英語專業(yè)寫作教程答案PPT

1、1Unit 1Follow-up exercises2Write a focused topic sentence for the following subjectLooking for jobs A person can look for a job in several ways.PenguinsPenguins resemble human beings in many respects. 3Personality Ones personality plays an important role in foreign language learning. WeatherLiving i

2、n a place where the weather is always warm has many advantages. 44.Paragraph I All inventions are either basic inventions or improvements on earlier inventions. Paragraph 2 There was a serious accident in the chemistry lab yesterday.Paragraph 3 Nutritional deficiency is a major problem of the elderl

3、y.55.Paragraph 1 The world has enjoyed many benefits from the invention of telephone. Paragraph 2 I had a terrible morning today. 68.Several techniques have been used to achieve coherence: l) Repetition of key words: junk food, students (as are underlined) 2) Use of transitional signals: For one rea

4、son, Also, As a result, however (as are italicized) 3) Use of pronouns: they, their, this (as are boldfaced) 7Unit 2 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES 3. When I was a child, we never varied our Christmas Eve ritual. We always began our private celebration promptly at 6 p.m. on December 24 when the whole family as

5、sembled in our small kitchen. We watched as Mother and my older sister prepared a light supper. As soon as we finished the meal, we rushed into the living room to decorate the tree. The younger children started the decorating by putting tinsel and colorful8 balls on the branches near the base of the

6、 tree. Meanwhile, the two older children were placing ornaments on the higher branches. Finally, our parents completed the decorating by placing a beautiful golden-haired angel at the very top of the tree. After we finished the tree, we hurriedly dressed and walked down the street to Midnight Mass.

7、As we listened to the service, we remembered the reason we celebrated Christmas. Then we returned home where we ate some of Mothers Christmas goodies. We always ended our Christmas Eve ritual around 2 a.m. by gathering around the tree and singing Silent Night.94. Logical sequence of the sentences:4

8、10 5 12 3 7 15 9 14 2 11 8 13 6 - 1Topic sentence: My family spent two fun-filled days at Disney World last year.10 What we did on the first day What we did on the second day 1. We boarded the monorail and rode around the park1. Early the next morning we once again the climbed aboard the monorail an

9、d headed for another day of fun. 2. Getting off the car, we headed for Space Mountain. - After waiting in line for almost an hour, we boarded the famous roller coaster that took us for a thrilling ride t h r o u g h D i s n e y s universe. 2. We got off at the first stop and immediately headed for t

10、he Country Bear Jamboree.- After waiting in a long line, we thoroughly enjoyed the singing and playing of the animated bears.11 3. Then while resting and drinking Cokes, we decided to visit Main Street. - There we found a good spot to stop and enjoy a colorful parade of floats portraying the history

11、 of the United States. - An hour passed quickly as float after float rolled by, depicting such scenes as Daniel Boone killing a bear.3. When the show was over, we decided to spend the rest of our short visit touring the park and watching the many other shows. 124. A short time later, we decided we w

12、anted lunch and began to poke around the restaurants. - At last we settled on the Cafe Orleans where we had either a late lunch or an early dinner. 5. Afterward, we spent the remainder of the day browsing in the specialty shops of the Magic Kingdom. 13Concluding sentence: Although we were very tired

13、 at midnight, we agreed that our two-day vacation at Disney World was one of the best we had ever had.5. (1) Then (2) morning (3) afternoon (4) Then (5) After that (6)when (7) already (8) after146. Sample paragraph The New Year celebration was so unforgettable for me when I was a child. Weeks before

14、 the New Years Day, my mother would let me help her send out New Years cards and go shopping with her. In the crowded markets 1 bought firecrackers, like all the other kids. Then, beginning on New Years Eve, the sound of exploding firecrackers was everywhere, day and night. On New Years Day, I watch

15、ed huge parades go by in the middle of the streets. People wearing costumes danced past us. Some of them were playing instruments; some were having lion dances, and dragon dances. Afterwards, we worshiped our ancestors in a temple and visited friends and relatives to wish them Happy New Year.15Unit3

