初中英語 滬教牛津版 9B U2 Writing：A thank-you letter 課件

1、Unit 2Culture ShockA thank-you letterWriting 深圳市龍崗區(qū)龍城初級中學(xué) 羅旋子Period 4Learning objectives In this period, we are going to:1. learn the structure of a thank-you letter;2. know how to organize a thank-you letter; 3. master how to beautify a thank-you letter.5. Closing & signature4.Thank again3.Describe

2、 the reasons2. Express gratitude1. Greeting or salutationDear Jane,How is your study recently? Im writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. Thank you very much for the kindness you showed me during my stay in ShenZhen. Thanks to your help, I visited so many wonderful places. Without your explanatio

3、n, I would not have known so much about the history of your city. Its so kind of you to take me to these places.Thank you again for your wonderful treat from the bottom of my heart and I am looking forward to seeing you soon and express my thanks in person.Yours, KatieDear _, (稱呼)How is your life/ s

4、tudy / work recently? Im writing to _.Thank you very much for _. （原因）Thanks to your help, I _. Without your help, I couldnt _. Its so kind of you to _.Thank you again for _and I am looking forward to _.(愿望) Yours, _ (署名) 5. Closing & signature4.Thank again3.Describe the reasons2. Express gratitude1.

5、 Greeting or salutation The template The structure Greeting Dear _, How is your life/ study / work recently? Im writing to _.Thank you very much for _. Thanks to your help, I _. Without your help, I couldnt _. Its so kind of you to _.Thank you again for _and I am looking forward to _. Yours sincerel

6、y, _ Dear Jack,Dearest Jack,My dear Jack, Hi, Jack My friend, Express your gratitudeDear _, How is your life/ study / work recently? Im writing to _.Thank you very much for _. Thanks to your help, I _. Without your help, I couldnt _. Its so kind of you to _.Thank you again for _and I am looking forw

7、ard to _. Yours sincerely, _ 1. Thank you so much for your help with my study.2. Many thanks for your kind and warm help.3. I am writing to express /show my heartfelt gratitude to you.4. I am truly grateful to you for your selfless help.5. I would like to take this chance to say thank-you to you. De

8、scribe the reasonsDear _, How is your life/ study / work recently? Im writing to _.Thank you very much for _. Thanks to your help, I _. Without your help, I couldnt _. Its so kind of you to _.Thank you again for _and I am looking forward to _. Yours sincerely, _1. Thanks to your help, I have made gr

9、eat progress.2. With your help, Ive had enough courage to overcome it.3. It was very nice/ kind of you to take good care of me.4. Thank you very much for the gift you sent me, which is one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got.5. It is you that/who always encourage me to make more friends.形式主語

10、定語從句強調(diào)句 Thank againDear _, How is your life/ study / work recently? Im writing to _.Thank you very much for _. Thanks to your help, I _. Without your help, I couldnt _. Its so kind of you to _.Thank you again for _and I am looking forward to _. Yours sincerely, _ 1. Thank you again for what you have

11、 done for me.2. My true gratitude is beyond the words. Thank you again.3. Again, I would like to take the chance to express my warm thanks to you! 4. I hope that I may be able to return your kindness in the future.5. I extremely appreciate your help with my English. I am looking forward to seeing yo

12、u soon. ClosingDear _,How is your life/ study / work recently? Im writing to _.Thank you very much for _. Thanks to your help, I _. Without your help, I couldnt _. Its so kind of you to _.Thank you again for _ and I am looking forward to _. Yours sincerely, _ To a loved one:Yours, To a friend:Best r

13、egardsWarm regardsTo business / official: Yours sincerely，Yours truly,The structure of a thank-you letter5closing4thank again3Bodydescribe the reasons 2Beginningexpress gratitude1GreetingEndingopen with a salutaionclose the letter3. ExerciseWriting “你養(yǎng)我長大，我陪你變老?！眿寢屢恢睘槲覀兊某砷L默默付出，成長要學(xué)會感受愛、回報愛。請根據(jù)以下要點，寫

14、一封信給你媽媽，表達(dá)你的感謝。內(nèi)容包括：1.感謝她在生活上對你的照顧；2.感謝她在學(xué)習(xí)上給你的幫助；3. 要求: 1. 80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。 The 1st version第一檔：15-13分，語言正確無誤，表達(dá)得體，行文流暢，要點齊全。 深圳中考評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Tips:Add adjectives, adverbs or conjunctions to make the thank-you letter more special.2. Add supporting sentences to make your statement

15、s more specific.3. Add clauses (relative clause / object clause) to make sentences better. The 1st version4.Tip one: add adj. / adv. / conj. Before After adj.thanks loveprogressadviceadv. saysincerely say conj.I not only have made., but also I have learned.my heartfelt thanks your selfless love. gre

16、at progress.useful / helpful advice.4. Tip two: add supporting sentencesThese years, you always take good care of me.These years, you always take good care of me, such as making a lot of delicious food for me every day.I must say “thank you” to you once more. I must say “thank you” to you once more

17、for all the things (that) you have done for me.I must say thank-you to you once more for what you have done for me.4. Tip three: use clauses定語從句賓語從句Dear Mum, I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your selfless love. Im so grateful that you have brought me up as a positive and healthy perso

18、n. These years, you always take good care of me, such as making a lot of delicious food for me every day. Whats more, whenever I have trouble with my study, you often encourage me and give me some useful advice. Thanks to your help, I not only have made great progress, but also have learned a lot of

19、 learning and life skills. Again, I must sincerely say thank-you to you once more for all the things you have done for me.Yours,Li Hua The 2nd versionDraft 1stDraft 2ndDear Mum, I am writing to express my thanks for your love. Im so grateful that you have brought me up. These years, you always take

20、good care of me. Whats more, whenever I have trouble with my study, you often encourage me and give me some advice. Thanks to your help, I have made progress. I have learned a lot of learning and life skills. Again, I must say thank-you to you once more.Yours,Li HuaDear Mum, I am writing to express

21、my heartfelt thanks for your selfless love. Im so grateful that you have brought me up as a positive and healthy person. These years, you always take good care of me, such as making a lot of delicious food for me every day. Whats more, whenever I have trouble with my study, you often encourage me an

22、d give me some useful advice. Thanks to your help, I not only have made great progress, but also have learned a lot of learning and life skills. Again, I must sincerely say thank-you to you once more for all the things you have done for me.Yours,Li HuaSummary 1: The structure and the expressions of a thank-you letter5closing4thank again3Bodydescribe the reasons 2Beginningexpress gratitude1GreetingEndingopen with a salutaionclose the letterSummary 2: Tips on how to beautify your thank-you letter.1.