專題5改錯答案

1、（一）2012錦州模擬 解析 Time and tide wait eq o(,sdo4(for) no man.My mother is becoming a _middleageeq o(,sdo4(middleaged) woman quietly. She haeq o(d,sdo4(has) been busy running after us all the years.My father is very busy every day outside.Bueq o(t,sdo4(So) the heavy burden falls on my mothers shouldeeq o

2、(r,sdo4(shoulders).Because my school is far from my home，I have to go to school by thetrain and my mother sees me off at the station every time.I often choose a seat whereq o(e,sdo4(which/that) is close to the window，so I can see her. However，I always cant help rueq o(n,sdo4(running) tears from my e

3、yes.All the buildings and people outside the window disappear.I wave gentleq o(e,sdo4(gently) to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears.Up to now，even if heq o(e,sdo4(she) is busy，she still does it as usual.The view of my mothers back will never change in my heart.（二）2012銀川

4、實驗中學月考 解析 Last year, I was addicted witeq o(h,sdo4(to) playing computer games. I found it hard to breakineq o(g,sdo4(break) away from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessleq o(y,sdo4

5、(useless). The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Becauseq o(e,sdo4(Although/Though) I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons givineq o(g,sdo4(given) in classes.Fortunately, eq o(,sdo4(a) psychological advisor in our school

6、 came to know this. He talkeq o(s,sdo4(talked) with me about hieq o(s,sdo4(my) problem. At last, he offered his adviceeq o(s,sdo4(advice) on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself. E12012課標全國卷解析 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littleq o(e,sdo4(l

7、ess) aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toeq o(y,sdo4(toys). I was happy when the toys worked, but when things dieq o(d,sdo4(went) eq o(/,sdo4(/go) wrong, I got angry and broke ieq o(t,sdo4(them). For a while eq o(,sdo4(my) parents bought me new

8、toys. But before long they began to see whiceq o(h,sdo4(what) was happening. When I teaeq o(r,sdo4(tore) apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “Thats it. No more toys teq o(o,sdo4(for) you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I museq o(t,sdo4(cou

9、ld/might) make my toys tolast. My attitude changed from then on.1. littleless考查副詞的用法。根據(jù)句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑釁性。此處less修飾形容詞。2. toytoys考查名詞的單復數(shù)形式。根據(jù)each of 可知，應該是“我”的玩具中的每一個，故用復數(shù)形式toys。3. didwent或者did 后加go考查固定短語的表達法。解題關鍵：掌握短語go wrong意為：出錯。4. itthem考查代詞指代一致。此處指前文的toys，所以后文用them。5. 在parents前加my考查代詞的用法。英語中需前

10、后一致，my parents bought me new toys.此處my和me對應。6. whichwhat考查名詞性從句的連接詞。此處what作賓語從句的主語。句意：明白所發(fā)生的一切。7. teartore考查動詞時態(tài)。通過觀察整個文章的時態(tài)以及my fifth birthday可知，此處用一般過去時。8. tofor考查介詞的用法。此處意為：不再給你買玩具了。toys for sb意為：給某人的玩具。9. mustcould/might考查情態(tài)動詞。根據(jù)句意：擁有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。10. 去掉last前的to考查不定式作賓語補足語。解題關鍵：make sb/st

11、h do，此處make作“使”解，其后接不帶to的不定式作賓補。E12012浙江卷答案 Two years beforeq o(e,sdo4(ago)， I traveled to Brazil and I rented fora car. Unfortunateq o(e,sdo4(Unfortunately)， I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two weeeq o(k,sdo4(weeks). I called my parents, seq o(

12、o,sdo4(but) I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they wileq o(l,sdo4(would) be worried about myseleq o(f,sdo4(me) because I was so fartheeq o(r,sdo4(far) away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interesteeq o(d,sdo4(interesting) stories and how I was

13、 enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew eq o(,sdo4(the) truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.E12011陜西卷解析 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visieq o(t,sdo4(visited) Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, bueq o(t,sdo4(and/so) it is easy to

14、 go toanywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortableq o(y,sdo4(comfortable) doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best wereq o(e,sdo4(was) the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared foeq o(r,sdo4(with) my friends

15、 many photos takineq o(g,sdo4(taken) in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local diseq o(h,sdo4(dishes).It is such eq o(,sdo4(a) great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of meq o(e,sdo4(mine) who is going to Beijing.1visitvisited根據(jù)時間狀語last month

16、可知本句時態(tài)是一般過去時，故動詞用過去式。2butand/so前后文是承接或因果關系，故連詞用and或so。3to去掉anywhere是指地點的副詞，其前不用介詞。4comfortablycomfortable修飾名詞doubleroom應用形容詞。5werewaswhat引導主語從句，其謂語動詞應用單數(shù)形式，故系動詞were改為was。6forwith動詞share與介詞with構成搭配，意思是“和某人分享”。7takingtakentake與所修飾詞photos是邏輯上的動賓關系，故用過去分詞作后置定語。8dishdishes由several修飾，名詞應用復數(shù)。9such后加asuch修飾

