四級(jí)作文(書(shū)信類)PPT課件

1、2第三節(jié) 應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作模板n應(yīng)用文是指人們?cè)诠ぷ?、學(xué)習(xí)、生活中傳遞信息，以達(dá)到交際目的的一種文體。這種文章需做到言簡(jiǎn)意賅、條理清楚，一般不需要過(guò)多修飾。四級(jí)考試中的應(yīng)用文大致分為兩類：n1. 書(shū)信類n2. 口頭類3 Frank Hamilton 29 Portman Street Liverpool D5 7WL April 18, 2002Dear (Sir), _. _. _. Yours sincerely,XXX4例Letter in Reply to a Friend(2003年12月) nDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 mi

2、nutes to write a letter in reply to a friends inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:n1) 建議報(bào)考的專業(yè)及理由； n2) 報(bào)考該專業(yè)的基本條件；n3) 應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考。5模板 December 27th, 2003nDear X,n第一段：n I am very happy to lea

3、rn that .(對(duì)來(lái)信表示高興)n You are welcome to . (對(duì)報(bào)考表示歡迎)n When it comes to , I suggest that . (提出建議報(bào)考的專業(yè))n To begin with, .(理由一)n Whats more, . (理由二)n第二段：n In order to , you have to .(指出報(bào)考該專業(yè)的基本條件)n First of all, . (條件一)n In addition, . (條件二)n第三段：n As far as is concerned, you should on the one hand .(有關(guān)如何

4、備考，首先)n On the other hand, youd better . (其次)n Only by can you . (總結(jié))n Best wishes! n Yours truly, n Li Ming6范文A Letter in Reply to a Friend December 27th, 2003nDear X,n I am very happy to learn that you want to apply to our university. You are welcome to be one of us. When it comes to which major y

5、ou should choose, I suggest that you apply for Computer Science. To begin with, this is one of the best specialized programs in our university. Whats more, Computer Science majors are more likely to find well-paid jobs.n In order to study at the Department of Computer Science, you have to meet the f

6、ollowing requirements. First of all, you have to reach the minimum score set for admission to key universities in the National College Entrance Examination. In addition, you have to be good at mathematics.n As far as the preparation is concerned, you should on the one hand review all the required le

7、ssons. On the other hand, youd better spend some time on English. Only by careful preparations can you hope to enroll in our university.n Best whishes! n Yours truly, n Li Ming7框架點(diǎn)評(píng)n第一段：首先對(duì)來(lái)信表示高興，歡迎對(duì)方申請(qǐng)本校。然后切入主題，建議報(bào)考計(jì)算機(jī)專業(yè)，并用兩個(gè)詞組To begin with和Whats more引出兩點(diǎn)理由：一是因?yàn)樵搶I(yè)實(shí)力較強(qiáng)，二是畢業(yè)后容易就業(yè)。n第二段：首句是主題句，以In ord

8、er toyou have to meet the following requirements引出兩個(gè)條件；用First of all, In addition引導(dǎo)兩個(gè)擴(kuò)展句來(lái)闡述這兩個(gè)條件。由于篇幅所限，且題目要求涉及的內(nèi)容較多，故中間段的總結(jié)句省去。n第三段：以As far as引出對(duì)備考的建議，用On the one hand和On the other hand連接。最后以O(shè)nly through來(lái)結(jié)尾，即只有做好這些準(zhǔn)備，才有希望被錄取。8例A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction (2004年6月)nDirections：For th

9、is part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. you should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:n要點(diǎn)：n1) 致歡迎詞；n2) 一天的行程安排；n3) 對(duì)游客即將訪問(wèn)的地點(diǎn)進(jìn)行描述；n4) 你應(yīng)該讓這個(gè)介紹很吸引人，并且讓每個(gè)人都清楚你的行程安排。9模板n第一段：n Ladies and gent

10、lemen, welcome to . (致歡迎詞)n Its my great honor to . (自我介紹)n I hope you will enjoy your whole time . (開(kāi)頭套語(yǔ))n第二段：n First, I want to introduce the schedule to you. (主題句)n We will assemble at .(告知集合時(shí)間)n . (具體行程安排)n is the end of the whole days tour. (告知結(jié)束時(shí)間)n If any of you have questions, please dont he

11、sitate to ask me. (套語(yǔ))n第三段：n Now, its time to introduce our scenery briefly. (主題句)n . (具體的景點(diǎn)描述)n In a word, it is a good chance to . (總結(jié)句)n I am sure you are looking forward to it. Lets start. (結(jié)束語(yǔ))10范文A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to join our tour group.

