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1、假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作 文。 文中共有 10 處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào) （A） ,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（ _）, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意： 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。l.Dear Mrs. Winthorp,So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I th

2、inkI'd email you and let you know what things are going.I'm glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor There are two girls from my course here and I plan to

3、make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.Well, I had better to stop now. I'm going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I've got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.Best,Carol2.When I was in high sch

4、ool, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could ako have it. One day I saw a sec on d-ha nd bicycle, that was only one hun dred Yuan. I asked my father the money But he said he could only give me half of the money He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the scho

5、ol My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after He gives me the other when later gave fifty Ybu can imag ine how much happy I was whe n I rode to school on my own bicycle.3. One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver p

6、ut the win dow dow n and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and could n't believe in that a complete stra nger is so thoughtful The man in sisted, so I grateful accepted the offer; tha nked him and watched the truck disappear dow n the road. This man might

7、n eed the umbrella himselfj and he preferred to give it to every one else. It was a less on to us that it was possible give without expect anything in retur n.4. Dear Ms Smith,I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibiti on for high school stude nts in city. Thi

8、s will be heldon the 9th ofJuly in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 paining will be on show, but high school stude nts from all the eight districts will come to the eve nt. As you are very popularly with us Chin ese high school stude nts, we'd like to invite for you to the exhibitio

9、n. We would be grateful when youcould join them that day Looking forward to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Ming5. After shopp ing, Mother and I went a restaura nt for lun ch. I no tice Mother bok ing at the n earby table occupy by an elderly woma n and young couple. They ate silently and it was clearly

10、 that things were not going well As we left, Mother stopped on their table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm aro und the un happy old woma n. "You remi nd me so many of my mother May I hug you? ” the woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, she said,“ that was very

11、 nice of you, Mother. So I did n't think she tooked likeGrandma.' ; "Neither did me," said Mother carefully6.My sister saw a tovely cup whe n we are shopp ing the other day. She liked it at on ce. Then she bent dow n and picked up to bok at a price on it. As she did this, tots of t

12、ea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wan ted get out of the shop as fast as she could whe n a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she'd left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarras

13、sing as my sister; for I just thought it was funny!7.Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn't talk many .Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in the summer .She wa

14、s ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her .like the rest of my classmate ,1 didn't really classmates want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the wa

15、y she did.8.On last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends, while I chose to take part-time job to gain experience and earn some money I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was boking after students with good handwriting to write addresses on envebpe. Th

16、e pay were 10 cent per envebpe. I headed for the company; feeling sure I would easy finish 300 envebps in five hours and to earn the money Actually; I only finished 200. Now I fully understand how hard is to earn money Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all9.It is five years now

17、 since I graduate from No. 3 High School .Last Saturday;the class that I was on held a get-together,which took us a bng time prepare.It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent toget

18、her and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone abroad for further studies, but they called back or send greeting card from different places.10. Dear Mr. Donforth,I'm writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I've heardthat

19、 you have been to Greece. On our Greece unit, we have learningbeenabout ifs rich culture and bng history Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have learned a bt from the text book, but I believe you personal experience w

20、ill be a bt better. Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class. Could you share you experiences for us? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly11. An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the seabetween France and

21、 England in the balbon in 1784 .Highover the water ,they discover a hole in the balbon .Thehole became bigger and bigger .The air keeps the balbn up was escapingquickly and the balbon was coming up. The two men threw all theirequipment intothem.the water to make the balbon light. It started to rise

22、higher again. So it was still too cbse to the water Finally the men threw away most of his cbthes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised see this the balbon landed in front of【答案】1.Dear Mrs. Win throp,So my first week at college is over! No lectures thi

23、s morni ng so I thi nkI'd email you and let you know what thi ngs are going.howI'm glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember ask ing for a room aseveryth ingfar away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable oneon a sec ond floor Therethe fou ndare

24、 two girls from my course here and I pla n to make friend with them so they we can help each friendsother on the course work Every one eke seems very nice and warmly here.warm withWell, I had better to stop now I'm going to atte nd mine first less on this after noon, for I've gotmysosome pre