17、的hotel是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，需加不定冠詞a。10memine雙重所有格的構成是“of 名詞性物主代詞或名詞所有格”。E2 短文改錯應用文 (一)解析 Dear Mary，Ive received your email. Dont eq o( ,sdo4(be) 或eq f(worried,worry) about me. Im getting on well with my research work in the lab. But ieq o(n,sdo4(to) my surprise, you say you will give up leareq o(n,sdo4(learning)

18、English. The reason is becauseq o(e,sdo4(that) you have not done well in it recently and you have loseq o(e,sdo4(lost) interest. Im afraid I cant agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, aneq o(d,sdo4(but) it is widely used in the world today and it will be eq o(,sdo4(an) important to

19、ol in the future. Besideq o(e,sdo4(Besides)， it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardleq o(y,sdo4(hard)， you will succeed.Im looking forward to hearing a good news from you !Yours，Li Hua （二）2012寶雞市高三教學質檢 解析 Dear Wei Fang，Its a long time since I heard

20、 from you in last time.Now I d like to tell you eq o(a,sdo4(an) impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.A boy, Li Ming, whoeq o(m,sdo4(whose) father died a month ago, was late for school.He stood outside the classroom sileneq o(t,sdo4(silently).I smiled to him and let h

21、im comeq o(e,sdo4(in) 或eq o(,sdo4(in). After a while, he began to cry.Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what haeq o(s,sdo4(had) happened.He told me his mother was ill bueq o(t,sdo4(and) he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his woreq

22、 o(d,sdo4(words)， I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song eq o(,sdo4(that/which或)was named “Mother” for the students.From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and dieq o(d,sdo4(do) our best to help them.Do you think so? Im looking forward to your reply.E22012遼寧卷解析

23、 Dear Diana，Thank you for the lovely day we haveq o(e,sdo4(had) with you. It was so kind foeq o(r,sdo4(of) you to let us bring Annes friend, Gina. Unfortunateq o(e,sdo4(Unfortunately)， the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, foeq o(r,sdo4(as) a r

24、esult, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mileq o(e,sdo4(miles). In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unleseq o(s,sdo4(until/till) the road was clear. In the car park hereq o(e,sdo4(there) Gina nearly got knocked over as eq o(,sdo4(a) car drove out far too quickl

25、y from behind a lorry. Theeq o(y,sdo4(We) finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.76. havehad。全文講述的是過去的事情，因此用過去時。77. forof。Its kind of sb. to do sth.為固定句式。78. UnfortunateUnfortunately。副詞作狀語，修飾全句。79. for a result中的foras。as a result為固定短語，意思是“因而”。80. milemiles。前面有six修飾，因此名詞

26、應該用復數(shù)形式。81. unlessuntil/till?？蘸蟮膬热菔乔懊娴臅r間狀語。82. herethere。講述離自己遠的地方用there。83. as car中間加a。car是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，因此用a。84. TheyWe。全文用第一人稱講述發(fā)生在自己身上的事情。85. 去掉home前的to。home是副詞，前面沒有介詞。E3 短文改錯議論文（一）2012石家莊質檢 解析 We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my classmateq o(e,sdo4(classmates) for exa

27、mple, they often feel upset because eq o(,sdo4(of) the expectations from parents, endless homework and the pressure of exams. These serioueq o(s,sdo4(seriously) affect their physical and mental wellbeing. Therefore, I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains. First, thaeq

28、 o(t,sdo4(it) is a good idea to have hearttoheart talks with our parents, teleq o(l,sdo4(telling) them we wont disappoint them. Meanwhile, its advisable to spare some time to take some exercise besideq o(e,sdo4(besides) our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxineq o(g,sdo4(relax

29、ed) and energetic. As long as we wereq o(e,sdo4(are) fully prepared, we are sure to achieve great success in meq o(y,sdo4(our) academic performance.一.（ 金華一中2012學年第一學期期中考試）66.去掉but 67. lives-living 68. thing-things 69. 去掉第二個to 70. 在you前加do 71on-in 72. say - said 73. us-we 74. this-these 75. clear-cle

30、arly二、（浙江省北侖中學2012屆高三上學期期中考試）Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument. Of course, he if / whethercant. Then you take a glass of water. You put your finger in/water and then move it slow roundthe slowlythe rim of the glass, as shown in the picture. Your finger must not

31、 be much wet, but it must not very / toobe dry. So you must try many time. At last you will hear clear music which comes from the timesglass. When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass to vibrate and the glass makes a musical voice. The same principle makes the violin or its strings gi

32、ve music. sound andThe America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls. He Americanused the different principle.same三、（浙江省蒼南中學2012屆高三上學期期中考試）One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, Itold that the for wasticket had all been

33、 sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent tickets strongthat he had a spare ticket. I didnt know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a 去掉 hesitatingwhile, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, w

34、hat Butshall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to should the offher, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me. 六、（蕭山九中2011學年第一學期期中聯(lián)考）Dear Sir/Madam,來I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. Im anreally interested in this position and hoped I can work for you.