中考英語作文(2018版)-(11956)

1、陸老師中考作文大講堂第一段 記敘文: 開篇背景介紹（時間、地點、人物、事件） 議論文:發(fā)表觀點第二段 記敘文: 故事發(fā)展 議論文: 論據(jù)、論點支撐開篇：寫的能力包括 :書寫端正 ,拼寫正確 ,語言通順,無語法錯誤 ,層次清楚 ,內(nèi)容完整。 中考英 第三段 記敘文: 結(jié)局 議論文: 總結(jié)觀點語閱卷老師看寫作主要有三個標準： 1）結(jié)構(gòu) 2 ）內(nèi)容要點 3 ）語言（詞組搭配、句型、句式變 2 “四步 ” 化、過渡詞）看結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容要點定分數(shù)檔，看語言給成績。這是中考英語閱卷的潛規(guī)則。 有了框架就相當于有了骨骼，而真正的血肉要靠四個步驟來實現(xiàn)。第一講： “ 10 字原則 ”的高分作文標準 - “結(jié) 構(gòu)+

2、 要點+ 邏輯+ 語法+ 亮點！ ”步驟一：審題結(jié)構(gòu) ：中考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式， 深受各地區(qū)中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。 為什么呢？ 審題的訓(xùn)練對于每個學(xué)生都不陌生，我要說的是審題一定要做到五個方 面：一審主題（寫什因為這種結(jié)構(gòu)十分清晰。 “觀點 要點 總結(jié) ”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段：簡單明了， 么），二審體裁（記敘、 說明、議論、夾敘夾議），三審時態(tài) （時態(tài)中考兩個扣一分， 三個降一檔），開門見山，不超過 2 句話，如，我們想表達小強很強壯， 第一段直接說 XQ is extremely strong. 四審人稱（別犯低級錯誤） ，五審內(nèi)容要點 （ 一定要在試卷中畫出， 免得寫的時

3、候忘記， 導(dǎo)致 跑題）觀點明確，這一句足矣。第二段：分 2-3 點說為什么他強壯。 1. 每天吃 10 頓飯，He has ten meals步驟二：打草稿everyday! 詳舉吃的是什么。 2. 每天運動 2 小時，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 詳舉中考一定要打草稿，兩大優(yōu)勢做了什么運動。第三段：經(jīng)過第二段的論證，可以得出結(jié)論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，1 中考不準在試卷更改，涂改帶、橡皮、膠條、小刀（我小時候想都沒想過） ，而中考時 落筆要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如， How strong and robust XQ is! I hope t

4、o be him錯誤是難免的，涂改就會后卷面分，打草稿就可以避免這個情況了。one day! 2 正式寫作是對草稿的在梳理，語言的再錘煉。要點：實際上中考英語寫作就等于兩個字，翻譯！因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點， 步驟三：正文寫作要求必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫的再好，只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點，也就是文章的做到兩點，一要凝練， 二要變化。文章 80 100 字為宜，一定要注意使用過渡詞、從句、第二段內(nèi)容，要做到全，圍繞中心。 句型和詞組搭配。 邏輯：這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進的，轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結(jié)的邏輯詞 步驟四：檢查：等。 遞進：除了 first, second

5、, third, finally 等還可以使用高級點的，如 first of all( 首先) ，很多學(xué)生考試都會檢查，但總是不能找到自己的錯誤。原因很簡單，方法不對：in addition, what's more, moreover( 都是另外的意思 ); （表示總結(jié)的） in a word, all in英語寫作檢查的原則：all 。 轉(zhuǎn)折：but, yet, however 等。真正有經(jīng)驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞，因為這 1 內(nèi)容要點：缺少一個內(nèi)容要點，文章直接降到第三檔 些詞體現(xiàn)了這個文章的思路。2 語法錯誤：名詞查單復(fù)數(shù)和冠詞問題，動詞查時態(tài)語態(tài)和三單問題。語法：其

