2016屆高考英語短文改錯集訓(xùn)(13)及答案解析

1、2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（十三）【專項(xiàng)突破】短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Passage 1In the countryside there are some children dropped out of school. The re

2、asons of this are different. Some families are very poor to afford the education of their children. Some parents think useless for girls to attend school, so that their daughters lost the chance. Some children are unwilling to attend school for lack of interests in their studies. In my opinion, ever

3、y child should have the chance to receive an education, whether boys and girls. Besides, the government should take effect measures to guarantee childrens right of education because we will play important roles in developing our country in the future. Passage 2One day during the period of the Three

4、Kingdoms (220- 265A.D.), Cao Cao led his soldiers to fight battle. On his way his soldiers were all feeling thirst, but there was no water near. Cao Cao got worried in his heart, as suddenly an idea occurred in his mind.Then he let his order be past down:“There have plum trees ahead, and the plums i

5、n the trees are sweets and sour. Well get there in no time, and then youll be picking and eating it.” When the soldiers all had heard the command, they soon felt their mouths water.Passage 3Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old

6、 along a road. Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated discussion. Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient. Beside, it helps improve the image of our city. But the people

7、 who are for the idea believe that we can have another one solution. How should we pull it down? The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city. We can move it away and keep it as long as we like. So far there had been no conclusion over the matter. Passage 4There are many people t

8、hink that wealth is better than health. I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore，in the last twenty years of his life, his health began to get worse and he led a miserably life.Although the best docto

9、rs called for him, he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health, you will not be able to do what you want to do.But I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself trying to make money. Instead

10、, take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.Passage 52015 Spring Festival is coming now. I plan buy something for my parents. What I want to give them back is a VIP card for a health club but they need enough exercise. My father works hardly as a teacher, spent m

11、ost of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often buried herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on. I want to give them this card to express my thank and love. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends there.

12、 At the same time, I hope that they can take care with their health.Passage 6Now Id like to sharing with you a strange experience I had a month ago. It may sound funny, and it is true. After a days hard work I went to bed early than usual. It was about two oclock and suddenly I woke up. I heard a no

13、ise. I got out bed and went slowly downstairs. There had light in the living room. I listened careful. I could hear two men talking quietly. I thought two thieves have broken into my house. I was so frightening that I went back upstairs and phoned the police. They were arrived quickly and opened the

14、 door. It turned out that I forgot to turn my TV on. Passage 7Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years before. Every Sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreigners often took part. Gather around here, we practise spoken English by t

15、alking about everything we are interested. We also exchange my experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousand of people have been here when it was set up.We think that they have learned a lot by taking part in activity here. It is a really supplement to our English class and it

16、is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. They all think it is of helpful. If you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here. 2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（十三）答案Passage 151. dropped dropping 52. of this for this 53. very too 54. thinkit 55. lostlose 56. interestsinterest 57. 去

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20、usion over the matter. hasPassage 41.people后加who或者think改為thinking 2.had去掉 3.an改為a 4.Therefor改為Howver5.miserably改為miserable 6.doctors后加were 7.million改為millions 8.at改為in9.But改為So 10.which改為whatPassage 52015 Spring festival is coming now. I plan buy something for my parents. What I want to give them back is a VIP card for a health club but they need enough exercise. My father works hardly as a teacher, spent most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often buried herself in her books. Therefore, all of