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1、讀后續(xù)寫專題第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應 為150左右。A few years ago, I was given a wallet. It was small, with only a single pocket for cash, cards and coins. A zipper kept everything inside from falling out and a beautiful elephant was woven into its front panel. The wallet came
2、to me all the way from Tanzania, gifted to me by a close friend. I fell in love with it immediately, it was the perfect size and came from a place I hoped to someday visit. I carried it everywhere ; it was always precariously (不安全地)hanging out of one pocket or another.But the wallet was not only bea
3、utiful; it had a personality: it loved to run away? as I told my parents over and over again, only to receive eye rolls in return. Trances, really? youve lost it again? they would say every time I misplaced it.I seem to have a habit of losing things-jackets, water bottles, text books, even shoes. An
4、d every time I would report another loss, my parents would have a harder time believing it. nI swear/ I would assure them, “it just ran away from me. Unfortunately? they never believed that, and so often I was left to search and pray for the items to come back to me.One day? I was on my way home fro
5、m school with a couple of friends. We had taken subway using our transportation cards. Mine was inside my wallet. Once on the other side of the turnstile (旋轉柵11) , I put the elephant pouch back in my pocket and set off for the rock climbing gym, where we would spend a couple of hours before going ho
6、me. When I got to the gym, I reached for my wallet only to find it wasnt there. This time I panicked.注意:L續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。注意:續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。第二節(jié)(滿分25分)一、評分原則He rode proudly home, looking forward to showing his new bicycle to his friends. His friends were more than glad that James
7、 owned his bicycle so that they could make a trip together. Excited and confident, James told them the fact that he spent spare time doing various jobs to realize his dream with money earned by himself. All of his friends admired him for his hard work, expressing that they would learn from him, achi
8、eving their goals without giving up. Going home happily, James was encouraged and required by his parents to thank Mr. Clay and others for the odd job business they offered. Thinking of so many surprising jobs, James understood all of them, and moved to tears.Many years later, James succeeded in run
9、ning a company with the name of Good Opinions. He was willing to give good opinions to people in difficulty, offering various jobs and helpful equipment to help them overcome all the challenges and live a happy life. He used his action to thank Mr. Clay and others and spread their kind spirits.L本題總分
10、為25分,按5個檔次給分。.評分時,先根據(jù)所續(xù)寫短文的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要 求來衡量,確 定或調整檔次,最后給分。.詞數(shù)少于13。的,從總分中減去2分。.評分時,應主要從以下三個方面考慮:(D與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度;(2)應用語法結構和詞匯的豐富性和準確性;(3)上下文的連貫性。.拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個重要方面,評分時,應視其對交際的影響程度 予以考慮。如書寫較差以致影響交際,可將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。二、各檔次的給分范圍和要求檔次描述第五檔(21-25 分)一與所給短文融洽度高,與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理;內容豐富;一所使用語法結構和詞匯豐富、準確
11、,可能有些許錯誤,但完全不影響意義表達;第四檔(16-20 分)一與所給短文融洽度較同與所提供各段落開頭語銜接較為合理;一內容比較豐富;一所使用語法結構和詞匯較為豐富、準確,可能有些許錯誤,但不影響意義表達;第三檔(11-15一與所給短文關系較為密切,與所提供各段落開頭語有一定程度的銜接;一寫出了若干有關內容;一應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求,雖有一些錯誤,但不影響意義表達;第二檔(6-10 分)一與所給短文有一定的關系,與所提供各段落開頭語有一定程度的銜接;一寫出了一些有關內容;一語法結構單調、詞匯項目有限,有些語法結構和詞匯方面的錯誤,影響了意義的表達;較少使用語句間的連接成分,全文
12、內容缺少連貫性。第一檔(1-5 分)一與所提供短文和開頭語的銜接較差;一產出內容太少;一語法結構單調、詞匯項目很有限,有較多語法結構和詞匯方面的錯誤,嚴重影響了意義的表達;一缺千語句間的連接成分,全文內容不連貫。0白卷、內容太少無法評判或所寫內容與所提供內容無關。山東省荷澤市2021屆高三上學期期中考試英語試題(B)第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Bobby was getting cold sitting out in his backyard in the snow. Bobby didnt wear boots; or rat
13、her, he didnt own any. The thin sneakers he wore had a few holes in them and they did a poor job of keeping out the cold.Bobby had been in his backyard for about an hour already. Try as he might, he could not come up with an idea for his mothers Christmas gift. He shook his head as he thought, This
14、is useless. Even if I do come up with an idea, I dont have any money for a gift;Wiping tears from his eyes, Bobby started walking down to the street where the shops were.It wasn*t easy being six without a father, especially when he needed a man to talk to.Bobby walked from shop to shop, looking into
15、 each decorated window. Everything seemed so beautiful but so out of reach. It was starting to get dark and Bobby reluctantly turned to walk home when suddenly his eyes caught the glimmer (微光)of the setting surfs rays reflecting on something on the roadside. He reached down and discovered a shiny di