6、他幾點都不是硬性的要求，不那樣做不能說是錯，只能說是不好，但是語法卻是硬 3 變換句式：過于簡單的結(jié)構(gòu)要試著變化性的。如，單詞的使用，時態(tài)等。 第三講：中考話題項目表亮點：當我們將前八個字都做得很完美的時候也只能得到一個二等文的上。 要想得到一等文， 1. 個人情況 （Personal backgrou d） 1）個人信息（ Personal information) （2）家庭信息（ Family information)最后兩個字，亮點至關(guān)重要。大家設(shè)想如果我們是閱卷老師。有兩篇寫人美麗的作文擺在我們面 （3）學(xué)校信息 (School information) （4）興趣愛好 (Inter

7、ests and hobbies) （5）工作與職業(yè) (Jobs and careers).前，都是結(jié)構(gòu)清晰的三段式，要點都很全，都用了一些邏輯詞，都沒有語法錯誤，但是A 篇只用了 beautiful,good- looking,B 篇卻用到了 attractive ，charming ，catching 等，我堅信正常人都會給 B 篇高分的。這些高級一點的詞匯，詞組，句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。2. 家庭、朋友與周圍的人 （ Family, friends and people around) （6）家人和親友 (Family andrelatives) （7）朋友(Friends

8、) （8）其他人 (Other people)3. Living environment) 9 (Houses and apartments) 10 Rooms in 居住環(huán)境 （ （ ）房屋與住所 （ ）居室（homes)(11)所以，以后寫英語作文要養(yǎng)成一般詞匯限量用的好習慣。 只要把這十個字都搞定了，那么初中英語寫作就一定能搞定！家具和家庭用品 (Furniture and household items) （12）社區(qū) (Community)第二講：通向高分作文的路徑 - 三段四步法4. 日?；顒?（Daily routines) （13）家庭生活 (Life at home) （14

9、）學(xué)校生活 (School life) （15）周末活動(Weekend知己知彼，方能百戰(zhàn)不殆，既然中考閱卷流程和內(nèi)部標準已經(jīng)明朗化，相對的策略也就順利activities)成章的形成了?，F(xiàn)在和大家分享，筆者教學(xué)和閱卷過程中總結(jié)創(chuàng)立的寫作滿分秘訣。5. 學(xué)校（ School) （16）學(xué)校設(shè)施 (School facilities) （17）學(xué)校人員 (People at school) （18）學(xué)習1 “三段 ”（三個段落） 針對的閱卷老師先看文章結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容要點，讓閱卷老師不 科目 (School subjects) 得不給（19）學(xué)?；顒?(School activities) 你定位一類

10、文。6. 個人興趣 （Personal interests) （20）游戲與休閑 (Games and leisure) （21）愛好中高考情景是作文，無論是那種文體，都可以用三段法來表示。這個方法的起源是來自美國(Hobbies) （ 22）娛樂活動(Entertainments) （23）旅游 (Tourism) 的“高考”SAT 考試，（SAT 是美國或它國學(xué)生想要申請美國大學(xué)必須參加的考試，故被叫過美國的高考）。7. 情感與情緒 （Feelings and moods) （ 24）情感 (Feelings) （25）情緒 (Moods)我們管這樣的文章叫做 HamburgerWriti

11、ng( 漢堡寫作)8. 人際交往 (Interpersonal communication) （26）社會行為 (Social behaviour) （27）合作與交流(Cooperation and顧名思義，就是無論是記敘文、還是議論文、或者夾敘夾議文章，都可以通用。簡單解釋如communication) 下：9. 計劃與安排 (Plans and arrangements) （28）計劃 (Planning) （29）安排 (Arranging).10. Festivals, holidays and celebrations) 30 (Festivals andholidays) 31

12、節(jié)假日活動 （ （ ）節(jié)日與假日（ ）慶?；顒?(Celebrations)11. 購物 (Shopping) （32）購物計劃(Shopping plan) （33）商品 (Goods) （34） 選擇(Selecting) （35）付款 (Payment).（36）個人喜好 (Personal preference).12. 飲食（ Food and drinks) （37）食物 (Food) （38）飲料(Drinks) （ 39）飲食習俗( Eating customs) （40）點餐 (Ordering 10. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。 food an

13、d drink)11. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上無難事 ,只 怕有心13. 衛(wèi)生與健康 (Hygiene and health) （ 41）身體部位 (Parts of body) （42）體育健身 (Physical fitness and exercise)人。（43）個人衛(wèi)生 (Personal hygiene) （44）疾病 (Illnesses) （ 45）健康飲食 (Healthy diet) （46）醫(yī)療( Medical care)12. A life without a f

