2024年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫15大技能（15份打包）

備戰(zhàn)2024年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫15大技能(15份打

包)

專題09讀后續(xù)寫之積極和消極寫景烘托

一、關(guān)鍵詞

(1)

blow吹

howl咆哮

crash碰撞

stir攪動(dòng)

darken使變黑

envelope信封，包裹

gloomy陰郁的

dip蘸

pour潑

sunshine/sunlight陽(yáng)光

breeze微風(fēng)

dim昏暗的

faint微弱的

winding蜿蜒的

frighten是某人害怕

chilling寒冷的

thunder雷，打雷

lightening閃電

frosty寒冷的

melt融化

二、常用短語

bebathedin沐浴在

amber-likesunshine琥珀色的陽(yáng)光

stretchoff延伸

涼爽清新的風(fēng)coolandrefreshingbreeze

落日thesettingsun

strolldownthestreet在街上漫步

thefirstrayofsunlight第一縷陽(yáng)光

floodinto涌入

gentlebreeze微風(fēng)

多雨的季節(jié)arainyseason

暴風(fēng)雨之夜astormynight

在茫茫大雨中intheblindingrain

在春天溫暖的陽(yáng)光里

inthewarmspringsunshine

難以忍受的熱unbearablehot

放晴了clearup

木日光浴batheinthesunshine

一個(gè)偏僻的小村莊

asmallvillageoffthemap

離海濱僅咫尺之遙

bedottedwith點(diǎn)綴著

三、各種場(chǎng)景描寫片段賞析

（一）陽(yáng)光明媚，生命美好，心情愉，兌的景色描寫

Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff（延伸）tothehorizon,

slowlynarrowingtonothingness（虛無），onlytore-emerge

（重新出現(xiàn)）againonyourleft.

WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltlikethe

amber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.

Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.

太陽(yáng)下山，溫和的光線落在肩頭。

WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.陽(yáng)

光傾斜而入

Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天

氣晴朗，碧空里星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的云雀在翩翩起舞。

Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilver

liningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛藍(lán)色的天空和成群飄

動(dòng)的金色云朵所吸引了。

Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimming

inbroadocean.

Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesofthe

weepingwillowlikeacurtain.一陣風(fēng)吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條,

就像那卷起的窗簾。

Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesand

stirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、點(diǎn)綴）theslope.風(fēng)，

輕柔而清冷，輕點(diǎn)這樹枝，攪動(dòng)著斜坡下的零星灌木叢。

Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerof

thepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcool

breeze.Howsweet!

ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbright

andfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.

Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.The

airwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,

beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlooked

beautiful.

（二）暴風(fēng)驟雨、心情抑郁的景色描寫

12.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,（烏

云密布、黑云壓頂）andthewholeworldseemedtobeenveloped

inahugegrayquilt.整個(gè)世界仿佛都被一塊巨大的灰色棉被籠罩。

13.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygray

cloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon（蒼白昏暗的月亮）.

14.Thefrostyair（寒冷的空氣）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.

15.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一陣陣寒

風(fēng)刺痛他們的臉頰cStung的原形為sting“叮咬”

16.Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswith

asighingsound.嘆息的聲音

17.Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂

18.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy（陰

郁的），atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofglcom.

Acoldstormyrainsetin（陰冷的暴風(fēng)雨襲來），andnothingof

Julyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木叢）,whichthe

windwasdespoiling（摧殘）,andthelengthoftheday,whichonly

madesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白晝的延長(zhǎng)可以讓

人多瞧一瞧這凄冷的景象）

（三）煩悶焦躁的景色描寫

19.It'shotenoughtomelthell.天熱得能融化地獄。

20.Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybecomesheavy.Ithangs

overthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,

andsitsonmyshoulders.整日悶熱的空氣變得格外呆滯。它籠罩

著樹木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也壓得我的肩頭沉甸甸的。

（四）凄風(fēng)苦雨、狂風(fēng)暴雨、恐懼陰冷害怕的景色描寫

21.Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashing

andthewindswerehowling（嚎叫）.