16、me ()(一角硬幣).Never before has anyone felt as wealthy as Bobby did at that moment. As he held his newly- found treasure, warmth spread throughout his entire body and he walked into the first store. His excitement quickly turned cold when salesperson after salesperson told him that he could not buy any
17、thing with only a dime.He saw a flower shop and went inside to wait in line. When the shop owner asked if he could help him, Bobby presented the dime and asked if he could buy one flower for his mothers Christmas gift. The shop owner looked at Bobby and his ten - cent offering. Then he put his hand
18、on Bobbys shoulder, saying, nYou just wait here and Ill see what I can do for you.”The sound of the door closing as the last customer left pulled Bobby back to reality. All alone in the shop, Bobby began to feel alone and afraid.注意:.續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應為150左右;.請按照如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Finally the shop owner appeared an
19、d asked Bobby to come to thecounter :* *With the bunch of beautiful roses in his hands, Bobby became so grateful and excited. . * 第二節(jié)(滿分25分)One possible version:Finally the shop owner appeared and asked Bobby to come to the counlerThcrc, before Bobbys eyes, lay twelve red roses, with leaves of green
20、 and tiny white flowers all tied together with a big silver tape. Bobbys heart sank as the owner placed them gently into a long white box. That will be ten cents, young man. the shop owner said, reaching out his hand for the dime. Slowly. Bobby moved his hand to give the man his dime. Could this be
21、true? He wondered.H uh the hunch of beautiful mses in his hands, Bobby became so grateful and excited. Within minutes, he was at home, still breathless. Look, Mother, what have 1 got fbr you? Bobby called out in the backyard. Mother came out from inside the house. She could hardly believe her eyes u
22、pon seeing the beautiful flowers in front of her. Merry Christmas! Bobby said and began to tell her everything he had experienced in the flower shop. Tearfully. Mother hugged her son in her anns. Standing in the bitter cold air, they somehow didnt feel cold at all.山東省煙臺市2021屆高三上學期期中考試英語試卷第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱
23、讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Lungs nearly bursting, I struggled to lift my head out of the water. Inch by inch, my tired body reached for the end of the pool.The extent of my swimming career was purely recreational, while the competitive swimmers nearby thought nothing of the seemingly simple
24、 task of a 500-meter swim test. Pushing myself to finish what I had started, I could only think: why not take the easy way out?Earlier that week, I had turned in my first job application at a local pool. Overqualified,! was hired on the spot. However, the tasks were boring: helping confused visitors
25、 and measuring the height of children before they went down the slide, those sorts of things. I was capable of more.So a swim test was required, establishing the mere fact that I was not completely helpless in a pool. Midway through, the manager administering the test remarked, This looks really eas
26、y for you. Why arent you applying to become a guard?1“The thought hadnt crossed my mind.“ Well,lifeguarding demands more responsibility, strength and respect. Thus the position pays $2 more per hour. Your swimming skills are strong enough. All you need to do is complete a certification class.”Inside
27、 I was unsure of myself, but his words inspired me-You never know what you are capable of until you force yourself to do it.Soon I passed the swim test. All left was to practice and learn first aid, CPR(心肺復蘇), and procedures for different land and water-based emergencies.Work started soon. A well- i
28、ntentioned yet anxious feeling in me soon passed. Days, weeks, and months went by without incident; emergencies were rare. The skills and training I had so carefully studied and acquired seemed unnecessary.Today appeared to be another uneventful day. However,shortly after the other guards signaled t
29、o the children to exit the pool,I noticed one boy was still in the middle while the others had climbed up.注意:.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答?!癝omething must have gone wrong with him,HI thought to myself.Having the boy on the floor,! put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck.第二節(jié) (One possibl
30、e version)“Something must have gone wrong with him,“ I thought to myself. Sure enough, with a closer look, I found the boy waving his hands desperately. I quickly dived into the water, swimming towards the boy at full speed. By the time I reached him, he had sunk to the bottom of the pool, his head
31、hanging down, which filled my heart with fright and concern. I picked the boy up and headed to the poolside, keeping his head above the water.Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck. I could tell he had no heartbeat and wasnt breathing. Every second counted!
