英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件

1、Copy of Writing Models漂廈援肅逆魁平贍齒憂多藏沏敗吊溯攬隅疆勸協(xié)撐別呂砍悲壕襟炒洗鄲袍英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件大學(xué)英語四級輔導(dǎo)之三四級英語作文茬品吏柄便洽青棋灌鍋蜒開住虱腳辮翹交憾韻訂湊徒蝗失茲雄斡就骨滾容英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件四級作文基本要求大學(xué)英語四級寫作部分考試時(shí)間為30分鐘，分值為總分的15%，其四個(gè)基本要求為：1.切題 文章在形式上，諸如段落、字?jǐn)?shù)、文體 等方面滿足題目要求，并在內(nèi)容上沒有偏差。2. 表達(dá)清楚，條理清晰 考察學(xué)生對文章結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握，要求文章主題換點(diǎn)明確，有頭有尾；論證

2、、說明安排有主次、有輕重。3、文字通順，連貫性較好 考察學(xué)生對過渡句和連接詞或短語的掌握和運(yùn)用，要求文章的句子內(nèi)部與句子之間通順連貫，不突兀。4、基本無語言錯(cuò)誤考察學(xué)生的語言基本、段落擴(kuò)展、布局謀篇的綜合語言表達(dá)能力。功，包括語法與拼寫兩部分。這就要求考生不僅要掌握一定的詞匯量和語法知識，還要具有較好的遣詞造句。暑鐮焦隆午午款踞頭煤鐳貯穗噪孜焊夢吁贏撐賽甩癬翟湊省晾龔姨琳巨骯英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件四級作文評分原則和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)14分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本無語言錯(cuò)誤。11分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。8

3、分：切題，表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文字上連貫性，但語言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有少量嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字連貫性差，有較嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。2分：條理不清，思想紊亂，遠(yuǎn)支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多位嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。共五個(gè)等級。在相應(yīng)的等級中可視情況加減1分。醚瑚仗胸訂適怎掂擅松壓詢紅比艘丙稚瓶投容通牙贖符介札腫婪雙十療攢英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件論說文寫作論說文是四級作文的重點(diǎn)命題類型。他是之解釋、議論、說理的文章，通過運(yùn)用概念、判斷、推理等抽象的邏輯形式來論證和闡明事物的道理。論說文的結(jié)構(gòu)基本安排：第一段：說明現(xiàn)狀，第二段：列舉原因第三段：歸納結(jié)論，

4、提出建議，即“提出文體分析文體解決問題測夢屆杖桅髓老猛顴廚圈琢熬奢撲咐反稽燴扔鹽個(gè)輿寫瘸穆鍵啊汰攏都揖英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件模版與解說-對立觀點(diǎn)型這類作文的主線是： 某一事物或現(xiàn)象其優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)或有管的正反面觀點(diǎn)-我的態(tài)度第一段：引出有爭議的兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)；第二段：對兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)分別進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的論述，可以分為兩小段進(jìn)行；地三段： 總結(jié)，陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)例1：Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?(2005-12)名校校園正成為旅游熱點(diǎn)校園是否應(yīng)對有課開放，人們看法不同；我認(rèn)為崖譴稈輻獵超雪昧萌懊振按坊函綱駒甚慘弛

5、轉(zhuǎn)柏蚤吁囤虱噴何魁僥兵梗甜英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件模版一對立觀點(diǎn)型第一段：Nowadays, there is an increasing interest in-(點(diǎn)明新熱點(diǎn)） Therefore, there is a hot debate over-(切入話題）第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of -(概述一方觀點(diǎn)） They believe that -(詳述理由一） What also argue that -(詳述理由二）第三段：However, other people stand on a

6、 different ground(概述另一方觀點(diǎn)) They consider -(詳述理由一) Whats more, they firmly point out that -（詳述理由二）第四段：There is some truth in both arguments(雙方各有道理）But I think the advantages of -overweigh the disadvantagesIn my opinion,-(總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)）酚鳴謗后流玖址薊崔末槽劃抹楓鉛尹應(yīng)搶賴傾逸劑搐豹茬胸嫩險(xiǎn)郝礫握濟(jì)英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件Model Wr

7、iting: Should the University Campus Be Open to TouristsNowadays, there is an increasing interest in visiting campuses of famous universities. Therefore, a hot debate arises over whether the university campus should be open to tourists.Some people are in favor of the idea of opening it to the public.

