2021屆新高考英語最新模擬匯編專題10讀后續(xù)寫解析版

1、2021屆新高考數(shù)學(xué)備考藝考生百日沖刺專題10讀后續(xù)寫1.（福建省福州第一中學(xué)2021屆高三期中）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150 左右。65-ycar-old Richard Oslcn was interested in adventure and hunting. This time he hunted on a land near Watford City, N.D. . In the cold winter, he set out to try a new place. He didnt take his cell pho

2、ne, thinking tliat it was not a must. He walked more than half a mile with two dogs to a wheat field.Keeping an eye open for a bird taking flight, Richard stepped on a thin crust of ice on a river. The ice broke into pieces and dropped him four feet to the bottom.Realizing that he was in trouble and

3、 was going to hurt himself, Richard decided to come to land quickly. However, his left leg was hurt, so he had to reach for his shotgun, unload it and use it as a crutch（拐杖）.When he was partly up. he lost his balance and fell into the river again. This time one of his feet got stuck between two rock

4、s. Richard told himself that if he didnt get himself out of that river, he wasnt going to have a very good night.Richard managed to make his foot free and climbed more slowly and carefully. Richard suddenly realized the difficulty of the task before him.The accident happened at about 2 p.m., and it

5、was almost 5 p.m. with the road far away as the sun was setting.Although Richard met with many difficulties, he didnt give up. He was stubborn and sure that he must be persistent. With his guns support, he tried jiunping with his right leg. Once, twice, . he failed again and again, feeling extremely

6、 tired. After a longer break, he made a desperate attempt. Luckily, he managed to climb out of the river and lay on the land, gasping. Temperatures dropped, and his hands and feet soon were completely numb with cold.Paragraph 1:Richards dogs had been playing in the field and finally came up to him.P

7、aragraph 2:Luckily, not all hope was lost there came the seventh car.【答案】Paragraph 1:Richard* s dogs had been playing in the field and finally came up to him. The two dogs surrounded his body to warm 1 / 54him and also periodically barked at distance. Richard finally reached the fence near the road

8、with the help of his dogs. He feared exhaustion and rapidly freezing body would make him lose consciousness, so he decided to sit by the fence and wave down a driver. During the next half an hour, he waved wildly and shouted, but six vehicles passed without stopping. Richard nearly fell into despair

9、.Paragraph 2:Luckily, not all hope was lost there came the seventh car. He desperately cried for help and was lucky that the driver stopped his car. He asked Richard what was wrong. Richard told him his leg was badly injured and could not walk. The driver carried him on his back without saying anyth

10、ing. He was careful enough to lay Richard on the back seat and let the two dogs in the truck. The driver comforted him: Dont worry. We are going to the nearest hospital.H He gave Richard warmth in the cold winter.【解析】本文以事件發(fā)展為線索展開。講述了 65歲的Richard外出打獵，沒帶手機，只有兩條狗陪著 他，結(jié)果他不小心摔進(jìn)了河里，左腿受了傷，雖然求助的一路上他遇到了很多困難.

11、但是他都沒有放棄， 最后獲救了。1 .段落續(xù)寫：由第一段內(nèi)容“Richard的狗一直在地里玩耍，最后來到了他身邊。”可知第一段描寫兩只狗用著他的 身體為他取曖，還不時地對著遠(yuǎn)處吠叫。Richard在狗的幫助下來到了路邊，向過往的車輛求救，但是六輛 車過去了他還是沒有得救，這幾乎使他陷入了絕望。由第二段內(nèi)容“幸運的是，并不是所有的希望都失去了一第七輛車來了”可知本段應(yīng)該描寫第七輛 車的司機停下車救了 Richard,把他和狗送去了最近的醫(yī)院。2 .續(xù)寫線索：Richard受傷被狗發(fā)現(xiàn)狗幫助了 Richard到路邊求救一最后得救3.詞匯激活行為類來到:come/come up to/reach幫助

12、：hclp/with the help of、aid受傷:lose consciousness/injury情緒類絕望：fear/fall into despair/ desperately希望：lucky/luckily/ not all hope was lost【特別提醒】高分句型 1. He feared exhaustion and rapidly freezing body would make him lose consciousness, so he decided to sit by the fence and wave down a driver. so 引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）