32、 Without hesitation, I did first aid, giving him mouth-to-mouth breathing and doing CPR as trained. Other guards watching anxiously, I carried on, sweating. Suddenly, a stream of water burst out of his mouth and the boy coughed intensely. Seeing the boy regain consciousness, those around broke into
33、cheers. Exhausted, I sighed with relief. I thought had I accepted that easy position, I would have been nothing but a bystander. Tm happy I didnt take the easy way out.山東省日照市第一中學2021屆高三11月份第二次調研考試英語試題第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫 的詞數(shù)應為150左右。YoghurtIt was a rough week. The price o
34、f oil skyrocketed as the temperature dropped sharply in Maine. We were looking at a high of eight degrees that week, and I had missed three days of work so my paycheck was going to be lower than normal. I was stressed, to say the least. I shopped strategically, looking for every possible way to cut
35、pennies so I could buy groceries and keep the house warm.My eight-year-old son didnt understand when I told him we were struggling that week. He wanted a special kind of yoghurt, but I didnt have the extra three dollars to buy it for him. It was the kind of yoghurt with a cartoon kid riding a skateb
36、oard on the front of the box, and a mere two spoonfuls in each cup. It was the kind of product that wastes a parents money and makes me hate advertising.I felt guilty as a parent when those big eyes looked at me with confusion, as if to say, Its just yoghurt. Whats the big deal?” So I found a way. I
37、 put something back as single mothers often do. He got his yoghurt.On the way driving back from the grocery store, I noticed a homeless man holding a sign by the side of the road. My heart hurt, and I tried not to look at him. I watched people stay away from him on the street and walk by without eve
38、n meeting his eyes. My son didnt seem to care much, either. I looked at the man closely then bare hands grasping a piece of cardboard, snot (鼻涕) frozen to his face, a wornout jacket. And there I was struggling because I had to buy oil and groceries. But I decided to help. T pulled over to the man an
39、d handed him a five-dollar bill. Paragraph 1:Seeing this, my son became confused and surprised.Paragraph 2:On that day, my son performed an act that most adults wouldnt have done.One possible version:Seeing this, my son became confused and surprised. “Mum, why are so generous to this stranger while
40、so mean to me when I asked for a yoghurt?” I explained that if we were blind to the poor mans situation he would be freezing. He didnt have a home or food to eat after all. We could spare five dollars even if we were financially stressed. Finally, my son nodded and fixed his eyes on his yoghurt.On t
41、hat day, my son performed an act that most adults wouldnt have done. He took his yoghurt and handed it to the man outside the window. Even if it was just a matter of a few spoonfuls of yoghurt, it was all he had, and he gave it to someone who needed it more than he wanted it. He showed me that I am
42、doing well as a mother. There are always blessings to count if we open our eyes, and always have the opportunity to be a blessing for someone else. 山東省臨胸縣實驗中學2021屆高三10月末月考英語試卷 第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)James shook his money box again. Nothing! He carefully counted the coins that lay on the bed. $24.52 was all that he had. The bicycle he wanted was $90! How on earth was he going to get the rest of the money? He knew that his friends all had bicycles. It was hard to hang around with people when you were the only one
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