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1、 英語(yǔ)寫作復(fù)習(xí)課英語(yǔ)寫作復(fù)習(xí)課寫作的定義：寫作的定義：What is writing? 高考英語(yǔ)作文高考英語(yǔ)作文:1. 提示作文（提示作文（Controlled writing）1. 時(shí)間時(shí)間2. 字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)3. 內(nèi)容內(nèi)容2. 體裁（體裁（Type of writing）1. 應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文(practical)2. 記敘文記敘文(narrative)3. 議論文（議論文（argumentative)寫作步驟：三步，七字作文法寫作步驟：三步，七字作文法寫作前寫作前(Pre-writing)寫作中寫作中(Writing) 復(fù)寫復(fù)寫(Rewriting)抄改美 連列定審步驟步驟七字作文七字作文法法寫作

2、前寫作前Pre-writing：1 1、審、審仔細(xì)閱讀寫作要求及注仔細(xì)閱讀寫作要求及注 意事項(xiàng)；意事項(xiàng)； 2、定、定確定體裁，人稱和時(shí)態(tài)確定體裁，人稱和時(shí)態(tài) 及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；寫作中寫作中Writing：3、列、列列出列出要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)，重要詞組及句型；，重要詞組及句型； 4、連整理成篇，行文連貫；以以“My English Teacher”My English Teacher”為題寫一為題寫一篇篇8080字左右的英語(yǔ)短文，提示如下：字左右的英語(yǔ)短文，提示如下：1 1 孫老師，孫老師，2525歲，歲，1.651.65米米, , 打扮入時(shí)。打扮入時(shí)。2 2 關(guān)心熱愛(ài)學(xué)生關(guān)心熱愛(ài)學(xué)生 。3 3 教

3、學(xué)方法生動(dòng)有趣。教學(xué)方法生動(dòng)有趣。4 4 與學(xué)生關(guān)系融洽，深受同學(xué)歡迎；與學(xué)生關(guān)系融洽，深受同學(xué)歡迎；實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練Pre-writing1.審：審：2.定：定：“My English Teacher” 為題為題寫一篇寫一篇80字作文字作文記敘文，第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)記敘文，第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式首段：個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷首段：個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷正文：教學(xué)特色正文：教學(xué)特色尾段：作者的評(píng)價(jià)尾段：作者的評(píng)價(jià) be fashionable love students, and care about the students be lively and interesting get on

4、 well with,be popular withWriting:3.列列1.打扮入時(shí)打扮入時(shí)2.熱愛(ài)學(xué)生，關(guān)心學(xué)生熱愛(ài)學(xué)生，關(guān)心學(xué)生3.生動(dòng)有趣生動(dòng)有趣4.相處融洽，深受歡迎相處融洽，深受歡迎My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Her lessons are interesting and live

5、ly; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !Writing4.連：連：連詞成句，連句成篇連詞成句，連句成篇復(fù)寫復(fù)寫Rewriting：5、美潤(rùn)色豐富要點(diǎn)； 6、改、改查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò)7、抄修改無(wú)誤后，認(rèn)真規(guī)范地謄寫在規(guī)定的地方。1. 開(kāi)頭Beginning2. 正文Main body3. 結(jié)尾EndingWriting techniques:hooknaturalMain body 正文簡(jiǎn)潔性簡(jiǎn)潔性 conciseness連貫性連貫性 coherence整潔性

6、整潔性 tidiness多樣性多樣性 variety1.避免重復(fù)避免重復(fù)In my opinion, I think your plan is feasible.The desk is round in shape and red in color.簡(jiǎn)潔性簡(jiǎn)潔性2.2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)潔句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)潔 Do you know the man who is speaking at the meeting?Look out for cars while you are crossing the street?Do you know the man speaking at the meeting?Look

7、out for cars while crossing the street? 練習(xí)改寫下列句子練習(xí)改寫下列句子, 使其更簡(jiǎn)潔使其更簡(jiǎn)潔 1. Do you know the girl who is dressed in red? Do you know the girl _.2. We finally reached home at 10 pm, and we were tired and hungry. We finally reached home at 10 pm, _. in redtired and hungry連貫性連貫性 連貫性的要求是：恰當(dāng)使用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)，句連貫性的要求是：恰當(dāng)使

8、用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)，句子與句子之間的過(guò)渡要符合邏輯，不能子與句子之間的過(guò)渡要符合邏輯，不能造成歧義或矛盾造成歧義或矛盾過(guò)渡詞的使用過(guò)渡詞的使用:1.表聯(lián)合或選擇關(guān)系：表聯(lián)合或選擇關(guān)系：2.表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：3.表順序表順序：4.表因果關(guān)系表因果關(guān)系：5.表解釋說(shuō)明：表解釋說(shuō)明：6.表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：7.表總結(jié)：表總結(jié)：8.強(qiáng)調(diào)強(qiáng)調(diào): and, bothand, eitheror,not onlybut also等等but, yet, while, however等等f(wàn)or, so, because of, thanks to first, second, later, finally, at

9、 last等等such as, for example，and so on等等whats more，besides等等in short, in brief, in a word, in general等等indeed(確實(shí)確實(shí))，above all(尤其尤其), even so等。等。連貫性練習(xí)：連貫性練習(xí)： 1.適當(dāng)使用一些主從復(fù)合句來(lái)代替簡(jiǎn)單適當(dāng)使用一些主從復(fù)合句來(lái)代替簡(jiǎn)單句或并列句句或并列句. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. The meal was nice we all enjoyed it very much

