2025屆高三英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作：學(xué)生考試作弊(八省八校聯(lián)考：應(yīng)用文) （告知+建議）課件

魚(yú)八省八校聯(lián)考：應(yīng)用文（告知+建議）【2024八省八校聯(lián)考】應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作：第一節(jié)（滿分15分）假定你是李華，在外教課期末考試中發(fā)現(xiàn)有人作弊，你認(rèn)為這會(huì)影響考試公平。請(qǐng)你給外教John寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.

情況描述；2.

你的看法；3.

你的請(qǐng)求。注意：1.

寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。段落安排Para.1問(wèn)候+背景+目的Para.2描述考試中的作弊情況+這種問(wèn)題導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果+提出請(qǐng)求/建議Para.3表達(dá)祝愿和期盼

思路梳理：要點(diǎn)分析考試作弊往前尋：原因/背景

往后探：結(jié)果往下找：請(qǐng)求/建議

往上看：請(qǐng)求/建議產(chǎn)生的預(yù)期效果

1.個(gè)人懶惰2.沒(méi)有自信3.學(xué)習(xí)壓力4.……1.影響考試的公平性2.加劇學(xué)生作弊的現(xiàn)象1.作弊學(xué)生成績(jī)作廢2.作弊學(xué)生給予一定的懲罰3.提高同學(xué)們誠(chéng)信考試的意識(shí)1.幫助同學(xué)們正視考試的公平性與嚴(yán)肅性2.創(chuàng)作更好的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境作弊情況描述：交換、傳遞答案用電子設(shè)備作弊

要點(diǎn)分析

寫(xiě)作時(shí)需注意的要點(diǎn):1.和外教交流并且是反映問(wèn)題，存在文化差異，語(yǔ)氣應(yīng)當(dāng)

委婉、誠(chéng)懇，確保交際得體(語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的得體性);2.分析的問(wèn)題不能浮于表面，要具體、切中要點(diǎn);3.提出的建議要與分析的問(wèn)題相對(duì)應(yīng)，以增強(qiáng)說(shuō)服力;4.提出的建議要合理、可操作、有建設(shè)性。Para.

1：Hopemyemailfindsyouwell

!

1.I’mLiHua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingtoreportanincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessedduringthefinalexam.向某人講述某事reportsth.tosb./recountsth.tosb./relaysth.tosb.

2.Asoneofyourstudents,Iconsideritmydutytopointoutthedishonestbehaviorsduringourfinalexam.honest/honesty/dishonest/dishonesty

組織語(yǔ)言informyouofadisappointingthingthatIspotted...Para.

2:

情況描述+個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)

邏輯清晰，層層遞進(jìn) 情況1：電子設(shè)備作弊R(shí)egrettably,Inoticedastudentseatednexttomeengageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam.Hesecretlytookoutanelectronicdevicehiddeninhissleeveandsearchedfortheanswer.情況2：互傳紙條作弊WhatIwitnessedwasthattwostudentsseatedinfrontofme,inanattempttoattainhighergrades,exchangedanswersbywritingthemdownonapieceofpaperandcastittoeachothersecretly.情況3：攜帶小抄作弊Whatmademeirritatedwasthatastudentsittinginfrontofmebroughtacheetsheet(小抄)andsecretlycopiedtheansweronhistestpaper.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：影響考試的公平性Inmyopinion,cheatingintheexamhasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairnessoftheexam.exert/exerciseanadverse/damaging/devastating/severe/negativeimpactontheoverallfairness/justiceoftheexam.作弊學(xué)生有優(yōu)勢(shì)，對(duì)刻苦努力勤奮學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生不公平Studentswhocheatedon/intheexaminationhaveanunfairadvantageoverotherstudents,whichisnotfairon/tootherstudents,whohaveinvestedalotoftimeandenergyintheirstudy.學(xué)生作弊違反了學(xué)校關(guān)于考試的相關(guān)規(guī)定Studentswhocheatedintheexam,violatedtheexam-relatedregulations,whichmayunderminethefairnessoftheexamandleadtodamagingconsequences.加劇學(xué)生作弊的現(xiàn)象，導(dǎo)致不好的學(xué)習(xí)氛圍Studentswhocheatedintheexammaysetabadexampletootherstudents,misleadingthemintofollowingtheirexample/lead,whichmaypoison/ruin/spoiltheacademicatmosphere.Para.

