校園活動(因果關(guān)系)

1、 美國康州某中學(xué)與你校是友好學(xué)校，對方?？瘉硇耪f想了解你校為落實素質(zhì)教育精神所開設(shè)選修課的情況。你作為學(xué)校記者站的小站長，根據(jù)康州中學(xué)的要求對學(xué)生進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查，根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果你以Students Like Optional courses 為題，寫了一篇120詞左右的英語報道。 課程門類：音樂、美術(shù)、體育、文學(xué)、記算機(jī)等十余種 上課時間：每周五下午3:305:00 上課方式：同一門課同一所教室；集體學(xué)習(xí)。 最受歡迎的課：計算機(jī)、英語口語、藝術(shù)等 對課程的看法：1、有利于自己的特長發(fā)展，十分感興趣；2、學(xué)到很多課外知識；3、有大量的實踐機(jī)會。建議：1、增加選修課；2、減少作業(yè)量；3、多組織參觀，

2、了解社會 This term our school has offered more than 10 optional courses, such as music, arts, literature, computer and so on. Students can choose what they are interested in according to their tastes. The students who study the same subject study in the same class. The courses are given from 3:30 to 5:0

3、0 every Friday afternoon. Students think highly of the measures taken by school, and their favorite courses are computer, spoken English, arts and so on. They say it is useful to develop their specialities and they have learned a lot that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of

4、practice. However, students are not quite satisfied. They hope more optional courses will be offered while their homework should be less. They suggest that more trips and visits be organized so that they can learn more about what is going on outside school. 寫作素材：1.上課時間：每周五下午3:305:00The courses are g

5、iven from 3:30 to 5:00 every Friday afternoon.通知：開會時間：下通知：開會時間：下周二下午3:305:00The meeting will be held from 3:30 to 5:00 next Friday afternoon.2. 最受歡迎的課：計算機(jī)、英語口語、藝術(shù)等Their favorite courses are computer, spoken English, arts and so on. Computer, spoken English, arts are very popular well received. 3.有利于

6、自己的特長發(fā)展It is useful to develop their specialities4.學(xué)到很多課外知識They have learned a lot that is not taught in textbooks5.課外活動能讓我們更好地了解社會。課外活動能讓我們更好地了解社會。We can learn more about what is going on outside school.These after-class activities offer us a chance to have a better understanding of society. 2011四川

7、（世紀(jì)金榜四川（世紀(jì)金榜p55） 最近，某中學(xué)生英文報開設(shè)了最近，某中學(xué)生英文報開設(shè)了“After-class Activities”的欄目，請你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄的欄目，請你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參加課外目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動?；顒?。 你校開展課外活動的情況；你校開展課外活動的情況； 你參加過的課外活動及給你帶來的益處你參加過的課外活動及給你帶來的益處 為同學(xué)選擇課外活動提出建議為同學(xué)選擇課外活動提出建議 為學(xué)校開展課外活動提出建議為學(xué)校開展課外活動提出建議第一段第一段第二段第二段第三段第三段 Nowadays, after-clas

8、s activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my know

9、ledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study. Here I have some suggestions. To students, youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

10、 Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning. 談?wù)摼实男@活動、校園生活談?wù)摼实男@活動、校園生活寫作素材：寫作素材：活動的意義有助于開拓學(xué)生視野?；顒拥囊饬x有助于開拓學(xué)生視野。All these activities are beneficial for students to broaden their horizonsAll the

11、se activities give students an important means to broaden their horizons.2. 校園活動有利于提高學(xué)生們的學(xué)習(xí)成績。校園活動有利于提高學(xué)生們的學(xué)習(xí)成績。School activities play a positive role in improving stutents studies.3. 此外這些活動也給那些封閉在此外這些活動也給那些封閉在“象牙塔象牙塔”中中的學(xué)子們一個接觸社會的好機(jī)會。的學(xué)子們一個接觸社會的好機(jī)會。1. In addtion, these activities also give students

12、 living in their “ivory towers” an opportunity to stay in touch with society. 假定你在參加一場英語辯論賽。你是正方辯手，試用英語簡要地表明自己的觀點。 主題：Shall a senior student take a part-time job in holidays? 觀點：1高中生重視功課，而對社會知道甚少。 2假期做a part-time job 是很好的社會實踐。 3通過書本學(xué)到的東西不如通過實踐學(xué)到的東西有效。4通過社會實踐，我們可以在知識和能力兩個方面取得進(jìn)步。 5假期做a part-time job的報

13、酬或多或少有些幫助。 結(jié)論高中生. 要點一：高中生重視功課，而對社會知道甚少。第一步: 確定并翻譯句子主干（謂語部分，以短語為主）1. 重視： pay much attention to attach great importance to devote much time to2. 對社會知道少 know little about fail to know about have little knowledge of要點一：高中生重視功課，而對社會知道甚少。第二步: 翻譯句子其它部分；分析兩個信息之間的邏輯關(guān)系，確定連接詞和句式1）邏輯關(guān)系1:“而” 轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系We students pay

14、much attention to our studies while we know little about society.比較：他仍然很窮，但他哥哥發(fā)了大財。He remained poor while his brother made a fortune.but要點一：高中生重視功課，而對社會知道甚少。邏輯關(guān)系2:因果關(guān)系We students pay much attention to our studies so we know little about society.We students pay much attention to our studies as result

15、 of which we know little about society.We students pay so much attention to our studies that we know little about society.As we students pay much attention to our studies we know little about society.We students pay much attention to our studies, which makes us know little about societyWe students p

16、ay much attention to our studies, which makes us know little about society.We students pay much attention to our studies, making us know little about society.We students pay much attention to our studies, cause us know little about society. (雙謂語錯誤)We students pay much attention to our studies, lead

17、to us know little about society. (雙謂語錯誤)2012年高考英語作文真題：遼寧卷年高考英語作文真題：遼寧卷 圖片豐富；有助于英語學(xué)習(xí)圖片豐富；有助于英語學(xué)習(xí) 。There are so many beautiful and colorful pictures that we can enjoy English better. There are many beautiful and colorful pictures, _ can help us understand English better. There are many beautiful and c

18、olorful pictures, _ (help)us understand English better.which helping 車多，污染嚴(yán)重車多，污染嚴(yán)重 路上有如此多的車空氣污染日益嚴(yán)重。路上有如此多的車空氣污染日益嚴(yán)重。 There are so many cars on he road that the air is polluted seriously . 倒裝倒裝 So many cars are there on he road that the air is polluted seriously . 加結(jié)果加結(jié)果 There are many cars running on the road , making the air polluted . There are many cars running on the road , which makes the air polluted .要點2：