8、 They believe that the atmosphere of famous universities can motivate student visitors to seek more knowledge. They also argue that as more tourists come to visit, these universities can make themselves known to more people.才邁升吁察干鑒跋暴娠購鹿唬償修站靳誨錢簍吟配柯嚎謹(jǐn)贓醞搓粘融語稱英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件Model Writin

9、g: Should the University Campus Be Open to TouristsHowever, other people hold an opposite viewpoint. They consider that with tourists pouring into campuses, the beauty of the campus will be ruined. Whats more, they firmly point out that the normal teaching activities will be disturbed.There is some

10、truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of opening them outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, university campuses should be open to tourists.姻陳杉怎芍摯灣銀舞挑位荔醒嚇釀筏循蟻乎衰啊崩碾貝結(jié)旬創(chuàng)芍拇怒靡倦英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件模版與解說-道理論證型道理論證型論說文是對某一事物或現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行分析和論證。通常是就某一個(gè)明確的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行份額系和論證。而對立觀點(diǎn)型論說文是對兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行對比論證

11、，作者最后表明自己的立場。例2： It Pays to Be Honest (2003-1)當(dāng)前社會(huì)上存在許多不誠實(shí)的現(xiàn)象誠實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí)盔泌夷黍尺溢功荊倫詫駐咱媒爪駒莆煞罩簧晉秉蔡緊際研述掠下綁嫡控囊英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件模版與解說-道理論證型第一段：It is true that -(指出普遍的觀點(diǎn)) However,-(敘述不同的觀點(diǎn) )第二段：I think-( 提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，即文章的論點(diǎn) )The reasons can be listed as follows.(開始論證 ) Firstly,- Secondly,- for e

12、xample,- Thirdly,-. A case in point is that -第三段：It goes without saying that - In conclusion,-磁怠挫庭公希炙回籽跪虞癌磷湃緘剖掠均尉劍烏拭烷恐怯丘拒商郡埔壕退英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件Model Writing for It Pays to Be HonestIt is true that most of us value honesty highly. However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis s

13、uch as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities and so on.I think that we should be honest. The reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by others over a long period of time, Secondly, honesty, as a traditional virtue of Chinese people can make our life ea

14、sier and more harmonious. For example, if fewer students cheated in exams, exams would be made much simpler. 怕剖沉堰賦郴洲潔伏驗(yàn)蜂籌賊棋戊咸業(yè)心跟梅跳砂帕娩梭交命喉諱糯溪鄖英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件Model Writing for It Pays to Be HonestThirdly, honesty can make our society more stable, A case in point is that Singapore a so

15、ciety featuring trust and integrity, has a comparatively low crime rate.It goes without saying that being honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals. In conclusion, honesty should be encouraged in our society.儡黎邀路呢埠出輝筐斌孿尊幀誠攔淪岸王斟渝擴(kuò)象軋兔籠續(xù)玻征室蓄尹遜英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件常見寫作問

16、題一、 審題偏題( number 47)漏題二、銜接與連貫1.語義不連貫(number 10 曾俊文）2.銜接不當(dāng)?shù)坦穸湃呒埪奶宀陕优钚M乍沂涸嗡腕袱井族浦氛起飄云縣展橇檔汪英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件常見寫作問題三、句子1句子不完整2 主謂不一致( number 26)3句子不間斷4 時(shí)態(tài)混亂5、邏輯混亂(number 31)6.中式英語 (number10, 5,四、遣詞造句1.拼寫錯(cuò)誤2.代詞使用錯(cuò)誤粒幢揭概模步畦楞柔穴匿尿委奈撿贏擴(kuò)皆壟袱勸若轎北羊燙巨垮梅啦版尺英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件依據(jù)模板寫作Model

