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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itallstartedwiththegift.AfewmonthsbeforeIbegancollege,myparentssurprisedmewiththeonethingeveryyoungadultdesires:abrandnewlaptop.Thatsummer,Iwasglued(全神貫注于)tothescreen,livinginadigitalworld.Ispenthoursonsocialmedia,chattingwithfriends,andignoringtherealonearoundme.Iwasmoreconcernedwiththevirtualinteractionsthantheactualpeopleandplacesaroundme.Beingonlinewasmoreimportantthananythingelse.So,whenIheardmydad’splanforourfamilyvacationthatyear,Iwaslessthanthrilled.“Thisyear,”heannounced,“we’regoingtotrysomethingdifferent.We’regoingtoafarm.”Afarmwasn’tmyidealvacation,butitwasstillabreakfromtheroutine.Iwentthroughthepackingupandplanning,barelylisteningtotheinstructions.Mymindwaselsewhere,ontheInternet,wheremyconversationsneverstopped.IwassoabsorbedinmydigitalworldthatthefirsttimeIreallypaidattentiontotherealworldwaswhenwegettoourdestination—aremotefarm.Istaredoutthewindowtoseethebreathtakingviewsoutside.Theaircomingthroughtheopenwindowswaswarmandcarriedthefreshsmelloftheforest.Buttheviewwasn’twhatcaughtmyattention.ThemomentIgotoffthecar,Irushedintothefarmhouse.TherealshockcamewhenItriedtocheckmye-mailandfoundthatIhadnoInternetconnection.“WehavenoWi-Fihere”aboysaidsoftly.Hemightbetheoldestofthe3kidsonthefarm.Ilookedathim,toodepressedtosayanything.Mylaptopwouldbecompletelyuseless.Iwouldliveinthewildernessforaweekwithnowaytoconnecttotheonlineworld.Iwasclosetotears,afraidoftheboredomIhadtotolerateinthecomingdays.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Earlynextmorning,theboyscametoinvitemetobreakfast._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Surprisingly,Ineverthoughtofmylaptopthatweek.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________農(nóng)場(chǎng)度假經(jīng)歷續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)?第一段:著重描寫(xiě)“我”在男孩邀請(qǐng)下參與農(nóng)場(chǎng)活動(dòng)的過(guò)程,如在田間勞作、與動(dòng)物互動(dòng)等細(xì)節(jié),展現(xiàn)“我”從抵觸到逐漸接受的轉(zhuǎn)變。?第二段:突出“我”在農(nóng)場(chǎng)一周的整體感受,包括夜晚的休閑時(shí)光、與農(nóng)場(chǎng)家人的深入交流,以及離開(kāi)時(shí)的不舍與收獲。?情感線?起初因無(wú)網(wǎng)絡(luò)而沮喪、抵觸農(nóng)場(chǎng)生活。?在參與農(nóng)場(chǎng)活動(dòng)中,逐漸被新奇體驗(yàn)吸引,情緒轉(zhuǎn)為好奇與投入。?隨著與農(nóng)場(chǎng)家人相處,感受到溫暖與快樂(lè),體會(huì)到現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的美好。?離開(kāi)時(shí),對(duì)農(nóng)場(chǎng)充滿不舍,意識(shí)到此次經(jīng)歷的珍貴。?故事線?男孩邀請(qǐng)“我”吃早餐,“我”不情愿地起床。?早餐時(shí)被農(nóng)場(chǎng)家庭氛圍感染,心情稍有轉(zhuǎn)變。?跟隨男孩在農(nóng)場(chǎng)勞作,從笨拙到熟練,獲得成就感。?夜晚與農(nóng)場(chǎng)家人圍坐篝火,分享歡樂(lè)時(shí)光。?一周過(guò)去,即將離開(kāi)時(shí),“我”對(duì)農(nóng)場(chǎng)生活戀戀不舍。?回到家后,“我”時(shí)?;貞涋r(nóng)場(chǎng)經(jīng)歷,改變了對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)和現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的態(tài)度。?主旨升華句?Thisfarmexperienceopenedmyeyestotherichnessofreal-worldconnections,showingmethattruehappinessliesnotinthedigitalrealmbutinthesimplejoysofnatureandhumaninteraction.?