高考英語(yǔ)（北師大版）新一輪復(fù)習(xí)課件：寫(xiě)作技巧點(diǎn)撥系列七-發(fā)揮合理想象,靈活闡釋開(kāi)放作文（共15張）

1、寫(xiě)作技巧點(diǎn)撥系列(七)發(fā)揮合理想象, 靈活闡釋開(kāi)放作文【典例導(dǎo)練】（2013北京高考）請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示, 寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so. 【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】 1. 開(kāi)放作文的特點(diǎn)。 （1）自由發(fā)揮的空間大。開(kāi)放作文屬于非控制性寫(xiě)作或非任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作，即主要根據(jù)文字提示、圖畫(huà)展示或表格列舉等形式設(shè)題，留有一

2、定的空間讓考生自由發(fā)揮。 （2）能力要求較高。它不僅考查考生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力、組織能力，而且還考查考生的邏輯思維能力、發(fā)散思維能力、想象能力以及多角度考慮問(wèn)題的能力。因此這種題型的作文雖然給考生提供了發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì)，但由于考生對(duì)給出的信息沒(méi)有真正領(lǐng)會(huì)，沒(méi)有理清文章的命題意圖導(dǎo)致失分現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重。 2. 與其他文體的區(qū)別。 開(kāi)放式作文不等同于一般的提綱作文，因?yàn)樗幌裉峋V作文那樣所給的要點(diǎn)很全面，寫(xiě)作時(shí)按照一定的“框框”進(jìn)行發(fā)揮即可，它要求考生憑借試卷上所提供的線索（包括文字提示和圖畫(huà)），利用發(fā)散性思維，去合理地想象、推理，然后寫(xiě)出一篇合情合理的文章?！緦忣}謀篇】【佳句錘煉】1. 我想圖畫(huà)告訴我們的是：一

3、個(gè)人的夢(mèng)想和現(xiàn)實(shí)通常是有差別的。（一般表達(dá)）I think, the picture is telling us a truth. There is usually a difference between ones dream and reality. （賓語(yǔ)從句）I think that _. There is usually a difference between ones dream and reality. （同位語(yǔ)從句）I think the picture is _there is usually a difference between ones dream and real

4、ity. the picture is telling us a truthtelling us a truth that2. 然而，對(duì)人們來(lái)說(shuō)每次實(shí)現(xiàn)他們的夢(mèng)想是十分不容易的。（一般表達(dá)）But people realize their dreams every time is very difficult. （形式主語(yǔ)+不定式復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）_, _ is not so easy _ _ their dreams every time. Howeveritforpeople to realize3. 就像圖畫(huà)中的那個(gè)人，他實(shí)際上釣到的是條小魚(yú)，而不是他希望的大魚(yú)。（一般表達(dá)）Like the m

5、an in the picture, he actually catches a small fish, and he doesnt catch a big one that he wishes for. （定語(yǔ)從句+高級(jí)詞匯）_, _ _, he actually catches a small one. Just like the man in the pictureinstead of the big fishthat he wishes for4. 以我之見(jiàn)，人們需要學(xué)會(huì)去接受現(xiàn)實(shí)并且繼續(xù)嘗試。（一般表達(dá)）According to my idea, people need to lea

6、rn to accept the reality. They should keep on trying. （介詞短語(yǔ)+并列謂語(yǔ)）_, people need to _ _ accept the reality and _. In my opinionlearntokeep on trying5. 有了再次嘗試他們或許會(huì)獲得他們夢(mèng)想的東西。（一般表達(dá)）They try again and maybe they get the things they dream of. （介詞短語(yǔ)）_, they may gain what they dream of. With another try【連句成

7、篇】 I think the picture is telling us a truth that there is usually a difference between ones dream and reality. People need to learn to face the reality. Everyone has his dream. However, it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams every time. Just like the man in the picture, instead of the

8、 big fish that he wishes for, he actually catches a small one. In my opinion, people need to learn to accept the reality and keep on trying. With another try, they may gain what they dream of. 【命題專(zhuān)家如是說(shuō)】開(kāi)放類(lèi)作文解題關(guān)鍵 做這類(lèi)題時(shí)，考生首先要讀懂所給的英語(yǔ)提示或圖畫(huà)提示，弄清情況和要求，然后抓住關(guān)鍵詞句，進(jìn)行記敘、解釋、說(shuō)明、議論，再根據(jù)要求去合理地想象，并用通順的語(yǔ)言寫(xiě)出。具體做到：1. 認(rèn)真審題，把握要求，找準(zhǔn)關(guān)鍵句，提煉主題；2. 依據(jù)主線，草擬提綱，梳理文章脈絡(luò)；3. 定位人稱(chēng)，確立時(shí)態(tài)，遣詞造句