英語考試作文-【獨(dú)立寫作滿分系列_語言篇】運(yùn)用多種句型來體現(xiàn)文章句式的復(fù)雜程度

1、英語考試作文【獨(dú)立寫作滿分系列語言篇】運(yùn)用多種句 型來體現(xiàn)文章句式的復(fù)雜程度為了回答我們上面提出的兩個(gè)問題， 首先我們來看一下OG的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。官方指南對托福獨(dú)立寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 一共有三個(gè)維度， 分別為展開、 組織架構(gòu)和語言使用。 下面我們主要 來看一下評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如何對語言使用進(jìn)行描述。Language use is the third criterion on which youressay will be judged. To get a top score, an essay must display “ consistent facility in the use of language.

2、” There shouldbe a variety of sentence structures, and word choice should be appropriate. If your essay includes a few minor lexical or grammatical errors, you can still get a high score. However, if you make a lot of grammatical errors and if those errors make it hard to understand your meaning, yo

3、u will get a lower score. Raters will also judge your essay based on the complexityof sentence structuresand on the quality andcomplexityof your vocabulary.If you use very simple sentences and very basic vocabulary, you will probably not be able to express very complex ideas. If your language is har

4、d to follow, your sentences are overly simple, and your vocabulary is limited, you may score no higher than a 3 no matter how impressive your ideas may be.我們在這段描述中有三個(gè)重點(diǎn)，我們分別來看一下： There should be a variety of sentence structures 文章中句式要多樣 Raters will also judge your essay based on the complexity of se

5、ntence structures 使用復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu) If your language is hard to follow, your sentences are overly simple, and your vocabulary is limited, you may score no higher than a 3 no matter how impressive your ideas may be. 無論文章觀點(diǎn)多好，過于簡單的句式和過于簡單的 詞匯不會使文章超過3 分也就是說，想要考到寫作20+的成績，文章中的句式絕對不能全部都是簡單句， 要能夠運(yùn)用多種句型來體現(xiàn)文章句式的復(fù)雜程度

6、。 這就需要考生在平時(shí)練習(xí)的過程中， 了解有哪些高級句式， 以及句式之間如何進(jìn)行替換。1 、 基本句型l 因果On account of/owing to/due to+ NFor the reason that/as/since+ 句子It is due tothateg:It is due to his persistence and perseverancethat he eventually reached his acme.( 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 ) derive/arise/stem from 來源于eg:His success derives from his persistence and

7、 perseverance.ascribe A to B 歸結(jié)于eg: His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverancel 條件A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success)If/on condition that/provided that/as longasl 讓步Despite the fact that/regardless of2 、 經(jīng)典句型l 倒裝1) Only via(by/through /with/when/after)_d

8、o/did/can we_ef: Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will Iknow about American typical type of spending leisure time.2) Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can_ef: Hardly can we imagine a world/our life without/devoid of3) So +adj+ 主謂倒裝+that_4) Not only 主謂倒裝 but also.eg: Not only should education prepare chi

9、ldren to competeNot only do people care their economic needs,theybut also want to meet their spiritual needs.5) On no account 主謂倒裝 ( 決不 )l 強(qiáng)調(diào)It is/wasthat/who(m)l 插入語1) 限定性副詞 probably/directly or indirectly/tosome(a large) extent2) N+,ving,+v3) 同位語3、經(jīng)典中的經(jīng)典l 排比1) It is tourism that gives me the oppor

10、tunity to know the culture of this dynamic, robust and alive country.2) It is computers that make our life diverse,convenient,dynamic/ vibrant, without which our life would probably pale.3) A/which needs to be/In this way, A can be readily accepted, respected,appreciated and advocated.4) Only via un

11、iversity education can we have systematic knowledge concerning arts and science.Only via university education can we know the essence of symbiosis and collaboration. And Only via university education can we meet the demandsof society and makeour future success inevitable.l 十大副詞1) Considerably2) Inva

12、riably3) Undoubtedly/indisputably/incontrovertibly4) Increasingly5) Most/exceedingly/exceptionally 格外地富有見底地6) Insightfully7) Regrettably8) Effectively and efficiently9) Gradually and eventually10) Readilyl 其他1) It is not difficult for us to imagine that不難想象2) B makes it possible for us to have an un

13、iversal access to A/A is readily available. A容易得到3) In order to survive and thrive in this fiercely competitive society, people have no choice but to work and study hard.4) Ruthless and relentless 無形 /fierce and intense competitionThe ruthless and relentless competition imposes an unprecedented pres

14、sure on each and every individual, and therefore,there is no exaggeration to say that our innovative and inventive ability can lay a solid foundation for our future, enabling us to survive and thrive in the modern world.5) Inspiration, aspiration and perspiration6) Vision,passion and missionl 范文： 20

15、13.3.17Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement:A leader should admit if they made a bad decision. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.A good leader has plentiful of features such as sense of humor, patience and leadership that makehim or her a perfect leader. Howeve

16、r, when it comes to decision making, peoples opinions differ. Some people deem that best leaders are not supposed to makea bad decision while opponents consider making bad decisions a natural part of humanbeing not mentioning best leaders. In my perspectives, best leaders are those who are willing t

17、o admit if they have madeimproper decisions. I shall illustrate my points in the following paragraphs.First and foremost, admitting of the wrong decisions that are madereflects leaders broad minds, which are a must to best leaders. To err is a man. Nobody makes no mistake, but not everyone admit the

18、y make bad decisions due to vain self-esteem. Those who are willing to or even like to admit the wrong decision are broad-minded, and people will respect these kind of people. A recent survey about what sort of bosses employees like conducted by a prodigious institute in UnitedStates showed that 70%

19、 of employees vote for boss who are broad-minded. Therefore, admitting inappropriate decisions makes a leader outstanding.Another equally important factor is that admissionof bad decision making can help a leader avoid errors whenfaced with similar problems again. Of course, concerning the developme

20、nt of a company or a group, it will be optimal for leaders to make less mistake. Denial of making bad decisionmay be an idea to make that but not a good one. In a long run, it will be better to admit making wrong decisions in order toavoid similar challenges in the future. Covering mistakes all the time will eventually destroy a company or a group.Last but not least, denial of making wrong decisionshow that the leaders have no courage to face what they have done while courage is a vital characteristic for a top leader.There is little doubt that the courage of leader plays a significant par