cet4寫作第四講道理論證.ppt

道理論證型作文,四級作文(四),2003年1月考試作文真題及范文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 當(dāng)前社會上存在許多不誠實的現(xiàn)象 2. 誠實利人利已,做人應(yīng)該誠實 It Pays to Be Honest Honesty is one of the virtues in China, and most of the children are taught to be honest since childhood. But as a matter of fact, things are quite different in current society. For example, some students cheat in exams; false advertisements mislead people to spend money on fake commodities; employees make use of false achievements for promotion, etc Those people,Those people may benefit from dishonesty for a while, but they will be given a good lesson sooner and later. I insist that honesty is the one of the basic virtues for our human beings and we must keep honest. Actually, we will benefit a lot from being honest. For instance, being honest with others can win you many friends; an honest businessman can have the consumers trust, which is essential to his final success; an employee with the quality of honesty can be entrusted with important tasks and so on. We are interdependent in todays world, and honesty should be the basic rule for peoples social or commercial intercourses, which will bring great benefits to both partners. In a word, honesty is the best policy in our daily lives. If everyone could be honest to others, the society will be a beautiful one.,It Pays to Be Honest,(1)Nowadays, dishonesty is a common phenomenon in our society. (2)For example, poor students tend to cheat on exams, and advertisers make misleading advertisement to cheat customers. (3)However, most people hold that honesty is the best policy, and it pays to be honest.(4) The reasons are as follows: (5) Firstly, to individuals, being honest can afford us real respect from others and earn you more friends. (6)Secondly, honesty is helpful to maintain a normal order of society and market. (7)For example, if everyone treated each other fairly and honestly, we wouldnt be afraid of fake commodities and cheating at,all. (8)Whats more, honesty also contribute to our friendship with other countries and our status and image in the world. (9)As far as Im concerned, honesty benefits us in every respect in the long run. (10)For one thing, we should form a habit of honesty from the very beginning.(11) For another, everyone has a duty to fight against dishonesty in order to build a beautiful and peaceful world.(12) In a word, try to be honest for the sake of ourselves, our society, our country and even the whole world.,點評: 開頭段: 以Nowadays開始概括現(xiàn)狀: 不誠實現(xiàn)象非常普遍,接著以For example給出具體的實例,然后以However轉(zhuǎn)變話題,引出本文主題: 誠實利己利人.最后一句The reasons are as follows: 承上啟下,點明下文內(nèi)容-原因. 中間段:以Firstly ,Secondly, For example, Whats more列出三個原因并加以舉例,說明誠實對個人,對社會,對國家都有害無利. 結(jié)尾段: 以As far as Im concerned表明自己的觀點態(tài)度:從長遠(yuǎn)觀點來看,誠實有百利而無一害,接著以For one thing, For another進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步的補(bǔ)充說明,最后以In a word收尾提出倡議.以此重申誠實的重要性為了自己,社會,國家乃至世界,請保持誠信.,The Importance of Confidence,It is widely recognized that confidence plays an important part in peoples life and activities. For example, if you show enough confidence in a job interview, you are likely to do well and get the job applied for. Or, if you take an important examination with confidence, you will probably pass it and thus seize a good opportunity. When you play a role in a play, the confidence shown in your performance can help you get applause from the audience. However, not everyone has enough confidence in himself. There are many reasons for lack of confidence, but in general, they come down to two major ones. First, some people tend to improperly,First, some people tend to improperly belittle themselves. Without a correct estimate of themselves, they often hesitate to go forward in the face of difficulties. Second, some people overestimate difficulties. For them, difficulties are always like high mountains which they can never get over. Facing difficult problems or hard tasks, we should have faith in ourselves. The world is full of hardships, and we cannot change this reality. The only thing we can do is to improve ourselves. It is possible to build up confidence in ourselves if we take the right attitude to our abilities. Always remember that confidence is the promise for overcoming any difficulties in the world.,模板一： (1)Nowadays，-. (2)For example，-. (3)However，-.(4) The reasons are as follows: (5) Firstly,-. (6)Secondly, -. (7)For example, -. (8) Whats more, - (9)As far as Im concerned,- (10)For one thing, - .(11) For another, - .(12) In a word, - 填充內(nèi)容(1)概括現(xiàn)狀,指出問題(2)舉例說明,(3)轉(zhuǎn)變話題,引出主題(5)原因一(6)原因二(7)例證”(8)原因三(9)自己的看法(10) 具體闡述一(11) 闡述二(12) 總結(jié)歸納,模板二： (1)It is true that-.(2) For example,-(3)But -.(4)There are three reasons. (5)To begin with,-(6) In addition,-(7)Take for example,-(8)Whats more,-. (9)For my part,-.(10)On the one hand,-.(11) On the other hand,-.(11) Therefore, - 填充內(nèi)容(1)概括現(xiàn)狀,指出問題(2)舉例說明,(3)轉(zhuǎn)變話題,引出主題(5)原因一(6)原因二(7)例證”(8)原因三(9)自己的看法(10) 具體闡述一(11) 闡述二(12) 總結(jié)歸納,模板三 ： （1）People beliveve in - owing to the moral it teaches: -(2) Whats more,-. (3) Take- for example,-.(4) As a result,-.(5) Whats worse,-(6) Another case in point is -.(7)-,but finally-.(8) The above example shows that -. (9) Therefore,-.(10) For one thing,-(11) For another,-(12) Ina word,- 填充內(nèi)容(1)填入