14、riend is a life without a sun. 人若無友 , 就如同生命中沒有太 陽。14. 安全與救護 (Safety and first aid) （47）安全守則(Safety rules) （48）意外 (Accidents) （49）急救 (First aid)（50）自我保護 (Self protection)13. All things are difficult before they are easy. 萬事開頭難。Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨綢繆。15. 天氣 （Weather) （51）天氣情況 (Weather co

15、nditions) （ 52）天氣預(yù)報(Weather report) （53）衣著與天氣14. As you sow, so shall you reap. 種瓜得瓜 ,種豆得豆。(Appropriate dressing for the weather)15. I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort;second, moreeffort; third, still more effort. 成功要靠三件事才能贏得 : 努力 , 努力,再努力。16. 文娛與體育 (Recreation and sports

16、) （54）電影與戲劇 (Movies and theater) （55）音樂與舞蹈(Music and dance) 17. Don t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 有事 莫推明天。.（56 (Sports and matches) ）體育與賽事17. (Travel and transport) 57 (Travel) 58 (Modes of transportation) 59 旅游與交通 （ ）旅行 （ ）交通運輸方式（ ）交.通標志 (Traffic signs) 60 Reading maps) （ ）使用地圖

17、（.18. 通訊（Communications) （61）寫信（ Writing letters) （62）打電話（ Making phone calls)（63）使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng).（Using the Internet)19. 語言學(xué)習 （Language learning) （64）語言學(xué)習經(jīng)歷 （ Language learning experience) （65）語言與文化（Language常用過渡語and culture) （66）語言學(xué)習策略（ Language learning strategies) （67）體態(tài)語（ Body language) 23. 表起始的過渡語 :first

18、 of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far ,as far as 等。 20. 自然 （Nature) （68）動物和植物 (Animals and plants) （69）山川與河流（ Mountains and rivers) （70）季節(jié)24. 表時間的過渡語 :first, at first, then, later , in the end, finally, afterwards, after （Seasons) （71）宇宙（ Universe) （72）人與自然（ Man and nature)that

19、, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile,21. 世界與環(huán)境 （The world and the environment) （73）國家與民族（ Countries and nationalities)later on, soon, 等。 （74）環(huán)境保25. 表空間的過渡語 :on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of 護（ Environmental protection) （75）人口（ Popul

20、ation)? on the 22. 科普知識與現(xiàn)代技（術(shù)Popular science and modern technology) （76）數(shù)字與數(shù)據(jù)（ Figures and data) （77）othe r side of ? , at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in 科普知識 （Popular science) （78）發(fā)明與技術(shù)（Inventions and technological advances) （79）信息技術(shù)（Informationfront of 等. .tech

21、nology)26. 表因果的過渡語 :for , because of, one reason is that ? another reason isthat ? ,thus, so, as a result (of) 等. 23. 歷史與社會（History and society) （80）中國歷史與世界歷史（ History of China and the world) （81）著名27. 表轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡語 :but, yet, however , after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, 人物（ Famous people)instead

22、 of, unlike, although, otherwise,nevertheless, in spite of, 等。24. 故事與詩歌（Stories and poems) （82）故事（ Stories) （83）詩歌(Poems) （84）短?。?Short plays)28. 表列舉的過渡語 :for example, such as, that is, like, as follows, in other words, (85) 作家and so on 等。 （Writers ）29. 表推進的過渡語 :what s more, on one hand ? on the oth

23、er hand第四講：中考必背的作文經(jīng)典詞句 常用的名言警句? , in additionto, as well , still, also, in other words, not only ? but also ? ,besides,1. Actions speak louder than words. 事實勝于雄辯.furthermore,2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難朋友才是真朋友 . moreover 等.3. A good beginning is half done. 良好的開端是成功的一半 . 30. 表總結(jié)的過渡語 :in

24、 short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, on the whole4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成 . 等. 常用句型1. 重點句型.1). It asdj for sb to do 做? 對某人來說? 2). ? so ? that ? 如此? 以至于? ? spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名詞 花費時間做 ?too ? to do 太? 而不能? such ? that ? 如此? 以至于? ha

