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1、 How To Write A Composition書面表達評分標準：書面表達評分標準： 書面表達，書面表達，1515分。考生應根據(jù)題目要求，采用適當?shù)姆?。考生應根?jù)題目要求，采用適當?shù)臅r態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語，完整、準確地表達所要求的內(nèi)容。時態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語，完整、準確地表達所要求的內(nèi)容。分四檔評分：分四檔評分： 第一檔：符合題目要求，內(nèi)容完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，第一檔：符合題目要求，內(nèi)容完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達清楚，語言無誤。表達清楚，語言無誤。13131515分。分。 第二檔：基本符合題目要求，內(nèi)容較完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)第二檔：基本符合題目要求，內(nèi)容較完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)較清晰，表達較清楚，語言有少

2、量錯誤。較清晰，表達較清楚，語言有少量錯誤。9 91212分。分。 第三檔：部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，內(nèi)容不夠完整，層第三檔：部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，內(nèi)容不夠完整，層次結(jié)構(gòu)不夠清晰，表達不夠清楚，語言有較多錯誤。次結(jié)構(gòu)不夠清晰，表達不夠清楚，語言有較多錯誤。4 48 8分。分。 第四檔：不符合題目要求，整篇表達不清楚，或照抄、第四檔：不符合題目要求，整篇表達不清楚，或照抄、拼湊幾個詞語。拼湊幾個詞語。0 03 3分。分。 Liu Wei, an armless piano player has a very special experience. When he was ten years old,

3、 he lost his arms unluckily in an accident. Then he became an armless man. But he didnt give up being a piano player. He played the piano by his feet every day. In the end, he achieved his dream in Chinas Got Talent. What a brave boy! From his experience, I learned that if I always work hard, I will

4、 be successful. As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way”. In the future, I hope I can be brave and confident like Liu Wei.15 Liu Wei, an armless piano player has a very special experience. At the age of ten, he lost his arms. But he didnt give up the dream of being a piano player.

5、 He used his feet to play the piano. At last, his dream came true in the Chinas Got Talent! What can we learn from his experience? First, we should set up our dream. Second, we shouldnt give up it though we are in trouble. Third, we should practice it as possible as we can.If we dont forget our drea

6、m, I believe that every one of us can be successful.15 Liu Wei, an armless piano player has a very special experience. Do you know? Now, let me tell you about Liu Wei. Liu Wei is a great people. When he was ten years old, he lost his arms. He never gave up. He said: “Nothing is too difficult, if you

7、 put your mind on it”. From then on, he was strict with himself. He trained very hard. He belived that he can make his dream came true. At the end of, he achieved his dream in Chinas Got Talent. Now, he is very successful. I think there is no free lunch in the world. We must work hard and belive: “W

8、here there is a will, there is a way”.12 Liu Wei, an armless piano player has a very special experience. He was ten years old, He lost his arms. He was very sad, but he didnt give up play piano. He work very hard play piano by foot every day. One day, He taked part in Chinas Got Talent. His dream wa

9、s come true. He was very happy. I know. He is a great man. I learn more things from him. I love he. Now, I will work hard to study. I will try my best to study. Believe me. My dream will come true. I will. Come on!8have a running compesitionproud, think, win the matchrun, sleepwake up, winOne day,At

10、 first, sothatBut whileAt last,From the story, we knowName: Bill One day, Mr. Hare wanted to have a running competition with Mr. Tortoise. Mr. Hare was proud, he believed he could win the match. While Mr. Tortoise was running, Mr. Hare was sleeping. He woke up but Mr. Tortoise had won the match.Name

11、: Alice Do you know the story of Mr. Tortoise and Mr. Hare? Let me tell it to you. One day, Mr. Hare wanted to have a running competition with Mr. Tortoise. At first, Mr. Hare was so proud that he believed he could win the match. But while Mr. tortoise was running, Mr. Hare was sleeping. At last, wh

12、en Mr. Hare woke up, Mr. Tortoise had won the match. From the story, we know if we hold on our dreams and never give up, our dreams will come true one day.How to write a composition1The beginning and the end are important.They must have something to do with your topic.2Use some connective words to c

13、onnect the above and the following.3Use some clauses to show you are good at English.How to write a compositionComposition, composition, how to write, how to write?Beginning and ending, connective words, clauses, too. Clauses, too.Believe in yourself. You shouldnt be so common as a young man.born in

14、 April 1980 in Shanghaijoin the national team in 1998join NBA in 2000join the Rockets in 2002was hurt in a match in 2009be able to play basketball again in May 2010Lets try to make it perfect ! Yao Ming was born in 1980 in Shanghai. He joined the national team in 1998. He joined NBA in 2000. He join

15、ed the Rockets in June,2002. He was hurt in a match in 2009. He was able to play basketball again in May,2010.Homework:中考鏈接：（中考鏈接：（2009重慶市中考書面表達）重慶市中考書面表達） 假如你叫張霖，暑假后就要進入高中學習。由于住校與住在家里各有利弊，你想通過假如你叫張霖，暑假后就要進入高中學習。由于住校與住在家里各有利弊，你想通過e-mail征求英國筆友征求英國筆友Bill的意見。內(nèi)容應包括住宿、飲食、交通等方面。的意見。內(nèi)容應包括住宿、飲食、交通等方面。 注意：注意： 1、字數(shù)要控制在、字數(shù)要控制在100詞左右。詞左右。 2、不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名。、不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名。 3、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Bill, How i