2015年中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)專題《應(yīng)用文》書信及電子郵件

1、2015年中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)專題應(yīng)用文書信及電子郵件【寫法指導(dǎo)】【題型設(shè)置與意圖】 書信及電子郵件是中學(xué)英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文的重要體裁之一，也是中考書面表達(dá)中的常見(jiàn)題型。書信實(shí)用性強(qiáng)，格式固定，常見(jiàn)的書信包括一般信件、感謝信、邀請(qǐng)信、推薦信、求職信、回信等。主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)書信格式的掌握和敘述或表達(dá)事件的能力，主要以考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主?！緦懽鹘嵌扰c注意事項(xiàng)】 寫作書信及電子郵件時(shí)首先要注意書信的格式。書信通常包括以下幾個(gè)部分： 1信頭。即寫信人的地址和寫信的日期，要寫在信紙的右上角。 2稱呼。指對(duì)收信人的稱呼，寫在左上角，頂格寫；稱呼后面的標(biāo)點(diǎn)一般用逗號(hào)。 3正文。正文是信件的主體部分。寫在稱呼的下一行，

2、正文的每一段開(kāi)頭一般都頂格寫。 4結(jié)束語(yǔ)。結(jié)束語(yǔ)通常是指正文下面的結(jié)尾客套語(yǔ)。位置應(yīng)低于正文一、二行。一般也是頂格寫，末尾用逗號(hào)。常用yours sincerely，yours等。 5署名。署名寫在結(jié)束語(yǔ)的下方。寫 作 演 示【真題再現(xiàn)】 (2014成都)假如你叫李華，是某中學(xué)初三學(xué)生。你計(jì)劃在畢業(yè)考試后去英格蘭旅行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示給你的英格蘭筆友寫一封信，告訴他你的安排并就相關(guān)問(wèn)題向他詢問(wèn)。 提示：1考試結(jié)束后和父母一起去英格蘭旅行； 2計(jì)劃在英格蘭停留10天； 3向他詢問(wèn)英格蘭的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣； 4請(qǐng)他建議去英格蘭的哪些地方旅行。 注意：1信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已替你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2詞數(shù)：60左

3、右。dear ben，how is everything going? i am looking forward to your replyyours，li hua【寫作思路】1中心人稱：第一人稱2主體時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)3要點(diǎn)梳理：旅游安排；風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣；名勝【語(yǔ)句構(gòu)建】稱呼dear ben，正文thanks for your letteri have received your letter i am going to travel to england with my parents after finishing the final exam wed like to be in englan

4、d for ten days i dont know about england i hope you can provide me with some information a bout the customs of england結(jié)束語(yǔ)im looking forward to your reply署名yours，li huayours sincerely，li hua【寫作模板】稱呼：dear kateteachermrwang署名：yours，li hua yours sincerely，li hua 【范文展示】dear ben，how is everything going? i

5、 am going to travel to england with my parents after finishing the final examwed like to be there for ten daysbut i dont know about englandi hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of englandi would like to travel to exciting places in englandplease introduce some interesting

6、 places to mei am looking forward to your replyyours，li hua 【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】 范文格式正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)明扼要，既說(shuō)明自己的計(jì)劃，又提出了自己需要幫助的要求，是一篇很好的書信范文?！緦?shí)戰(zhàn)演練】 (一) 假如你是楊佩，你的外教mrsmith想組織幾名學(xué)生去一個(gè)學(xué)校參加助學(xué)和聯(lián)誼活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你參考下列信息，以書信的形式向mrsmith提出申請(qǐng)，說(shuō)明你打算如何參加這次活動(dòng)并陳述理由要求：1參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整； 3文中不得出現(xiàn)你本人的姓名、所在學(xué)校地址； 46080詞(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。de

7、ar mrsmith，im so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in a schoo1 yours，yang pei (二)假設(shè)你是dale，你的網(wǎng)友cindy發(fā)來(lái)郵件，希望知道你最感謝的人是誰(shuí)，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你給她回郵件，郵件內(nèi)容包括：1他她的外表、興趣愛(ài)好和職業(yè)等；2感謝的理由。要求：1短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫； 3詞數(shù)80左右，郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。dear cindy，thank you for sending me your ph

