初三英語(yǔ)試卷分類匯編英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)(及答案)

1、【英語(yǔ)】初三英語(yǔ)試卷分類匯編英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)( 及答案 )一、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)1假如你是班長(zhǎng)李華，今天你們班對(duì)即將到來(lái)的暑假計(jì)劃進(jìn)行了討論。你們班的外教david 對(duì)此很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給david 寫一封電子郵件，告訴他討論的情況及你自己本人的計(jì)劃及原因。比例計(jì)劃原因50%去國(guó)內(nèi)外旅游1.放松 ;2.欣賞美景30%多讀一些書1.增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)； 2.培養(yǎng)興趣20%參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐1.鍛煉自己 ;2.結(jié)識(shí)朋友你的計(jì)劃? （至少一個(gè)）？（請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充）注意：（ 1）郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)（ 2）詞數(shù) 80 個(gè)左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；（ 3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分注：社會(huì)實(shí)踐

2、 social practice activitiesdear davidim writing to tell you something about our discussion today._best wishes!yoursli hua【答案】 dear davidim writing to tell you something about our discussion today.the students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. half of the students

3、plan to travel at home and abroad. they want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. thirty percent of students plan to read more books. they believe that reading can increase knowledge. reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice act

4、ivities. they want to exercise themselves and make new friends.im going to take part in social practice activities, too. i want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.best wishes!yoursli hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如how to do ， spend ameaningful summer vacation

5、 ，half of ， plan to do ， travel at home and abroad ，enjoy the beautiful scenery ， take part in ， social practice activities ，make new friends 等。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu) the students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 和賓語(yǔ)從

6、句 they believe that reading can increase knowledge. 的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2親愛的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，你們一定有很多的感觸.假如你是tony,名城中學(xué)九（1）

7、班的學(xué)生。請(qǐng)以my junior high school life為題 ,寫一篇80 詞左右的短文。提示：1.個(gè)人基本情況介紹2.校園（校園干凈而美麗，活動(dòng)非富多彩）；老師（傳授知識(shí)，教會(huì)做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵(lì)）；同學(xué)（和睦相處，互相學(xué)習(xí)，共同進(jìn)步）。3.對(duì)學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名?！敬鸢浮?my junior high school lifemy name is tony. i am studying in grade 9.as time goes by, my colorful junior middle scho

8、ol life iscoming to an end. i m gladyouto somethingtel about my school life.our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. they also encourage us to work hard. we all get on well with our classmates. besides

9、, we learn from each other and make progress together.i thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的初中生活?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主 一致 ，句子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：my name is，i m glad to ，our campus is，our teachers teach us等句式的 用。寫作

10、中注意運(yùn)用代 ，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開 介 了我的個(gè)人情況，接下來(lái)介 我 的校園，老 和同學(xué)，最后 學(xué)校、老 、同學(xué)表達(dá)感 和祝福。此 go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth,all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress 等 些 的運(yùn)用也 文章增色不少。3 寫作假定你是李 ，在一位名叫tiger mom 的學(xué)生家 的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。 你根據(jù)博客

11、內(nèi)容，寫作要點(diǎn)和要求， 位家 回復(fù)。i m the mother of a fourteen-year old . i have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . she has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that i put too much pressure on her .am i wrong ?寫作要點(diǎn)： 1. 表明自

12、己的看法。2. 述自己的理由。3. 提出至少 2 條建 ?！敬鸢浮?hi,tigermom,what puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in china.my idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emot

13、ion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.there aremany examples around us. some all-a students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. the reason is often that the pressure from their parents allowsthem almost no time for other activities. furth

14、ermore,punishment is by no means a wise choiceto help them grow upmentally and physically.so i suggest that you take your friends advice. more importantly,let her live like a lovely girl ； let herhave more friends and social activities ； and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do

15、.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 學(xué)生家 的博客 行回復(fù)。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人稱 第一，三人稱，注意主 一致 ，句子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：my idea is that，there are， some all-astudents in school have， thereason. is，so i suggest that等句式的 用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來(lái)陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no