16、 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES3. Logical sequence of the sentences: 3 6 1 4 7 5 2 Relationship: Primarily, the organization of the paragraph represents movement in geographical space.164. l) Standing in the burned-out shell of my living room was a shocking experience. Above my head were charred beams, all tha

17、t remained of our ceiling. In front of me, where our television and stereo had once stood, were twisted pieces of metal and chunks of blackened glass. Strangely, some items seemed little damaged by the fire. For example, I could see the TV tuner knob and a dusty CD under the rubble. I walked through

18、 the ashes until I came to what was left of our sofa. Behind the sofa had been a wall of family photographs. Now, the wall and the pictures were gone. I found only a water-logged scrap of my wedding picture.17 2) The central focus is a shocking experience. To support the main idea, the writer uses a

19、 lot of descriptions and organizes these details according to the space relationship, and thus coherence is achieved.185. (1) into (2) crosses (3) In the center of (4)Outside (5) inside(6) On the front(7) over (8)down (9) lined with (10) At the rear196. This paragraph is developed in a circular orde

20、r, i.e. from east to north, and then to south. You are encouraged to describe the house using other ways of arrangement.20Unit 4 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES Look at each others paragraph on the procedures of completing some housework in pairs, comment on each others writing, using what you have learned in t

21、his unit. 213.Pattern: description with supplementary explanations.Steps of the processResults of the effortStep 1Wooden casks a r e f i r s t interconnected a n d t h e n stacked in tiers. /22Step2 Young sherries are poured into the casks at the top whereas the mature sherries are drawn out of the

22、casks at the bottom. One third of the content is drawn out of one cask in any one year.step3Different sherries are constantly mixed up. Special characteristics of t h e d i f f e r e n t s h e r r i e s a r e maintained year after year. 234. with (2) while ( 3 ) s l o w l y (4)Gradually (5) With(6)

23、By this time (7) Suddenly (8) final (9) ending (10) applause245. Task 1Step 1Prepare and lay out food; make the special lanterns.Step 2Keep dancing and singing overnight.Step 3 Throw the food and lanterns into a river or sea. Step 4Watch the lanterns drifting way.25Linking words and phrases that con

24、nect these procedures:firstly, also, afterward, Then, signals the end266. According to the Chinese lunar calendar, the 15th day of the eighth lunar month is the day for the Mid-Autumn Festival, and the day usually falls on one of the days in the latter half of September. For this occasion people nee

25、d to buy moon cakes in advance. And when that evening comes with a full moon rising, Chinese families begin to have a big dinner together. The family members enjoy many delicacies, including sweet or salty moon cakes as well as some27 special food like taros and young soya beans. For those who are a

26、bsent from the family, moon cakes have already been sent to them days before. When the family enjoy all of these, they will look up at the full moon, chatting or missing their faraway relatives or friends. For them, the full moon symbolizes reunion. Such feelings and scenes are fully expressed by a

27、Chinese saying: the moon at home is exceptionally brighter.28Unit5 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES The outline for Paragraph B: Topic sentence: Working in an apple plant was the worst job I ever had. Examples:I. First of all. the work was physically hard. 29Specific details:l) For ten hours a night i took carto

28、ns that rolled down a metal track and stacked them onto wooden skids in a tractor trailer.2) Each carton contained twelve 32-ounce cans or bottles of apple juice, and they were heavy.30 2. The second bad feature of the job was the pay. Specific details: I was getting the minimum wage at that time, $

29、1.25 an hour, plus a minimum of a nickel extra for working the night shift.31 3. The worst feature of the apple plant job was the working conditions. Specific details: 1) During work we were limited to two 10-minute breaks and an unpaid half-hour for lunch. 2) The steel floors of the trucks were lik

30、e ice: the quickly penetrating cold made my feet feel like stone. Concluding sentence: I felt humiliated by the poverty that forced me to do such a bitter job. 324. Logical sequence of the sentences: 3-6-1-8-2-4-7-5Pattern: It follows Pattern l and uses many examples to illustrate the controlling id

