2015年高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)

1、短文改錯(cuò)優(yōu)能一對(duì)一 卜令剛2014-2010年全國(guó)卷短文改錯(cuò)考點(diǎn)分析改錯(cuò)格式下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。 增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。 刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)()劃掉。 修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn), 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。 注意: 1. 每句不超過(guò)兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤; 2. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞; 3. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。直擊考點(diǎn)詞類(lèi)句類(lèi)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞固定搭配 考點(diǎn)一：動(dòng)詞考查方式: (1)作賓語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)用的動(dòng)詞不定式缺to。(2)不及物動(dòng)詞的間接賓語(yǔ)缺少介詞。(3)及物動(dòng)詞與直接賓語(yǔ)間有多

2、余的介詞。(4)某些及物動(dòng)詞, 因詞義混淆, 用了多余的介詞或副詞。(5)某些及物動(dòng)詞的固定詞組中, 直接賓語(yǔ)前用了多余的不定冠詞。(6)動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)用。(7)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞混用。(8)主謂不一致。 2007年海南 Li Ming came see me every day. 2010全國(guó)二From then on,weve kept touch with another through e-mails.arrive, come, craw, die, dive, walk, go, run, come, fall, flow, happen, rise,agree常見(jiàn)不及物動(dòng)詞2008海南w

3、ed like to invite for you to the exhibition. 動(dòng)詞的及物性2012全國(guó)一To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. 解析：reduce為及物動(dòng)詞，故不需要加介詞“to”常見(jiàn)不及物動(dòng)詞：agree, go, work, listen, look, come, die, belong, fall, exist, rise, arrive, sit, sail, hurry, fail, suc

4、ceed. 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)用2011全國(guó)一I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. 2007年海南Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. 解析：根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句可知主句動(dòng)詞應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故hold改為held解析：根據(jù)上一句動(dòng)詞推測(cè)出listen和become都應(yīng)該為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。2014全國(guó)一Since then-we had been allowing tomat

5、oes to self seed where they please . 解析：since是完成時(shí)標(biāo)志詞，根據(jù)since then自從那以后 可知，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)或現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)，因此應(yīng)把“had”改成“have”非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)用2013海南Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,2012全國(guó)二Third,we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing,主謂不一致2011年海南卷but the only clothe

6、s I had was those I had on.2009年全國(guó)二When I got back, it were already 6 pm.考點(diǎn)二：名詞考查方式: (1)本該用復(fù)數(shù)名詞卻用了單數(shù)形式, 或本該用單數(shù)名詞卻使用了復(fù)數(shù)形式。(2)不可數(shù)名詞前加了冠詞a/an, 或用了復(fù)數(shù)形式。名詞復(fù)數(shù)2012全國(guó)二that he begged my parents to stay another couple of day.2011全國(guó)一One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we

7、brought from our homes. 最常見(jiàn)不可數(shù)名詞：advice, baggage, change(零錢(qián)), furniture, hair, homework, information, knowledge, luggage, money, news, progress, traffic名詞所有格2007海南I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. 考點(diǎn)三：冠詞考查方式: (1)單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前要加冠詞。(2)不定冠詞與定冠詞的區(qū)別。 (3)固定短語(yǔ)中冠詞的使用錯(cuò)誤。（4）復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前加不定冠詞

8、2010年海南My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US，2012陜西It is such great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of mine who is going to Beijing. 2012全國(guó)二To deal with a problem,I think,we should first go all out to plant trees2011遼寧When, however, on Monday, January 16, a sc

9、ience fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television, there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. 2010全國(guó)二In other words,we would be separated for long time.考點(diǎn)四 代詞 考查方式: (1)人稱(chēng)代詞, 物主代詞, 反身代詞指代時(shí)是否一致。(2)it作形式主語(yǔ)、形式賓語(yǔ)或指代時(shí)有無(wú)缺漏?！镜淅?. (2012新課標(biāo)

10、全國(guó)卷)I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it. 【點(diǎn)撥】2. (2012陜西高考)It is such a great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. 【點(diǎn)撥】【跟蹤演練】1. (2010陜西高考)As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt. 【解析】hisher。當(dāng)她做這件事時(shí),

11、 許多茶水濺在了她的T恤上。這里表示的是一位女士, 因此應(yīng)該把his改為her。2. (2010四川高考)And after many attempts, she passed her driving test and told her husband that, to celebrate, he was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. 【解析】heshe。句子的意思是妻子開(kāi)車(chē)帶著丈夫去法國(guó)度假, 所以應(yīng)該用女士的she。考點(diǎn)五 形容詞和副詞1. 考查方式: (1)形容詞和副詞的誤用。(2)本該用形容詞卻用名詞作表語(yǔ)。(3)單音

12、節(jié)形容詞比較級(jí)前用多余的more。例如: more longer。(4)形容詞和副詞最高級(jí)誤用。2. 突破技巧: (1)修飾名詞要用形容詞。(2)修飾動(dòng)詞、副詞、形容詞或整個(gè)句子用副詞。(3)結(jié)合語(yǔ)境注意比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)的使用?！镜淅?(2012陜西高考)We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. 【點(diǎn)撥】【跟蹤演練】1. (2012新課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. 【解析】littleless。

13、根據(jù)句意, 我不得不多一些耐心, 少一些好斗, 可知這里用less, 與more對(duì)比。2. (2012浙江高考)Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car. . . 【解析】UnfortunateUnfortunately。這里應(yīng)該用副詞修飾整個(gè)句子, 作整個(gè)句子的狀語(yǔ), 因此改為副詞?？键c(diǎn)六 介詞和介詞短語(yǔ)考查方式: (1)介詞的含義很多, 可表示時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、方向、方位、狀態(tài)、方式、方法、手段等。短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)句子意義或上下文檢查介詞是否用得準(zhǔn)確。(2)介詞在句中不能單獨(dú)作謂語(yǔ)。(3)不該用介詞時(shí)用了介詞, 如next year常寫(xiě)

14、成in next year。(4)介詞與動(dòng)詞組成的詞組要多加注意。【典例】1. (2012新課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷)Thats it. No more toys to you. 【點(diǎn)撥】2. (2012陜西高考)I also shared for my friends many photos taken in Beijing. 【點(diǎn)撥】【跟蹤演練】1. (2011陜西高考)I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building. 【解析】在out后面加of。walk out of從中出來(lái), 是一個(gè)固定詞組。2.