16、means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, makemistakes, of one等s這own些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。4書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，中考后就會(huì)迎來(lái)漫長(zhǎng)的暑假了，班會(huì)課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們匯報(bào)一下你的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計(jì)劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書；學(xué)習(xí)技能（或自擬一點(diǎn)）生活健康飲食；堅(jiān)持鍛煉（或自擬一點(diǎn)）其它熱愛公益；親近自然（或自擬一點(diǎn)）注意：1. 表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù) 90 左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真

17、實(shí)校名及姓名。dear classmates,summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it._i hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. that【答案】 dear classmates, s all. thank you.summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.first, id like to choose several good books and read them carefully. this can h

18、elp me open my mind and learn more about the world. i also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. im interested in cooking, so i will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday. second, health is the most important. so i will eat healthily and exercise more. i plan to ea

19、t morefruit and vegetables and keep running every day.third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. i will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our earth a better world. also, travelling out is a good choice. w

20、hile travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. we have more chances to search the internet. i know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. i will say no to them.i hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. thats all. thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)

21、，例如 id like to do ， help me open my mind ， at least， be interested in ，during the holiday ， plan to do ，join in ， be kind to someone in need ， pay more attention to ，be close to nature ， search the internet 等。而 first, id like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ second, health is t

22、he most important./third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. 等表順序詞和綜合句式的運(yùn)用，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5今

23、天手機(jī)在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪幸褟V泛使用。但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機(jī)，一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點(diǎn)。你們學(xué)校的?？⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇征文。觀點(diǎn)理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長(zhǎng)聯(lián)系；一些老師反對(duì)擁有有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲；有學(xué)生用手機(jī)作弊；你的觀點(diǎn)1.2.要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)： 80-100 詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。mobile phones have been used widely in our daily lifetoday._【答案】 mobile ph

24、ones have been used widely in our daily life today. with the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. however, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.some students are for it. they thi

25、nk that it is convenient to contact with parents. mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.some teachers are against it they think that some students cant control themselves and often play games. whats worse, some students cheat in exams

26、 by using mobile phones. besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students eyes.in my opinion, i think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. firstly ， students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. at the same time, parents and teachers should do som

27、ething to help students. only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【 解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可 漏。需在平 累相關(guān)的 ，寫作中注意 通 ，符合 關(guān)系，上下文之 可以適當(dāng)使用 接 。如but, so, then 等。可以適當(dāng)使用高分句型?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型： i think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way 我 正確的方式使用手機(jī) 學(xué)生是有幫助的。i think+ 從句。i

28、t is+形容 for sb to do sth做某事 某人來(lái) 是的。6（ b）根據(jù)要求完成大作文, 數(shù) :80-100體育運(yùn) 是中學(xué)生的共同 好. 根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇 what we get from sports 的短文 , 包含以下要點(diǎn):1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn) 的 趣不同,理由各異 .2.多數(shù)學(xué)生學(xué) 疲倦 ,通 運(yùn) 來(lái)放松自己.3.男孩參加各 體育運(yùn) ,希望運(yùn) 能使自己更 壯.4.女孩也喜 運(yùn) ，希望運(yùn) 使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條 .5.你 運(yùn) 的 點(diǎn).6.注意 :文中不得出 自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字7.短文開 已 出,不 入 數(shù) .8.參考 :keep slim （保持苗條）what we

29、get from sportsstudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports._【答案】 students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. but different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.many students have sports when they feel tired after study. they ju

30、st want to relax themselves and have fun. most boys love sports. they take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. they join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. as for girls, they want to lose weight. they want to keep slim, so they also

31、 like taking exercise.in my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)要包括：1.提出目前學(xué)生對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的不同看法及原因。2.具體分析（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）。 3.提出自己對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如 have f