25、parati on to make, Keep in touch.Best,Carol2. When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped Ifrie ndscould also have it. One day I saw a sec on d-ha nd bicycle, that was onlyonewhichone hun dred yua n. I asded my father A the mon ey. But he said he couldforonly give me half of t

26、he money. He should find the other half myself. SoI went to sell newspapers after-the-school. My father was pleased if_l showed him the money a month after. He gives me the otherwhe nlater gavefifty. You can imag ine how much haApy I was when I rode to school on myown bicycle.3. One rainy day while

27、I was walking home with one of my friend, a truckcame tofriendsa stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrellaan besidebecause he found we were wet through. I stood there and could n't believe*that a complete stranger is so thoughtful The man insisted, so I grateful a

28、cceptedwasgratefullythe offer; thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the roadThis manmight need the umbrella himselfj and he preferred to give it to everyonebutsome on e/somebodyelse. It was a less on to us that it was possible A give withoutexpect anythingtoexpect ing in retur n.4. Dear

29、Ms Smith,I am secretary of City Stude nt Un io n (CSU).We were orga nizing an art exhibiti on for high school stude nt in city .This will be held on the 9 th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. Morethe Ittha nIOOO painting will be on show .but high school stude nts and teachers from all the ei

30、ghtpain ti ngsanddistricts will come to the eve nt .As you are very popularly with us Chin ese high schoolpopularstudents, we'd like to invite foA you to the exhibition .We would be grateful when you could joinif them _that day .Look ing forward to hear from you soon.usheari ngY ours,Li Mi ng5.A

31、fter shopp ing, Mother and I went a restaura nt for lun ch. I noti Mother bok ing at theno ticed nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate sile ntly and it was clearlyoccupied clear that things were not going well As we left, Mother stopped on their table."Excuse me,&qu

32、ot; she said,by/at put her arm around the un happy old woma n. "You remi nd me so many ofmy mother May I hugputt ingmuchyou? ”the woman smiled happily as she accepted 苗 it. After we left, she said, “ thatwas very n ice of you, Mother. So I did n't thi nk she tooked like Grandma.' "

33、Neither did me," said MotherButcarefully6.My sister saw a tovely cup when we are shopping the other day She liked it at on ce. Thenwereshe bent dow n and picked up to bok at a price on it. As she did this, bts of tea splashed on hisittheherT-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocke

34、d face! My sisterwan ted get out of the shophardtoas fast as she could whe n a shop assista nt came over to us. It was tur ned out to be her own cup, that she'd left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister;whichembarrassedfor I just thought it was funny!bu

35、t/yet/while/a ndChristine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much abouther except f&F that she was stra nge. She did n't talk many. Her hair was blackmuchand purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in theeve nworesummer. She was, in fact, rather

36、attractively, and she n ever seemedAcarewhattoattractivethe rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I did n't reallyclassmateswant to get closest to her. It was on ly whe n we did their chemistry projectcloseourtogether that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the wa

37、y she did.bega n第一節(jié):第四部分:www. ks5u. comChristine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much abouther excep?fa( that she was stra nge. She did n't talk many. Her hair wasblack muchand purple, and she wom black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the woreeve nsummer. She was

38、, in fact, rather attractive". and she never seemedcare whatattractivetothe rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I did n*t reallyclassmateswant to get closest to her. It was only whe n we did their chemistry projectcloseourtogether that I begi n to un dersta nd why Chris

39、t ine dressed the way she did.bega n8.0 last win ter vacati on, some of my classmates decide todecidedtravel with their frien ds, while I chose to take A part-time jobto gain experie nee and ear n some money I lear ned from my teacher that a n earby compa ny was bok ing after stude nts forwith good

40、han dwrit ing to write addresses on en velope. The en vebpespay were 10 cents per en vebpe. I headed for the compa ny, wasfeeli ng sure I would easy fi nish 300 en vebpes in five hours and easilyto earn the money Actually; I only finished 200. Now, I fully understand how hard is to earn money Getting out itof the classroom is in deed n ecessary for we all us9.It is five years now since I graduate from