25、ve fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得 開心3). not ? until 直? 到? 才? have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing或 with + 名詞例: I didn t go to bed until my mother came back.4).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 ? 的原因是 ?（2018.1.8 再版）The reason why he got angry was that she told him

26、a lie. ( 他生氣的原因是她對他說了 ? ? 祝所有中考考生，金榜題名 ?謊。)附錄：范例賞析 ( 一) 快樂成長篇5). That is why + 句子 那是? 的原因成長方面的設(shè)題經(jīng)常是要求考生針對成長過程中可能遇 到 的問題進行簡要描述， 提出自己的觀點、 建議等。6). That is because + 句子 那是因為?主要涉及如何釋放學(xué)習壓力、調(diào)節(jié)情緒，如何處理同學(xué)關(guān)系等。此類試題通常以要點提示的方式來 考查。7). It is said that + 句子 據(jù)說? It is reported that + 句子 據(jù)報道?8). There is no doubt tha

27、t + 句子 毫無疑問?常用表達1 Molly is an easy going girl who gets along well with everyone. 9). It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻，毫無疑問10). There is no need to do 沒必要做 ?2 We should put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kindheart and good grades. 11). There is no point in do

28、ing 做某事毫無意義11. 提建議3 We all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.4 Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to had better (not) do 最好( 不) 做 how about / what about doing ? 怎么樣?deal with problems.I think you should do 我認為你應(yīng)該? I s

29、uggest that you should do 我建議你做 ?5 The more knowledge you have, the more confidence you will have.If I were you, I would do 我要? 是你的話，我會做 ? It s best to do 最好做?典型例題Why not do / why don t you do 為? 什? 么不 ? 12. 表示喜歡和感興趣對學(xué)生綜合素質(zhì)評價的方式多種多樣，同伴互評是其中較為有效的方式之一。某班 一 個 小組 在正階行進段性同伴互評活動，如果你是該組組長，請結(jié)合本組討論情況，為本組某位同學(xué)

30、寫一份 激勵性評價報告，須容內(nèi)like / love doing enjoy doing be fond of doing 喜歡做? be keen on n/doing包含以下要點： the skill/the advantage/the personal quality the student has one thing the喜歡做? prefer to do A rather than do B 寧愿做 A 也不愿做 Bstudent did some advice for the student 要求：詞數(shù)80 詞左右。be interested in doing = show/ t

31、ake great interest in n / doing 感興趣【審題思路】13. . 努力做?1 要點：本文的主題是為同學(xué)寫一份 “激勵性評價報告”。文章有三個要點：try to do 努力做? try one s best to do= do one s best to 竭d盡o 全力做 ?(1) 同學(xué)的情況； (2) 同學(xué)所做的一件事情； (3) 給同學(xué)的建議。 2 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)時在 3 人稱：第三make efforts to do = make every effort to do 盡力做? do what sb can (do ) to do .人稱盡力做? spare no

32、 effort to do 不遺余力的做 ? do what / everything sb. can to do 盡【佳作賞析】某人全力做 ?Han Mei is an easy going girl who_gets_along_well_with_everyone ( 定語從句 ). She isalso14. 打算做? / 計劃做?talented_in (be talented in 有? ? 的“天賦”， 高 級詞 匯) performing. What's the most important, she isintend / plan to do 打算做? be goin

33、g to do 打算/ 計劃做? decide to do 決定做?warm hearted ( 結(jié)合要點：寫同學(xué)的情況 ).determine to do 決定做? make up one s mind to do 下定決心做 ?Once she knew a girl in her neighborhood who had so serious an illness that a large amount15. 表示想/ 希望of money was needed. (that 引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句 ) She called on all the kids to give away pocke

34、twant to do = would like to do 想做? hope to do 希望做? expect to do 期待著money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money ( 結(jié)合 要點：做? 描寫同學(xué)的所做的事情 ). When_the girl and her parents got themoney( 時間狀語從句 ), they werewish to do 希望做? consider doing 考慮做?really moved.16. 只加 doing

