中文論文中的英文寫作問題

1、中文論文中的英文寫作問題中文論文中的英文寫作問題中國醫(yī)學(xué)科學(xué)院中國醫(yī)學(xué)科學(xué)院北京協(xié)和醫(yī)學(xué)院北京協(xié)和醫(yī)學(xué)院腫瘤研究所腫瘤研究所周傳農(nóng)周傳農(nóng)2014.10.29題目題目題目題目太繁太繁 二甲雙胍體外誘導(dǎo)人肝癌二甲雙胍體外誘導(dǎo)人肝癌Huh-7 細(xì)胞凋亡細(xì)胞凋亡的實驗的實驗及其機制及其機制研究研究 二甲雙胍體外誘導(dǎo)人肝癌二甲雙胍體外誘導(dǎo)人肝癌Huh-7 細(xì)胞凋亡及其作用機制細(xì)胞凋亡及其作用機制題目題目不全不全 兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作 兒童單純性肥胖兒童單純性肥胖小鼠小鼠模型的制作模型的制作不好的中文題目不好的中文題目 去垂體幼鼠生物特性及激素水平的去垂體幼鼠生物特性及激素水平

2、的觀察觀察 去垂體去垂體幼年大鼠幼年大鼠的生物學(xué)特性與激的生物學(xué)特性與激素水平素水平不好的中文題目不好的中文題目 中藥松友飲對體內(nèi)化療后殘余肝中藥松友飲對體內(nèi)化療后殘余肝癌作用的實驗研究癌作用的實驗研究 中藥松友飲對中藥松友飲對裸鼠裸鼠體內(nèi)化療后殘體內(nèi)化療后殘余肝癌的作用余肝癌的作用不好的中文題目不好的中文題目 IRP對無初乳仔鼠十二指腸對無初乳仔鼠十二指腸IgG+和和SIgA+細(xì)胞表達(dá)的影響細(xì)胞表達(dá)的影響 板藍(lán)根多糖板藍(lán)根多糖對無初乳仔鼠十二指腸對無初乳仔鼠十二指腸IgG+和和SIgA+細(xì)胞表達(dá)的影響細(xì)胞表達(dá)的影響題目題目錯誤錯誤 基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展 Process i

3、n Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineering題目題目太大太大 不同測壓方法測試大鼠結(jié)腸破裂壓不同測壓方法測試大鼠結(jié)腸破裂壓 A comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animals Comparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats不好的英文題目不好的英文題目 兒童單純性肥胖小鼠模型的制作兒

4、童單純性肥胖小鼠模型的制作 Establishment of childhood simple obesity animal model Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity 題目題目濫用縮寫濫用縮寫 哺乳動物哺乳動物 ES 細(xì)胞與細(xì)胞與 EG 細(xì)胞研究細(xì)胞研究進(jìn)展進(jìn)展 哺乳動物哺乳動物 胚胎干細(xì)胞胚胎干細(xì)胞與與 胚胎生殖胚胎生殖 細(xì)胞細(xì)胞研究進(jìn)展研究進(jìn)展 ES embryonic stem cells EG embryonic germ cells不好的中文題目不好的中文題目 濫用縮寫濫用縮寫 反復(fù)冷凍與冠狀動脈

5、結(jié)扎法制作大反復(fù)冷凍與冠狀動脈結(jié)扎法制作大鼠鼠AMI模型方法對比研究模型方法對比研究 反復(fù)冷凍與冠狀動脈結(jié)扎法制作大反復(fù)冷凍與冠狀動脈結(jié)扎法制作大鼠鼠急性心肌梗死急性心肌梗死模型方法的模型方法的比較比較題目題目濫用縮寫濫用縮寫 乳酸調(diào)控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內(nèi)皮細(xì)胞乳酸調(diào)控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內(nèi)皮細(xì)胞NF-B信號通路信號通路的研究的研究 Lactic acid inhibits NF-B signaling pathways in RIMMVECs 讀者看不懂讀者看不懂 RIMMVECs題目題目 拼寫錯誤、大小寫拼寫錯誤、大小寫 Comparision of Hematological Paramete

