鄧雪梅短文改錯20篇

1、短文改錯一Two years ago, Mr. Smith taught myself English. He was friendly to us student. Though he was strict in the students, he was respected. However, he was always careful and forgot things, that brought him a lot of trouble. For example, once he was on the holiday by the sea and he forgot which hote

2、l he was staying in. After dark, he didnt know where stay for the night. It was his wife who find him under a big tree behind the hotel. Heard this experience, we all burst into laughter. Such are Mr. Smith, a man whom everyone looks up to. 短文改錯二I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China

3、 for the first time, to the Great Wall in last weekend. Having told about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at this world wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the Great Wall. So I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in t

4、he activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and sign his name. Both the Great Wall or the Chinese people deep impressed him. He decided to visit more places of interest when free.短文改錯三My hometown is a small village. Small as it is, but its very beautiful.There are a number

5、 of hill around my hometown and they are very beautiful. In spring, we fly kites are made by themselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very highly. In summer, the trees and grass are green and the flowers are bright on the hills. Beside, the wild apples are nice to eating. In autumn, corns a

6、t the foot of the hills were ripe. In winter, when it snows, something is covered with snow. We play with snow and make snowmen. In my hometown there are blue sky, fresh air, sweet water and kind people. I love my hometown!短文改錯四Dear Editor, This is my first time to write an English e-mail. I came cr

7、oss your magazine about two months before and I loved it from the first moment. After the school, I ran to buy it. So far I bought two issues. I like every editor in your magazine. Learning with them always make me happy. Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine. So I will also bu

8、y your magazine, read two magazines at the same time. I think this will help me get through my spare time meaningful.Best wish to all of you. Yours, Li Hua短文改錯五Yesterday afternoon a robbery was hap-pened in a bank in our city. According what some people said, it was five minutes to 5:00 pm, just aft

9、er the closing time of the bank. But it was raining heavy, with few cars on the road outside. Suddenly, two young men with mask rushed in and threatened the clerks with guns. Then they put a lot of money in their bags, rushing out and drove away in hurry. All this lasted only a few minutes. Fortunat

10、ely, there was nobody killed or wounded in the robbery. The police are searching for the rob-bers, hoping whoever get some information calls him up as soon as possible. 短文改錯六Dear Mr. Jackson, Im Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. I am writing this letter to thank you returning my losing wall

11、et. I am glad when I was informed I would get my wallet back. I learned that it was you picked up my wallet and kindly handed it out so quickly. I lost my wallet on my way home from school. What careless I was! With your kind help and honesty, I would still be deep in a sorrow and anxiety. You know,

12、 documents such as my ID card and student card is very important to me.May I invite you for a weekend dinner in return? I am looking forward to receive your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua短文改錯七Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters to

13、 study hard in order to admitted to an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason why parents are strict in their children. However, they dont realize how a great pressure they had put on their children. It is the great pressure that often get their children very anxiously.So I hope th

14、at parents can provide a proper environment for their children. Only by this way will they try their best and success at last.短文改錯八Last summer I go to America and studied at a language school. I had many wonderful experience, but I also had a sad one. One day, the school held party, where I invited

15、to talk about Tianjin. After that they asked me a lot of things about China. But I couldnt explain them with English Clearly. I felt sadly. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I have already studied English for eight years, I cant use it very good. I must work hard to improve my spoken English s

16、o that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners. I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countries in the future.短文改錯九Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,Im writing to you from my home in China. I returned back home safe and sound. When I think of the wonderfully two weeks I spend in A

17、ustralia, I just cant help thinking of you. You has provided everything to make my staying here such a happy and lucky experience. Ive learned so many, not only English and also culture. Thank you very much. Ill always remember the fun and laughter we shared each other as well as your kind. Ill get

18、in touch with you and write to you often. Please take care! Yours, Li Ming短文改錯十It was five oclock yesterday afternoon before I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passenger, all of who kept silent. A mother with her little son were sitting nearby. All of a sudden, the son cried loudly. The mo

19、ther tried to do what she could make him stop crying. However, the son goes on crying. After what seemed a long time, a man seating next to the mother said angry, “I cant stand it anymore. Why dont you give him what he wants?” The mother answered quietly, “I would if I could. But what she wants is y

