafarreachingimpact.（艾瑪?shù)纳婆e不僅給流浪漢帶來了溫暖，還激發(fā)了一波同情心，表明一個小小的舉動就能產(chǎn)生深遠的影響。）ThroughtheestablishmentoftheKnitsforHopeClub,weseethatunityandashareddesiretohelpotherscanturnsimpleactsofkindnessintoapowerfulforceforgood.（通過“希望編織俱樂部”的成立，我們看到團結(jié)和共同幫助他人的愿望能將簡單的善舉轉(zhuǎn)化為強大的正能量。）Thisstoryremindsusthatinthefaceofothers'needs,weshouldneverhesitatetoreachout,foroursmalleffortscanlightupthelivesofthoseinthedark.（這個故事提醒我們，面對他人的需求，我們不應(yīng)猶豫伸出援手，因為我們的小小努力能照亮那些身處黑暗中的人的生活。）Emma'sjourneyfromasimpleactofgivingtoleadingamunitywideefforttohelpthehomelessdemonstratesthepowerofperseveranceandthelimitlesspotentialwithineachofustomakeadifference.（艾瑪從一次簡單的給予行為，到帶領(lǐng)大家共同努力幫助無家可歸者，這一歷程展示了堅持的力量以及我們每個人都擁有的改變世界的無限潛力。）ThesuccessoftheKnitsforHopeClubshowsthatwhenwebineourskillsandhearts,wecancreateamorecaringandpassionateworld,oneknitteditematatime.（“希望編織俱樂部”的成功表明，當我們將技能與愛心結(jié)合起來時，我們就能一次用一件編織品，創(chuàng)造一個更關(guān)愛他人、更富有同情心的世界。）寫作示范一Themanwrappedthescarfaroundhisneck,instantlyfeelingabitwarmer.Awidesmilespreadacrosshisweatherbeatenface,andhiseyesglistenedwithgratitude.“Thankyou,younglady.You'vesavedmefromthecoldtoday,”hesaid,hisvoicechokedwithemotion.Emma'sheartswelledwithjoy,realizinghowasimpleactcouldbringsomuchfort.Onherwaytoschool,shekeptthinkingabouthowmanymorepeoplewereinneedlikethisman.Anideapoppedintoherhead:startingaknittingclubtohelpthem.LedbyEmma,KnitsforHopeClubwasstartedinherschool.Atfirst,someclassmatesthoughtitwasoldfashionedandtimeconsuming.ButEmmapatientlysharedherexperienceandthewarmthitbroughttothehomelessman.Gradually,moreandmorestudentsjoined.Theylearnedknittingtogether,andsoonpilesofscarves,hatsandglovesweremade.Theseitemswerethensenttosheltersacrossthecity,bringingwarmthtothoseinneed.Theclubbecameasymbolofloveandhopeintheschool.寫作示范二Themanwrappedthescarfaroundhisneck,instantlyfeelingabitwarmer.Hishandsgentlystrokedthesoftscarf,andhelookedatEmmawithalookofdeepappreciation.“Ihaven'tfeltthiswarminalongtime.Godblessyou,”hemurmured.Emmafeltawarmglowinherchest,andsheknewshehadtodomore.Asshewalkedtoschool,shedecidedtostartaclubtomakemoreknitteditemsforthehomeless.LedbyEmma,KnitsforHopeClubwasstartedinherschool.Whenshefirstproposedtheidea,somestudentswereskeptical.However,Emmadidn'tgiveup.Sheshowedthempicturesofthehomelessandtheimpactascarfcouldhave.Eventually,manystudentsweremovedandjoinedtheclub.Theyspenttheirsparetimeknitting,chattingandlaughingtogether.Beforelong,theyorganizedabigdonationevent,distributingtheirhandmadeitemstothehomelessalloverthecity,spreadingloveandwarmtheverywheretheywent.【參考答案】Themanwrappedthescarfaroundhisneck,instantlyfeelingabitwarmer.“Thankyou.Youareanangel,“hemurmured,aglimmerofsmileingtohisdrylips.Hegrabbedthescarftightly,hiseyesshiningwithhappytears.Inthatmoment,Emmarealizedwhatshepresentedwasnotjustascarfbutalsoasignofhope.Inspired,shedeterminedtobringthatsparkofhopetomorepeople.Anideasuddenlypoppedintoherheadthatshec