2:

提出請(qǐng)求/建議

禮貌原則

具體建議+好處

作弊學(xué)生考試作廢Toguaranteethefairnessofthetestandthefavorableacademicatmosphere,itisabettterchoiceto

canclethetestscoresofthecheatersandreemphasizetheimportanceofthetest.給予作弊考生一定的懲罰Appropriate/Fittingpunishmentisexpectedtobeimposedonthecheaterssoastoassistthemtorealizetheseriousnessoftheirmistakeaswellascultivatetheirawareness

ofmaintaininghonestyintheexam.提高同學(xué)們誠(chéng)信考試的意識(shí)Itisabrilliantideatogivealectueonthethemeof“HonestyinExams”toheighten/raise/increasestudents’awarenessofitandenablethemtoappreciatethedamaging/devastatingconsequencesofdishonestbehavioursinexams.委婉提建議的句型的使用：Woulditpossibleto...?Woulditbehelpfulto...?…wouldbeabetterchoice.…neverfailstobeabrilliantidea.Tips:Para.3語(yǔ)氣委婉，再次表達(dá)希望老師考慮自己訴求的期盼。1.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Lookingforwardtoyourfavorablereply.2.Itismysincerehopethatyouwilltakethismatterintoseriousaccount.Inanticipationofyourearliestreply.3.Idogenuinelyhopethat...

DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?It’sdefinitelytruethattheEnglishfinalexamhasabsolutelycompleted,buttherewereabitofquestionswithregardtothetest.Asforthefinalexam,whatcalledmyspecialattentionwasthatafewstudentsneglectedelementaryprincipleandcheatedbygesturingtheirhandsandglancingatothers’answer.Ithinkthathonestyandjusticeareoftheutmostimportancewheneveryoneencountersformalexamination.Toguaranteethefairnessofthetestandthefavorableacademicatmosphere,itisabettterchoicetocanclethetestscoresofthecheatersandreemphasizetheimportanceofthetest.Iwouldextremelyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemywordsintoconsideration.Yours,LiHuaextremely

參考范文總評(píng)：結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)清晰，用詞豐富，句式多樣。開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山問(wèn)題描述準(zhǔn)確，自己觀點(diǎn)表述精準(zhǔn)，緊跟個(gè)人建議再次陳述訴求，用詞委婉DearJohn,I’mwriting

to

express

myconcern

abouttheEnglishthefinalexam,duringwhichI

foundsomeonecheating.ItwasattheendoftheexamthatIsawsomeoneconveyinganswerstoanotherpersonanddelivering

asmall

papertohim.No

wordsarestrongenoughtoexpresshow

astonishedandirritatedIwas.

Frommypointofview,it’s

hardtooverstatethesignificanceoffairnessinexam.If

we

justturnablindeyetosuchimmoralbehavior,notonly

will

it

influencetheexamconsequence,butalsoharmotherstudents’

interests.Therefore,I

wanttorequestyoutocanceltheirgrades.Ihopethatyoucouldtakemyhumbleopinioninto

consideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Yours,LiHua

參考范文開(kāi)篇陳述問(wèn)題從問(wèn)題陳述、個(gè)人看法，到請(qǐng)求均表述準(zhǔn)確，清晰再次陳述訴求，用詞委婉DearJohn,I’mwritingtoyouinthehopethatyouwillbesokindastodealwiththeterriblephenomenonaboutcheating,whichIspottedinthefinalexamination.Glancingatitbriefly,Ispotted