13、高分句型 2. He desperately cried for help and was lucky that the driver stopped his car.（由 that 引導(dǎo)賓語從 句）2.（福建省寧德市2021屆第質(zhì)量檢查）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。It was a freezing January night. Lydia Chen was struggling home from school. How she hated the heavy snow and everything else about Vancouver,

14、Canada. How she missed China!MI hate it here! I want to fly back to my homeland! 4tLydia thought.Arriving home. Lydia opened her Email-box. There was an invitation to Maggie s birthday party this coming weekend. However, Lydia didnt want to go. She felt embarrassed at the thought of being at a party

15、 witli a bunch of boys and girls she barely knew. She closed her eyes and pictured her hometown at this time of the yean the red Spring Festival couplets, the red lanterns, window decorations and paper-cuttings ever- here and there. In the stands along the streets, various Spring Festival goods were

16、 on display. What happy days!Lydia Chen sighed deeply and entered the kitchen to find her mother. She was busy cooking. 4CMaybe I should go just once for Mum. She is so worried that its difficult for me to make friends m my new school. Lydia went over and tied an apron around her waist. As she was w

17、ashing dishes, she told her mother that she had been invited to a birthday party on weekend. Mum smiled, saying that she would be happier in their new home here. Lydia nodded, thinking Vancouver could never be her home Mum drove Lydia to the birthday party on Saturday evening. Maggie welcomed her at

18、 the door and led her into the dining room. To her surprise, over twenty students from her class were seated around the table waiting for her. They were drinking, laughing and chatting loudly after a simple greeting to Lydia. Wow, she loved being ignored since she could be herself. She decided to si

19、lently give the birthday gift to Maggie without being noticed. As she was taking out the Chinese paper-cutting she prepared with the help of her Mum. Maggie yelled out Amazing! How did you make it?、The others jomed. staring at Lydia with admiration. Lydia s face was shining with excitement. Maybe I

20、could fit in here-a little.she thouglit.注意：1 .續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2 .請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。With the party going on, the talk turned to the coming holidays.3 / 54Noticing their admiring eyes, Lydia was filled with a feeling of belongingness.【答案】With the party going on. the talk turned to the coming holidays. Ever

21、yone talked about the festivals merrily. However, Lydia was in total silence, a sense of loss washing over her. Maggie seemed to realize something. Lydia, what do Chmese people celebrate at this time?、 Tlie other kids all stared at her witli intense curiosity. We have a big feast to celebrate the Sp

22、ring Festival, Lydia said proudly.Noticing their admiring eyes, Lydia was filled with a feeling of belongingness. Suddenly; Lydia came up with an idea. Why not experience the beautiful festival together? She suggested decorating the house witli die red lanterns, window decorations and paper-cuttings

23、. Everyone was fascinated by it. feeling eager to celebrate something exotic. At that moment, Lydia wondered whether it was time to forget the warm China temporarily. Cold as the climate was, deep in her heart was glowing warmth. She would let go of her homesickness, and accept her second home whole

24、heartedly, not only for her parents, but more importantly, for herself.【解析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者為了不讓母親擔(dān)心自己交不到朋友而去參加朋友邀請的 生日聚會上，并通過自己獨特的禮物找到歸屬感的故事。1 .段落續(xù)寫：由第一段首句內(nèi)容“隨著聚會的進(jìn)行，話題轉(zhuǎn)向了即將到來的假期。”可知，第一段可描寫假期里 即將到來的節(jié)日，但是剛來到溫哥華的作者會感到失落。由第二段首句內(nèi)容“看到他們贊賞的眼神，莉迪亞心中充滿了歸屬感c ”可知，第二段可描寫作者 和溫哥華的新朋友們一起體驗中國的行日氛圍。2 ,續(xù)寫線索：討論假期一一失落