6、rs in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig Comparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig不好的中、英文題目不好的中、英文題目 LPS和石墨粉誘導(dǎo)小鼠急性肺損傷病和石墨粉誘導(dǎo)小鼠急性肺損傷病理形態(tài)學(xué)比較理形態(tài)學(xué)比較 Pathological comparison of LPS and Graphite power-induced acute lung injury 中文：應(yīng)寫明中文：應(yīng)寫明 脂多糖脂多糖 英文：英文：LPS Lipopoly

7、saccharide 英文：英文： power powder英文題目英文題目拼寫錯誤拼寫錯誤 Gong H, Shu L, Xu H, Chen B, Mao R, Zhang F, Wang Y. Bilateral internal carotid arteries ligation temporary impairs brain vasculaturev in young rats. Auton Neurosci. 2013, 173(1-2):39-44. 此文已在國外正式發(fā)表此文已在國外正式發(fā)表不好的英文題目不好的英文題目 清腦方對缺血性眩暈大鼠腦損傷的清腦方對缺血性眩暈大鼠腦損傷的

8、保護(hù)作用保護(hù)作用 Protective effect of QNF on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats Protective effect of the Chinese medicine Qingnaofang on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats英文題目英文題目 錯誤錯誤 改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神經(jīng)改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神經(jīng)根壓迫模型的研究根壓迫模型的研究 The study on rat model of lumbar never nerve root compression via modi

9、fied unilateral hemilaminectomy approach 啰嗦、缺建立、拼寫錯誤啰嗦、缺建立、拼寫錯誤英文題目英文題目單復(fù)數(shù)單復(fù)數(shù) 非人靈長類局部腦缺血動物模型研非人靈長類局部腦缺血動物模型研究現(xiàn)狀述評究現(xiàn)狀述評 Review of focal cerebral ischemia model in non-human primate Review of focal cerebral ischemia models in non-human primates英文題目濫用縮寫 小型豬體外循環(huán)下心臟手術(shù)的麻醉小型豬體外循環(huán)下心臟手術(shù)的麻醉 Anesthesia of Card

10、iac Surgery Under CPB on Swine Anesthesia in Cardiac Surgery Under Cardiopulmonary Bypass on Pigs英文題目 拼寫錯誤 Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig Comparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig很很錯誤的英文題目 基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展 Pr

11、ocess in Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineering英文題目錯誤用詞 The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of There Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of Three Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labele

12、d 英文題目很大很大錯誤 常壓缺氧致常壓缺氧致大鼠大鼠小腦浦肯野細(xì)胞急小腦浦肯野細(xì)胞急性病理改變的研究性病理改變的研究 Acute pathology changes of Purkinje cells in mouse cerebellum under normobaric hypoxia署名與單位署名與單位署名署名大小寫大小寫 He bao-ming , wang zhizhong，liu xiaofei，yao hao,ouyang xiaohui,su jiagui He Bao-ming , Wang Zhizhong，Liu Xiaofei，Yao Hao, Ouyang Xiao

13、hui, Su Jiagui 姓名大寫、標(biāo)點符號姓名大寫、標(biāo)點符號單位單位錯詞、錯名、大小寫錯詞、錯名、大小寫 The forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou University the Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University單位單位不全不全 Academy of Military Sciences Academy of Military Medical Sciences單位單位大小寫大小寫 Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Ti

14、anjin 300162, china. Department of , the Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, China.署名、單位署名、單位 Bai aiguo*，Zheng chuansheng，Zhou guofeng，Liang huiming，F(xiàn)eng gansheng. Wantwanthospital, Changsha 410016, China (Wang Wang Hospital)人名的大小寫。單位名稱錯誤人名的大小寫。單位名稱錯誤署名、單位署名、單位大小寫、拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號大小寫、拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點

15、符號 WEI Bing-yan,LIU Tian-fu,GUO Yong-chang ,ZHANG Yin-hong (the center of Laboratory animal of Shan Xi Mendical University,taiyuan 030001, China)英文摘要中英文摘要中濫用縮寫濫用縮寫英文摘要英文摘要濫用縮寫濫用縮寫 Objective： To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and RGZ rosiglitazone A