8、otosyou wonder who the person i thank most isnow let me tell you yours，dale (三)假設(shè)你是張林，即將初中畢業(yè)，你的美國(guó)筆友bob來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的暑假計(jì)劃，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你寫一封回信，告訴他這個(gè)假期你會(huì)去爺爺奶奶家三個(gè)星期。 要求：1至少寫出你將要做的三件事； 2回信至少80詞，信的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3所給英語(yǔ)詞匯僅供參考。參考詞匯：summer；grandparents；relax oneself；housework；visit；my friends and relativesdear bobsummer vacat

9、ion is coming soon how will you spend your holiday?best wishes!yours， zhang lin (四)目前，我國(guó)實(shí)施城市化的進(jìn)程給從鄉(xiāng)村(鎮(zhèn))遷入城市的大多數(shù)孩子帶來(lái)諸多的問(wèn)題，特別在交朋友方面尤為突出。假如你是lucy，你的朋友tony發(fā)電子郵件請(qǐng)教你關(guān)于如何交朋友的問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件提幾點(diǎn)建議，詞數(shù)約80左右。要點(diǎn)：1在小區(qū)內(nèi)玩耍時(shí)，你可以主動(dòng)與他們交流，與他們成為朋友，并告知家長(zhǎng)； 2請(qǐng)求父母帶你去圖書館或一些公共場(chǎng)所，既可認(rèn)識(shí)更多伙伴又可參加文體活動(dòng)； 3在星期天，可外出郊游等； 4總之，多參加交流活動(dòng)，克服困

10、難，保持耐心。要求：1涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，意思連貫，條理清晰；不得逐字翻譯； 2書寫規(guī)范工整。參考詞匯：first；second；third；in conclusiondear lucy，i need some advice on how to make friendsi have just moved to a new cityi am 13i dont know anybody here and 1 want to make some friendswhats the best way? where can i meet people?yours，tonydear tony，there are

11、lots of things you can do it takes time and patience to make friendsi hope you will find a best friend soon!yours，lucy（五） 假如你是來(lái)自英國(guó)某中學(xué)的交換生daniel, 你想?yún)⒓佑⑽膱?bào)紙jinling daily 廣告中介紹的機(jī)器人培訓(xùn)班。robot courserobot course for beginners at starlight schoolorganized visits to friendly robots companye-mail: robotcourse

12、 jinling. com 請(qǐng)根據(jù)該廣告內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一封電子郵件，詢問(wèn)與該班相關(guān)的具體信息，郵件內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1. 培訓(xùn)班的起止時(shí)間以及周末是否上課；2. 參觀機(jī)器人公司的具體安排3. 你還想了解到該培訓(xùn)班其他信息。注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)：80左右，郵件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 dear sir/ madam im writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at starlight school. （六） 假

13、設(shè)你是李雷，你聽(tīng)說(shuō)將有一批來(lái)自英國(guó)的交換生到泰州，他們想了解有關(guān)泰州中學(xué)生的課余生活。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息用英語(yǔ)寫一封電子郵件向他們介紹相關(guān)情況。 items（項(xiàng)目） contents（要點(diǎn)）books or magazineswhat types of do you like to read?which is your favorite .?how often-? films or tvwhat types of . do you enjoy most?how often-? . travelling where？ sports要求：1詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)； 2所寫內(nèi)容必

14、須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮； 3不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。 (參考詞匯：讀者readers，偵探故事detective stories，游戲類節(jié)目game show， 梅蘭芳公園meilanfang park)dear friends i am glad to know you will come to taizhou. ill tell you something about our after-school activities._welcome to my hometown. i hope you will have a good time here.your

15、sli lei（七）假如你是某雜志社編輯mr. knowledgeable,根據(jù)中學(xué)生 bob的來(lái)信內(nèi)容，給他寫封回信，幫助解決他所遇到的問(wèn)題。字?jǐn)?shù)80100，開(kāi)頭已給出。dear knowledgeable,my problem is that i cant get on with my family. my parents always say “no” to my ideas without any reason. so i often quarrel(吵架) with them. also, my brother is not very nice to me. he always re

16、fuses to let me watch my favorite tv show. instead, he watches whatever he wants until late at night. i dont think this is fair. at home, i always feel lonely and nervous. is that normal? what can i do?bobdear bob, knowledgeable（八）假如你是王昆，你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友tom對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日“春節(jié)”非常感興趣，請(qǐng)你以“my favorite festival”為題，寫一封e-ma