22.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthe

windsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨傾盆，洪流暴漲，狂

風(fēng)肆意沖擊房屋。

23.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltrees

ontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhe

sky（閃電在空中持續(xù)亂舞）.

24.Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling（寒冷的細(xì)

雨），andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）puffs

（一陣陣小風(fēng)）int，oasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir

（活動(dòng)的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉悶地）and

silentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands

（踹口袋里的手）.

消極與積極場(chǎng)景：

（一）細(xì)節(jié)描述之describeapeacefulscene”

1.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltlikethe

amber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.（沐浴

在陽(yáng)光下；琥珀色的陽(yáng)光親吻著全身的肌膚）

2.Mist-coveredmountainsweredottedwithsmallfarmsand

villages.（點(diǎn)綴著）

3.Thesoundofmyfootstepswasaccompaniedonlybythe

gracefullywavingreeds.（優(yōu)雅地隨風(fēng)飄揚(yáng)的蘆葦）

（二）細(xì)節(jié)描述之udescribestormyweatherH

1.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds.（烏

云密布；黑云壓頂）

2.Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashing

andthewindswerehowling.（海浪肆意拍打;勁風(fēng)咆哮）

3.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthe

windsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.（暴風(fēng)驟雨）

（三）Goodsettingdescriptionforappreciation（佳"景”

賞析）

1.Thehousesmelledmustyanddamp,andalittlesweet,

asifitwerehauntedbytheghostsoflong-deadcookies.

2.Thesunkeptdippingdownintotheoceanandthelights

cameonattheharbor,castingsuddenshadowsontheground,

illuminatingthefacesthatwerejustasecondagosilhouettes.

Theskywasgoldenandpurple,theoceanadarkershadeofviclet.

3.Thesunhadset,butafaintpastelhazelingeredinthe

mid-summersky.

4.Theyrolledupthepath,treebranchesrakingthe

windshieldlikeangrywardens.

5.Outside,theairfilledwithcricketnoise,asthesun

reddenedinitsdescent.

6.Arestaurantoverlookingastarlitnightsprangtomy

imaginationlikesomethingoutofanilluminatedmanuscript

fromthelateMiddleAges.

7.Themoonwentslowlydowninloveliness；shedeparted

intothedepthofthehorizon,andlongveil-likeshadowscrept

uptheskythroughwhichthestarsappeared.

8.Allbrightnesswasgone,leavingnothing.Westeppedout

ofthetentontonothing.Sledgeandtentwerethere,Estraven

stoodbesideme,butneitherhenorIcastanyshadow.There

wasdulllightallaround,everywhere.Whenwewalkedonthe

crispsnownoshadowshowedthefootprint.Weleftnotrack.

Sledge,tent,himself,myself：nothingelseatall.Nosun,no

sky,nohorizon,noworld.

9.Nighthadfallenfastupontheland.Nomorethananhour

agotheskywaspaintedwithhuesofred,orangeandpink,but

allcolorhadfadedleavingonlyamattblackcanvaswithno

starstobelookedupon.

10.Itwouldbeacoldmoonlessnight.Theskywasdarkand

low,theairsochilledithurttobreathe.Alreadythegrcund

waslaidwhitewithfrostandanywaterthathadbeenliquid

underthewintersunhadbecomeice.

（四）自然景觀描寫：

1.Weusedtoliveinabeautifulvillage,andtherewere

treesandflowersandgreengrass,andtheairwassosweet.

我們以前住在一個(gè)漂亮的村舍里，那里樹很多，還有花花草草，

連空氣都是甜的。

2.Thesightofalargecornfieldinthelatterpartof

summer,withallitsgreenbannersv/avinganditstasseled

plumesnodding,isonetoadmire,andnottobeforgotten.