12、 Its my great honor to be your tour guide. I hope you will enjoy your whole time with my company. First, I want to introduce the schedule to you. We will assemble at 7 a.m. here. After all of you have arrived, we will set out to climb mountains. At 1 p.m. we head for the seashore. 5 p.m. is the end

13、of the whole days tour. If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to ask me at any time. Now, its time to introduce the scenery briefly. The Five-Finger Mountains well climb are about 1,000 meters high. They are named after their shape, resembling a human hand, with exactly five fingers in a r

14、ow. At the seashore, you will be amazed at the width of the sea. Certainly, you can swim in the sea or build a castle with soft sand at the beach. In a word, it is a wonderful chance to approach our nature, relax yourself and relieve you of the pressure. I am sure you are looking forward to it. Lets

15、 start.11框架點(diǎn)評(píng)n第一段：致歡迎詞，禮貌地自我介紹，并致以良好的祝愿。n第二段：首句為主題句，引出具體的行程安排，如集合時(shí)間、結(jié)束時(shí)間等。該段最后一句必不可少，也非常實(shí)用，If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to ask me at any time, 如有疑問(wèn)請(qǐng)隨時(shí)問(wèn)我。n第三段：首句仍為主題句，引起聽(tīng)眾的注意。景點(diǎn)描述部分語(yǔ)言平實(shí)簡(jiǎn)練、表達(dá)暢通。最后是總結(jié)句，用In a word引導(dǎo)。12例Welcome to Our Club (2007.6)nDirections：For this part, you are all

16、owed 30 minutes to write an announcement to welcome students to join a club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:n1. 本社團(tuán)的主要活動(dòng)內(nèi)容n2. 參加本社團(tuán)的好處n3. 如何加入本社團(tuán)13寫(xiě)作指南n這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本作文所考查的目標(biāo)主要是語(yǔ)言本身，思維或邏輯方面只要能自圓其說(shuō)就可以了。本篇作文的要求是：布局合理，條理清晰，重在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)，盡量避免語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，有一定的語(yǔ)言變化。另外四六級(jí)作文的應(yīng)試

17、方針：盡量減少基礎(chǔ)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤14n根據(jù)題目要求，文章的結(jié)構(gòu)安排如下：n第一段：首先表示歡迎，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹該社團(tuán)及其主要活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：1.定期組織英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)；2.與外教面對(duì)面練口語(yǔ)；3. 請(qǐng)資深英語(yǔ)教學(xué)專家做講座。n第二段：列舉參加該社團(tuán)的好處：1.掌握英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法，增加學(xué)習(xí)興趣；2.與外教交朋友，了解英語(yǔ)國(guó)家文化；3. 提高英語(yǔ)水平，練就一口地道流利的英語(yǔ)。n第三段：說(shuō)明如何加入社團(tuán)，并表示感謝。15 Welcome to Our Clubn Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to join our English club! It is sponsored (support

18、ed) by the Student Union and was set up (established/founded) two years ago. The club organizes various (all kinds of) activities regularly meeting the demands (needs) of participants, and enjoys high popularity (is well known /very popular) among English learners. We have English corners every week

19、end and you can practice your oral English with native speakers. In addition (Additionally/Besides/Moreover/Furthermore), experts (experienced teachers) are invited to give lectures on English learning occasionally (now and then). 16nThere are a lot of benefits for you to join us (You can gain a lot

20、 of benefits from joining us). To begin with (First and foremost), you can find the most suitable English learning methods for you (you can find the best way to learn English) by communicating with others and consulting language experts, hence making yourself more interested in English learning. Bes

21、ides, you can make friends with foreigners and get to know their cultures. Lastly, through your own efforts and with our help, you can speak accurate and fluent English more easily (more confidently/with less difficulty) , thus increasing your chances of finding a favorable (satisfactory) job in mul