25、一一自豪一一充滿歸屬感一一一起體驗中國節(jié)日一一放下思鄉(xiāng)情3 .詞匯激活行為類談?wù)撠ト眨簍alking about fcstivals/holidays體驗美好行日：experience the beautiful/wonderful festivals/holidays放下思鄉(xiāng)之情：let go of homesickness/put down her homesickness情緒類失落：lost/disillusion自豪：pride/glory iioast of sth./be proud of全心全意：whole-heartcdly/with all my heart【特別提醒】高分句

26、型 1.Everyone was fascinated by it, feeling eager to celebrate something exotic.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語， 表示大家都很渴望，feeling的邏慢主語就是everyone）高分句型 2.At that moment, Lydia wondered whether it was time to forget the warm China temporarily.（由 連接詞whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作wonder的賓語）高分句型 3.CoId as the climate was, deep in her heart was

27、 glowing warmth.（采用以 as 引導(dǎo)的讓步從句進(jìn) 行部分倒裝）3 .（福建省三明第一中學(xué)2021屆高三月考）It was summen and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late aftern

28、oon. Uncle PauL my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the r

29、iver nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. HThe day starts at dawn on my farm/ he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze（吃草）. I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Pau

30、l riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats、got on our horses. and headed slowly towards t

31、he mountains. Dont be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried. Hand keep to the track so that you dont get lost!” OK! H my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late

32、 afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven（編織的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.注意： 1）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右； 2）至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語： 3）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好： 4）續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1: Sudde

33、nly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.【答案】One possible version:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tiglitly and tried not to fall.

34、 Then my dad turned around and shouted. Hold on? All of a sudden the liorse began to run. My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.We hud no idea where we were and

35、it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we

36、saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!【解析】讀后續(xù)寫要求考生首先要讀懂已有信息，不僅能讀懂字而含義，還要理清文章的脈絡(luò)。續(xù)篇這篇短文 時，考生要搞清楚故事的發(fā)展進(jìn)程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的變化等。在此基礎(chǔ)上，考生要 順著文章的思路，根據(jù)線索，發(fā)揮想象，對其后的情行進(jìn)行合理預(yù)測，并用語言表達(dá)出來。通過閱讀所給文章可知，父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個朋友家體驗農(nóng)場生活，見父親和叔叔騎馬，兒 子也很想崎，于是親身上馬體驗。根據(jù)第一段所繪首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped o

37、ut in front of my horse這一句是故事發(fā)展的轉(zhuǎn)折點, 可從rabbit出現(xiàn)后帶來的反應(yīng)擴展開，可以寫馬的反應(yīng)，也可以寫人的反應(yīng)，但要注意與第二段首句相呼應(yīng)。第二段首句是 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.這一句呼應(yīng)前文 Uncle Paul 的叮崛不要誤吃晚飯，可從如何尋路返回農(nóng)場去寫。續(xù)寫時注意要使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r候加 以運用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：續(xù)寫完成后要用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。4 .（福建省廈門第一中學(xué)2021

38、屆高三月考）閱讀下而短文，根據(jù)所給情吊i進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.In late summer the pond would be covered by

39、 a green and bubbly scum （起泡的浮渣）.Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away.When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. Go ahe

40、ad/ Harry urged. Try it. Youre lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefiilly on it. Itll be I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond.In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack （裂絳）!

41、I stretched out （伸展）my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icv water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creature

42、s.I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of t

43、he struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to die spot.41 can t get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好：4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1:Hany turned and ran

44、 from the pond.Paragraph?:The moment / crashed through the kitchen door; sobbing, mum rushed over.【答案】He turned and ran from the pond. Staring at his familiar figure out of siglit, I wondered:4fcIs he running for help, or is he running away and leaving me sliding to the bottom? After what seemed to

45、be centuries of waiting, I was on the edge of collapse. Suddenly, Harry came back with a branch.which was large, black, and v-shaped. He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icv water by Harry. What a narrow escape! We stumbled home, with my clo

46、thes dripping water.The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. She helped me take off my coat, and gave me a quick bath, then passed me a cup of milk to warm me up.I tearfully complained to her about all that had happened and Hany was blamed for getting me sibling into