盛夏時(shí)節(jié)，一望無際的玉米地，綠色的葉子像旗幟一樣迎風(fēng)飛舞，

抽穗的包谷隨風(fēng)點(diǎn)頭，這是多么賞心悅目而又令人難忘的景色??！

3.Inthespringitsbranchesarecoveredwithbunchesof

creamyflowers,

春天里，栗子樹的枝干上開滿了一簇簇奶油般的花朵。

4.Beforethis,hehadlivedinawarmcountry,wherethe

sunshinesdownonbeautifulorangegroves,andfieldsalways

sweetwithflowers.在這之前，他一直住在一個(gè)天氣暖和的鄉(xiāng)村。

在那里，陽(yáng)光灑滿美麗的滿是橘子的山坡，田野里到處是芳香撲鼻的

鮮花。

5.Lastnight,thecoldnorthwindblewgreatsnowclcuds

overthesky.Notastar,notabitofblueskycouldbeseen.

昨天夜里，北風(fēng)呼嘯，烏云密布?？床灰娨活w星星，整個(gè)天空也不見

一絲藍(lán)色。

6.Itiswinter.Thecoldwindwhistlesthroughthebranches

ofthetrees.

正值冬季，寒風(fēng)呼嘯著吹過樹枝。

7.Johnnylookedthroughtheglass.Therelaythepure,

featherysnowflakelikealovelylittlestar.

喬尼透過玻璃看著雪花，那片純潔輕柔的雪花就像一顆可爰的小

星星。

8.Soonthetinyflakesfloatedsoftlydown,likeflecks

oflittlewhitebirds.

不久，小小的雪花靜悄悄地飄落下來，就像一群白色的小鳥。

9.Thesunmusthavebeenpleasedwithwhathesaw,forhe

smiledsuchabright,sweetsmile,thatthewholewhitewcrld

sparkledasifitweremadeoflittlestars.太陽(yáng)一定對(duì)雪花們

的作品非常滿意，因?yàn)樗Φ萌绱藸N爛和甜蜜。整個(gè)潔白的世界閃閃

發(fā)光，就像一顆顆小星星在眨眼睛。

（五）早中晚場(chǎng)景舉例：

早上：（部分描寫也可用于其它時(shí)間）

1.Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.

2.Thefirstrayofsunlightistoofragiletotouch.

3.Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthe

sunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.

4.Thewholeworldblossomswithonebreathofthesunshine.

5.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranches

ofoldtrees.

雪覆蓋了每一個(gè)屋頂，壓在老樹枝上，

6.Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscold

underfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthat

I'mthere.潮濕的地面走起來很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。鳥兒們

在我周圍忙碌著，不關(guān)心我在那兒。

7.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,

envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.——股濃郁的泥土

般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。

8.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.

陽(yáng)光傾斜而入.

9.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrant

flowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iam

totallydrunkwiththetwittering（吱喳）ofbirds.Soonthe

delicate纖弱的，精致的airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.

10.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwas

brightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasonginevery

heart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.

Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.Cardiff

Hill,beyondthevi11ageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesand

lookedbeautiful.

黃昏：（部分描寫也可用于其它時(shí)間）

1.Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天

空越來越黑，光線越來越暗）hequickenedhissteps.

2.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,nicikingithard

toseeanythinginthethickdarkness.

3.Fallingleavesfluttereddowninthecoolmid-autumnair,

biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandbeckoningtheautumnin.

秋天的樹葉在涼爽的中秋空氣中飄落，告別甜美夏天，召喚秋天

的到來。

4.It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsof

wetflakesdriftingmindlesslydown,theairmoist,the

sidewalkmushyunderfoot.現(xiàn)在天黑了，雪還在落下，一團(tuán)團(tuán)的雪

花隨風(fēng)飄落，空氣潮濕，走在人行道上，腳底粘糊糊的。

5.Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothe

lastbeamofsunlight.

雨敲打在窗戶上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一縷陽(yáng)光告別.

6.Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidly

fallingnight,resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedever

thesky.逗留在天際的最后一縷陽(yáng)光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，像是天

空被一層漆黑幕布覆蓋。

7.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddown

thestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightly

swayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.

我在街上漫步時(shí)，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會(huì)從我

身邊掉下來，輕輕地?fù)u晃，因?yàn)榭諝廨p輕地把它吹到地上。

8.Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblameless

blueandshimmering.