22、tinationals upon graduation (when you graduate). 17nYou can email us at englishclubE if you want to become a member of our club. Thank you for your interest. 18開(kāi)頭段：說(shuō)明與收信人關(guān)系， 并表明寫(xiě)作意圖主體段：投訴原因（有理有據(jù)） 提出擬對(duì)如何改進(jìn)或解決問(wèn)題的建 議，或清楚表明你希望問(wèn)題如何得 到解決。結(jié)尾段：表達(dá)希望快速解決的強(qiáng)烈愿望 對(duì)有關(guān)人員的努力表示感謝 希望盡快得到滿意的答復(fù)19開(kāi)頭段：I am writing to you

23、to complain aboutI am writing to express my dissatisfaction withI am afraid that I have to inform you thatI am completely disappointed to find主體段：There are some problems with that I wish to bring to attention. In the first place, In the second place,202. To reverse this situation, it is advisable/ d

24、esirable/ recommended/ suggested that3. To improve the situation, it is advisable to take the following measures. For one thing, For another, 結(jié)尾段：I sincerely hope that it will review its management system(檢討管理制度)I look forward to a day when we couldI do hope that the problems will be solved as soon

25、as possible.1.I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration to improve the situation.215. We believe that you will take this matter seriously from now on and make every effort to prevent its recurrence.6. It is high time that7. If it is not properly settled, I would like to demand a refund,

26、 or I would complain to the Consumers Association.22A letter of ComplaintDear Editor, Im a college student. Im writing to complain about the poor service I received from Bright Bookstore.Last Sunday I bought an English-Chinese Dictionary from the bookstore. But when I used it in the following days,

27、I found its really poor in quality with many printing errors and even several missing pages. It doesnt deserve the money. I decided to return it to the bookstore and ask for a refund. However, to my unpleasant surprise, the service manager was ill-mannered and retorted me impatiently, “Why didnt you

28、 check it carefully before you decided to buy it?” “How could I know you hadnt used it?” I protested. “Then youre the one to blame. You can only change it for another copy,” he suggested coldly. “But in view of its poor quality, I dont want it any more,” I argued. “No way,” he shrugged and turned to

29、 attend to other clients.23Annoyed and depressed, I decided to resort to you for help. I think first its irresponsible of the bookstore to sell poor books; second, it should treat its clients with good manners and provide satisfactory solutions. This is not a rare phenomenon in the service industry.

30、 Are they serving people or being served?Sincerely yours, Liu Qiang 24作文題目oLetter for SaleoPoster Calling for Cloth Bag DesignoLetter of ApplicationoLetter of ThanksoLetter of Invitation25Computer for Sale 2627Poster Calling for Cloth Bag Design2829Topics: Apply for the position of volunteer to teac

31、h in poor arean常用的句型30Topics: Apply for the position of volunteer to teach in poor areanYou have read an introduction on a 2- year project volunteer work of teaching in poor rural areas in China. n1. Apply for the position in this project n2. Describe your education and experience.n3. Express your s

32、incerity and your eagerness in this volunteer work.34Letter of Thanksn常用的句型35Letter of ThanksnSuppose you lived at the Rehabilitation Center and were under tender care. You write a letter to extend you thanks to your staffs consideration.nBegin your letter as follows:nDear Staff, nYou should write a

33、bout 120 words on ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name, using “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address.36Dear Staff, I am writing to show my sincere gratitude for all of you. At present，I am at home and on my own again. I feel extremely happy. During the time I lived at the Rehabilitation Cent

34、er and was under your tender care, I promised myself I would write a letter of thanks as soon as I was able. Abundant thanks to each one of you for your patience, expertise and genuine concern. It was you who helped me believe in myself and gave me assurance that I could walk again. I would never fo

35、rget each word you said to me and the things you have done to me. Never stop your beautiful way of working with people. Your help really means a lot to me and anyone who in trouble as well. Affectionately, Li Ming37A letter of InvitationnWrite a letter to invite your best friend Jane to take part in

36、 your mothers 60-year-old birthday and inform her of your arrangement.nBegin your letter as follows:nDear Jane,38Dear Jane, I am going to have a dinner party at my house on July 14, 2008 to celebrate my mothers 60-year-old birthday. The party will start at seven oclock in the evening. There will be

37、a small musical soiree(晚會(huì)), at which a band will perform some popular and classical songs at first. At around eight o clock, we will start our dinner, during which we can talk and laugh together. And then all the friends will take some photos together. I know you have been busy these days, but I do hope you can make it. My family and I look forward to the pleasure of your company. Yours affectionately, Li Ming 39