20、our cap.” Hearing of this, all the passengers burst into laughter.短文改錯十一More and more Chinese middle school students have gone to abroad to study since the 1990s. Like many language learners said, the students usually become fluent in foreign languages and can gain the good knowledge of foreign cult

21、ures. They can also improve their understanding of their own culture.Besides, they have to learn what to depend in themselves. Studying abroad may have its disadvantage as well. Some students may fall behind in their studies. Some students may feel unsafe to stay abroad on their own. Moreover, their

22、 parents may be concerning about the high cost.In my opinion, the students ought to finishing their college education in China and then take farther education abroad.短文改錯十二I was sitting at my favorite table in a restaurant last Sunday and wait for the food I had ordered to arrive. I suddenly found t

23、hat Lin Ling, one of my classmate, worked like a waitress there. Honest speaking, it was great surprise for me to find her working there. As far as I know, shes from a richer family. What was it that made her to work there? I walked up to her and asked her the reason. When asking, she said, “I just

24、want to earn some pocket money so that we can help some children in poor areas go back to school.” How a good girl! I should learn from her.短文改錯十三Li Yue was awarding the title of “Star Student of the Week” because what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went to down

25、town and walked from one store to other, looking for the clothes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure times in cool rooms, she spends the whole afternoon searching for the right clothes. Deeply moved by her, we tried our best and won first prize in the

26、 contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and care a lot about the class. Beside, she often devotes her spare time to help others. She has set the good example for us. 短文改錯十四My neighbor Mrs Li is a curious lady. Yesterday morning, a mailman rang my doorbell. Hear the bell, Mrs Li put her head out of t

27、he windows immediately and asked in a loud voice, “Whats the matter?” “Are you Li Xia? Theres package for you,” answer the man. “Where is it come from?” Mrs Li asked. “Its from London.” Then Mrs Li asked the mailman to open it. Feeling puzzling, he replied that he couldnt open the package and asked

28、Mrs Li to come down and open it herself. Mrs Li refused polite. The mailman was a little bit angry but asked impatiently, “Why?” “Because Im not Li Xia. She lives next door. I played a joke of you.” 短文改錯十五Uncle Lee is my neighbor. He can see things well because of his bad eyesight, so he doesnt go o

29、ut very often. Last Friday he had an important letter to post to, so he had to go out himself. He was walking in the street while suddenly the strong wind came up and blew his black hat off his head. The hats rolled and flew, and Uncle Lee had to running after it. Just then a woman in front of him s

30、hout at him, “What are you doing?” “Trying to catch my hat,” asked Uncle Lee. “What? Your hat?” cried out the woman angry. “Cant you see that that is our black pet dog?”短文改錯十六J.K. Rowling has been recognized at cafes in Scotland works on a detective novel, a British newspaper reported on Saturday. I

31、an Rankin，a fellow author and neighbor of Rowling' s, said the creator of the "Harry Potter" is turning to crime fiction. "My wife recognized her wrote her Edinburgh criminal detective novel." "She is great that she has not abandoned writing or Edinburgh cafes," sai

32、d Rankin, who is known as his own police novels setting in the historic Scottish city. Rowling famous Potter story in the Scottish city's cafes. She was a struggling single mother wrote in cafes to save the heating bill at home. Now she's Britain' s richest women -worth $1 billion, accor

33、ding at Forbes magazine-and her seven Potter books have sold more than 335 million copies worldwide. 短文改錯十七England for America on its first trip. It was one of the largest and finest ship at that time. It was cold, and the journey was pleasant. People were enjoyed themselves. But the next day was ev

34、en cold.People could see icebergs here or there. It was night. Suddenly, a man shouting “Look out! Iceberg!” But it was too late, and a ship hit the iceberg and came to a stop. There was a very big hole on the ship and water began to come. Slowly the ship started to go down. 短文改錯十八Weve just moved in

35、 a house and we want to buy a new color television set, and Im not sure about a size. Maybe we should buy a big one. If we buy a small one, we might have to exchange for it in a few years time for a bigger one. My husband thinks its no necessary to buy a very big one. He said our sitting room isnt very big. If we put in a very big television, they will be bad for our eyes. Anyway, wed better to make quick decision because the price may go down soon. 短文改錯十九Animals World is my most favourite programme. Firstly, I like animals very much. Secondly, the host has the abi