湖面映照著上方的天空，它們都是無比湛藍(lán)，并且閃閃發(fā)光。

9.Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日

落就像藍(lán)色畫布上的橙色顏料.

10.Thestrongsunonmyblackhairwouldburnmeinminutes

ifIcouldn,tfindshelter.

如果我找不到庇護(hù)所，我黑發(fā)上強(qiáng)烈的陽(yáng)光幾分鐘后就會(huì)把我燒

焦

11.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadand

shoulders.太陽(yáng)下山，溫和的光線落在肩頭。

晚上：（部分描寫也可用于其它時(shí)間）

1.Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight（昏暗的燈光）in

thevillage.

2.Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousand

scared.Atthatmcment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaint

lightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.

3.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingclcuds

heldmeentirelyintheirpower.

4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytale

quality,andthestarsthatdottedtheskylitupthenight.

天空，午夜藍(lán)，給了這一場(chǎng)景一個(gè)童話般的質(zhì)量，星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的天空照

亮了夜晚。

5.Theclearblueskywasclottedwithflutteringlarks.天

氣晴朗，碧空里星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的云雀在翩翩起舞。

6.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouring

fromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.

Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwith

theroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepingupon

me.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurled

up.

7.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingclouds

heldmeentirelyintheirpower.

8.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy（陰

郁的）,atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofglcom.

Acoldstormyrainsetin（陰冷的暴風(fēng)雨襲來），andnothingof

Julyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木叢），whichthe

windwasdespoiling（摧殘），andthelengthoftheday,whichonly

madesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.（白晝的延長(zhǎng)可以讓

人多瞧一瞧這凄冷的景象）

9.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,（烏

云密布、黑云壓頂）andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelcped

inahugegrayquilt.整個(gè)世界仿佛都被一塊巨大的灰色棉被籠罩。

10.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygray

cloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon（蒼白昏暗的月亮）.

Thefrostyair（寒冷的空氣）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.

其它：

1.Iclosedniyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,

loftymountains,deepvalleysandsunnybeachesheldme

entirelyintheirfascination.

2.Thegentlebreeze（MR）strokedhishead,asif

comfortingallhistiredness.

3.Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.

Wanderinginthewoods,Allyslowedherpacetofindthelittle

guyinthemixedair.Thesunlookedatherwithaglowingsmile

andtheflowersnoddedmerrilytowardsher.Thebreezepatted

herontheface,warmandcomfortable.

4.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouring

fromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.

Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwith

theroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepingupon

me.Timmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurled

up.

5.Onthedaybacktoschool,darkcloudshunglowinthe

sky.Therainpoureddown,withcolddropsandangrywinds

slapping（拍；摑）myface.Iwasdrownedinfloodsofwarmtears

andfreezingrain.

6.Spring,likeanamazingartist,paintsourcampuswith

richeranddeepercolors.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensand

aseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothe

painting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering（吱喳）ofbirds.

Soonthedelicate纖弱的，精致的airandsoftraindropsir.elt

myheart.Oh,I'mlost…inthemasterpieceofSpring!專題

15讀后續(xù)寫之各種精彩收尾段落

一、讀后續(xù)寫收尾的方式：

1.畫面定格

2.對(duì)話收尾

3.主題升華

4.結(jié)尾留白

5.首尾呼應(yīng)

二、畫面定格

1.人物動(dòng)作的畫面定格

如：(2020杭州高級(jí)中學(xué)等五校聯(lián)考)Theystoodtherefora

moment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrent

andfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverand

momentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,alir.ost

reluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomed

affectionaroundhermotherJsshouldersandgentlyguidedher

backintothedeluge.

如：Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,

Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegot

thebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaced

itinDoraJshand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.

Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,

withtearswellingupinhereyes.

如：Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface,"No."God

feltabitrelievedandsaid,uTomorrowyoucanbecomehuman

again.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobe

abutterflyfortherestofmylife..."Thenthebutterflywould

staytogetherwithher]overforever.Onthetopofthemountain,

sheseemedtoenjoythesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(1)Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrass

greenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeone

beautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.