這次農(nóng)場(chǎng)經(jīng)歷讓我看到了現(xiàn)實(shí)世界聯(lián)系的豐富性,向我表明真正的幸福不在于數(shù)字領(lǐng)域,而在于大自然和人際交往的簡(jiǎn)單快樂(lè)。?Theweekonthefarmtaughtmethatdisconnectingfromtechnologycanleadtoadeeperconnectionwiththeworldaroundus,filledwithbeauty,warmth,andunforgettablememories.?在農(nóng)場(chǎng)的這一周讓我明白,與科技斷開(kāi)連接可以讓我們與周?chē)氖澜缃⒏羁痰穆?lián)系,這個(gè)世界充滿了美麗、溫暖和難忘的回憶。?Icametorealizethatthevirtualworld,thoughalluring,palesincomparisontothevibrantandfulfillingexperiencesthattherealworldhastooffer.?我開(kāi)始意識(shí)到,虛擬世界雖然誘人,但與現(xiàn)實(shí)世界所能提供的充滿活力和令人滿足的體驗(yàn)相比,就相形見(jiàn)絀了。?Thisvacationwasnotjustabreakfrommydigitalroutine;itwasalife-changingjourneythattaughtmetocherishthepresentmomentandthepeopleandplacesrightinfrontofme.?這次假期不僅僅是我從數(shù)字日常中的一次休息,更是一次改變?nèi)松穆贸?,它教?huì)我珍惜當(dāng)下以及眼前的人和地方。?ThefarmbecameahavenwhereIlearnedthevalueofsimplicity,patience,andthepowerofgenuinerelationships,leavinganindeliblemarkonmyheart.?這個(gè)農(nóng)場(chǎng)成為了一個(gè)避風(fēng)港,在那里我學(xué)到了簡(jiǎn)單、耐心的價(jià)值以及真摯關(guān)系的力量,在我心中留下了不可磨滅的印記。?寫(xiě)作示范一?Earlynextmorning,theboyscametoinvitemetobreakfast.Withaheavyheart,Igotup,stillmourningthelossofmyonlineworld.However,asIjoinedthematthetable,theheartylaughterandthemouth-wateringaromaofhomemadebreadmademerelaxabit.Afterthemeal,theytookmetothefields.Atfirst,Istruggledtoplantseedscorrectly,buttheirkindencouragementhelpedmeimprove.Wealsotookcareofthesheep,andIwasamazedathowsofttheirwoolwas.Asthedaywentby,Ifoundmyselfenjoyingthesenewexperiences.?Surprisingly,Ineverthoughtofmylaptopthatweek.Eachdaywasfilledwithnewadventures.Intheevenings,wegatheredaroundthefireplace,sharingtalesofourlives.Thewarmglowoneveryone'sfacecreatedacozyatmosphere.IrealizedhowmuchIhadmissedbybeinggluedtothescreen.Whenitwastimetoleave,Ifeltalumpinmythroat.Thisfarmvacationhadtransformedme.Inowunderstoodthatreal-lifeconnectionswerefarmorevaluablethanvirtualones.Ileftwithaheartfullofgratitudeandanewperspectiveonlife.?寫(xiě)作示范二?Earlynextmorning,theboyscametoinvitemetobreakfast.IwasstillgrumpyabouttheWi-Fisituation,butIfollowedthemanyway.Atthetable,thefriendlychatterofthefarmfamilymademeforgetmyworriesforawhile.Afterbreakfast,theyledmetothechickencoop.Iwasscaredatfirst,butsoonIwaslaughingasIcollectedeggs.Thenwewenttotheorchardtopickfruits.Iwasclumsyatfirst,butwithpractice,Ibecamebetter.Thesenseofachievementwasoverwhelming.?Surprisingly,Ineverthoughtofmylaptopthatweek.Everymomentonthefarmwasfilledwithexcitement.Atnight,wesatunderthestarrysky,singingsongsandsharingjokes.Thestarsseemedbrighterthanever.IcametounderstandthattherealworldheldsomuchmorethanIhadimagined.Whenourvacationended,Ididn'twanttoleave.Thistriphadtaughtmetheimportanceofbeingpresentandenjoyingthebeautyofnatureandhumanconnection.Icouldn'twaittobringthisnew-foundwisdombacktomydailylife.參考答案Earlynextmorning,theboyscametoinvitemetobreakfast.Iwassurprisedtoseethattheyhadnotjustfishandchipslikemethedaybefore,butadecentbreakfastofeggs,toastandjam.Ilaterlearnedtheoldestboy’snamewasBenandtheyoungerboywashisbrother,Matt.
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