17、il.，給他做一介紹。1要點(diǎn)包括：節(jié)日簡(jiǎn)介、節(jié)日準(zhǔn)備、節(jié)日活動(dòng)等；2字?jǐn)?shù)要求：100字左右。3提示：the spring festival, traditional, get together, clean up, be dressed insubject: my favorite festival from: wang kundear tom,wang kun（九）假如你是于偉，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)朋友frank寫一封email，向他介紹你參加過(guò)的或者熟悉的一次有趣的活動(dòng)，例如：采摘、野餐、郊游、聚會(huì)、競(jìng)賽、節(jié)日等等。內(nèi)容包括活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、活動(dòng)期間的所做、所見(jiàn)、所感，然后向你的筆友發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)

18、，請(qǐng)他來(lái)參加暑期中的另一次活動(dòng)。要求：1. 郵件要包括以上要點(diǎn)，鼓勵(lì)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是內(nèi)容連貫、生動(dòng)有趣。2.詞數(shù)100左右。郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。詞匯提示（僅供參考）：strawberry（cherry，fig）-picking 草莓（櫻桃、無(wú)花果）采摘ripe 成熟的greenhouse 溫室practice base 實(shí)踐基地ladder 梯子，rope 繩子，tie 捆住_（十）假如你是林思，要去澳大利亞的melbourne high留學(xué)，需要在當(dāng)?shù)卣乙粋€(gè)寄宿家庭（host family).請(qǐng)按要求寫一封約100詞的電子郵件給寄宿家庭中介公司的經(jīng)理mr. porter.內(nèi)容

19、包括：（1）簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己的個(gè)人情況，如語(yǔ)言，愛(ài)好等 （2）提出自己的對(duì)寄宿家庭的要求（如下表所示）family memberenglish speaker ,no smokerhousingnear the school,a bedroom with a bathroomotherscooking by myself注意：郵件需涵蓋以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞匯）；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。dear mr porter, my name is li si,_ looking forward to your early reply.best wishes,

20、lin si （十一）假如你的朋友mike 明年打算去游覽上海迪士尼樂(lè)園，請(qǐng)你寫一封90詞左右的信，介紹一下上海迪士尼，并給出你的建議。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 上海迪士尼將于明年春季開(kāi)業(yè)。 它是由walt disney company 建造的世界上第六個(gè)主題公園。 2. 據(jù)報(bào)道每天會(huì)有成千上萬(wàn)的游客去游覽。3. 它和其他迪士尼公園不同，在公園的中央有一個(gè)中國(guó)式的園林。4. 你可以在那里欣賞到綠草，鮮花和水的美景。5. 去太空山乘坐室內(nèi)過(guò)山車很刺激。和迪士尼人物合影你會(huì)非常愉快。6. 請(qǐng)你用2-3句話就交通和園內(nèi)環(huán)保方面提些建議。dear mike, im very glad to know you w

21、ant to visit shanghai disneyland next year. id like to tell you something about it. _ _ i hope all these can be helpful to you.best wishes. yours （十二）今年春節(jié)晚會(huì)上，很多人加入了搶紅包游戲活動(dòng)，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。假如你叫李華，你班最近開(kāi)展了一個(gè)有關(guān)搶紅包游戲活動(dòng)的調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你用英文給學(xué)校?？⒄Z(yǔ)園地寫一封信，介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果并談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)。 70%學(xué)生參加搶紅包游戲活動(dòng)75%學(xué)生表示贊成1. 帶來(lái)更多樂(lè)趣2. 結(jié)識(shí)更多的朋友3. .25%學(xué)生表示

22、擔(dān)憂1. 花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間2. 和家人交流少3. .你的觀點(diǎn).注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)：80左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：搶紅包grabbing red packetsdear editor, i am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “grabbing red packets” in our class. yours sincerely,li hua（十三）你是jimmy,你的朋友tom想知道關(guān)于體育考試的情況

23、。請(qǐng)你寫信向他介紹一些關(guān)于剛剛過(guò)去的體育考試的情況，并給他一些如何通過(guò)考試的建議，字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給你寫好，下面信息供你參考,請(qǐng)合理運(yùn)用并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：體育考試很重要。它包括長(zhǎng)跑(long-distance running)、跳繩(rope skipping)、打排球以及跳遠(yuǎn)(long jump)等等。起初，你們遇到過(guò)種種問(wèn)題：有人跑不到終點(diǎn)就累倒在地,還有人根本不知道怎么打排球。為了通過(guò)考試，你建議他:1. 每天練習(xí)長(zhǎng)跑。可以每天跑遠(yuǎn)一點(diǎn)，每次比前一次快一點(diǎn)，這樣可以2. 每節(jié)課練習(xí)打排球，不能取得好成績(jī)的時(shí)候，可以3. 鍛煉很重要，但是也要保護(hù)好自己免受傷害。4. 考試前要充分休息