天空像是一億只純凈的眼睛拼接在一起，腳下是青草，仿佛黑夜

和白晝已成為一個(gè)美麗的時(shí)刻。黎明已經(jīng)來臨。(黎明到來的畫面)

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(2)Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,

bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.

黎明在平靜的海面上放射出出閃閃發(fā)亮的光線，留下一條從海岸

到地平線橫亙而過的金色道路。（黎明到來的畫面）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

（3）ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwaded

throughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.

當(dāng)我涉過水晶般天藍(lán)色的輕柔的水時(shí)，日落就像藍(lán)色畫布上的橙

色顏料。（美好日落時(shí)的畫面）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

（4）Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidly

fallingnight,resemblingapitch-blackcurtaindrapedoverthe

sky.逗留在天際的最后一縷陽(yáng)光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空

被一層漆黑的幕布覆蓋。（日落時(shí)的畫面）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

（5）Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthe

nightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.

Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.

被群星圍困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，帶來了在黑暗中閃耀和懸掛

著的群星。無盡的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描寫夜空的畫面）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

（6）Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIever

knewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasit

reflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththe

heat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.

抬頭一看，我看到太陽(yáng)比我以前所知道的還要明亮。我看見遠(yuǎn)處

有一棵樹反射著太陽(yáng)光，發(fā)出柔和的光輝。我的意識(shí)隨著熱度而衰退。

我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到現(xiàn)實(shí)中，恢復(fù)了知覺。（特殊

寓意）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

（7）Dottedwithglitteringstars,thesky,midnightblue,

gavethesceneafairytalequality.綴滿星光的天空，午夜的藍(lán)

色，給了這一場(chǎng)景一個(gè)童話般的質(zhì)量。（神話般美麗的夜空畫面）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(8)Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundis

coldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromthe

ground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮濕的

地面走起來很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。一股濃郁的泥土般的香味

從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。(雨后清新的畫面)

Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelast

beamofsunlight.雨水打著窗戶，向最后一縷陽(yáng)光告別。

(雨水來臨的畫面)

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(9)TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddown

thestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightly

swayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上

漫步時(shí)，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會(huì)從我身邊掉下來，

輕輕地?fù)u晃，緩緩落到到地面。(描寫落葉的畫面)

三、對(duì)話收尾

(1)Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearch

forhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheir

lastnames."Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotheranche

toldmethathe'sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact,

hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColoir.bia

tobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunion

withhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid,“Igotfamily

everywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.

(2)Whatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthat

Shavialsomovesothers.Nina'sfamilyhadmovedtoabigger

apartment.'Tveheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs,loyalty,

butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappento

me.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalong

distancetofindus,“saidNina,“Iwouldnevergivethiskind

offriendawayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis

-animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.Theyneed

ourloveandcare.

(3)HerhusbandspoketothedirectorofHeightvale,

DoloresHaworth.Soonsheofferedhimajobworkingforthe

company.Shesaid,“Hejusthadabrilliantworkingattitude

andisdefinitelythetypeofemployeewearelookingfor.I

wastold,(Ifhedoesthisforfree,imaginehisjobsifhe

wasbeingpaid.’Imethimandhewasalovelyandpoliteycung

manandhehasalreadystartedworkingforus.”

(4),,?Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.Jackasked

Paisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithir.e?

"Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewalls

withloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,"Yes!For

me,itisnotasufferingtolive.”

四、主題升華

(1)Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.

Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehasbeauty,brains,

andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,I

wouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbea_famous_dancer.Someday,

when_I_am_olderandhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbe

justasgreataparentasmymom.(母愛的深遠(yuǎn)影響)

(2)….Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn'

tequalhappiness.Andfreelifestylealsodoesn'tequal

happiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,

anddoeseverythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmy

classmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthinkmoneyis

everything.Inmyopinion,moneycan'ttaketheplaceof

everything,suchasyourlife,yourtimeandyourhappiness.(表

達(dá)自己的價(jià)值觀)