35、 作賓語的動詞Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with bothfinish 完成/ practice 習練 / suggest 建議 / consider 考慮 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜a kind heart and good grades( 結(jié)合要點：提出建議 ).歡doing主題寫作 ( 二) 語言學(xué)習篇固定搭配命題者通常列舉語言學(xué)習過程中出現(xiàn)的某一現(xiàn)象，要求考生針對該現(xiàn)象進行 描述，并提出合理的建議并闡look forward to doing

36、 盼望做? keep on doing 堅持做? dream of doing 夢想做?述自己的觀點。主要涉及教學(xué)方式的變化、課堂學(xué)習方式、英語學(xué)習方法等。此類試題多以要點提示的方式來can t help doing 情不自禁地做 ? keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做 ?考查。be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名詞 忙于做?1 I enjoy learning English, but I am not good at it.2 It is hard for me to understand other p

37、eople when they talk. housework.3 I find English grammar is very hard to learn. 8 I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also4 Could you please tell me how to improve my spoken English? can make me learn more knowledge.5 In English class, we should liste

38、n to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. 主題寫作 ( 五) 人物故事篇6 We should take part in all kinds of activities, such as reading, writing, having discussions人物故事類書面表達一般針對考生熟悉的著名人物或者同學(xué)、朋友來設(shè)題，要求考生對人物進行描寫。主and playing games.要涉及描寫人物的簡歷、變化以及自己對此人物的看法等。此類試題通常以要點提示或者表格提示的方式來考7 It's very impor

39、tant to be confident when you learn a foreign language.查。8 I think that doing lots of listening, speaking, reading and writing practice is the secret of 1 My friend Jenny comes from New York.becoming a good language learner . 2 She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses.主題寫作 ( 三 ) 健康生活篇3

40、 He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the people in trouble.命題者經(jīng)常在考生熟悉的健康生活問題上進行設(shè)題，試題主要涉及健康問題、飲食習慣、食品安全等。此 4 I want to be a person like Helen from now and get along well with everyone.類試題主要以要點提示或者表格提示的方式來查。 5 I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend David. 1

41、Many young people like eating junk food very much. 6 He is a 15 year old student, who is outgoing. 2 Here is some advice on how to keep healthy. 7 He is good at playing basketball.3 We must have healthy food rather than junk food. 8 I hope that he will become a famous person in the future and we can

42、 keep in touch with4 Though junk food is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food. each other .5 To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food.【審題思路】6 It's a good idea to have more healthy food like fruit and vegetables. 1 找出關(guān)鍵點：外貌、愛好、性格特征； 2 列出提綱。從以上三個方面簡單列出提綱； 3 明確時態(tài)：【審題思路】主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時； 4 確定人

43、稱：第三人稱。1 謀篇布局：根據(jù)試題的內(nèi)容要點提示可以將文章分為兩部分，一部分寫 “中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問題 ”， My Friend Daniel 另一部分寫自己對 “怎樣才能保持健康 ” 的一些看法。 My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round faceand2 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時 3 人稱：第三人稱 ( 列舉健康問題 ) ；第一人稱 ( 表達自己的觀點 ) often wears a pair of glasses ( 結(jié)合要點：描寫圖片中人物的長相 ). He is good a

44、t playing computer【佳作賞析】 games ( 結(jié)合要點：寫擅長玩電腦游戲 ), but_( 轉(zhuǎn)折詞的使用，使行文跌宕起伏 ) he dislikes sports. He hasMany students like eating junk food very much ( 結(jié)合要點：寫中學(xué)生面臨的飲食健康問題 ). They many good personalities. He is helpful ( 結(jié)合要點：寫樂于助人 ). Heoften_( 頻度副詞的使用，使文章 流暢自然 ) helps his classmates with the homework, an

45、d also_( 副詞的使用，使文章過渡自然 ) helpshave poor eyesight ( 結(jié) 合要點： 寫中學(xué) 生面臨 的身體健 康問題 ) because_they don't have_theright_way_to_read_(because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句 ). And ( 連接詞， 使之與上文連貫 ) they often play the old cross the road. He is kind to others ( 結(jié)合要點：寫對人友善 ).computer games for seve ral hours ( 結(jié)合要點：寫中學(xué)生面臨的娛樂健康問題