10、.sothat連貫性練習(xí)：連貫性練習(xí)：2. We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. have fun doing sthAfter a short rest, we had great fun singing , dancing, telling stories and playing chess.整潔性整潔性字跡清晰，書寫規(guī)范。字跡清晰，書寫規(guī)范。4 4 規(guī)范三寫規(guī)范三寫：大大 小小 寫寫, ,拼拼 寫寫, ,書書

11、 寫 1.避免重復(fù)使用某一單詞或短語(yǔ)。如避免重復(fù)使用某一單詞或短語(yǔ)。如:I like reading while my brother likes watching television.I like reading while my brother watching television.多樣性多樣性enjoys 2.運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)或短語(yǔ) 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2

12、. She doesnt like sports. She cares nothing for sports3.3.運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：1. 改變時(shí)態(tài)改變時(shí)態(tài)The bell is ringing now. There goes the bell. 2. 適當(dāng)運(yùn)用分詞或介詞結(jié)構(gòu)適當(dāng)運(yùn)用分詞或介詞結(jié)構(gòu)He graduated from Beijing University, he taught politics in a middle school. After graduating from Beijing University, he taught politics in a mid

13、dle school.4. 練習(xí)使用練習(xí)使用詞組詞組來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采。加文采。1). She likes sports very much.She shows great interest in sports.She is very fond of sports.She is crazy about sports.She goes in for sports.WritingMy English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall.

14、 She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !Rewriting : 5. 美美 6.改改 7.抄抄Beginning Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 me

15、ters tall. She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Miss Sun，our English teacher, is 25 years old, and 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.Since she loves us and cares about our needs, she is very helpful in our school life. Not only is she helpful in life, but also

16、her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. Main bodyHer lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. Sh

17、e is very popular. EndingWe all love her and her teaching ! In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching! My English Teacher Miss Sun，our English teacher, is 25 years old, and 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.Since she loves us and cares about our needs and

18、desires, she is very helpful. Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word,

19、 Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching! Rewriting : 5. 美美6.改改7.抄抄請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，用英文寫一篇簡(jiǎn)要介紹四川汶川大地震請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，用英文寫一篇簡(jiǎn)要介紹四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄譚千秋老師的短文。字?jǐn)?shù)中舍己救人英雄譚千秋老師的短文。字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右。內(nèi)詞左右。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：容要點(diǎn)如下：1譚老師個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)況：譚老師個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)況：1957年生于湖南；大學(xué)畢業(yè)后，年生于湖南；大學(xué)畢業(yè)后，2在四川德陽(yáng)一所中學(xué)教書；外表嚴(yán)肅，在四川德陽(yáng)一所中學(xué)教書；外表嚴(yán)肅，3對(duì)學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格，對(duì)學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格

20、，4深愛(ài)學(xué)生。深愛(ài)學(xué)生。5譚老師英雄事跡：汶川地震時(shí)，他在上課。教學(xué)樓譚老師英雄事跡：汶川地震時(shí)，他在上課。教學(xué)樓坍塌時(shí)刻，用身體保護(hù)坍塌時(shí)刻，用身體保護(hù)4名學(xué)生英勇獻(xiàn)身，名學(xué)生英勇獻(xiàn)身，4名學(xué)生得救。名學(xué)生得救。6你的感受及愿望。你的感受及愿望。參考詞語(yǔ)：參考詞語(yǔ)：1. graduate from a university, 大學(xué)畢業(yè)大學(xué)畢業(yè) 2. be strict with,對(duì)對(duì)嚴(yán)格嚴(yán)格3. the Wenchuan earthquake, 汶川地震汶川地震 4. collapse,坍塌坍塌5. deeds,事跡事跡三段式：三段式：首段：首段：正文：正文：結(jié)尾：結(jié)尾：譚老師的個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介譚老

21、師的個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)介譚老師的英雄事跡譚老師的英雄事跡作者的感受和愿望作者的感受和愿望列出列出7個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)： 1）外表嚴(yán)肅；）外表嚴(yán)肅； 2）對(duì)學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格；）對(duì)學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格；3） 深愛(ài)學(xué)生；深愛(ài)學(xué)生；4）地震時(shí)在上課；）地震時(shí)在上課；5）教學(xué)樓坍塌時(shí)，用身體保護(hù)）教學(xué)樓坍塌時(shí)，用身體保護(hù)4名學(xué)生英勇獻(xiàn)身；名學(xué)生英勇獻(xiàn)身；6）感受；）感受； 7）愿望。）愿望。He looks serious.Hes strict with his students.He loves his students deeply.He was giving lessons at that moment. When

22、the teaching building callapsed, he protected four students with his body.I feel deeply moved.Ill learn from him.連句成文：連句成文： Tan Qianqiu was born in 1957 in Hunan province. He graduated from Hunan University. He taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city, Sichuan province. He had taught there

23、for 27 years. He looked serious. He was very strict with his students. He loved them deeply. When the Wenchuan earthquake happened, he was giving a lesson. The school building collapsed. he protected his four students with his body. The students were saved. Mr Tan lost his life. I am deeply moved by his deeds. Mr Tan is an ordinary teacher and a great hero. I will le