24、，適當(dāng)飲水，少吃含有脂肪的食物。心情要 dear tom, let me tell you something about the pe exam. _參考答案 (一)dear mrsmith，im so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in a schoo1i hope i can take part in iti think i have the abilities to help themfirst，ill get on well with the kids therei

25、 can do it because i always communicate well with othersand i have a few hobbies。such as playing basketball，ping-pong and singing songs，so im going to help organize after-class activitiesbesides，i can speak good englishi can help the kids with their pronunciationill read english aloud with them and

26、teach them english songsits really funill be thankful if you give me the chance! yours， yang pei (二) dear cindy， thank you for sending me your photosyou wonder who the person i thank most isnow let me tell you my mother is the person who i should thank mostshe is an english teacher in a middle schoo

27、1she is of medium height，and wears a pair of glassesshe likes reading and playing ping-pongshe is a good teacher and she is also a good mother she is very busy every day，but she tries to do what she can for mewhen i am ill，she takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the timebut sometimes when

28、 she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor for my mother，i11 do my best to be a good childill 1ove her forever yours， dale (三) dear bob， summer vacation is coming soon after a tiring school year，im going to relax myselfi will spend my vacation with my grandparents for three weeksof course，i am go

29、ing to help them do some houseworkperhaps i will take some short tripsbesides，i am going to visit some of my friends and relativesi think we will have a happy time togetherwhats more，i will be a senior high school student in a new term，so i am going to make some preparationshow will you spend your h

30、oliday?best wishes!yours，zhang lin (四)dear tony，i here are-lots of things you can dofirst，you can play in your neighborhood and try to find some kidswhen you find some，you can go up and talk to themyou should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help yousecond，yo

31、u can ask your parents to take you to the library or some public places where there are lots of kidsyou could try taking part in an art class or a sports clubthese are all great ways to meet peoplethird，you can try making friends if you go out to have picnics on sundaysand you can also try making fr

32、iends at churches if you go to church on sundaysin conclusion，try to take part in more exchange activities and get over difficultiesit takes time and patience to make friends i hope you will find a best friend soon!yours，lucy（五）dear sir/ madam im writing to ask for information about the robot course

33、 for beginners at starlight school. firstly, id like to know more about the course arrangement. for example, could you tell me how long the course will last? i prefer to know if there is any class for the weekend. next, im interested in the visits to friendly robots company. would you tell me whethe

34、r i need to pay? finally, i wonder whether ill be able to design a robot myself at the end of the course. thank you for your time and i look forward to hearing from you soon. yours faithfully daniel （六）（七）dear bob,its normal to have these feelings. why dont you talk about these feelings with your fa

35、mily? first,its not right to quarrel with your parents. i dont think quarrelling can solve problems. youd better have a talk with your parents. tell them to have a discussion with you before saying “no” to your ideas. second, why not sit down and communicate with your brother? you should explain tha

36、t you dont mind him watching tv all the time. however, he should let you watch your favourite tv show. i hope things will be better soon.knowledgeable（八）the spring festival is the most important traditional festival to the chinese people. several days before the new year, we begin to prepare for it.

37、 my parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. houses are cleaned up.on the eve of the new year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. after the meal we watch “the spring evening” on tv until twelve oclock. on the first day of the new year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. when meeti

38、ng others outside, we say “happy new year” to each other. we pay new year calls to friends and relatives. that day my parents and relatives give “red-bags” (money) to us children. all of us have a great time.（九）dear frank,hows everything going?last weekend, i went to climb a mountain with my best fr

39、iends. we had a picnic bythe side of the mountain.we sat on the blanket we took and ate the food we bought. we lay on the grass,listening to music and singing together happily.the sky was blue,the air was fresh and the mountain was gree. we enjoyed the beautiful nature happily. in the end,we took al

40、l the waste down the mountain.dear frank! in this summer vacation,we plan to go fishing by thr seaside. would you like to join us? if you come, im sure youll love it and enjoy yourself. waiting for your reply.best wisges. yours truly, yu wei（十）dear mr.porter,my name is lin si.im a sixteen-year-old boy from china.im going to study in m