短文改錯 (2)

1、專題六 短文改錯（階段性復習2） (新課標)全國卷短文改錯各類考點及題量統(tǒng)計表(一) (2015全國，短文改錯改編一)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city. I thought I will be happy there. Now I am living in a city，so I miss my home in the countryside. There is the air is clean and the mountains are green. Fortunately，with the development of indus

2、trialization，the environment has been serious polluted. Lots of studies has shown that global warming has already become very serious problem. The air we breath in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Many rare animals are dying down.We must find ways to protect our environment. If we fail to do such，wel

3、l live to regret it.(二)(2015全國，短文改錯改編二)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city. I thought I would live happy there. Now I am living in city，but I miss my home in the countryside. There the air is clean but the mountains are green. Unfortunately，with the develop of industrialization，the enviro

4、nment has been polluted. Lot of studies have shown that global warming has already became a very serious problem. The air we breathe in is getting more dirtier and dirtier. Many a rare animal are dying out. Measures should be taking to protect our environment.Unless we fail to do so，well live to reg

5、ret it.(三)(2015全國，短文改錯改編一)One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parents. It was very crowd. Tony saw a toy in a shop window. He liked it so much that he quick walked into the shop. After looking the toy for some time，he turned around and find that his parents were missing. Tony was

6、very scaring and began to cry. A woman saw him cried and told him to wait for outside the shop. Five minute later，Tony saw his parents. Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I was terribly worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happened again.1 Nothing is impossible！If you have a dr

7、eam，your dream will must come true as long as you always work hard. To tell you truth，my dream is common .I want to be a doctor. There was a time that I was in hospital. I saw that a doctor fights all night to save a babys life. I was touched by the kindly behavior of the doctor. I think doctor are

8、the greatest. We can make patients recover from a disease. However，I am determined to be a doctor . I hope that I am able to help people keep healthy. At the same time，I will devote myself to treat patients. In word， will spare no effort to study every subject such that I can go to a key university.

9、2Dear Mr.Green，Im very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine . That sounds great and I definitely(完全地) agree you on that.Some of the column（欄目） that you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.“Cultural Express” give us a better understanding of the world .Since people from diffe

10、rent part of the world have different values，its necessary to learn from each another. Apart from（除了） that，“Speak Out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improving oral English.“Entertainment（娛樂）” is also cool！The popular singers，actors or celebrities are so attractively

11、 that you absolutely(完全地) cant miss this part. Teenagers are to fond of popular things，too. Well，I cant list more. I really cant wait to read this magazine.Yours，Li Ming3Dear Mandy，Im not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to univ

12、ersity. He thinks that Im lazy，but its not true. I work really hard，often study late into the night！Ive tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard，and he always gets excellent grades. Its not fair!The only thing that

13、I like it is art. My teacher says Im the best student shes had for year.Im feeling quite puzzling what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks a lot!Yours sincerely，Lisa4Dear editor，Im sorry to occupy your precious（寶貴的） time，but I really want to telling you anything about the problem of some

14、 people keeping too many pets（寵物）nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First， as it is known to people，pets make so much noise that trouble residents(居民) a lot.It is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment，where makes people uncomfortable.

15、Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases .Take（非謂語） all these factors into consideration，I hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.Yours truly，Wang Lin1Last weekend w

16、e go mountain climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us going.Set off very early，we went along an extreme narrow road，all in high spirits.On every side of the road was green fields and some farm houses.We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laug

17、hter.At noon we reached the top of the mountain.That surprised us most there was the beauty of scenes.After having short rest there and sharing with the food we had brought，we started going down.It rained even harder.We were wet to the skin，and we still sang and laughed happily.2Dear Sir/Madam，Very

18、glad to know that our school broadcasting station (廣播站)needs a new member this term.Im writing to apply to the position. I am Li Hua，the boy from Senior One.I have ever been a broadcaster before and in Junior Three I have gained the first prize in the contest of Putonghua（普通話） of our grade.My friend

19、s around always tell me my voice sounds beautifully.Of course，I know become a broadcaster calls for （需要）extra devotion and more times after school is necessary for a better performance.Perhaps，my school life will be busier with such a task every day，so Id like to develop me and obtain （獲得）more knowl

20、edge after class to make my new school life more colorful.Im eager（渴望） for your reply and Ill be more than happy until you can consider my application.（申請）Please make contact me by telephone at 5103123 or email me at lihua 101 .Yours faithfully，Li Hua3 Last summer I went to Xian with my parents. We

21、had visited many places of interest as the temperature was over 38.Finally we climbed Mount Hua（華山）. It is very high and steep. We had to be careful in case we might fall off the cliff.It took us six hour to get to the summit（山頂）. How beautiful scenery it was！You could see many mountains and rivers

22、in distance. In the night we stayed in a cave hotel. I couldnt go to asleep because the wind was blowing heavily.I am afraid the mountain would break down. The next morning we got up early in order to see the sun rise from the east.The sun was very big and red. How exciting we were!4When I was a chi

23、ld，I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore，I couldnt understand “real music”After I graduated from high school，a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitar in the guitar st

24、ore.There I saw a guitar player play the guitar，which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher.It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.1Recently campus safety（校園安全） ha

25、s become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage.It makes us realized（意識到） the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life.In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem.Firstly，our students should realize we

26、 must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless.Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts.Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings th

27、at our students can bury themselves in their studies.As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound.2Dear Tim，I am Li Hua.This is my last year of high school，and Ill graduate this summer.Im eighteen year old.

28、 There is three people in my family and Im the only one child，who is very common in Chinese families.My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher.We lived a happy life together. Im cheerful boy.Besides my courses，I have much hobbies，like playing football，basketball and swimming.In the past

29、，I collected in a lot of stamps，which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.I wonder if you can tell me something about myself，your family and daily school.Best wishes，Li Hua3 Today，my foreign teacher Tim and I went to the Peoples Park together. We take a taxi and it wasnt

30、 long before we arrived at the park. At seeing the green trees and beautiful flower，Tim couldnt wait to take pictures.It was at that moment when we found his camera was missing. He was very worried but searched all over his backpack（背包）. Sadly，he just couldnt find it. Suddenly it occurred me that he

31、 might have left it in the taxi.So I immediately got touch with the taxi company. About half an hour later，the driver returned the camera. Both of us were gratefully to the driver，and Tim，in particular，insisted on taken a photo with him.Tim and I enjoyed themselves during the rest of the day.4Dear Mom，As Mothers Day is approaching(靠近，來臨)，Id like to share with you a great many word.First of all，I want to tell you I am very grateful to you for which you have done