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1、高考閱卷方式：高考閱卷方式：1. 分工明確，專(zhuān)人負(fù)責(zé)分工明確，專(zhuān)人負(fù)責(zé)2. 監(jiān)控嚴(yán)格，時(shí)間統(tǒng)一監(jiān)控嚴(yán)格，時(shí)間統(tǒng)一3. 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)清晰，檔次分明標(biāo)準(zhǔn)清晰，檔次分明請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。篇短文。 Small things make a big difference. The small things you do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：注意：無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題； 除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限； 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生

2、活中的具體事例； 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)； 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于120左右，如引入提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。左右，如引入提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。評(píng)分原則評(píng)分原則本題總分為本題總分為3030分，按分，按5 5個(gè)檔次給分。個(gè)檔次給分。 詞數(shù)少于詞數(shù)少于120120，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。 評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。評(píng)分檔次的確定應(yīng)在內(nèi)容調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。評(píng)分檔次的確定應(yīng)在內(nèi)容符合題目要求

3、的前提下側(cè)重語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)。符合題目要求的前提下側(cè)重語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容切題，語(yǔ)評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容切題，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、多樣、連貫、得體。言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、多樣、連貫、得體。拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。如書(shū)寫(xiě)太潦草，以至影響辨認(rèn)，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一如書(shū)寫(xiě)太潦草，以至影響辨認(rèn)，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。個(gè)檔次。我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我各檔次的給分范圍和要求各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔第五檔

4、25-30分分完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。所有內(nèi)容與提示吻合。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯應(yīng)用準(zhǔn)確，雖有個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義的表達(dá)；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。恰當(dāng)使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第四檔第四檔19-24分分完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示吻合。應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤對(duì)意義的表達(dá)有一定影響。較恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧苏Z(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)較緊湊。達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第三檔第三檔13-18分分基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示比較吻合。應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能基本滿足任務(wù)的要求。有一些

5、語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯的錯(cuò)誤，對(duì)意義的表達(dá)有較大影響?；灸苁褂谜Z(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)比較松散。整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第二檔第二檔7-12分分僅完成試題規(guī)定的部分任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示基本吻合。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，應(yīng)用詞匯有限。有較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了意義的表達(dá)。語(yǔ)句間的連接成分運(yùn)用不當(dāng)，缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。第一檔第一檔1-6分分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示不太吻合。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單一，應(yīng)用詞匯十分有限。有較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤，嚴(yán)重影響了意義的表達(dá)。缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。 As a member in our so

6、ciety, I can never emphasize the importance of making contributions to the society too much. As a matter of fact, it is the small things we do that show our sense of responsibility. When it comes to this topic, the story of myself is the case in point. I still remember the time when our class was se

7、lected to do cleaning in a small community. Mops and other kinds of tools in hand, we worked hard, regardless of awful heat under the sun. we did all the tasks so carefully that it was not until dusk that we finished cleaning. Tired as we were, we felt proud of ourselves. What a tired but graceful d

8、ay! The most instructive lesson Ive learnt from the experience is that everyone is adequate to do something small but remarkable in order to make our society colorful. Only in this way can we make ourselves a responsible member of the society.第五檔第五檔27-28分分漂漂亮亮漂漂亮亮靚靚 As is known to us all, small thin

9、gs can make a big difference. In our daily life, even if the things we do are very small, we still can make us a responsible member of the society. For example, one weekend, our teachers took us to a park where we were about to plant trees. With the help of our teachers, everyone at least planted on

10、e tree. Some enthusiastic students planted more. Every one of us was really happy to do something for our society. In the meanwhile, we were confident that there would be a forest in the park many years later. Last week, I went to the park. Those trees we planted ten years ago have been taller than

11、I. what a exciting thing! We do make us a responsible member of the society. Although we just did a small thing, but it did make a big difference. Dont hesitate to do small things just because they are small. Do it, and you will see the big change you make. Let us be a responsible member of the soci

12、ety. 第四檔第四檔22-23分分清清楚楚清清楚楚順順 It goes without saying that the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society. As a consequence, small things make a big difference. Three year ago, I failed in an important exam. So I had to go to a old school. Before the exam, I thought the questio

13、ns were very easy for me to write down. So I didnt realize some small things about the exam. Eventually, I failed. As my own experense, I can firmly convinced that small things will make a big difference. And the small things will be helpful for succeed. If you dont notice the small things, you must

14、 be failed. Finally, I will give you some advice. In your life, please remember notice the small things. And then, you will succeed.第三檔第三檔15-16分分馬馬虎虎馬馬虎虎行行 As is widely acknowledged, small things make a big difference. I learned this from one of my experience that I was through Senior One school lif

15、e. One day, when I was play badminton with my classmates in my PE class, I mistake, so we class not got a good grups. I feel nothing. But my classmate told me :your mistake is able to our team lost.” I realized I mistake is very important. I was so froursetrted. that my classmates confort and encour

16、loagement as well as the teacher advice and instaction to helped me devote my spare time to practing playing every day. It wasnt long before. We are win on our school game. From this experience, I am definietly convinced that a small things make a big difference, a people the mistake can will to the

17、 class last. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.第二檔第二檔9-10分分糊里糊涂糊里糊涂 糊糊 Year of my school live tought me a lot of many things. What impressed me the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society. Memories back to my. just go to high school. th

18、at time I alway. I didnt no do the teachers speak and I do read my book. that time I think listen to teachers speaking isnt no impant. I think this is a small thing. No listen I can do it, but In the exam my grade is fanl and lost is class, the head go to my. Say:you wrong, listen is small, but listen teacher speak you. can do it. I think Im wory. I should listen the teacher speak. next I can successful.” Now I know the small thing. Deternitnall you can successful. We should imapant a small thing.第一檔第一檔3-4分分一塌糊涂一塌糊涂慘慘啟示：?jiǎn)⑹荆赫Z(yǔ)