15、(2011新課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷)Luckily I had all my money on my pocket. 【解析】onin。我把所有的錢(qián)都放在了口袋里。in表示在里面, 而on在表面上?？键c(diǎn)七 連詞1. 考查方式: (1)并列句缺并列連詞。(2)名詞性從句作主語(yǔ)缺連詞, 或者誤用其他連詞。(3)關(guān)系代詞、關(guān)系副詞及從屬連詞在復(fù)合句中的使用是否正確。(4)and, or, but, so, however, therefore等詞的運(yùn)用是否正確。2. 突破技巧: 短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)連詞的考查僅限于上下文之間語(yǔ)意的連貫方面。所以在做這類(lèi)題目時(shí), 重要的是要讀懂上下文, 搞清楚上下句之間的關(guān)系。掌握句式結(jié)構(gòu)

16、, 把握準(zhǔn)語(yǔ)意關(guān)系是做好此類(lèi)試題的關(guān)鍵, 如并列邏輯關(guān)系常見(jiàn)的詞有and, both. . .and. . . , not only . . . but also . . . , as well as等; 轉(zhuǎn)折邏輯關(guān)系常見(jiàn)的詞有however, but; 遞進(jìn)邏輯關(guān)系常見(jiàn)的詞有whats more, moreover, besides等?！镜淅?. (2012新課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷)But before long they began to see which was happening. 【點(diǎn)撥】2. (2012浙江高考)I called my parents, so I did not tell

17、them what had happened. 【點(diǎn)撥】【跟蹤演練】1. (2010浙江高考)After we left, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didnt think she looked like Grandma. ”“Neither did I, ”said Mother cheerfully. 【解析】SoBut。根據(jù)前后的句意, 可知這里表示一種轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系, 所以應(yīng)該將So改為But。2. (2011陜西高考)I didnt have my camera with me at that time, but I

18、rushed back home to get it. 【解析】butand/so。那個(gè)時(shí)候我沒(méi)有帶著照相機(jī), 所以我跑回家去拿了。這里是一個(gè)遞進(jìn)關(guān)系或者因果關(guān)系, 因此but改為and/so。1 下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。 增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。 刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)()劃掉。 修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn), 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。 注意: 1. 每句不超過(guò)兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤; 2. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞; 3. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 I bring Rose home fiv

19、e years ago. My neighbor Mrs. Black fell in love with her immediate she saw her. She was such lovely dog, after all. Rose also seemed to like Mrs. Black. Two years ago, however, Mrs. Black got cancer. Having been treating in hospital, she decided to receive treatment at home. Since my husband and I

20、were busy in our work, we seldom went to see her. Three months ago, Mrs. Black died. To our surprised, her husband came to thank to us for keeping Roseone day. He said in the past several months, Rose went to accompany his wife every day before my husband and I went to work. With she around, his wif

21、e felt so warm and wasnt in so much pain. I never knew that. That Rose did was really heart-warming. 答案: I bring Rose home five years ago. My neighbor Mrs. broughtBlack fell in love with her immediate she saw her. She was immediatelysuch lovely dog, after all. Rose also seemed to like Mrs. a Black.

22、Two years ago, however, Mrs. Black got cancer. Having been treating in hospital, she decided to receive treatedtreatment at home. Since my husband and I were busy in withour work, we seldom went to see her. Three months ago, Mrs. Black died. To our surprised surprise, her husband came to thank to us

23、 for keeping Rose one day. He said in the past several months, Rose went to accompany his wife every day before my husband and I went to work. With aftershe around, his wife felt so warm and wasnt in so much pain.her I never knew that. That Rose did was really heart-warming. What1. 【解析】將第一句中的bring改為

24、brought。ago表示過(guò)去時(shí)。2. 【解析】將第二句中的immediate改為immediately。immediately表示“一就”。3. 【解析】在第三句中的such后面加上a。后面dog是可數(shù)名詞。4. 【解析】將第六句中的treating改為treated。she與treat之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系。5. 【解析】將第七句中的in改為with。be busy with固定詞組, “忙于”的意思。6. 【解析】將第九句中的surprised改為surprise。to ones +抽象名詞, 表示“使某人感到的是”。7. 【解析】將第九句中的thank后面的to去掉。thank是及物動(dòng)詞。8.

25、 【解析】將第十句中的before改為after。意思是“在之后”。9. 【解析】把第十一句中的she改為her。with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。10. 【解析】把第十三句中的That改為What。what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句, 并在從句中作did的賓語(yǔ)。2(2013南充模擬) 下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。 增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。 刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)()劃掉。 修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn), 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。 注意: 1. 每句不超過(guò)兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤; 2. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞; 3. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第

26、11處起)不計(jì)分。 What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley. Its a brief or excellent article about credit cards. The author explains what credit cards work. And he also points out the positive and negative aspect for having it. American consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards. H

27、owever, the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in world. The key point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company. This protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards. 答案: What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley. Its a brief or excellent article about credit cards. The and/but author explains what credit cards work. An