(4)uTworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon,"theteacher

answered.uFirst,you'vealmostmasteredoneoftheir.ost

difficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefense

forthatmoveisforyouropponenttcgrabyourleftarm.It

isyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asa

proverbsays,"Everycoinhastwosides.'Makingfulluseof

yourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinno

casewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairto

everyone."(借用名言警句來升華主題)

五、結(jié)尾留白

(1)Whileshewrappedthem,Itookadeepbreathandasked

Joy,“Doyouhavedinnerplans"IexplainedthatI'dlike

towaitabitbeforeIwentbacktothehospital-gaveGrace

andherhusbandsometimealonewithbaby."Wouldyoube

interestedinjoiningmeinabitetoeat“Iasked.'Td

loveto,"shereplied,hereyessparklinglikediamonds.And,

thiswasthebeginningoftheendtomymonthsofheartbreak

followingBetsy'sdeath.(故事結(jié)尾留白，給予讀者想象空間)

(2)Thebeggarhesitatedforamoment,thenhedecidedto

openit.Hedeclaredaloud,“WhocaresHewantedmetohave

itanyway.Imightaswe11enjoyitnow."Withthat,heunwrapped

thewhitetissuepaper,buttohissurprise,therewasnohard

rockcandyinside.Instead,intohisfingersfellashinywhite

pearlworththousandsofdollars.

六、首尾呼應(yīng)

(1)

開頭：Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwith

suprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,

sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.Onestrangefaimlytrip

wetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

結(jié)尾：Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful,

shewasstillakindandnicemom.

(2)

開頭：Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoa

vacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecidedtotakemeonatripto

theWildWest.

結(jié)尾：NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerous

vacationbefore.ThespecialtriptoiheWildWestwasdeeply

engravedinmymind.

(3)

開頭：AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthe

waytoworkoneday.

結(jié)尾：Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughing

wheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious搞笑的experience.

附：名言警句升華主題

1.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.靖志者，事

竟成。

2.Wellbegunishalfdone.好的開端是成功的一半。

3.East,west,homeisbest.金窩、銀窩，不如自己的

草窩。

4.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.學(xué)無坦途。

5.Lookbeforeyouleap./Firstthink,thenact.三

思而后行/摸著石頭過河

6.Itisnevertoolatetomend.亡羊補(bǔ)牢，猶為未晚。

7.Lightcome,lightgo.來得容易，去得快。

8.Timeismoney.時(shí)間就是金錢。

9.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真交。

10.Greathopesmakegreatman.遠(yuǎn)大的希望，造就偉大的

人物。

11.Afterastormcomesacalm.雨過天晴。

12.AllroadsleadtoRome.條條大路通羅馬。

13.Artislong,butlifeisshort.人生有限，學(xué)問無涯。

14.Sticktoit,andyou,11succeed.只要人有恒，萬事都

能成。

15.Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,

wealthyandwise.

早睡早起，富裕、聰明、身體好。

16.Agoodmedicinetastesbitter.良藥苦口。

17.Itisgoodtolearnatanotherman1scost.前車之鑒。

18.Keepingisharderthanwinning.創(chuàng)業(yè)不易，守業(yè)更難。

19.Let1scrossthebridgewhenwecometoit.船到橋頭

自然直。

20.Morehaste,lessspeed.欲速則不達(dá)。

21.Nopains,nogains.不勞則無獲。

22.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上

無難事，只要肯登攀。

23.Wherethereislife,thereishope.生命不息，希望

常在。

24.Anidleyouth,aneedyage.少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。

25.Wemustnotliedown,andcry,“Godhelpus.“求神

不如求己。

26.Aplantmayproducenewflowers；manisyoungbutonce.

花有重開日，人無再少年。

27.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者，天助之。

28.Whatmaybedoneatanytimewi11bedoneatnotime.

明日待明日，明日不再來。

29.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作，

不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。

30.Diligenceisthemotherofsuccess.勤奮是成功之母。

31.Truthisthedaughteroftime.時(shí)間見真理。

32.Takecareofthepence,andthepoundswilltakecare

ofthemselves.

積少自然成多c/小事留意，大事順利

33.