31、ea.335. (l) For example (2)Furthermore (3) In still another instance (4) Even(5) his ( 6 ) t h e s e ( 7 ) contemporary347. 1) Ive never seen a girl as lazy as Arena. 2) English teachers are applying different means to teach the English language. 3) Americans have been decreasing their working hours

32、 since early 19/)0s. 4) My father has been a generous man to his children.35Unit 6 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES3. Subject; Class; CharacteristicsRepublic: a form of government in which power resides in the people (the electorate)Wolf: a large, dog-like carnivorous mammal with yellowish or brownish gray and c

33、oarse fur, erect pointed ears, and a bushy tail36Jazz: a style of music that features improvisation and performancePersistence: a kind of quality not giving up even during rough times374. Improved definitionsn A stadium is a structure or building in which sports spectaculars are held.nSocialism is a

34、 theory or system of community organization that advocates the vesting of the ownership and control of the means of production, capital, land and so forth, in the community as a whole.383. Photosynthesis is the process by which plants use the energy of light to produce compounds,such as sugar and st

35、arch, from a number of substances including water and carbon dioxide.4. Surreptitious means secret.395. Political conservatives are people who are dedicated to preserving the existing conditions,such as William F. Buckley, Jr., and Pat Robertson.6. Hearing aids are a kind of device which enables dea

36、f people to hear sounds such as normal speech.40Unit 7 Follow-up ExercisesKey to exercises3. 1) Pattern: single effect and multiple causes2) Causes Effectgot drunk at the partyhad taken the drug of Bart Jr.s suicide Accutaneadolescent depression414. Logical sequence of the sentences:2 4 1 3 6 5Patte

37、rn of cause and effect: single effect and multiple causes.5. Task OneTopic: Society itself may be producing the distortions of personality, mental illness, and emotional instability.42Points Causes Effect1 societys compartmentalizing2.societys competitive demands distortions of personality, etc.3.in

38、ability to rebel43Unit 8 Follow-up ExercisesKey to exercises3. 1) Topic: University Students Entertainment Topic sentence: University students entertainment can be divided into three categories according to where it takes place. Division: a) entertainment at homeb) entertainment on campusc) entertai

39、nment elsewhere2) Topic: Roles of Young Married Women in SocietyTopic sentence: The average young married women in todays society has her life divided into three different roles.44Division: a) the role of wifeb) the role of motherc) the role of self3) Topic: NeighborsTopic sentence: Neighbors fall i

40、nto three categories accordign to their different attitudes towards you.Division: a) those who are friendlyb) those who are indifferentc) those who hate you454. 1) Mattresses:Queen; twin; firm; doubleSingle basis: size2) Exercise:Fatigue; swimming; gymnastics; jogglingSingle basis: field 3) Churches

41、: Roman Catholic; Baptism; Protestant; OrthodoxSingle Basis: branch464) Vacation:Seashore; winter; summer; weekendsSingle basis: time475. Logical sequence of the sentence:73 10 9 1 5 8 4 2 11 6Subject: Christmas giftsTopic sentence: Christmas gifts can be divided into three groups, according to thei

42、r after-Christmas fate.48Division:4those that are welcomed and put into use very soon4those that are halfway between being hated and loved4those that you banish as soon as possible.Concluding sentence: By New Years Day, you have either used, stored or disposed of each of your Christmas gifts.49Unit

43、9 Follow-up Exercises3. Pattern: point-by-pointSubjectPoint Western HomesJapanese Homesroom functionEach room has its own function.One room serves all the functions.tableEach home has several tables for different functions.One low table serves all the purposes.50doorWestern homes have fixed, hinged

44、doors.Japanese homes have lightweight sliding doors.514. Logical sequence of the sentences:53 6 2 4 8 7 1Pattern of comparison and contrast: subject by subject5. similar; although; difference; identical; again; while; But; difference; consistency completely525.1. similar 2. although3. difference4. identical5. again6. while7. But8. difference9. pletely536. Task One SubjectPoint Authority-centered HomeSocial-centered Homerole of parentsFather or mother is the authority.Parents are assistants.division of hou