46、). He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is alsoHere_are_some_suggestions (here 引導(dǎo)的倒裝句 ) on how_to_keep_healthy ( 疑 “問詞動 詞不 creative ( 結(jié)合要點： 寫有創(chuàng)造性 ). For_example_( 舉例說明， 使文章生動 ), he can create a TV program.定 式 ”作 賓 語 ) in our life. We must have healthy food

47、, rather than junk food. He is generous to his friends ( 結(jié)合要點：適當展開 ). He likes to share his things with them. So (so一詞引出作者學(xué)到的內(nèi)容 ) I want to be a person like Daniel from now and get long well withReading_in_a_right_way ( 動名詞短語作主語 ) is good for our eyesight. We should stay away fromcomputer games. If_

48、we_can_do_these_things (if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句 ), I think( 結(jié)合要點：明確提出 everyone.觀點) we will keep fit. 主題寫作 ( 六) 假日、旅行篇主題寫作 ( 四 ) 計劃愿望篇該主題命題主要涉及節(jié)日習俗、節(jié)假日活動、旅游景點、旅游線路以及寫游覽日記等。此類試題主要利用對未來的計劃和設(shè)想進行設(shè)題時，要求考生對題目中涉及的計劃或打算進行描述，同時表達自己的愿望及 要點提示的方 式來考查。.計劃實施的效果等。此類試題主要考查考生用一般將來時描述行動或計劃的能力。 1 It's a good idea to go travel

49、ing during the summer vacation.1 The summer/winter holiday is coming. 2 I think the best place to visit is the Great Wall.2 I'm going to have a good rest and relax myself. 3 We can see many ancient buildings, including palaces, temples and towers in Xi'an.3 I'm sure I'll have an inte

50、resting and meaningful holiday. 4 You'd better go with your friends or family.4 If possible, I'd like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall. 5 I am going to travel to London with my parents after the final exam.5 We are going to meet at the school gate at 7 ： 00 on Sunday morning. 6

51、 We'll be away for about seven days.6 I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. 7 I hope that you can provide me with some information about the customs of France.7 I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do som

52、e 8 I would like to travel to some exciting places this summer holiday.It's a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit is My Low carbon Lifethe Palace Museum( 結(jié)合要點： 點明旅游的最好的地方 ). As_we_all_know ( 非限制性定語從句， 高級用法), My name is Li Ming. I am a middle scho

53、ol student. I go to school on foot everyday( 結(jié)合要點：說明每天步行上學(xué) ). I always_( 副詞的使用使行文流暢 ) remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the the Palace Museum, also known as the Purple Forbidden City, is_wonderful and famous_for (befamous for 因“? ? 而著名 ”，增加了文章的亮點 ) its long history in the world. We can see

54、 a lot of ancient fans when_I_leave_the_classroom_(when 引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句 ). When I am not using water , Ibuildings, including palaces, temples and towers ( 結(jié) 合 要 點 ： 描 述 其 特 殊 的 地 方 ). always turn off the tap ( 結(jié)合要點：描寫關(guān)掉水龍)頭. I often_( 副詞的使用使行文流暢自然 ) reuse water ,If_we_want_to_visit_the_Palace Museum for e

55、xample, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor( 結(jié)合要點：適當主題寫作 ( 七 ) 情感表達篇發(fā)揮).日常生活中同學(xué)們經(jīng)常遇到情感問題，這類試題要求考生結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷或者感受 進 行寫作。常見的情感 I never use plastic bags ( 結(jié)合要點： 描寫不使用塑料袋 ). I think saving paper is necessary, so_(so類表達有愛、快樂、微笑、幸福、痛苦和煩惱等。此類試題通常以利用漢語引出話題的方式來進行考查 。 的使用使文章過渡自然

56、) I often make full use of paper ( 結(jié)合要點：描寫充分利用紙張 ).1 There may be something unpleasant in our life. It's_important_for_us_to_live_a_low carbon_life_to_protect_the_environment_(it 作形式2 Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence and beat the unhappy feelings. 主語，動詞不定式為真 正主語 ).主題寫作 ( 九) 安全問題篇 3 We should learn to smile to others, and it will help us to get closer to others.4 I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier .安全問題主要涉及如何保護人身安全、校園安全、交通安全等。此類試題常以要點提示的方式來考查 。5 I get much help and love from many people in my life. 1 As students, we