32、un ，in order to ， as for， in my opinion 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。7近年來(lái)霧霾天氣在中國(guó)許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向?？坝⒄Z(yǔ)角 ”投稿 ,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2 個(gè)） 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施（3 個(gè)）提示：霧霾smogpoisonous 有毒的注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 110左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。in recent years, many cities in china have been

33、 hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people._【答案】 in recent years, many cities in china have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.smog has a bad effect on peoples health. many people, children and the old in particular,suffer from illnes

34、ses caused by smog. consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.how does it come about? scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this.the poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people s burning coal, driving cars,industry production a

35、nd so on.what should we do to stop the situation from worsening? first, cleaner fuels for cars andstricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. second, for us individuals, living agreen life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice.also plantingmore tree

36、s to increase green areas is necessary. i believe every contribution counts. only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.【解析】【 解】 篇作文要求我 根據(jù)提示來(lái)介 有關(guān) 霾的情況， 目中 出了寫作的內(nèi)容，我 將 些內(nèi)容用正確的英 表達(dá)出來(lái)。首先 注意在短文中要包括 目中 出的所有信息，不能 漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的 次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的 和人稱，通 分析可知， 篇短文 使用一般 在 ， 用原形，特 要注意 形式要 化， 是一個(gè)

37、寫作的 點(diǎn)。最后要注意英 的表達(dá) ，英 句式與 在 序和 性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐 翻 ，寫 式的英 。 從句子整體考 ，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)?和句型來(lái)表達(dá)， 法 范。 使用一些 好的句型或者短 ，增 文章的表 力。8 目 “持之以恒，方得始。 ” 持是一種可 的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“ 持 ” 主 的征文活 。假如你是李 ， 用英 寫一篇短文投稿。 淡你在初中生活中 持的一件事（ 好， ），你是怎 做的，以及你的感受。提示 ： keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示 ： 1. what did

38、 you do?2. how do you feel?it s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.【答案】 its important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.i love running and i have kept running for three years.when i was in grade 7， i was not good at sports and running was always my headache.i often failed

39、in my running test.in order to catch up with my classmates ， i began to practice running every day after school.sometimes ， i was so tired that i really wanted to give up.but i kept telling myself that i could make it.no matter what kind of difficulties i faced ， i tried my best to keep running.now

40、i do much better in running and im very proud of myself.i feel more confident and im ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所 提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中 持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并 自己的感受。【 解】1.本篇要求根據(jù)所 材料，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己 持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“what did you do?用一般 去 ，描寫how do you feel? 用一般 在 。 寫 要 扣主 ，文句通 。2.本例文開篇立即

41、點(diǎn)明自己的 持做的事是“跑步 ”，正文部分 地描寫了自己起初跑步 是不及格，通 克服困 、不懈地努力， 持跑步，到 在比以前會(huì)跑； 尾 了 件事 自己的影響；文章 構(gòu)清晰，前后呼 。3.本例文出彩之 在于用了很多的短 和重點(diǎn)句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型its +adj+for us +to do sth 、 love doing sth 、 keep doing 、 be good at 、 catch up with 、be proud of ；不定式 in order to ； try my best to ；狀 從句sothat；比 do much bet ter in、feelmor

42、e confident等；短 多彩、文句表達(dá)多 ?！?假 你是beth,前段 曾向英 校刊投送一篇 my english teacher miss zhang 的短 。近日，又至 季， 生 忙著互致 言。 此， 部策劃開“a letter to myteacher ” ，邀 你以信件的形式重新投稿。短 如下：my english teacher miss zhangthere is a teacher, miss zhang,who is friendly, patient and helpful.always encouraging us to try,she leads us to a world of why.we all respect and admire her.注意事 ：1.稿件內(nèi)容 根據(jù)短 展開合理想象，不得抄寫短 原文：2.要求 句通 、意思 、符合情境。3. 數(shù)在 70 個(gè)左右，稿件的首尾已在答 卡上 出，不 入 數(shù)：4.稿件必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。_【答案】 dear editorial office,i am writing to recommend as the most popular teacher she is miss zhang.