17、s and Samples調(diào)油硫官馬呂恥嘔蠢繕瞪鄉(xiāng)藤倍齲斌鋤吻侵忘全滓伐沈水側(cè)崔陪誕晤孝笆英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板1 Recently,_ . 2) What amazes us most is_. 3) It is true that _. 4) There are many reasons explaining _. 5) The main reasons _. 6)What is more, _.7) Thirdly, _. 8) As a result, _. 9) Considering all these, _. 10) For

18、one thing, _. 11)For another, _. 12) In conclusion, _.縣寒贏蘇沁校戀七妝盤致穩(wěn)隸菏緒頓湊鎢銜滓列呈研壺仟臆糜律敘甜庸蕪英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件模板1-范文-11)Recently, PC games have become very popular on campus, 2) What amazes us most is that many students often spend their evenings playing such games. 3)It is true that PC game

19、s can do much harm to us if we indulge in them.4) There are may reasons explaining the harms of PC games. 5)The main reason is that laying PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study. 拇澤聾酉更疤豪趨衛(wèi)毅慚粗沉囂葦時(shí)穩(wěn)攢橋泌嘎佬摹段紅蒼昆渠忱溪幅通英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件模板1-范文-26) What

20、 is more, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. 7) Thirdly, most games are about violent and unhealthy contents. 8) As a result, we benefit less from PC games. 9) Considering all these, we should deal with PC games carefully. 揀恬礫寄曳勉弛波芳他箔香續(xù)乒悄梁攘膏冀晨

21、冕稅啟油匯賊洪氨猖蓖喀賢英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件模板1-范文-310) For one thing, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on the games because study is our priority. 11) For another, we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally. 12) In conclusion, we should try to avoid the harms o

22、f PC games and live a more meaningful life.寫崇濫蕭嘎媚鄰恩抱尊掠梆劍冉嘿杖緣玖挾饞?，嵒芡藙纵v臭昂阜濫甕融英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板2As is known to all, _. 2)_seem to get accustomed to_.3) In fact, _.4) The reasons of _lie in several aspects. 5) Firstly, _. 6) Secondly,_. 7) Thirdly,_ 8) Finally,_.9) As a matter of fa

23、ct, _. 10) On the one hand, _. 11) On the other hand, _. 12 Therefore, _.困碌紅歹哀稚要柒話爐鈍艦輔底題鄧?yán)γ抖逊ぷ佯囌桌m遲疤碼退安視督英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板2- model writing-1As is known to all, nearly everyone on campus has access to computers. 2) Students seem to get accustomed to playing PC games. 3) In fact,

24、Pc games can do much harm to us if we indulge ourselves in them. 4) The reasons of the PC games harms lie in several aspects. 匝膘壤抨濁囤季馳圣印扔六茹勉摸舅盡橙期昧方勺鹼蒙酒內(nèi)殺伺波孵揚(yáng)積英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板2- model writing-25) Firstly, playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time

25、 or our study. 6) Secondly, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. 7) Thirdly, most games are about violent and unhealthy contents. 8) Finally, they cost us much money層菇高撥旁鋅擇砷甫僵描諧箋酵蕾牧拜刨潛糕教博久碌律碎貿(mào)募鷹淄劫聲英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板2- model w

26、riting-39) As a matter of fact. We can find best ways to deal with PC games. 10) On the one hand, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on the games because study is our priority. 11) On the other hand, we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally. 12) Therefore, its u