16、TRA all-trans-retinoic acid affect effect濫用縮寫濫用縮寫英文摘要英文摘要 IHC analysis on TMA revealed that Immunohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that 英文摘要英文摘要濫用縮寫濫用縮寫 To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using SSH. To screen the genes diff

17、erentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using suppression subtractive hybridization (SSH).（摘要首句）用錯詞用錯詞錯詞錯詞 大鼠給予藥液灌胃大鼠給予藥液灌胃 All rats were lavaged with KFL solution. All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.錯詞錯詞 神經(jīng)上皮移植神經(jīng)上皮移植 Neuralepithelial transplantation Neuroepithelial

18、transplantation錯詞錯詞 巴馬小型豬巴馬小型豬12只只 12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 12 Bama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 錯詞錯詞 Low does Low dose High does High dose通篇如此錯詞錯詞 RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of 錯詞錯詞 Ot

19、her adverse reactions include atrial premature, oral mucositis, fatigue et al. Other adverse reactions include atrial premature, oral mucositis, fatigue, etc.錯詞錯詞 GeneBank GenBank 錯詞錯詞意思反了意思反了 正常、特異抗原正常、特異抗原批內(nèi)批內(nèi)變異系數(shù)分別為變異系數(shù)分別為8.3%和和6.4%，批間批間平均變異系數(shù)分別平均變異系數(shù)分別為為9.7%和和11.5%. The inter-assay coefficient o

20、f variation of normal antigen and special antigen was 8.3% and 6.4%, and the intra-assay average coefficient of variation was 9.7% and 11.5%, respectively 錯詞錯詞 評價其抗癌作用評價其抗癌作用 To access the anti-tumor effect To assess the anti-tumor effect 錯詞錯詞 探討其作用機理探討其作用機理 To explicit the molecular mechanism of To

21、 explore the molecular mechanism of 英文摘要首句錯詞錯詞 脂質(zhì)體脂質(zhì)體 Lipidosome Liposome （該文論述基因治療的主要手段）錯詞錯詞 系統(tǒng)性感染系統(tǒng)性感染 Systematic infection Systemic infection錯詞錯詞 was analysised was analyzed 錯詞、單復(fù)數(shù)錯詞、單復(fù)數(shù) The sequence were comparised with the The sequences were compared with the 單復(fù)數(shù)單復(fù)數(shù) The level of P24 antigen in

22、the supernatant were tested continuously. The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested continuously. 頻繁的頻繁的錯誤注釋錯誤注釋濫用注釋濫用注釋 糖尿病糖尿病 (diabetic mellitus ) 糖尿病糖尿病 (diabetes mellitus)一篇關(guān)于小型豬糖尿病模型的論文錯誤注釋錯誤注釋 腺病毒（腺病毒（adenoviral） 腺病毒（腺病毒（adenovirus）錯誤注釋錯誤注釋 單純皰疹病毒單純皰疹病毒 （herpes simple virus） 單純皰疹病

23、毒單純皰疹病毒 （herpes simplex virus）錯誤注釋錯誤注釋 無特定病原體無特定病原體 (special pathogen free，SPF) 無特定病原體無特定病原體 (specific pathogen free，SPF) 錯誤注釋錯誤注釋 獨立通風(fēng)籠具獨立通風(fēng)籠具 (Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC) (Individually ventilated cages，IVC) 錯誤注釋錯誤注釋 熱休克蛋白熱休克蛋白 ( Hot shock protein, HSP) ( Heat shock preotein, HSP)錯誤注釋錯誤注釋

24、C反應(yīng)蛋白（反應(yīng)蛋白（C-reactionprotein，CRP） C反應(yīng)蛋白（反應(yīng)蛋白（C-reactive protein，CRP） 錯誤注釋錯誤注釋 集落形成抑制法集落形成抑制法 (human tumor cell cloning assay , HTCA ) (colony formation inhibition assay )錯誤注釋錯誤注釋 自然殺傷細(xì)胞自然殺傷細(xì)胞 (natural kill cell，NK) 自然殺傷細(xì)胞自然殺傷細(xì)胞 (natural killer cell，NK)錯誤注釋錯誤注釋 神經(jīng)生長因子神經(jīng)生長因子（never growth factor，NGF） 神

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