47、such a trouble. His head drooping. Harry murdered an apology to me. I was comforted and relieved, but in fact, the pond was still attractive to young Harry and me, especially when winter came again.【解析】這是一篇記敘文。文章敘述了作者小時候與哥哥去附近農(nóng)場后面的池塘滑冰，冰而裂開，作 者不小心掉進(jìn)冰窟窿的故事。本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，有一年冬天，作者由于小時候與哥哥哈利到農(nóng)場

48、 后面的一個池塘玩耍，池塘表面結(jié)了冰，哥哥認(rèn)為冰而足夠堅固，能夠撐得住作者的體重，所以鼓勵作者 從冰面上走過去。作者很想取悅哥哥，同時也非常想感受滑冰的快樂，于是就嘗試著劃過去。突然，冰裂 開了，作者掉進(jìn)了冰窟窿，雙肩以下都泡在冰冷的水里！續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：他轉(zhuǎn)身從池塘里跑開了因此，下文應(yīng)該續(xù)寫哥哥跑走了以后， 作者獨自掙扎求生的心理過程。要詳細(xì)敘述哥哥返回后，帶著一個樹杈把作者從冰窟窿里而拉出來的情景。 第二段的開頭是：當(dāng)我哭著沖進(jìn)廚房的門時，媽媽沖了過來因此，下文應(yīng)該續(xù)寫作者回到家后，媽媽 首先匆忙幫作者脫掉冰冷的外套，給他洗個熱水澡以及喝一杯熱牛奶：然后，作者緩過來以后，委

49、屈的向 媽媽敘述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，媽媽責(zé)備哥哥沒有照顧好作者：文章最后，作者認(rèn)為，盡管經(jīng)此劫難，當(dāng)冬天 到來，那個池塘對哥哥和他依然是極大的誘惑。續(xù)寫時要求使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語， 恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r候加以運用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：續(xù)寫完成后，用下劃線標(biāo)出所使用 的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)?！咎貏e提醒】本文描寫詳略得當(dāng)，使用了高級詞匯和高級句子。如：runaway, leave sb. doing, take off等高級詞匯: 非限制性定語從句 Harr came back with a branch.which was

50、large, black, and v-shaped, after 弓I 導(dǎo)的時間狀語 從句，with my clothes dripping water復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等高級句式。5 .（福建省廈門雙十中學(xué)2021屆高三期中）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情行進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。The rain came down steady and hard. Jason Storie heard it but was not worried as he prepared for a day of caving with five friends in a remote spot 80 miles nor

51、thwest of his home m Duncaii. on Canadas Vancouver Island.It was 6 a.m. on December 5, 2015. As a newcomer to the sport. Jason had gone caving only four times. This would be his toughest outing yet: a cave called Cascade. It was dangerous enough that the entrance was blocked by a locked metal door t

52、o keep the casual cavers out. About a mile long and 338 feet deep. Cascade was full of turns and barely passable tight squeezes.Jason was new among the group, with the least experience and. at 43, older by a decade or more. It was his friend Andrew Munoz, 33, who introduced him to the sport. Unlike

53、Jason, Andrew was an expert caver-a former caving guide, actually.They hiked a bit before coming to the door, which sat in the ground youd imss it if you werent looking for it. It was 10 a.m. With their way lighted by headlights, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks. The silenc

54、e was broken by a drip-drip-drip from above. Soon the drip turned into a light but steady flow, and they were wading （跪，涉）in water up to their ankles, then to their shins （脛）.Two hours later, they approached one of the features that made the cave unique: a narrow passage not big enough to stand up i

55、n that led mto a short, tight downhill. Tliis had a name: Bastard s Crawl. Four streams met here, and indeed, the water was flowing more quickly. The sound of the water had turned into a roar. When they finally neared the top of the Crawl, there were barely four inches of air left between the water

56、and the ceiling, not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe. They came to terrifying realization that they were in danger!注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語：3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好：4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1 :The water kept rising. and there was no hope of rescue.Par

57、agraph 2 :Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward.【答案】The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didnt dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while, one of them turned on his he

58、adlight to check the water level. An hour later the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. StiiL each time Jason moved a leg. he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now. in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright, Jason saw somethuig fli