高二英語人教版選修6課件：Book 6 Unit 3 Writing

1、人教課標(biāo)高二 選修 6Unit 3Unit 3 A healthy life英文建議信屬于應(yīng)用文寫作范疇，是向征詢建議者就某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告。高考中此類信件多屬于半開放性作文，要求考生根據(jù)所給的材料(多為征求建議信)，提出合理化建議，或者給出有針對性的解決辦法。建議信要寫明寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由，并且提出的理由要合情合理，語氣一定要委婉禮貌。此外，建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、語言要具有合理性和說服力。開門見山，表明寫作意圖。在本段中，寫信人應(yīng)該先簡單介紹自己，然后陳述事由，表明寫信的目的及原因。委婉地提出建議及改進(jìn)措施，或提出忠告。禮貌地總結(jié)并期盼對方的回復(fù)。 Re

2、ad this letter and imagine that you are the adviser who deals with students problems. Write a letter to give Xiao Li some helpful advice. Writing taskDear _, Can you help me please? My best friend has just started smoking. I do not like it and I told her what I thought. She laughed at me and said th

3、at I was not grown-up enough.Then she offered me a cigarette and I felt so embarrassed. I did not know how to refuse it. Please help me. I do not want to start smoking, but I do not want to lose my best friend, either. Yours sincerely,Li XiaoleiDear _,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _

4、 (建議的主題), and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _ (建議的內(nèi)容)I hope you will find these proposals _, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to _.Yours Sincerely, Li Ming usefulfurther detailsYour frien

5、d is _ smoking and your _towards this matter. addicted toattitude I think it more important to _ the smoker to use good judgment and to show _ for others. call onconcernYou had better _ his offer, and he will _ you at last.rejectunderstand巧列提綱，詳略得當(dāng):針對問題需要提出什么樣的建議，要講哪些內(nèi)容，應(yīng)該先列出提綱，并要做到內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)突出、詳略得當(dāng)、井然有序，

6、達(dá)到提綱挈領(lǐng)的作用。 Pointing out the harm of smoking.Showing your advice.翻譯要點(diǎn)，勾勒脈絡(luò):列出提綱后，可以嘗試著將文章中涉及到的建議要點(diǎn)或忠告翻譯成相應(yīng)的英語句子，這樣全文的骨架就已經(jīng)形成了。在此基礎(chǔ)上，可增加合理的想象以及適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展。Smoking is _ to your health, especially to your lung.I think it more important to _ the smoker to use good judgment and to show _ for others.You had bett

7、er _ his offer, and he will _ you at last.harmfulcall onconcernrejectunderstand巧妙構(gòu)思，渾然成篇:增加適當(dāng)?shù)那楣?jié)和一些過渡詞將上述要點(diǎn)連接起來，加以適當(dāng)潤色，形成一篇地道、完整的英語建議信。 Medical scientists have expressed their concern about the effect of smoking on the _ not only of those who are smoking but also of those who live in the air _ by to

8、bacco smoke. healthpollutedSmoking, which may be _for some people, is a series of _ for their fellows. a pleasurediscomfortsStudies show that _suffer more than the smokers themselves. non-smokers規(guī)范書寫，落筆成文:上述四個(gè)步驟是構(gòu)思寫作的基礎(chǔ)，而規(guī)范書寫是落筆成文的關(guān)鍵。在這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中，切不可因?yàn)闀鴮懥什?、亂涂亂改而讓人看不出個(gè)所以然，結(jié)果使整篇文章黯然失色。Dear Li Ming,You have

9、asked me for my advice. Your friend is addicted to smoking and you strongly object to it. I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.Sample As we know, smoking is harmful to our health. Medical scientists have expressed their concern about the effect of smoking on the health not only of tho

10、se who are smoking but also of those who live in the air polluted by tobacco smoke. Smoking, which may be a pleasure for some people, is a series of discomforts for their fellows. And studies show that non-smokers suffer more than the smokers themselves. In my opinion, it is more important to call o

11、n the smoker to use good judgment and to show concern for others. Taking your health into consideration, you had better reject his offer, and I think he will understand you at last.I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming HomeworkWork in groups. Imagine you are pro