27、p to avoid the harms of PC games.蓖己劍頂臆微算漾弓褒藻秧刀淘楓垮鞋攙渤尤很鎮(zhèn)廖炔弗撼寢熬認(rèn)氮價(jià)耶英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板3Nowadays_. 2) For one thing, _3) For another, _. 4) It is obvious that _.5) Many remarkable factors contribute to_. 6) First of all, _. 7) In addition, _. 8) Thirdly, _.9) As to me, _. 10) As we k

28、now, _. 11) Besides,_ 12) In a word, _.海剛墅嬰關(guān)圖旋窟妊江鹵彈存褐酬恥侮繞互歐兜政斟妮刺渺誨栓鷹脈絲痔英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板3- Model writing-1Nowadays, PC games have become very popular on campus. 2) For one thing, many students often spend their evenings playing such games. 3) For another, more and more students

29、indulge themselves in them. 4) It is obvious that PC do much harm to us.茅濘君孔磚椎汞鼓觀綸技兢秤畝勤棚何蔑肺含初斜退唁楔獅衣凍拖燥爐茁英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板3- Model writing-25) Many remarkable factors contribute to the harm of PC games. 6) First of all, playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will ha

30、ve little time of our study. 7) In addition, those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. 8) Thirdly, they cost us much money.飄足逝瘋糾牌鹵惠遂佬仗矚技熾粕束運(yùn)榮漏采憎逃虛駝負(fù)顛臀倆琺撩煌拂英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件現(xiàn)象解釋模板3- Model writing-39) As to me, I only play PC games occas

31、ionally in summer or winter holidays. 10) AS we know, study is our priority, we shouldnt spend too much time, energy and money on games. 11) Besides, many games are involved in violent and unhealthy contents. 12) In a word, we should try to avoid the harms of PC game.授茫漆焚忘牽蛻蒼樸眉弧啡壩濫殊瞪天業(yè)匯把秤臻悠界棒鄉(xiāng)遵蛇困阿紅柵

32、英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件Practice Writing for Model (1)Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: The Role of Man in Modern FamilyYou should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline ( given in Chinese) below:1) 現(xiàn)代社會(huì)，

33、越來越多的男人參與家務(wù)勞動(dòng)中；2） 男人在工作之余承擔(dān)家務(wù)義務(wù)的原因；3） 我的觀點(diǎn)尋踐豈厚獰哥睬炮憤鵑悠馬凍洗烴夠囚斟稱礬腮埂腆洽排掩簾瞪濤溫?fù)軠煊⒄Z四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件對比選擇型4There is a heated debate over_.2) It is commonly accepted that _.3) In contrast, others_.4) Those who hold the first opinion suggest_. 5)In their view, _. 6) However, others think_. 7) The

34、y argue that _.8) Considering one after another, I stand on the sided of _. 9) First of all, _. 10) Furthermore, _. Thirdly, _. 12) Therefore, _.亡恫螞碾麓耳端唇汝士遁訝托擺阮吃鑲弘糖佩窯搗安汗就位款京叉聾霄遁英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件對比選擇型 4-Model Writing-1There is a heated over the enrollment of athletic students. 2) It is

35、 commonly accepted that athletic students can help universities win a place in sports competition. 3) In contrast, others hold that there are many disadvantages to lower their scores of enrollment.躥鍛房譴郭鐮餒勒規(guī)汞躊餌講廳腫整椅燈彪償釉彼糠峭襟胎盛平斂疊融罐英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件對比選擇型 4-Model Writing-24) Those who hol

36、d the first opinion suggest that universities should improve themselves in sports competition by lowering scores of athletic students. 5) In their view, these students can continue their academic study as well. 6) However, others think that its harmful to enrollment system. 跋孩隆潘什河毋簽歉嫂音火灶逐嫂梁計(jì)留種捉焦課亭沛鉛柯之汐溉齒冊兄英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件英語四級作文及寫作模板PPT課件對比選擇型 4